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Welcome to my profile.

I'm here only to review.

I always log in to review. If you get an anon review by someone claiming to be me, then you are being hit by a sad little troll and should ignore it.

If your story is bad I will probably not be nice to you; I won't sugarcoat anything I say.

But if your story is good, I will praise it.

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Here are a few things I keep in mind when I review:

1.- Mary Sues are fanfic poison. Avoid them.

2.- Self inserted Mary Sues are even worse than regular Mary Sues, they are also fanfic poison. Avoid them as well.

3.- Spell check is your friend, use it after you finish your story and before you upload it here.

4.- There is this thing called a paragraph, it is used so you don't submit huge walls of text. Try using it, you'll see the difference.

5.- Author notes are fine. As long as they aren't longer than the story/chapter. Oh, and they definitively should not include conversations between you and your insane other personalities that you made up because you feel lonely. They are not funny and people don't care about that. Really, they don't.

6.- English not being your first language is not an excuse to write trash. Seek a beta reader and ask for help. Beta readers are actually nice people, give it a try.

7.- This site has Guidelines and Terms of Service for a reason. Respect them.


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Dragonball Z Pairings of the Apocalypse! by nedthejanitor reviews
This fanfic is going to take you through some of the most patently gross, awful, or just stupid pairings in Dragonball Z fanfiction history. Read at your own risk.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: M - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 26 - Words: 36,361 - Reviews: 208 - Favs: 68 - Follows: 34 - Updated: 9/12/2014 - Published: 1/27/2007 - Complete
El otro héroe: un fic de Yamcha y Mirai Bulma by gattara reviews
Muchos años han pasado, un año desde el último torneo de artes marciales que vimos en Dragon Bal Z. Yamcha está solo, tranquilo y retirado del mundo de las artes marciales, de repente, un suceso, un encuentro totalmente inesperado, cambiará su vida para siempre. Esta es la introducción a una nueva historia de amor y aventuras, ¡espero que la disfruten!
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - Spanish - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 70,758 - Reviews: 34 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 8/22/2014 - Published: 8/18/2013 - Bulma, Yamcha
We Belong to Him by Dr Facer reviews
Goku and Piccolo both die during the battle with Raditz. Being the only survivor, Raditz decides to take Gohan with him to raise him as a Saiyan soldier. What Raditz did not expect, was for Chi Chi to agree to follow him in this journey.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Family - Chapters: 4 - Words: 63,023 - Reviews: 59 - Favs: 70 - Follows: 79 - Updated: 6/21/2014 - Published: 2/5/2011 - [Raditz, Chi-Chi] Gohan, Vegeta
In The Future by gamegirl07 reviews
What would happen in the future if there were only a few of the Z-fighters left? How will they cope with the life they have and how will they deal with the upcoming troubles without Goku? VegetaXPan
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 51 - Words: 165,335 - Reviews: 163 - Favs: 48 - Follows: 41 - Updated: 10/24/2013 - Published: 6/18/2009 - Goku, Vegeta, Pan, Bra - Complete
La Verdad Oculta by Dr Facer reviews
Un joven reportero de ZTV encuentra por casualidad pistas que podrían revelar que Míster Satán es un fraude, pero al investigar sobre este asunto descubre que en el mundo han sucedido muchas otras cosas ignoradas por toda la humanidad, y que aparentemente la dueña de la Corporación Cápsula es la principal interesada en que esas cosas siempre se mantengan en secreto...
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: M - Spanish - Drama/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 22,181 - Reviews: 28 - Favs: 49 - Follows: 11 - Published: 9/16/2013 - OC, Bulma, Vegeta - Complete
The Magical Adventures of the Super Awesome Mary and Gary Sue by FinalFlashX reviews
