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Joined 02-15-10, id: 2256415, Profile Updated: 08-05-16
Author has written 4 stories for Warriors.

I apologize to those who know the following information already, but I felt it'd be better if I had this as a go-to for all of my reviews.

I swear, this is such an amusingly unorganized profile. It's under construction, and I'm just writing things on top. Fun. Of course, what I'm putting at the top here is a personal pet peeve of mine (alliteration for the win), and so I hope on the off chance that you're reading my profile, you'll read it and, if you didn't know it already, carry on the idea. If you want to spread it, go ahead, but I won't put any false statements here like, "If you don't put this on your profile, my ghost will hunt you down and rip out your innards". It'll just be grammar.

PUNCTUATION AT THE END OF DIALOGUE

Written by Ankaa because he was bored.

Note: All grammatically incorrect examples are italicized to avoid conclusion."

"Two seals are sitting in a bathtub full of waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarm Crisco." said the teenager.

That's a perfectly fine sentence, right? Wrong. The period at the end of the dialogue (after "Crisco") should be a comma. This is unfortunately a very common mistake, one that's fairly irrelevant but still important. Its importance mainly comes from two things.

  1. It's correct. Google it if you have too, or even better, crack open the nearest book to check.
  2. You can start helping out other writers by pointing out the mistake, and thus make the website a better place, and that is something we desperately need. The world knows FFN as the Pit of Voles for a reason (I'm not kidding about that either).

So, in other words, it should be correctly written:

  • "Two seals are sitting in a bathtub full of waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarm Crisco," said the teenager.
  • HOWEVER, this does not apply to question marks (?) or exclamation points! Weird, I know. So, for instance, the following lines are correct:

  • "What do I look like? A typewriter?" asked the seal.
  • "Let's eat grandpa!" the boy shouted enthusiastically as he brought his grandfather to the table.
  • Got it so far? Continuing on ...

    KEEP IN MIND that punctuation in the middle of the sentence is unaffected. This is only punctuation at the END of dialogue. So for instance, this is incorrect:

  • "What do I look like, a typewriter," asked the seal.
  • FINALLY, I must admit that the title is a bit misleading. This all applies only to dialogue followed by "[pronoun] [verb]"

    For instance, this is incorrect:

  • "Stop clubbing, baby seals," the man warned. "If you do so, it may well lead to your doom," He huffed and he puffed and walked from the room, his eyes brimming with unspoken fury.
  • The comma is applied before "the man warned", but should not be applied before "He huffed and he puffed". Rather, it should be written like this, with the changed part bolded:

  • Stop clubbing, baby seals," the man warned. "If you do so, it may well lead to your doom." He huffed and he puffed and walked from the room, his eyes brimming with unspoken fury.
  • So, that might sound like it's extremely complicated, but trust me, it's really easy. Once you get into the habit of doing this, it'll come like second nature to you. Don't worry, and just fix it!


    Though the rest of the profile is under construction, this is an early published prototype of the forums section.

    The Clan of Clouds

    I associate most with this forum (probably because I am a moderator there), though I've steadily been branching out to others. It's pretty much an island in and of itself, a hermit kingdom by the very nature of forums of its kind. Created in the aftermath of the preceding guard of forums towards the beginning of this new age, the Clan of Clouds carries with it a whiff of the past era. Here, the fires of passion that fuel randomness and spam have cooled, but it still retains a unique population. Many of its members are solely parts of this forum, the era of branching having passed.

    Children of the Shadows

    A rising star among the Warrior forums, this forum is young, still less than a year old, and is still hitting its stride. Children of the Shadows is perhaps one of the more 'modern' forums in this world, embodying an aspect of the zeitgeist seen among the young adolescents of society, one of energy and enthusiasm accompanied by personal pain and self-discovery.

    As a warning, though, if you're particularly picky about grammar and capitalization in particular, this might not be a good place for you. Most people have good grammar, but there remain a few outliers.

    A Perfect Circle

    TBD

    By the way, this is the current root of my username.

    FernClan

    TBD


    Renovations have been delayed for an indeterminate amount of time.

    This profile has been delayed for an indeterminate amount of time.

    Please use the PM button if you have a matter to discuss. Thank you. Please stop by later when this will hopefully be completed.

