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Joined 01-30-10, id: 2236308, Profile Updated: 01-18-18
Author has written 16 stories for Goof Troop, My Little Pony, Lion King, Sonic the Hedgehog, Punch-Out!!, Star Fox, Mario, Winnie the Pooh, and Pokémon.

I'm writing again! I'm working on stories for Fictionpress but I have plans for here too so expect me back here writing some day. Don't expect big stories cause you are probably not getting them often, I still love plushies more by the way.

About me

I am the guy stocking shelves at Publix and the same man giving you the classic Luigi death glare when you ask me to go look in the back for your Cheerios.

If you have questions or want my thoughts or advice for your writing pm me, I'm open to it and have done it before with apparent success.

I give free comments!

I am willing to give comments out for nothing in return! Pm me about it and I'll gladly do it.

To all guest comments

kys bitch, there's someone here being a dick and this message is to you. You know who you are.


Remember I'm not telling you to do any of these things, just giving advice I have picked up over the years.

1. Take criticism. Lots of people on here don't, don't be them.

2. Make sure your summary is good, and make sure it takes up all the space you have, a good solid summary attracts readers.

3. Read. It's basic to writing, it'll help. If you don't believe look it up.

4. Persevere. When writer's block knocks on your door punch it in the nose and keep writing. Youll pull through if you do.

5. Try a beta reader. Just once. If you don't like having one fine but give it one try. I plan to get one soon.

6. Redraft. I've started doing it and I think it is helping.

7 If you do make Drafts then be sure not to edit the first few. Obviously

8. Don't start too many stories at once.

9. Never let criticism stop you from writing.

10. Break rules.

11. Get good sleep, put school first the basics.

12. Stop reading this and start writing!

13. Get Grammarly, its free.

14. Don't watch porn its a waste of time.

15. Microsoft word is best, I do not recommend using Apache open office word. I've had bad experiences with it.

16. Zodiac signs are good for finding personalities I recommend using them for OC's.

17. researching is a good idea sometimes.

18. Write every day.

19. It's a good idea to have your story finished before you post it. that way you can have a schedule you can post in without rushing the story or breaking that schedule, and you won't just stop posting and have people forget about it either.

I update this sometimes if you actually care and take my advice thanks, I'm flattered!

Mario bros Christmas

I bet your all wondering about it. Don't worry I'll continue it again around Christmas time.

stories for this site I have planned here

Punch out! before the ring

More Growlithe stories

Return of the great mighty poo!


Starters the teen years

Hyrule high the beginning

The rancher's daughter

Rebirth of the Gerudo

Doc Luis takes Kanto!


I think everyone on the site should post at least one story on here, it's basically your initiation into the site. Please, leave your mark on FF.Net.

