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Joined 04-20-09, id: 1908412, Profile Updated: 06-08-12
Author has written 6 stories for Warriors, Mortal Instruments, and Percy Jackson and the Olympians.

Why shouldn't truth be stranger than fiction? Fiction, after all, has to make sense.
Mark Twain

Currently the Beta of...

1. Entrapment by ThunderBoltsAndLightning

2. It's Good to be Home by JacqBear

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Was the Beta of these finished stories...

1. Turbulence by ddpjclaf

Still taking Beta requests!!


Note regarding Returning Home

So, I don't know about you (the readers) but I feel as if this story is dragging on. I'm not happy with were it is going and wish to change a few things, so I've decided to re-write the story, from the beginning.

Now, I know a lot of people on this site do this to their stories and never end up fixing them, but don't worry, I will fix this story and begin updating soon. (I already ahve the first three chapters re-written, so I'm serious about these quick updates).

The reasons behind my decision to re-write the story are as follows (in case you were wondering)

1. I re-read Heroes of Olympus series and wish to change how I portrayed a few characters, mainly, placing more emphasis on Leo, Piper, Hazel and Frank. (They were got lost in the background of this story, something I wish to change).

2. I know the Jason/Reyna relationship is very complicated and I feel as if I simplified it too much.

3. Tyson and Ella are no where to be seen.

4. Too much talking, we need some more action (something many people mentioned in their reviews).

5. How I portrayed Reyna and Hylla's relationship. Reyna and Hylla are actually very close in the books and this is something I want to portray in the fic.

Things that will not change

1. How I protray Octavian, he will remain the same (I have found a twisted love for him after re-reading Heroes of Olympus series).

2. The fact that this story is a Jeyna / Percebeth fic

3. My OC, many people like them, and Marcus, Julian and Kelsey will be in the revamped story.

So, if anyone has any questions feel free to ask in the review or PM. Sorry about this, but this story, how I began to write it and the original outline, was always menat to be 3 chapters long. I want to expand it, starting from Jason returning to Camp Jupiter to the seven leaving for their quest.

This fic WILL be finished before Mark of Athena. I WILL be posting the new chapter 1 soon, maybe in a week, so that the people who follow this story will be able to read this and not wonder why it suddenly goes from nine chapters back to one.

*Random: A lot of people don't like Jeyna. Honestly, I don't like Piper, and I prefer Reyna, but hey, everyone is entitled to their own opinion. Personally, I will stick with this ship (Jeyna) until it goes down, and when it does sink (which I fear it will, because Rick is predictable and its obvious from the first chapter of MOA he's already favored Piper of Reyna, honestly how are they dating sooo quickly? It took Percy six books before he asked Annabeth out haha) I will still cling to it. There's something about doomed ships that I love (Katniss and Gale anyone?)

*Sidenote: I have not forgotten about the Octavian Oneshot, I've decided to work in the Reyna/Octavian into the new story :) yes, your welcome.

Sorry, and thank you for your understanding! Feel free to review or PM (which may be better than reviewing since I will be taking this story down and re-posting it) me with questions!

Stories

Consequences a POST City of Glass, Mortal Instruments fanfic

Everything has returned to normal for Clary, well if you count being a warrior who is meant to rid the world of demon kind and having a vampire as a best friend, normal. Clary begins her training as a Shadowhunter, while also enjoying her new relationship with Jace. Simon is embracing his new life and the attention he is getting from girls, specifically a Shadowhunter and Werewolf. All to soon Clary and Simon's world begin to fall apart. Questions arise, relationships are challenged, a new evil begins to stalk the Shadowhunters of the New York Institute, the Downworld is on the verge of war, the Mark of Cain starts to disrupt Simon's new life, and the Clave begins to show a frightening interest in Clary and Jace. On top of all the turmoil Clary and Jace realize that Raziel's gift caused more harm than good, because everything has consequences.

Status In progress

The Rise of Darkclan and Tigerclan a warriors fanfic

Every wondered what would happen if Blambleclaw and Hawkfrost had succeded in taking over the clans?

Status Currently on hold.

The Unforgettable Tale of Quailstar and Jaggedstar OC warriors fanfic

4 new clans, 4 new territorys, 1 unforgettable story. 2 young cats with the same destiny, different obstacles stand in their way, though they may just be the greatest cats the clans have ever seen.

Status Currently on hold.


