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Author has written 12 stories for Twilight, Elfen Lied, Spirited Away, Dragon Ball Z, Say I love You/好きっていいなよ, Naruto, and Teen Titans.
Hello My name is Shiane, which is pronounced Shy-Ann, and I'm a fan of Twilight, Dragon Ball Z, Vampire Kisses, Elfen Lied, Shugo Chara,Naruto, Bleach, Inuyasha and ect.
Hey everyone. My story ,"the wrong one loves you right" has finally passed 14,000 hits total! I highly appreciate it! The sequel to "The wrong one loves you right", "Because you loved me", has exceeded 5,000 hits! Check it out! The final story to that little trilogy (which i didnt anticipate) "Wind beneath my wings" is up and has been updated so if you like those, feel free to read the last one. Jacob and Bella have one more battle to fight, but what makes this battle so much different from the others? And i have updated "Only fools fall in love" soon due to a blast of inspiration, however, at my own expense, I decided it's better to make it short for now because cliffy's are awesome. I love them so much. I haven't gotten many reviews latley so please review that one as well! I need a reason to continue! lol. And I have not forgotten my reviewers for my Spirited Away fanfic, "Pain Struck Heart Chamber". Sadly, I have not gotten as many reviews lately so I do not know if I should even continue it. Should I? And Please, if you like Dragon Ball Z, check out my newest story, "Lost Saiyan".
Advice for future writers, current writers/fanfiction-ers (lol, like the new word?) : Don't be afraid to take risks. Detail always sells. And if you're like rkoviper, who thinks I'm like a magician, who has the ability to manipulate peoples mind and get them addicted their stories, it is quite easy to catch quite a skill (if it even is one). I prefer to always end each chapter with a cliffhanger of some sort or at least end it on some mysterious note. Sounds easy enough right? Well...not quite. It's simple for me since I have been writing for years now but it takes some practice. The ending to a chapter can go either way; short or really detailed. If you do short, it has to be something that will leave the reader wanting for more. Example:
Dashing through the forest, we ran for cover. Loud noises caressed the midnight sky and terroized the village. We tried our best, breaking down doors and grabbing any villagers possible, but when we got out of the last family's hut, we couldn't believe what was right in front of us. Our hearts beated like drums in our chest with an unrecognizable momentum. What is this rhythm? Is this what they call fear? My knees buckled when he spoke.
"Fancy meeting you here."
See? If your doing short the easiest is to use someone talking and a paragraph before hand that is filled with juicy scenary detailing and emotion. You want to make the reader worried! You want to make the reader scared! Make them feel like they are in the story as well! As for the really detailed ending, it's quite simple. The best ways to do this would be going a bit overboard with emotion. If it is scenary, like someone is somewhere else now, then make the description as detailed and elaborate as possible. Example:
My eyes widened. How could this happen? No! I feel as if a dagger has been plunged into the very depths of my crimson heart. Tears run down my eyes like streams and I hold onto my chest. It hurts. It hurts! Why? The now broken heart, beated with a less upbeat tempo. Just the sight of what is in front of me could break me down. I get down on my knees and hold onto my chest more firmly. Make it stop! Please!
I tried my best at detailed off the top of my head with no specific context but here it is. Not bad. Similies, metaphors, and personifications or any type of figurative language is always a bonus! Gives the reader a better description, especially with things that are hard to describe, such as tears. I also suggest asking people what they think will happen next in your story/fanfic. After they tell you try twisting things or try to find a way to trip them up and make them really itching to find out what's going to happen next! I do that all the time in Because you loved me. Ask rkoviper, she'll tell you. lol. Hope this helped! And remember: DON'T BE AFRAID TO TAKE RISKS!