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Joined 11-11-09, id: 2143289, Profile Updated: 01-29-15
Author has written 2 stories for Lion King, and Sweeney Todd.

Hello, I'm the FanFic Critic. I read it, you listen.

I am the FanFic Critic. I seek out fanfics and I read and review them on my internet show on Manic Expression, Reviewers Unknown, Blip, and YouTube. A warning to all, I am very blunt and honest when it comes to my feelings on the fanfics I've reviewed. There's no holding back for me. If I have reviewed your fanfic on my show and gave it a bad review, please don't take it personally. In my webshow, I play a character that is a heavily exaggerated version of myself. So, please try not to get offended. Thanks.

For those who say that I have no right to review fanfics because I haven't written any (which is a very stupid argument might I add...), I actually have written some fanfics. I have another account on this site that I made when I was 18. Here's the link to that account. If you want to "give me a taste of my own medicine", go right ahead. I really don't care seeing that I haven't touched that account in ages and I also hate most of the stories on there, anyway. So, bash away!

Oh, and for those asking if I make any money off of my webshow, I don't. I have a job in reality and only do the webshow for fun.


My legacy as the FanFic Critic started when I read a fanfic by the name of "Mrs. Lovett's Lesson". Being an fan of Sweeney Todd and the character of Mrs. Lovett, I hated that story. I was so horrified and enraged that I decided to give it a video review on , thus creating the FanFic Critic. Ever since, I have dedicated my free time to seeking out, reading, and reviewing fanfics (good or bad) fanfics on my show.

I stuck with airing my show on MySpace until January of 2010, where I made my move to YouTube in hopes of getting more feedback. Being a lot more successful on YouTube, I inevitably discontinued airing my show on MySpace.

On September 12th, 2010, I was asked to join a website called Media Slayer Productions. After talking to the creator of the site, Arthur J. Fudge II, I decided to join the Media Slayer Productions community. Unfortunately, the website was discontinued in August of 2011.

On August 24, 2011, myself and a YouTuber/former Media Slayer contributor Sonicguru came together to create a new website called "The Net Dwellers". Sadly, things didn't go well for the site and it was disbanded over a year after it was created.

On the bright side, I am an administrator to the up and coming blogging community called Manic Expression. I am also a contributor to an internet reviewing site called Reviewers Unknown. Please do check them out!




Now, don't think I spend all of my time reading fanfics. I also like to draw, read books, play video games, and watch television. For television shows, I like V, Lost, Ugly Betty, Dollhouse, Dancing with the Stars, American Idol, and Firefly...just to name a few. For movies, I like This is It, Sweeney Todd, Watchmen, Benjamin Button, Sleepy Hollow, Shrek 1, 2, and 4 (the 3rd movie SUCKED.), Serenity, Slither, and Dragon Heart. For music, I like Michael Jackson, Bon Jovi, Evanescence, Daughtry, David Cook, The Beadles, Pink, and The Fray.


If you have any questions, comments, or fanfic requests, please send me a message via Manic Expression (you need to be a member), this website, or YouTube. My e-mail is:


Below is the URL to my YouTube channel:

I will no longer be uploading videos up on MySpace. If you're interested in watching new episodes of FanFic Critic, please visit the websites listed above that I am a part of or visit my YouTube channel. Thank you.

Qualifications for Requested Fanfics

Now, as much as I love getting requests, I have some rules for fanfics that are requested.

1.) Please be sure the fanfic in question is COMPLETE before requesting it.

2.) In order for me to read a fanfic out loud, the word count MUST be UNDER 10,000. No more. If it exceeds 10,000 words, I will only read the first chapter (if the story has chapters) on the show. If the story doesn't have chapters or the first chapter exceeds 10,000 words, then I will only read a small bit from the story.

PLEASE NOTE: Due to the massive list I have for requests, it will take me a very long time to fulfill recent requests.

Complaints are Fine...Trolls or Butthurt Morons are Not, Though.

If you have any complaints that are addressed civilly or just have some constructive criticism to dish out, I am willing to listen, regardless on if I agree with you or not. If you try to troll me, you will be ignored. If you are being butthurt about a review I gave you, you will also be ignored. If you message me to tell me that I need to die, that I am ugly, etc., well, you just proved to yourself and to me that you are a despicable person. Oh, and you'll be ignored as well. :D

That's All, Folks!

Well, thank you for taking the time to visit my profile. If you're a viewer of my show or just an occasional watcher, thank you for taking the time to watch my show. I will be happy to answer any questions that you may have.


