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Joined 12-01-09, id: 2164194, Profile Updated: 10-21-11
Author has written 10 stories for Twilight, Vampire Academy, and Hunger Games.

I have renovated my profile.

Hey!

I use fanfiction to practice my writing skills and hopefully to reach some other readers out there.

I've been on here for a while now, not as long as some but I'm definetely not new to it anymore. So, I understand where people who are starting out are coming from being worried: It's confusing, you don't always get reviews and you don't know how everything works (what is OOC?!). After a while it makes sense, with the help of a few kind reviews, harsh flames, and supportive betas.

Some tips if you are new to fanfiction:
Believe in yourself and your ability to improve, it's cliche for a reason.
Get a beta, preferably not a friend.
Take in everyone's comments and ask them to explain if you don't understand.
Don't let flames upset you but don't ignore them, unless they are just insults without reasoning.
Make friends. Email authors on here who's work you respect. (Be warned, some of them are conceited and will never reply due to them thinking they are better than you.)
They're not.

All you need to know about me:

I have a strange sense of humor and rely on it in my stories frequently. It also makes me review people's stories at 3 A.M. in a very hyper-active way. At 3 A.M. I do find everything hilarious. Then tell myself to 'stop laughing, it sounds crazy' out loud. I'm not joking. It makes me laugh even more. Sometimes (always) I'm slow at doing things like updating, posting on my blog, reading people's stories when they ask, getting to the hairdresser etc. Basically, I'm always running late. I will apologise for this a lot. I'm sorry for always being late and then apologising for it.

I have a blog which discusses fanfiction, writing, books etc. It has a lot of book reviews, so please check it out! http://rainingstorms.wordpress.com/ It's a lot more interesting than that. You will learn about the struggles of not having Kartik (Gemma Doyle Trilogy) around enough, along with angst over the choice between Adrian and Dimitri (Vampire Academy Series). Then I'll tell you secrets about my fanfics. Maybe add in some writing discussions too - like how authors need cool pens, that's a personal favourite.

I am a beta reader, just email me if you are interested! My aim in beta-ing is to efficiently proof read your work and also care enough to give you advice. If you don't need a beta, I will tell you that and let you choose whether or not to still get me to proof it - I say this because I had someone who only needed a few commas added and wanted me to beta it anyway. Beta-ing isn't instant for anyone, which is why so many stories seem to end up without any revising. Sacrifice the time or your story. People don't mind an extra day if you post quality work. May I mention here: time differences suck.

Stories/Series that I've read:

How I live now

Lock and Key

Eternal

Hush, Hush

Gallagher Girls

Mortal Instruments

Hunger Games

Twilight Saga

Shiver (Wolves of Mystic Falls)

Evernight

Fallen

Vampire Academy

House of Night

The Gemma Doyle Trilogy

The eternal ones

Meridian

Evermore

Gossip Girl

Vladimir Todd

My Love Lies Bleeding...

The Replacement

I've read more but that is basically all the series's, I just looked at my bookshelf, there not in order.

I will read any fanfic even the ones I have no idea what their about...


Twi-hards (I hate that term xD) copy and paste this (I did):