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A Zoological Guide to Pokemon by Super-mega-punch reviews
A Zoologist's take on the pokemon world and what pokemon are like in their natural habitats outside the pokeball. Please fave, follow and review. I take requests.
Pokémon - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 7 - Words: 19,955 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 10/31/2017 - Published: 3/16/2017 - Complete
All Falls Down by Wolf Lover 06 reviews
A lonely Umbreon was thrown out by his trainer and was left all alone, thinking he failed his trainer. But when an Espeon shows up can she make the lonely Umbreon feel proud of himself.
Pokémon - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,619 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 3 - Published: 7/25/2016 - Espeon/Eifie, Umbreon/Blacky - Complete
I Saw Him First! by Lavasharks reviews
Fluttershy and Octavia compete for a new unicorn's affection, but when they become jealous, all hell breaks loose. How far will they go?
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 10 - Words: 8,435 - Reviews: 80 - Favs: 29 - Follows: 13 - Updated: 11/28/2011 - Published: 9/6/2011 - Fluttershy, Octavia - Complete
Soft and comforting by TheDoctor388 reviews
A Max/Peg, son/mother story as I felt the relationship could do with some elaboration. Nice and fluffy. I do not own Goof Troop.
Goof Troop - Rated: K - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,033 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 3 - Published: 6/5/2011 - Complete
Luigi and Daisy! Is it Love at First Sight? by Lady Nintendo reviews
When Mario and Peach announce their engagement, Luigi is devastated. However, he soon meets Daisy, a beautiful young woman. But does Luigi have the courage to reveal his feelings for her? My very first Fan Fic! LAST CHAPTER FINALLY UP!
Mario - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 18 - Words: 31,441 - Reviews: 599 - Favs: 199 - Follows: 74 - Updated: 10/1/2009 - Published: 1/25/2006 - Luigi, Daisy - Complete
Snow White and the Black Mistery by Walt Disney reviews
Uh oh a dward die. Who kill him?
Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs - Rated: T - English - Horror/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/16/2009 - Snow White, Dopey
A Mightyena Named Wolf by lupyne reviews
A Mightyena hurt in the past and present... will he have a brighter future? Completed, now with a bonus chapter. Briefly edited in 2009.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 9 - Words: 15,219 - Reviews: 36 - Favs: 31 - Follows: 10 - Updated: 8/13/2006 - Published: 4/7/2006 - Mightyena/Guraena - Complete
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The Mushroom kingdom's first Christmas reviews
The Maro bros have always celebrated Christmas, not being in NYC means nothing they are going to be celebrating the holidays no matter what tradition is important to them after all. However a different land has different laws, these get in their way however, Peach helps by working around the laws so they can have their holiday and share it with everyone. Even the most rotten souls.
Mario - Rated: K - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,097 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 12/16/2017 - Published: 12/6/2017 - Mario, Luigi, Peach, Bowser
Growlithe vs Jeff the killer! reviews
Growlithe protects Jenny again from a notorious murderer. Sequel to her guardian.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,640 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/20/2017 - Officer Jenny/Junsa, Growlithe/Gardie
Her guardian reviews
Growlithe loves his master he'd kill, even die for him if forced to. However he adores his master's daughter Jenny, he'd die without hesitation and kill if he even thought someone was a threat to her. So when a wild Hypno kidnaps her he hunts it down, he's out for blood giving her up won't be good enough for Growlithe, it's going to be a fight to the death.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Horror/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,150 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 8/12/2017 - Officer Jenny/Junsa, Growlithe/Gardie - Complete
Kangas sick day reviews
When Kanga gets sick, Tigger and Roo decide to do her chores. You can imagine how that played out.
Winnie the Pooh - Rated: K - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,856 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 7/10/2017 - Complete
Crazy but you like it reviews
After escaping prison Fiona turns up in Tails' house and takes him hostage in his own home, refusing to leave, she tells him she will untie him if he behaves though. She doesn't seem to have changed, though she claims otherwise. Tails still feels spite towards her but knows that his feelings for her are still there deep down. Cover belongs to EmilyBandicoot1234.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 6,036 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 13 - Updated: 6/11/2017 - Published: 9/17/2015 - Tails, Fiona Fox - Complete
Why Pigma and Andrew were kicked out reviews
There is a reason they got kicked out, its a good reason too. It all started when Pigma watched a scary movie one night.
Star Fox - Rated: K - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,231 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 5/7/2017 - Published: 10/14/2016 - Wolf O'D., Andrew O., Pigma D. - Complete
Super Mario adventures! reviews
Mario and friends have wacky adventures, romance, humor, drama, and so much more unfold in this series!
Mario - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,246 - Reviews: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 4/29/2017 - Mario, Luigi, Peach, Daisy - Complete
The struggle for trust reviews
It's been a month since Taka's trial and he is having trouble being accepted,it seems no one cares for him and things only get worse as his mate abandons things seems like they will never get better for him,luckily his mother is there to help him,he also slowly begins to find someone who might care to be his friend still.
Lion King - Rated: K - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 6 - Words: 8,158 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 10/13/2016 - Published: 12/26/2014 - Mufasa, Scar/Taka, Uru, Sarafina - Complete
Fluttershy's filler list reviews
Fluttershy is feeling down because its h&h day and she has no special somepony, however her day is about to become a lot more lively, and stinky too.
My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,496 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 4/22/2016 - Published: 12/20/2014 - Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Angel - Complete
End of a legend reviews
A requested story for another user.
Punch-Out!! - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,564 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/22/2016 - Complete
Hearts and hooves day reviews
I go and give Fluttershy things for Hearts and hooves day.
My Little Pony - Rated: K - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,523 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/4/2015 - Fluttershy - Complete
Putting your hoof down! reviews
What if someone gave Fluttershy the cherry like a nice person? Most likely Fluttershy would never have become Flutterbitch then.
My Little Pony - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,143 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/4/2015 - Fluttershy, Rarity, OC - Complete
The carpet reviews
After slamming her home down Blackthorn tells her he will personally help clean her home. She happily accepts the act of kindness, the problem is she is a bit clingy. Based on the end of comic issue 28.
My Little Pony - Rated: K - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,611 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 6/18/2015 - Rarity - Complete
A very Goofy Christmas reviews
Max and Pj have left for college a few weeks ago and Goofy is having a hard time coping, things only get worse for him when he gets fired at work, it seems his holiday is ruined until he gets a letter from Peg inviting him to spend Christmas with her and Pistol instead they come to him. Even with Pete next door, it's going to be an interesting Christmas. PegxGoofy.
Goof Troop - Rated: K - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 5 - Words: 9,691 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 12/30/2014 - Published: 12/22/2014 - Complete
A change of plans reviews
Scar always hated his brother, even before he became king, or so he always thought. Years of planning and dealing with filthy hyenas all for this moment. He ends up bailing in the end apparently, he doesn't hate Mufasa. His brother is still enraged, of course, he puts him on trial for his crimes against the pride lands. His fate is in his brother's paws now.
Lion King - Rated: K - English - Crime/Family - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,290 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 4 - Published: 12/26/2014 - Complete
What could have been reviews
Goofy helps Peg spent time in the kitchen cooking for a while in the first episode, while alone they talked, caught up with each other and learned that both their lives could have been very different.
Goof Troop - Rated: K - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,128 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 2 - Published: 12/12/2014 - Complete
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