Bad grammar. Horrific spelling. Bad plot lines. Boy, am I glad I didn't put these in the story. Exerts from my story "All The Right Moves" SPOILERS if you haven't read it. Oh, and you are allowed to tell me how bad these are 'cause I know.
Twilight - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,020 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 6 - Published: 9/30/2010 - Bella, Edward - Complete