SATIRE: One day, the twins Mary and Gary Sue are enjoying their favorite pastime of watching Dragon Ball Z, when the sudden appearance of Shenron allows them to fufill their ultimate fantasy, being characters in their favorite anime. Join the twins as they effortlessly defeat every obstacle in their way while becoming instant friends with the characters we all know and love!
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,045 - Reviews: 30 - Favs: 17 - Follows: 13 - Published: 9/3/2013 - Goku, Piccolo, Vegeta, OC - Complete
Si llegara a suceder alguna vez by Y. Honey reviews
La batalla contra Bills ha terminado y la Tierra está a salvo una vez más aunque para Trunks Briefs, la batalla para conseguir que cierta niña llamada Mai acepte ser su novia apenas acaba de comenzar y no piensa ser vencido. ¿Pero... será el secreto que oculta Mai un obstáculo que Trunks nunca podrá superar? *Post-Battle of the Gods.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - Spanish - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 27,121 - Reviews: 48 - Favs: 58 - Follows: 11 - Published: 5/20/2013 - [Trunks, Mai] Pilaf - Complete
Deducción by Bella Scullw reviews
Chichi no vestía poca ropa, tampoco cambiaba de personalidad, cocinaba y podía entrenar con él. Y como bien decía Bulma las chicas bonitas y sexys no cocinan ni pelean. Conclusión: Chichi no era bonita.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - Spanish - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,853 - Reviews: 27 - Favs: 77 - Follows: 19 - Published: 5/20/2013 - Goku, Chi-Chi - Complete
Multipurpose Hair by Lucillia reviews
Raditz's hair didn't just look good, it was useful as well.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 817 - Reviews: 55 - Favs: 87 - Follows: 51 - Updated: 1/20/2013 - Published: 8/21/2010 - Raditz
Violent Avenger by Saber Wing reviews
When Trunks and Vegeta set out for some casual training on planet Kanassa, they find far more than they bargained for. A sinister evil has risen from among the ashes of a fallen race, and he wants revenge on those who destroyed his people. The Saiyans.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 25 - Words: 91,273 - Reviews: 179 - Favs: 58 - Follows: 22 - Updated: 9/2/2012 - Published: 2/9/2009 - Trunks, Vegeta - Complete
A Hundred Voices by Esplandian reviews
Collection of drabbles in response to the "100 Theme DBZ Art Challenge". 100 words per theme. 100 glimpses of fleeting moments forgotten between the epic battles of Dragon World. 3/100
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 3 - Words: 679 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 1/8/2012 - Published: 1/1/2012 - Goku, Shenron
The Promise by Bourguit reviews
This is the story of Balrog before meeting up with M. Bison and how a promise changed his life. It's a back story with a more personal and realistic look. It's not completely game canon, but I wished he had a story like this.
Street Fighter - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 5 - Words: 3,293 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/11/2011 - Balrog/ M. Bison - Complete
Hablar sienta bien by eriha reviews
Una larga charla entre dos buenos amigos. Porque a veces hablar sienta bien, no importa cuántos años hayan pasado, ni las dificultades que se hayan vivido hasta entonces...
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: K+ - Spanish - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,298 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 2 - Published: 11/20/2011 - Bulma, Yamcha - Complete
The Prodigal Son? by daughterofrisingsun reviews
What if Raditz HADN'T killed the farmer?... My first pitiful attempt at humor. Please be kind. One-shot.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,506 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 23 - Follows: 4 - Published: 9/17/2011 - Raditz - Complete
La pregunta by Fanderichie reviews
Gaudy hace una pregunta un poco vergonzosa a Zelgadiss que crea conmoción en el grupo. Zel se separa del grupo y Amelia lo sigue para consolarlo. Hablan y... ¿sacarán algo en claro? Zelame, K .
Slayers - Rated: K+ - Spanish - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,738 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 1 - Published: 8/5/2011 - Zelgadiss G., Amelia S. - Complete
The Yamucha Chronicle by DoraMouse reviews
