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Joined 01-30-10, id: 2236308, Profile Updated: 11-23-15
Author has written 17 stories for Goof Troop, My Little Pony, Lion King, Super Smash Brothers, Legend of Zelda, Dragon Ball Z, Sonic the Hedgehog, and Punch-Out!!.

I'm 20 and I write various fanfictions and original pieces on fictionpress. I live in Florida, and wouldn't move anywhere else for the world.

music I like


Perfect circle

Pink floyd

The beatles

9 inch nails

my preferred genres to read
I try not to read Fanfiction, I read real professional works. You should too if you're a writer, it will help out a lot.

genres I've contributed to

Goof troop


lion king


smash bros

mlp/Punchout crossover


Sonic comics

My current story

The rancher's daughter

How often I will update

Whenever I like. don't worry, updates almost always are quick. I just have that much free time.

genres I will contribute to in the future

Goof troop




lion king



girls bravo

Sonic comics

street fighter punch out! cross over

my favorite ships






IkeXany female


PinkiepiexCheese sandwich



Big Macxanyone female







Timmy Turner x Trixie Tang

Chun Li x Little Mac

ships I will try writing soon


Timmy Turner x Trixie Tang

My views on OC's

I love them. If made correctly they are awesome!Unfortunately they are hard to make well and so they don't usually turn out good. People often put too much description into it and lose track of the story.

Bad stories

There is no such thing as a bad story. Its the writer that is bad.

my birth date



Publix part time grocery clerk( I stock shelves)

goals:Become department manager at Publix,finish all my stories before I die, get 100 reviews or higher on single story, get married and have kids, grow closer to God spiritually.


high school diploma.

writer experience

A lot. I've improved a lot, just read "The struggle for trust" then read "The ranchers daughter." It's an insane improvement. And that's not even my best story! For my top notch very best handiwork look into Rise of the shadow king, or Crazy but you like it.

Beta reader

Accepting! Check out my bet profile if you need a beta reader!

email address

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Things I need to work on as a writer

Description, keeping characters in character. Am I missing something? Let me know so I can add it to the list!

I'm on fictionpress check out my stories!

I'm also on Fimfiction!

May God bless you all who come to my profile.

I need a beta reader!!!

Just kidding! But I am qualified to beta your stories. PM me if you need a beta and I will look over your work. There is a 99.999999999999 chance I will help you. Just hope you're not the .1 percent I will turn down.

My goals

Reach department management at work.

Finish all the stories I started.

cut my weight down to 200 pounds.

publish a story that I can make money off of, even if its just a few bucks.

PM me!

I like to talk so if you just wanna screw around and be friends hit me up.

My reviews

Recently I have left longer, more helpful reviews. I don't just tell you what's wrong, I go through the entire chapter and break it down telling you what needs fixing so you can improve and get better much more effectively. PM me if you want a review on a story and I'll give you a few reviews to help you out.

Before you take the life of your baby, really consider all your options. Would you rather be fat for a while, or kill your child? If you're against abortion, re-post this.

FAKE FRIENDS: Are for awhile. REAL FRIENDS: Are for life.

Start by doing whats necessary, then do the possible. Before you know it you are doing the impossible.

The best and most beautiful things in the world can't be seen or even touched. They can only be felt in the heart.

The best way to find out if you can trust someone is to trust them.- Earnest Hemingway.

There is nothing noble about being superior to you're fellow man. True nobility lies in being superior to you're former self.- Earnest Hemingway.

The first panacea for a mismanaged nation is inflation of the currency; the second is war. Both bring a temporary prosperity; both bring a permanent ruin. But both are the refuge of political and economic opportunists.- Earnest Hemingway.

Friends will come and go, you can have a million of them and find only 3 really ones out of all of them. Family though, you have have no fake family-Jeremy Meneely

