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Author has written 2 stories for Star Wars: The Clone Wars, and Naruto.

About Me

Lilly Bee is a nickname, but it was already taken so I am now a plurel


My stories

I tend to write AU stories that include a bit of romance in there somewhere, making the life of the main character/s quite hard. I prefer making the main character an Original character of my design as they are easier to portray and I can put my own flare into the area.

My longest going story used to be “Metamorphosis” in the Naruto Universe, however reading that back when I matured more, allowed me to see countless errors and the way it was written. So now I have taken to rewriting that story. But when one door closes another opens, as the saying goes. My most recent and seemingly most popular story revolves around the Star Wars the Clone Wars universe, called “On A Mission” I enjoy writing this series, although sometimes I leave it for months at a time because I cannot seem to figure out how I am going to make certain points work. I'm currently working on re-writing it so it flows better and reads better, at the bottom of the page are the changes made to the story given my re-write, this will only be done up to Chapter 12, the change summary will end once that chapter has been re-written.


On A Mission

On A Mission [Chapter One: Friendship]

There is always truth to the tales we tell, be it the moral of a story or the characters in it. However, when you discover that an entire universe exists, that those words and images you've seen have come to life before your eyes, what do you do? Two girls experience this exact phenomenon, their lives have changed as they set off on their own mission.


Abandon Humanity

Abandon Humanity [Chapter One: Opening - New Home]

All her life Ririan has shunned emotions such as sadness and anger, seeing them as only weaknesses. When she doesn't have a familiar hand to hold, it is much harder to ignore them. Maybe it's for the best and she will see that her emotions are nothing to be afraid of, or she may find herself overwhelmed by her feelings and spiraling into darkness, abandoning humanity.


Changes to "On A Mission" [SPOILERS]

Most recent chapter update: Chapter Six, Misunderstanding.

Alexis lives on her own being a young adult in her early 20's she receives a call from her childhood friend Cheyenne that convinces her to spend the day outside as Alexis has spent a lot of time couped up inside her flat. After arriving at the shopping district in a somewhat busy town, the two shop around and find a strange alleyway that is extremely eerie (Note, they no longer have backpacks filled with supplies as I thought, why would they do that. They are also older to seem more mature and fit in with the ages of the current Star Wars Universe) as it has no doors leading onto it and a rather large building at the other end. Curiosity getting the better of them they both venture forwards to investigate. Nothing about the warehouse changes and the flash of light that separates them remains the same.

After waking up in the small room on Tatooine, the scene plays out the same, Alexis hears footsteps outside the door that the others are hiding behind and as she goes to open it the lead male of the group stops her and strikes her to prevent her from following them through a hatch they find. After the doors open Alexis is confronted by an angry Clone that looks to have been in some kind of battle, she tries to remain calm but panics and eventually convinces herself that she is in a dream. After this she is defiant and as a result injures her wrist and ankle. She is taken down to a courtyard (I had decided to make the town much smaller and as such only a few other hostages are in the courtyard as opposed to a large number, I have also removed the plan in which she uses a distant cloth to convince the clones that a Jedi is near causing them to pursue, then she leads the others away.) here she sees that the clones are using the hostages as a living shield, after a number of explosions she flees the scene, her act allows 3 others to follow her.

When they attempt to hide from a pursuer, Alexis falls and instead of letting those help her up, she tells them to hide. She is then confronted by the clone that she met in the beginning who seems very desperate to find the hostages, after stating that she was not going to help him he turns violent, this causes the hiding allies to come out of their cover and attempt to aid Alexis. The clone fed up of the tactics points his gun at one of them, he is halted in his action as the lead male that stuck Alexis in the first room points a gun at the clones head warning him of his actions. This gives a sense fo relief to all present until the clone quickly uses his training to disarm the male injuring him in the process and moving Alexis into a more difficult position as a hostage. When again the clone aims his weapon at the female hostage, distraught at the situation and the fact that the clone would harm a civilian takes action by kicking him in his shin. As she stumbles forwards and the clone attempts to shoot her he is flown to the side by the use of the force.