The FanFic Critic

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Nostalgia Critic Meets The FanFic Critic by Rurrlock-God of Power reviews
To help with his new episode, the Nostalgia Critic seeks out the assistance of the FanFic Critic, who is suffering from a lack of confidence at the moment. As the two finally meet, they soon discover that all fan work including art and stories across the world are disappearing. So now, they are the only ones who can find out what is going on and save Fandom.
Web Shows - Rated: T - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 14,970 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 21 - Follows: 12 - Updated: 5/24/2016 - Published: 10/29/2014 - Nostalgia Critic - Complete
The Uneasy Path of Love by x.Rube.x reviews
After a very unfortunate incident involving the phase pistol, Susan must cope with her regrettable actions that harmed the FanFic Critic. She soon realizes that her love for her third cousin is more than just family. Will the FanFic Critic return these feelings after everything that has happened? Susan/FanFic Critic. Takes place after Episode 192. All criticism is welcomed.
Web Shows - Rated: M - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 6 - Words: 6,955 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 2/26/2015 - Published: 2/14/2015
The Life And Times Of The FanFic Critic: My Neighbor Is A Dinosaur by IndigoRoseTomato reviews
The Fanfic Critic finds out that being rude to Lesbian Jesus can have unwanted consequences. UPDATE: I forgot about finishing this story. I will do that, expect it some time till mid-2017. 2 more chapters still have to be written.
Crossover - Misc. Tv Shows & Web Shows - Rated: T - English - Humor/Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,730 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 11/9/2013 - Published: 6/17/2013
Welcome Home, Cuz' by TheStrangeFreakyMentalWriter reviews
This is a follow up on Special Edition: Susan Style! Another FanFic Critic Short. Read and Review.
Web Shows - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,126 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/26/2013 - Complete
Special Edition: Susan Style! by TheStrangeFreakyMentalWriter reviews
This is a rare moment in this one-shot. Take it as it is. Please, Susan . . . take it as it is. A FanFic Critic story. Read and Review.
Web Shows - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,753 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/6/2013 - Complete
The Nostalgia Critic Finds Love by xXx.The Black Knight.xXx reviews
Post-To Boldly Flee. The Nostalgia Critic discovers an internet reviewer called the FanFic Critic. After doing a co-review with her, the Nostalgia Critic finds out that he has fallen in love with her. Will the FanFic Critic fall in love with him as well? Rated M for language and suggestive themes in later chapters. Nostalgia Critic/FanFic Critic
Web Shows - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 3,291 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 7/29/2013 - Published: 6/3/2013 - Nostalgia Critic
Asking For A Favor by TheStrangeFreakyMentalWriter reviews
Everyone has reason to write, be it sane or not. But when writer's block happens, that part of the brain shuts down, and takes a break. If you try to fight it, you might something you're going to regret later. Even when its not your doing, but other won't see it. But what if they did? Would they believe than? Read and Review.
X-overs - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 2,906 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 7/9/2013 - Complete
Justly True by TheStrangeFreakyMentalWriter reviews
After the end of 200 episode of FanFic Critic, there was a story bit at the end of it, and face it, in someway it got to you one way or another. Well, a certain OC (Know more, if you want to, read Critic Spies) caught it and has something to say. And it's Susan's choice to listen or not. Read and Review.
Web Shows - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 6 - Words: 3,006 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 6/26/2013 - Complete
Critic Spies by TheStrangeFreakyMentalWriter reviews
What do you get when Susan get's a text from FanFic to see a Video she and a fellow webber made? Well, I took a guess as to how that could happen. Adding also the aftermath of a untimely fate. Read and Review.
Web Shows - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 4,133 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 4/17/2013 - Published: 12/11/2012 - Complete
The FanFic Critic's Apprentices by Chicken-Wings93 reviews
Fifth Chapter: All seems normal and then...
Crossover - Anime X-overs & Web Shows - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 12 - Words: 39,430 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 2/27/2013 - Published: 1/30/2013
Two Critics Reviewing Fanfics by chipmunkfanantic reviews
It starts off with the FanFicCritic reviewing a fanfic by hammohampster which leads to someone falling out of a portal and breaking his arm which leads to a possible relationship between the FanFicCritic and another Fan of her show a soon to be Critic Rated T for cussing R&R