Quotes

'Classic.' A book which people praise and don't read.
Mark Twain

Fiction is obliged to stick to possibilities. Truth isn't.
Mark Twain

My books are like water; those of the great geniuses are wine. (Fortunately) everybody drinks water.
Mark Twain

You can't depend on your eyes when your imagination is out of focus.
Mark Twain

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Turbulence by ddpjclaf reviews
*RE-POST* While dealing with a loss, Clary befriends her new neighbor's troubled foster-son. Can their friendship help them let go of the pain or will their pasts intervene and rip them apart? (Due to Fanfiction disabling the C&P ability, I am re-posting this story here. Thank you to all who have been so supportive!)
Mortal Instruments - Rated: M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 34 - Words: 210,843 - Reviews: 2331 - Favs: 1,645 - Follows: 640 - Updated: 10/17/2013 - Published: 2/15/2010 - Jace W., Clary F. - Complete
just like a song in my heart by stopthenrewind reviews
It isn't moving in until she has her toothbrush in Jesse's new apartment…or so Beca tries to convince herself. (Or, how Beca realizes she is kind of sneakily moving in, to her complete and utter mortification.)
Pitch Perfect - Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,054 - Reviews: 59 - Favs: 240 - Follows: 44 - Published: 4/12/2013 - Beca M., Jesse - Complete
Fractured Hearts by RagingSerenity reviews
Styx. She stands close to the dark water, watching it intently. Someone's running towards her. She doesn't turn. Doesn't want to know who noticed her leave and followed her. Doesn't want to be convinced to turn back.
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,307 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 53 - Follows: 14 - Published: 2/4/2013 - Annabeth C., Percy J. - Complete
No Bravery by RagingSerenity reviews
"I see no bravery in your eyes anymore, only sadness."
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,846 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 43 - Follows: 7 - Published: 2/3/2013 - Percy J., Annabeth C. - Complete
Remedy by Burst.ofSILENCE reviews
They craved contact sometimes. Just a small touch to remind themselves that the other was still there; a slight brush of skin to let the other person know that they were alive and most importantly, they were together. Percy and Annabeth, Post-MoA. Rated T for instances of PTSD.
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,887 - Reviews: 117 - Favs: 387 - Follows: 56 - Published: 1/7/2013 - [Percy J., Annabeth C.] - Complete
All Those Childish Fears Just Ain't For Me by chalantness reviews
He doesn't really know where he stands with her anymore. He thought he had a pretty good sense before Juno kidnapped him, but now everything is blurred again.
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,589 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 48 - Follows: 7 - Published: 12/9/2012 - Jason G., Reyna - Complete
Better With Two by Laura x Tennant reviews
Collection of Ten/Rose oneshots :D x
Doctor Who - Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 47 - Words: 118,084 - Reviews: 839 - Favs: 652 - Follows: 444 - Updated: 11/17/2012 - Published: 8/5/2010 - 10th Doctor, Rose T.
I'm Counting The Breaths Until Daylight by chalantness reviews
She could really use something calming right about now.
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,065 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 51 - Follows: 8 - Published: 10/29/2012 - Jason G., Reyna - Complete
You're My Sweetest Prayer by chalantness reviews
He has no problem letting her go to do her own thing so long as they always come back together in the end.
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,972 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 30 - Follows: 2 - Published: 10/27/2012 - Jason G., Reyna - Complete
Collateral Damage by icy roses reviews
When the love story being told isn't your own. Reyna/Jason, sort of. Spoilers for MoA.
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,411 - Reviews: 39 - Favs: 67 - Follows: 10 - Published: 10/10/2012 - Reyna, Jason G. - Complete
As Long As We're Together by gray-streaks reviews
Percy and Annabeth make it out of Tartarus, this is what happens afterwards. Warning: discussion of mature themes, but nothing explicit
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,250 - Reviews: 53 - Favs: 222 - Follows: 40 - Published: 10/5/2012 - Annabeth C., Percy J. - Complete
The Mark of Athena by Flamepaw reviews
The 2,000 reviews reedited version! Rewritten for awesomeness. See A/N at the end of this story for more details. I hope everyone enjoys the real Mark of Athena when it comes out on Tuesday. Happy reading :)
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Adventure - Chapters: 34 - Words: 97,843 - Reviews: 2159 - Favs: 385 - Follows: 267 - Updated: 10/1/2012 - Published: 10/14/2011 - Jason G., Reyna - Complete