A small troop of armed clones and Jedi Master Plo Koon arrive at the scene, he forces the clone now known as Long-Shot to surrender and his is arrested. Plo Koon then guides Alexis to a medical area where she is treated by a medical droid. A time skip initiates and she is sitting inside of an office on a republic ship drinking a hot beverage as she is asked a number of questions. Here she explains that she doesn't remember anything, feigning amnesia in order to avoid suspicion and allow for any information she doesn't know to go unnoticed as a result. Soon after as they land in Coruscant on a smaller passenger vessel, Alexis hears a familiar voice, knowing that it is her friend Cheyenne, she races to meet her, they embrace in a short touching moment before Alexis is told by Cheyenne that everything she has experienced is real and in fact not a dream. This causes Alexis to hyperventilate and have a panic attack, passing out in the process. (I have removed the number of notable characters at this point to only Plo Koon as I couldn't understand why there would be so many Jedi in a small area, so I will keep to a number of unidentifiable clones for now)

On Cheyenne's end, most of it has stayed the same. She is on a ship with Chir'da and Tark'o, the ship called the Revenant. however, instead of following Chir to an area of the ship that has been damaged, Cheyenne wanders off to a broken door, after entering she finds a device in a crate, but doesn't know what it is, so thinks nothing of it. The only other thing she finds is a file on the Bounty Hunter Cad Bane, worried about being found among that she quickly returns back to the area she was told to wait in. When Chir returns she tells her that she wants her to stay with the ship while Chir and Tark'o leave to go and finish up an errand. Reluctantly accepting she stays with the ship. When she is eventually contacted by a clone and asked to identify herself she finds out that the devices in the crates are contraband, she attempts to flee but is stopped by two clones who question her. Here she finds out that the Revenant has been associated with crimes against the core worlds and the Republic. Being interrupted by Alexis and having her pass out the girls continue their conversation within a secure facility inside a medical room. Alexis asks Cheyenne a series of questions and they establish that Chir wanted the ship to be impounded and Cheyenne was an escape goat. Now Alexis wants to find out why.

They then wander around the compound that they found themselves in attempting to find the impounded ship, however, the place seems to be suspiciously empty, this worries Cheyenne but seems to have no effect on Alexis. After a while, they spot the two Twi'leks and sneak their way towards them, however, Tark'o spots them and the two pairs enter in a pursuit. When the Twi'leks take a wrong turn and are cornered at the end of an alleyway, the girls demand answers when Cheyenne accidentally lets loose that she knows of the stuff they were hiding in a back room. This promotes Chir to draw her gun but surprisingly doesn't shoot at the two girls, instead fires into the sky, the moment is long enough to distract the girls as they make a break for it leaving the weapon behind. Noticing it Alexis picks up the weapon and wonders what that was about, then the pair hear footsteps, thinking it is the Twi'leks Alexis lifts the gun, but unfortunately for them it wasn't the Twi'leks it was a group of clone troopers. After hearing the shot fired they came over to see what was going on, now having a weapon pointed at them they draw their own weapons and demand Alexis drop hers. She does so without question, promptly afterward they restrained and were told to take the pair into a cell block, here the girls have time to realize how bad an idea that was.

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Abandon Humanity
All her life Ririan has shunned emotions such as sadness and anger, seeing them as only weaknesses. When she doesn't have a familiar hand to hold, it is much hard to ignore them. Maybe it's for the best and she will see that her emotions are nothing to be afraid of, or she may find herself overwhelmed by her feelings and spiralling into darkness, abandoning humanity.
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On A Mission reviews
There is always truth to the tales we tell, be it the moral of a story or the characters in it. However, when you discover that an entire universe exists, that those words and images you've seen have come to life before your eyes, what do you do? Two girls experience this exact phenomenon, their lives have changed as they set off on their own mission.
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