Web Shows - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,321 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 11/21/2012
It Will Not Last The Night by Defying.Expectations reviews
AU. Toddvett/Sweenett. What if Sweeney and Nellie's motives were reversed? What if the barber had been driven by love and the baker by revenge?
Sweeney Todd - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 11 - Words: 43,466 - Reviews: 78 - Favs: 53 - Follows: 28 - Updated: 3/15/2012 - Published: 4/3/2011 - Sweeney T., Eleanor L. - Complete
Still Waters are not Empty by GothicCheshire reviews
The helmet was removed, the once fearsome cowl revealed to be broken and crumbling. As they watched the cowl itself was removed, revealing eyes that were filled with something that had been fought against for as long as they had known him. Insanity.
Crossover - Justice League & BioShock - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Horror - Chapters: 5 - Words: 17,742 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 59 - Follows: 28 - Updated: 8/6/2011 - Published: 5/1/2011 - Bruce W./Batman
A Dark Reunion: Continuing Adventures of Sam Cube by moviebuffmel90 reviews
At long last, the sequel to Nintendoland Murders is here. This time, I decided to focus more on Fox and the lost father he never had. It posed a chanllenge, but it worth the wait. It's not complex or epic as the last one, but I'm proud with it.
Crossover - Star Fox & Game X-overs - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,371 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Published: 6/27/2011 - Fox M. - Complete
Horrorfan436 meet's the Fanfic critic by i love dogs reviews
Whit happens wen two of the most fames youtubers meet
Web Shows - Rated: K - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,521 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/24/2011
The Musings of the Afternoon by gingerbritishgypsyelf reviews
After finishing his revenge plot, Sweeney Todd goes to the seaside as Mrs. Lovett said they should. He is apathetic, but he begins to notice changes in Mrs. Lovett. Sweenett.
Sweeney Todd - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 16,271 - Reviews: 83 - Favs: 64 - Follows: 50 - Updated: 5/27/2011 - Published: 12/14/2010 - Sweeney T., Eleanor L.
Addiction to the problem by Nekonet reviews
MY new story
Web Shows - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 427 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/23/2011 - Complete
Beyond Infinity by creative-writing-girl13 reviews
What if "The Crane" hadn't gotten there in time? Warnings: depressing, major character deaths- note deaths is plural, read at own risk.
Toy Story - Rated: T - English - Family/Tragedy - Chapters: 6 - Words: 3,397 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 25 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 10/24/2010 - Published: 6/22/2010 - Complete
The Switchover by Les Varioufs reviews
Welcome to the most insane trip of your life, there will be monsters, wizards, wonderous creatures, giant squids, but no octopuses, telepathic crazies.. the author does not give compensation for any wonderfully trippy things you may see or encounter
Crossover - Star Trek: 2009 & Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 42 - Words: 237,507 - Reviews: 70 - Favs: 74 - Follows: 23 - Updated: 10/18/2010 - Published: 8/26/2010 - Complete
Unforgotten Memories by Basil4Life reviews
There are some memories in life that most try not to forget. For Basil of Baker Street, there are certain memories he would wish to forget, no matter how much happiness they brought him. Rated T to stay on the safe side, due to drug usage.
Great Mouse Detective - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,824 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 2 - Published: 10/10/2010 - Basil - Complete
The Closet by Celeste38 reviews
Post-TS2, Pre-TS3. Andy's afraid, and Woody wonders why. In the process he and the other toys discover something far more frightening than they could have ever imagined...
Crossover - Toy Story & Monsters Inc. - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,917 - Reviews: 33 - Favs: 103 - Follows: 17 - Published: 7/17/2010 - Woody - Complete
The Water and The Curb by lightening816 reviews
While Kermit looks at his reflection, he had thought that he saw Jim Henson and while Ernie sits on the curb, he tries to bring himself peace, just as Jim would have wanted. My tribute to Jim Henson who died twenty years ago on May 16th.
Crossover - Sesame Street & Muppet Show - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,020 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 17 - Follows: 3 - Published: 5/16/2010 - Kermit - Complete
Do it Justice by GothicCheshire reviews
Jim hesitated, looking at her directly and shifting before giving a brief sigh. “Did you know that I’m not how I’m supposed to be, Lieutenant?"
Star Trek: 2009 - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,395 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 131 - Follows: 15 - Published: 5/10/2010 - J. Kirk, N. Uhura - Complete
Embarrassing Situations by GothicCheshire reviews
Doctor...I am sorry to tell you that you have gained the wrong impression." His words were somehow grave, and the look on his face was decidedly sorrowful.