I promise to remember Bella

Each time I carelessly fall down

And I promise to remember Edward

Whenever I'm out of town

I promise to obey traffic laws

For Charlies sake of course

And I promise to remember Jacob

When my heart fills with remorse

I promise to remember Carlisle

Whenever I am in the emergency room

And I promise to remember Emmett

Everytime there's a huge boom

I promise to to remember Rose

Whenever I see something that holds pure beauty

And I promise to remember Alice

When I'm at a mall and a cute outfit spots me

I promise to remember Nessie

When I see that beautiful bronze hair

And I promise to remember Esme

When someone tells me they care

I promise to remember Jasper

Whenever my stomach isn't curled

And I promise to remember the Volturi

When someone speaks of dominating the world

Yes, I promise to love Twilight

Wherever I may go

So that all may see my obsession

Because I know what the Twilighters know

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Pretty Praeda by annabellefleur reviews
What if the Dark Sister's hadn't been the first to find Miss Gray? And if Tessa were to arrive in London much more powerful (and witty) than anyone ever thought? Just what would happen if Tessa Gray was the strong one with a dark past, would she pretend to be innocent? R&R.
Infernal Devices, Cassandra Clare - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 19 - Words: 19,289 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 36 - Follows: 40 - Updated: 8/3/2013 - Published: 1/3/2011 - Tessa G., Will H.
Unspoken by WriteOutMyHeart reviews
Will and Tessa, Tessa and Jem.
Infernal Devices, Cassandra Clare - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 6 - Words: 3,796 - Reviews: 68 - Favs: 39 - Follows: 67 - Updated: 9/5/2011 - Published: 12/6/2010 - Will H., Tessa G.
A Life Lived in Dreams by DQRC reviews
While Edward Masen is consumed by his own dreams, Bella Swan is haunted by those of others. Only together can they find a way out of their waking nightmare. AH, rated for dark themes & language. Originally written for TR Dancer in support stacie auction
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 7 - Words: 20,221 - Reviews: 201 - Favs: 92 - Follows: 74 - Updated: 10/2/2010 - Published: 8/10/2010 - Bella, Edward - Complete
Last Sacrifice by Lissa Dragomir101 reviews
All I had to do was get out of this jail cell, find Lissa's half brother, find the queens true killer and get Victor Dashkov back in jail. So much to do, so little time. But can 4 tasks turn into one?
Vampire Academy - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Romance - Chapters: 19 - Words: 15,622 - Reviews: 142 - Favs: 76 - Follows: 72 - Updated: 9/10/2010 - Published: 5/25/2010 - Rose H., Dimitri B.
You've made your bed, now lie in it by Dimka's chick reviews
Dimitri took Tasha's offer and left Rose. But 6 months later Rose and the gang go visit them for the Holidays, Dimitri wants her back, but will she take him back or make him suffer first? Lots of jealousy and payback. This is a Rose and Dimitri story. R&R
Vampire Academy - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 20 - Words: 53,287 - Reviews: 1240 - Favs: 494 - Follows: 317 - Updated: 8/17/2010 - Published: 4/13/2010 - Rose H., Dimitri B.
Losing Chances by Candycornlol reviews
The Hunger Games through Gale's eyes.
Hunger Games - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 16 - Words: 49,354 - Reviews: 198 - Favs: 195 - Follows: 155 - Updated: 8/9/2010 - Published: 1/10/2010 - Gale H., Katniss E.
Seducing Ms Swan by DQRC reviews
AU Post-NM. Teacher!Bella, Student!Edward; a struggle of wills, an attempt at seduction, a dark secret, a dash of UST, a gallon of attitude, antagonistic motorcycling, a hell of a lot of angst and one unforgettable scene in a snow storm.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 22 - Words: 132,610 - Reviews: 5795 - Favs: 6,092 - Follows: 4,847 - Updated: 7/12/2010 - Published: 7/26/2008 - Edward, Bella - Complete
FiftyEight Nights by Eowyn77 reviews
Bridge between Eclipse and Breaking Dawn. The newborns are defeated, the wedding date is set. All that stands between Bella, Edward, and "a happy place" is time. Many thanks to my betas, Darth Ishtar and Tersaseda. Alternating POV.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 35 - Words: 75,648 - Reviews: 884 - Favs: 595 - Follows: 299 - Updated: 12/30/2009 - Published: 12/16/2008 - Bella, Edward - Complete
The Red Line by WinndSinger reviews
Edward is an exotic male dancer. Bella is a college student studying psychology and needs a subject to do her thesis on. Bella pays Edward to belong to her for 2 weeks so she can study him. Things soon get very interesting between them.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 40 - Words: 351,671 - Reviews: 19326 - Favs: 11,938 - Follows: 5,467 - Updated: 5/1/2009 - Published: 1/26/2009 - Edward, Bella
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Unnoticed moments reviews
The little things through The Twilight Saga that I expected or wanted to see but weren't in the books. Please request any moments you want me to do...
Twilight - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 5 - Words: 5,595 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 10 - Updated: 12/21/2013 - Published: 12/12/2009 - Edward, Bella
A Lost Future reviews
I left her and when I returned, I found a woman -Edward. What was I going to do with my future when all I could think of was him? -Bella. Both POV's, set around New Moon, alternative ending. Edward returns by himself. They go surprise the Cullens.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 28 - Words: 91,874 - Reviews: 151 - Favs: 112 - Follows: 102 - Updated: 8/9/2013 - Published: 8/11/2010 - Bella, Edward - Complete
Perfect reviews
Love like that was a shame. Unrequited. One-sided. Unfair. What was a young heart supposed to do with that? What a loss of what could be. I sighed as I watched Bella, sitting alone and dejected in the faint sun. One-shot based on New Moon, based on the heart of a woman who was left behind...
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,663 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 8/9/2012 - Complete
Playing with Stakes and Hearts reviews
Rose is back and more confident than ever - with her two lovers. Will it be Adrian or Dimitri that finally penetrates her heart? Sequel to Aftermath, expect more fun and games. CAN BE READ ALONE.
Vampire Academy - Rated: M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 16 - Words: 32,922 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 12 - Updated: 10/19/2011 - Published: 9/28/2010 - Rose H. - Complete
Aftermath reviews
"Dimitri,Dimitri, I'm so sorry! If you hadn't wanted to kill her, you would still be here. It just hurts so much...I killed you, there is no forgiveness for that. Can't you stop my pain? Make it go away! Make it go away! Please, make it go away!" Rose
Vampire Academy - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 35 - Words: 54,264 - Reviews: 130 - Favs: 50 - Follows: 35 - Updated: 9/21/2010 - Published: 4/3/2010 - Rose H. - Complete
The Same is Just So New reviews
Rose and Dimitri get their happily ever after. Possibilities for their life together – One Shot. Continues from Aftermath and Life is Haunted. Can be read alone.
Vampire Academy - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,332 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 3 - Published: 9/17/2010 - Complete
Torn in Two reviews
Adrian's conflicting thoughts about Rose while he's getting to know her at the academy. This is set around the end of Frostbite and the start of Shadow kissed. One-shot. Songfic. Torn in two by After we fall.
Vampire Academy - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 815 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/1/2010 - Adrian I. - Complete
Distractions reviews
Bella and Edwards time on Isle Esme, based on the chapter "Distractions" in Breaking Dawn. The time between that first morning on Isle Esme and when Edward finally gives in. Both POV's. The struggle, The tricks and The love.
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 16 - Words: 16,456 - Reviews: 70 - Favs: 65 - Follows: 33 - Updated: 5/1/2010 - Published: 12/7/2009 - Edward, Bella - Complete
Life is Haunted reviews
This is a companion fic to Aftermath. Set after Shadow kissed what will happen when Rose finds Dimitri? In those precious moments will everything change? 'I set off to kill the man I loved' becomes a reality in a brief second before it is too late.
Vampire Academy - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,401 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 4/3/2010 - Published: 3/23/2010 - Rose H., Dimitri B. - Complete
Reporting for the Capitol reviews
“Good evening Panem, Tonight I’ll be giving you an inside look at the hunger games!" Interviews taken during the hunger games and catching fire. First chapter: an interview with Cinna after the opening ceremony. Requests welcome. Different charcters.
Hunger Games - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,875 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Published: 4/2/2010
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