Burden Bright by high.fiving.jesus reviews
He sits out on the fire escape quietly and she whispers horrible stories to the wind. They carry, whip his hair around his eyes, punch him in the temple, and set his tear ducts to flood. AU one-shot.
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,826 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 31 - Follows: 5 - Published: 9/15/2012 - Annabeth C., Percy J. - Complete
Mark Of Athena by SearScare reviews
As The Argo II lands on Camp Jupiter, the Romans and Greeks hold their breath. Is this the beginning of a new friendship or the start of a very bad mistake? Just when things seem to be going good, a quest is issued to a hero. But this quest has dark undertones, and people may not always be what they seem to be. One quest, three objectives, six demigods. And one traitor. -Complete-
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 40 - Words: 153,664 - Reviews: 418 - Favs: 179 - Follows: 158 - Updated: 8/9/2012 - Published: 12/25/2011 - Percy J., Annabeth C. - Complete
Carte Blanche by idiosyncrasies reviews
If your fellow praetor is just as cold as the water from Neptune's domain... Pre-Lost Hero.
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,324 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 1 - Published: 8/4/2012 - Jason G., Reyna - Complete
For Better, For Worse by Payson-Nicky-forever reviews
They tiptoed around their feelings in their own screwed up little dance, always careful to stay an arm's length apart. But he had broken the rules. And now he might have lost her forever. Pre-TLH Jeyna
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,102 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 6 - Published: 7/2/2012 - Jason G., Reyna - Complete
Rogue by ddpjclaf reviews
Someone is collecting 'the best of the best' from each branch of the supernatural community. What will the Shadowhunters do when one of their own is the next target? Rated M for sexy scenes. Post COG & PRE COFA. COFA did not exist, nor did talks of it when this story was started. All info learned in COFA, including what the Mark of Cain does, is irrelevant to this story.
Mortal Instruments - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Romance - Chapters: 47 - Words: 168,824 - Reviews: 1382 - Favs: 1,047 - Follows: 354 - Updated: 6/4/2012 - Published: 12/2/2009 - Jace W., Clary F. - Complete
Sea Breeze by SearScare reviews
A scene on The Argo as it sails to Rome/Greece
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,560 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 33 - Follows: 2 - Published: 2/15/2012 - Annabeth C., Percy J. - Complete
Moving Forward by Tinkerbell79 reviews
Story continues from the final battle with Voldemort. This story will show glimpses of all the characters moving on with life but mainly deals with Harry and Ginny and how their relationship progresses after the battle is won.
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 38 - Words: 175,175 - Reviews: 892 - Favs: 561 - Follows: 567 - Updated: 8/29/2011 - Published: 7/27/2009 - Harry P., Ginny W.
Covert Casanova by ddpjclaf reviews
She's the artsy, outcast daughter of a rich, crooked lawyer. He's the self-absorbed undercover agent assigned to do whatever it takes to get the goods on daddy-even if that means making a play for his feisty daughter. AU/AH/OOC Fluffy. Lemonade.
Mortal Instruments - Rated: M - English - Suspense/Romance - Chapters: 30 - Words: 239,836 - Reviews: 2641 - Favs: 2,391 - Follows: 1,115 - Updated: 6/3/2011 - Published: 7/14/2010 - Jace W., Clary F. - Complete
New Blood by PersuasionRomanza reviews
The children of the House of Night crew enter and create even more drama than their parents. Lust, love, affinities and sex, who needs fallen angels when we have these kids around?
House of Night - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 22 - Words: 73,829 - Reviews: 282 - Favs: 113 - Follows: 75 - Updated: 3/5/2011 - Published: 8/10/2009 - J. Stark, Zoey R.
It's Good To Be Home by JacqBear reviews
In this story they're all human. Jonathon is alive and not a creep, Sebastian too. They're all friends and in high school, Jace used to be part of the group but moved away and now he's back - more detailed summary inside - rated M just to be safe
Mortal Instruments - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 6 - Words: 26,158 - Reviews: 57 - Favs: 80 - Follows: 95 - Updated: 10/31/2010 - Published: 7/21/2010 - Jace W., Clary F.
I Never Told You by jamespotterthefirst reviews
"I'm sorry. Will had never uttered the words but he found himself close in the two weeks that had elapsed since he had last spoken to Tessa." A brief encounter between Tessa and Will after their disastrous conversation on the Institute rooftop. ONE SHOT.