Star Trek: 2009 - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 759 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 21 - Follows: 4 - Published: 5/3/2010 - Spock - Complete
Needs of the One, Sorrows of the Many by GothicCheshire reviews
Reflections on a life that had been, a life that should have been, and a life that never got the chance.
Star Trek: 2009 - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 4 - Words: 13,670 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 19 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 3/19/2010 - Published: 3/9/2010 - L. McCoy/Bones - Complete
The Animal Lover by Midwich Cuckoo reviews
An old man, whose two pets were the sole joy of his life, dies.
Garfield - Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,841 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 18 - Published: 3/11/2010 - Jon Arbuckle - Complete
Firecrackers by AngelofDarkness1605 reviews
Mr. Todd turns out to have an unexpected fear of firecrackers and Mrs. Lovett uses this knowledge well. She didn't expect however that the memories that the firecrackers provoke include her as well.
Sweeney Todd - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,128 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 36 - Follows: 4 - Published: 12/25/2009 - Eleanor L., Sweeney T. - Complete
Forgiveness by AngelofDarkness1605 reviews
Even when he pushed her into the burning oven, Mrs. Lovett couldn't help but forgive Sweeney Todd.
Sweeney Todd - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 883 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/18/2009 - Eleanor L., Sweeney T. - Complete
Red by euphiiie reviews
You shouldn't trust the wolf. :mario, luigi:
Mario - Rated: T - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 513 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 18 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/27/2009 - Mario, Luigi - Complete
Nintendoland Murders: The Adventures of Sam Cubed by moviebuffmel90 reviews
Here at last, after working on this for a whole year, is the magnum opus of all fan-fics. A crossover with characters from Ninetndo games Super Mario, Legend of Zelda, Sonic, StarFox in a noir/Dick Tracy parody. Full title: Continuing Adventures of..
Crossover - Star Fox & Game X-overs - Rated: T - English - Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,965 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 2 - Published: 9/3/2009 - Fox M. - Complete
The Rules by Shedemei reviews
Mrs. Lovett knows she can be twice the wife Lucy was to Sweeney Todd, and she’ll do anything prove it.
Sweeney Todd - Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,179 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 3 - Published: 3/18/2009 - Eleanor L. - Complete
Shall We Dance? by bijoukaiba reviews
One-Shot. My first Scooby-Doo fanfic. Fred decided to try something new and ask a different girl to the Valentine's Dance. The only problem is, now Daphne doesn't have a date. Pairings inside! Happy Belated Valentines Day!
Scooby Doo - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,214 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 133 - Follows: 31 - Published: 2/17/2009 - Daphne, Shaggy - Complete
Passing Strange by Pamena reviews
Sweeney Todd and Mrs. Lovett got it wrong the first time. But the Fates have stepped in and given them a second chance. A love story that spans over a century. R&R
Sweeney Todd - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 22 - Words: 125,642 - Reviews: 961 - Favs: 456 - Follows: 126 - Updated: 10/15/2008 - Published: 4/30/2008 - Complete
Bring Me to Life by Ryoko368 reviews
COMPLETE! A.U. where our "precious lil' Lucy" is DEAD and where there's more differences revealed as the story moves along. Both Sweeney Todd and Mrs. Lovett are dead inside and they need each other to bring themselves to life. Gradual Sweenet.
Sweeney Todd - Rated: M - English - Romance/Horror - Chapters: 20 - Words: 23,478 - Reviews: 151 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 7/31/2008 - Published: 7/11/2008 - Complete
What The? by Movie-Brat reviews
A short but humorous one-shot inspired by an episode of Seinfeld.
X-Men: Evolution - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 527 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/20/2008 - Rogue/Anna Marie - Complete
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The Continuing Tale of Sweeney Todd reviews
Alternate Ending. After the demise of the Judge and the Beadle, Sweeney Todd and Mrs. Lovett can finally have normal lives. Gradual Sweenett. Rated M for later chapters. *In this fanfic, Lucy really did die of the poisoning. The beggar is just a beggar.
Sweeney Todd - Rated: M - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,344 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 14 - Published: 4/26/2014 - Sweeney T., Eleanor L., Tobias R.
Simba's Story reviews
Set after LK2. Simba opens up to his future son-in-law, Kovu, and tells him why Zira and the rest of Kovu's family was banished from the Pridelands.
Lion King - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,754 - Reviews: 43 - Favs: 59 - Follows: 8 - Published: 9/28/2011 - Simba, Kovu, Kopa - Complete
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