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Changes are Bravo! by EternalEchoes reviews
Yukinari, a boy allergic to girls has had enough. Contains OC, violence, sexual themes! OCTOBER 1, 2015 UPDATE: I make 0.00 from writing this thus all I ask for is your patience. Thank you so much for your time and patience. Latest updates: chapter 1, 3, 7, 8, 9, 10, 17, 19, 20, 21, 25, 29, 30
Girls Bravo - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 30 - Words: 193,972 - Reviews: 232 - Favs: 71 - Follows: 65 - Updated: 9/22/2014 - Published: 6/8/2011 - Yukinari S.
Cupcakes by jak3combat reviews
Pinkie Pie has a dark secret, and Rainbow Dash finds out what it is in the most horrifying way possible... Rated M for brutal violence and death
My Little Pony - Rated: M - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,360 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 2 - Published: 10/31/2013 - Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie - Complete
Inner Demons by SapphireLibra3 reviews
On her twenty-first birthday, Twilight Sparkle comes across an ancient prophesy which starts a downward spiral into darkness. Will her friends be able to rescue both Twilight AND Equestria from the monster within? Will their friendship survive? Warning: This story is NOT for the faint of heart.
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 34 - Words: 150,754 - Reviews: 283 - Favs: 217 - Follows: 92 - Updated: 6/29/2012 - Published: 3/28/2012 - Twilight Sparkle, Applebloom - Complete
Mangled by soul punisher reviews
Lost in the Everfree Forest, Twilight feels her end draw near. Graphic
My Little Pony - Rated: M - English - Horror/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,959 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 4 - Published: 8/21/2011 - Twilight Sparkle - Complete
Unspoiled by forthright reviews
Something goes awry during a trip through the Well, and Kagome is stranded in the distant past where she encounters a familiar face. When a very young Sesshoumaru decides to keep her, the consequences ripple through time. SK. COMPLETE.
Inuyasha - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 100 - Words: 167,228 - Reviews: 11343 - Favs: 7,454 - Follows: 3,365 - Updated: 6/13/2011 - Published: 9/1/2009 - Sesshomaru, Kagome H. - Complete
Soft and comforting by TheDoctor388 reviews
A Max/Peg, son/mother story as I felt the relationship could do with some elaboration. Nice and fluffy. I do not own Goof Troop.
Goof Troop - Rated: K - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,033 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 3 - Published: 6/5/2011 - Complete
Luigi and Daisy! Is it Love at First Sight? by Lady Nintendo reviews
When Mario and Peach announce their engagement, Luigi is devastated. However, he soon meets Daisy, a beautiful young woman. But does Luigi have the courage to reveal his feelings for her? My very first Fan Fic! LAST CHAPTER FINALLY UP!
Mario - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 18 - Words: 31,441 - Reviews: 560 - Favs: 180 - Follows: 70 - Updated: 10/1/2009 - Published: 1/25/2006 - Luigi, Daisy - Complete
I'm Not Sick! by MsCouvy reviews
Daisy isn't feeling to good, however won't admit it to Luigi. He knows she's sick, and she tries some rather alluring things to convince him otherwise. Rated for some mild sexual situations.
Mario - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,372 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 25 - Follows: 4 - Published: 10/23/2008 - Daisy, Luigi - Complete
More than A Hero of Time by Clover64 reviews
This is a tale about Link and Malon and how their relationship gradually changes from friendship to more. What role does Malon have to play in Link's future...if any?
Legend of Zelda - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 16 - Words: 26,787 - Reviews: 159 - Favs: 51 - Follows: 39 - Updated: 7/22/2007 - Published: 6/29/2005 - Link, Malon
A Mightyena Named Wolf by lupyne reviews
A Mightyena hurt in the past and present... will he have a brighter future? Completed, now with a bonus chapter. Briefly edited in 2009.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 9 - Words: 15,219 - Reviews: 32 - Favs: 30 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 8/13/2006 - Published: 4/7/2006 - Mightyena/Guraena - Complete
Dance Club by The Wallflower reviews
OOT oneshot Zelda gets the urge to visit a dance club that just opened up in Castle Town, and Link reluctantly has to accompany her.
Legend of Zelda - Rated: K - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,220 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 2 - Published: 11/22/2005 - Link, Zelda - Complete
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The rancher's daughter reviews
Takes place right after Majora's mask. Link goes to visit Malon whom he has feelings for. He soon finds out she isn't interested in him that way. She's saving herself for her knight in shining armor. Will Link accept this or will he find a way to win her heart? Cover is owned by KristaDLee on Deviantart! Thank you for reading!
Legend of Zelda - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 14 - Words: 17,902 - Reviews: 46 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 11/13 - Published: 3/10 - Link, Zelda, Malon
The struggle for trust reviews
It's been a month since Taka's trial and he is having trouble being accepted,it seems no one cares for him and things only get worse as his mate abandons things seems like they will never get better for him,luckily his mother is there to help him,he also slowly begins to find someone who might care to be his friend still. On hiatus.
Lion King - Rated: K - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 5 - Words: 4,324 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 10/21 - Published: 12/26/2014 - Mufasa, Scar/Taka, Uru, Sarafina
Crazy but you like it reviews
After escaping prison Fiona turns up in Tails' house and takes him hostage in his own home, refusing to leave, she tells him she will untie him if he behaves though. She doesn't seem to have changed, though she claims otherwise. Tails still feels spite towards her but can Fiona find a way to change that view? On hiatus Cover belongs to EmilyBandicoot1234.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,555 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 9/22 - Published: 9/17 - Tails, Fiona Fox