Infernal Devices, Cassandra Clare - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,997 - Reviews: 68 - Favs: 124 - Follows: 22 - Published: 10/23/2010 - Tessa G., Will H. - Complete
Ambivalence by BabiStarLite reviews
I felt a fire in my chest and stomach. I didn't like the way she was dancing so close to him. I didn't care that she hated him or that she was calling him out for stealing our thunder. They didn't need to be that close.
Camp Rock - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,275 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 8 - Published: 9/25/2010 - Mitchie T., Shane G.
Guiltless by NixiexGrey reviews
He used to be the best of the best, until one slip-up did him in. Ten years later and he's still behind bars. But then a long anticipated visit has him rendered weak and desperate for a way out. He won't stop until he finally gets what he wants-a way out.
Mortal Instruments - Rated: M - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 3 - Words: 8,235 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 20 - Updated: 8/31/2010 - Published: 7/21/2010 - Clary F., Jace W.
Playing Games by sillysac reviews
A continuation of Rock Steady... Clary and Jace continue to develop their relationship, but when a new Shadowhunter enters the picture, things become complicated. Post COG, before COFA.
Mortal Instruments - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 18 - Words: 61,645 - Reviews: 271 - Favs: 342 - Follows: 172 - Updated: 4/17/2010 - Published: 10/25/2009 - Clary F., Jace W. - Complete
Kiss of Winter by emiri-m.y reviews
What if Clary knows right from the beginning that she is a shadowhunter?What if Jace is an Angel,dark,brooding and dangerous?Clary knows he is off limits,but can she withhold herself from him.When heaven and hell crashes, what can possibly happen..R&R/C&C
Mortal Instruments - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 13 - Words: 33,784 - Reviews: 183 - Favs: 82 - Follows: 76 - Updated: 1/24/2010 - Published: 10/16/2009 - Clary F., Jace W.
The Midnight Flower by AsheMoon reviews
Jace and Clary's first kiss in City of Bones. Jace's POV. Canon. One-shot.
Mortal Instruments - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,146 - Reviews: 54 - Favs: 160 - Follows: 22 - Published: 11/25/2009 - Jace W., Clary F. - Complete
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Érchomai reviews
Picks up right after MOA. Focuses on the war between the camps, the war against Gaia and the search for the House of Hades. POV from all major characters, special focus on Percy/Annabeth, Jason/Reyna. More of a mature take on what I believe will happen in HOH.
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,292 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 25 - Updated: 6/24/2013 - Published: 6/6/2013 - Annabeth C., Percy J., Jason G., Reyna
Returning Home reviews
Picks up right after the SON. Jason returns to Camp Jupiter, Percy and Annabeth are reunited. A Mark of Athena fic. Jason/Reyna, Jason/Piper, Percy/Annabeth.
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 7 - Words: 25,873 - Reviews: 252 - Favs: 92 - Follows: 125 - Updated: 5/31/2013 - Published: 2/28/2012 - Jason G., Reyna
A New Dawn reviews
The war between Starclan and the Dark Forest has become a distant and faded memory. Many generations after the "Four" the Clans enter a bitter and bloody war. As leafbare falls, a deadly sickness sweeps through the already weakened clans. Tensions are high and prey is scarce. A prophecy is given and a difficult decision must be made if the Clans are to survive.
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 992 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/11/2012
Consequences reviews
POST COG! Everything returns to normal, but all to soon Clary and Simon's worlds begin to fall apart. Everything has consequences. FULL SUMMARY INSIDE! Usual pairings. POV from Clary/Jace/Simon/Magnus/Maia/Isabelle/Alec. Rating may change.
Mortal Instruments - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 5,058 - Reviews: 29 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 17 - Updated: 8/22/2011 - Published: 8/30/2010 - Jace W.
The rise of Darkclan and Tigerclan reviews
Brambleclaw and Hawkfrost take over the clans.
Warriors - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 25 - Words: 19,368 - Reviews: 124 - Favs: 24 - Follows: 19 - Updated: 7/13/2011 - Published: 6/2/2009 - Bramblestar, Hawkfrost
The Unforgettable Tale of Quailstar and Jaggedstar reviews
4 new clans, 4 new territorys, 1 unforgettable story. 2 young cats with the same destiny, different obstacles stand in their way, though they may just be the greatest cats the clans have ever seen.
Warriors - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 8 - Words: 7,265 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 11/10/2009 - Published: 6/21/2009