Since no one else seems to be taking a serious shot at this - the entire Dragonball and Dragonball Z series, plus a few gaps filled in. All from Yamuchas POV. Have a look. You may be surprised. 33 parts. Completed. Reformatted and revised, again, all chapters on 2-20-2013.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 34 - Words: 123,338 - Reviews: 51 - Favs: 38 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 1/3/2011 - Published: 12/10/2004 - Yamcha, Goku
Gohan by Frozen Megami reviews
Goku reflects on Gohan's birth before he is to face his older brother, Raditz. But, will Piccolo's absence in Goku's biggest crisis lead Earth's Greatest Hero to the dark side?
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Drama/Family - Chapters: 4 - Words: 3,369 - Reviews: 37 - Favs: 25 - Follows: 20 - Updated: 8/3/2010 - Published: 5/24/2010 - Goku, Gohan
And I Shall Go On by Dreamwraith reviews
Yamcha is not the terrible man most people make him out to be. He left his home and everything that he knew for love, and she betrayed him. Who is the man behind the scars? The series might not say, but I intend to. *Ch18 finally up*
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 18 - Words: 44,472 - Reviews: 124 - Favs: 50 - Follows: 33 - Updated: 6/3/2010 - Published: 7/25/2003 - Yamcha, Bulma
Release by Krillin Fan reviews
A former legendary Desert Bandit is forced to come fact to face with the cause of his pain. Will he overcome it, or will it ruin him?
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,895 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 2 - Published: 5/12/2010 - Yamcha - Complete
The Ascent by TheSaiyanDemonPrince reviews
Yamcha is furious about Bulma's betrayal. He loses the plot and trains intensely. A new spin on Dragonball Z with the possibility of the Human chraracters ascending in a similar way to the Saiyans.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 9 - Words: 13,527 - Reviews: 29 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 5/9/2010 - Published: 2/19/2010 - Yamcha, Vegeta
Folly by Mel like Mellow reviews
Chi Chi. She thinks about her new marriage to Son Goku, and really, it's not playing out like she thought it would. Set before Gohan is born, not long after Goku and she are married.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 605 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Published: 2/5/2010 - Chi-Chi - Complete
Yamcha's Day by DeathGoblin reviews
He has been upstaged, humiliated, and beaten in every way by the saiyans. Now, when Goku and Vegeta get into trouble, he is the only one who can save them. Does Yamcha have what it takes to do what even they could not?
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Adventure - Chapters: 5 - Words: 9,656 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 25 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 4/10/2009 - Published: 3/7/2009 - Yamcha - Complete
Timely Intervention by Obelisk of Light reviews
When a female Saiyan arrives on earth, an unlikely hero saves the day. Mary Sue parody; one-shot.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,495 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 17 - Follows: 1 - Published: 1/22/2009 - Vegeta, Goku - Complete
The One Who Comforts by vegamarie reviews
Left alone to deal with the aftermath of Goku's decision to remain in the afterlife, ChiChi is forced with the realization that her husband is not coming back. Where does that leave her, and is there someone who can help her adjust to life without Goku?
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 8 - Words: 50,369 - Reviews: 76 - Favs: 66 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 4/24/2008 - Published: 12/16/2007 - Chi-Chi, Piccolo - Complete
If Skies Should Fall by Halfpenny reviews
Maybe it was best that Goku disappeared when he had. Slight AU, GokuVidel
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,611 - Reviews: 35 - Favs: 68 - Follows: 11 - Published: 1/6/2004 - Goku, Videl
Only Human: A World Without Saiyajin by The Rev reviews
*Complete*A mysterious virus has killed everyone with saiyajin blood on earth, and now the only ones left to defend the planet are it's natives. The humans and Piccolo have been training harder than ever, but when a new foe shows up, it may not be enough.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 6 - Words: 18,991 - Reviews: 54 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 6/30/2003 - Published: 5/2/2003 - Yamcha, Tien - Complete
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