Punch out! Before the ring reviews
Mac is the new kid at Canterlot high. Luckily he makes friends fast. However can he handle the drama of school and focus on boxing at the same time? Please give constructive criticism so I can improve this story. thanks! Hiatus
Crossover - My Little Pony & Punch-Out!! - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 9,796 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 9/19 - Published: 7/4
Rise of the Shadow king reviews
Blackthorn and Bramble return to Equestria pleading for help. Blackthorn is injured and can't walk without hurting himself. The Heart of the forest could be replaced by a Shadow pony. And Rarity is angry at Blackthorn for not writing to her after so long. This is a sequel to The carpet. constructive Criticism requested from all readers! Hiatus
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,539 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 3 - Published: 9/12
Angel throws things on the ground!
After Fluttershy enacts crimes so unspeakable against Angel bunny he decides to take his revenge upon all of Equestria's inanimate objects. Can Fluttershy stop Angel's rampage of doom before all of Equestria decides to just kill him? On hiatus
My Little Pony - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,869 - Published: 9/12 - Fluttershy, Angel
Personality disorder
Tien has managed to avoid Launch for years, until now. She's finally found him and isn't leaving him out of her sight. And to top it off, an android has been sent after Launch to terminate her. Tien has his hands full this time. Ratef M for Launch's potty mouth. Hiatus.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,073 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/10 - Chiaotzu, Tien, Lunch, OC
Hearts and hooves day reviews
I go and give Fluttershy things for Hearts and hooves day.
My Little Pony - Rated: K - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,523 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/4 - Fluttershy - Complete
Putting your hoof down! reviews
What if someone gave Fluttershy the cherry like a nice person? Most likely Fluttershy would never have become Flutterbitch then.
My Little Pony - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,143 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/4 - Fluttershy, Rarity, OC - Complete
The carpet reviews
After slamming her home down Blackthorn tells her he will personally help clean her home. She happily accepts the act of kindness, the problem is she is a bit clingy. Based on the end of comic issue 28.
My Little Pony - Rated: K - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,611 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 6/18 - Rarity
The scarred rogue reviews
Firesong is a rogue who was banished from his clan, now he has assassins after his head. He stumbles upon a mare who will not only help him in his time of need but also give him something so much more. I am fixing this story up. Hiatus
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,214 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 5/26 - Published: 2/21 - Fluttershy, OC
The return of the great mighty poo! reviews
The great mighty poo has returned for vengeance and has possessed Twilight sparkle, now only Fluttershy can save the day!
My Little Pony - Rated: M - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,985 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/13
Daisy joins smash reviews
Daisy comes to the tournament ignoring Luigi's requests not to, at first it seems like a good idea, she's even a team captain after all! It's just that her team is full of the rejected players, can she whip these underdogs into shape to come out on top or is she destined to be captain of the losers? Takes place during smash bros brawl. On hiatus
Super Smash Brothers - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,716 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/1
A very Goofy Christmas reviews
Max and Pj have left for college a few weeks ago and Goofy is having a hard time coping,things only get worse for him when he gets fired at ings are looking horrible for Goofy until he gets a letter from Peg inviting him to spend Christmas with her and Pistol and somehow they end up at his home.Even with Pete next door its going to be one heck of a Christmas. Lotsa pegxgoofy.
Goof Troop - Rated: K - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 5 - Words: 9,691 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 12/30/2014 - Published: 12/22/2014 - Complete
A change of plans reviews
Scar plotted to kill Mufasa since he became king ,he plotted day and night for fool proof,he thought of nothing else for years,finally he gets the chance to do so, and he bails, now he has to face judgement and the rage of his brother and his pride,will he be exiled or can they see the good that has suddenly sparked in heart?
Lion King - Rated: K - English - Crime/Family - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,290 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Published: 12/26/2014 - Complete
Fluttershy's filler list reviews
Fluttershy is feeling down because its h&h day and she has no special somepony, however her day is about to become a lot more lively, and stinky too.
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,627 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/20/2014 - Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Angel - Complete
Oh what could have been reviews
Goofy helps Peg spent time in the kitchen cooking for a while in the first episode, while alone they talked, caught up with each other and learned that both their lives could have been very different.
Goof Troop - Rated: K - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,128 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 2 - Published: 12/12/2014 - Complete
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