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    A Song to Suit the Scene Challenge by Sleepingbadgr reviews
    This is a forum challenge I did for The Clan of Clouds.
    Warriors - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,060 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 9/5 - Published: 4/2
    Their Journey by Snarksadoodle reviews
    Six apprentices are swept away from their Clans when a flood strikes. Determined to get back home, they face hardships not many apprentices see in a lifetime. (Adopted from IWalkBlindlyIntoTheShadows)
    Warriors - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 16 - Words: 40,977 - Reviews: 27 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 9/1 - Published: 1/31/2015
    Tainted Line by Theatricals reviews
    "Wrath is cruel, anger is overwhelming, but who can stand before jealousy?" Skypaw must pick up the pieces of her father's mistake while carrying the consequences of his actions on her own shoulders... but nobody told her she would lose a part of herself in the process. *ON HIATUS
    Warriors - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 19 - Words: 75,997 - Reviews: 77 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 18 - Updated: 6/20 - Published: 7/27/2015
    The Quest for the Legends by Dragonfree reviews
    The story of an ordinary boy on an impossible quest in a world that isn't as black and white as he always thought it was.
    Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 71 - Words: 342,486 - Reviews: 341 - Favs: 128 - Follows: 95 - Updated: 6/7 - Published: 6/25/2004
    Bereavement by Sharn-sharn reviews
    You were gone, and I was alone. How could I ever forgive myself?
    Warriors - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 971 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/29 - Complete
    Unhinged by Sharn-sharn reviews
    Belief is a terrible thing. They all thought I was crazy, and so, they burned. Every. Single. One. Of. Them.
    Warriors - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,960 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 4 - Published: 4/22 - Complete
    Friend by twinkle.exe is not tired reviews
    Many CloudClan challenges, all a sequel to that one story that's shattered like glass under a rubber tire. (Though maybe the tire is worse off than the glass.)
    Warriors - Rated: T - English - Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,433 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 4/5 - Published: 4/3
    Forget Yesterday by Theatricals reviews
    { silence } "But there wasn't a place for me in the Clan. I couldn't offer anything to them… anything worthwhile."
    Warriors - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 10 - Words: 7,351 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 1/24 - Published: 12/6/2015
    The Trembling Storm Book 1: Brewing by Swift Is Not Available reviews
    AU. The four chosen to go to the sun-drown place failed to arrive on time. The Clans have begun the Great Journey, but without them to follow in their pawsteps; nothing remains – their home; gone. Their family; gone. Their lives; changed forever. Is there any hope for them, or is it all for nothing? Rated T.
    Warriors - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 5,989 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 11/29/2015 - Published: 9/27/2015 - Feathertail, Squirrelflight, Bramblestar, Crowfeather
    History Abound by MuchFanVeryFic reviews
    Through history, and through literature, we discover ourselves. -a collection of Hetalia One Shots and Short Stories, from all throughout my mind. Enjoy-
    Hetalia - Axis Powers - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 26,991 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 11/17/2015 - Published: 5/2/2015
    I'm Just Different by Snarksadoodle reviews
    We all can't match your standards of the perfect image. We can't change who we are. We won't apologize for not being just like you. We're not. We're all just a little different. CloudClan's September Contest
    Warriors - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 1,682 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/30/2015 - Complete
    Broken by twinkle.exe is not tired reviews
    There's only so far someone can go before they reach their breaking point. After all, it's not wise to love during war. That's playing with fire— eventually it'll burn you, and eventually love will stab you in the back. Both will leave only pain behind...
    Warriors - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,587 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 4 - Published: 8/29/2015 - Complete
    Shot Through The Heart And You're To Blame by Snarksadoodle reviews
    "Why in StarClan's name would I trust you? You betrayed me. You were the one who left me alone. You were the one who abandoned me. You were the one who dishonored everything we had as kits. You were the one who chose Swanpaw." When trust is put to the test in a crumbling relationship, will love overcome all? Or will someone get shot through the heart and never get back up?
    Warriors - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,258 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 2 - Published: 8/10/2015 - Complete
    Silent Storms by Blizzardrunner reviews
    A simple collection of the various challenges and one-shots I have completed. Current chapter: Breaking Point. "A single twisted leg, a single friend, a single chance at life, yet a Clan of tormentors."
    Warriors - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,066 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 7/22/2015 - Published: 1/19/2015
    Tails of Pyrrhia by Snarksadoodle reviews
    Pyrrhian centered one-shots involving stories of friendship, betrayal, siblings, exile and even murder... Recent Update: INSANITY - Traumatized all her life by so called "friends", Shimmer the animus RainWing finally snaps.
    Wings of Fire, Tui T. Sutherland - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,203 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Published: 7/13/2015
    Don't Forget Yourself, Don't Lose Yourself by Whistling Willows reviews
    "I'm not mad at you, Darkpaw, if that's what you're thinking. Just promise me, don't forget yourself." "Darksky?" She whispered, voice lost in the howling wind and thunder. Her only response was a deep snarl. One-shot, OC
    Warriors - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,826 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 3/3/2015 - Complete
    Quiet Remains by MuchFanVeryFic reviews
    Sit with me, under the brilliant changing sky. Listen to what this old soul has to say. Listen to me preach of the old times, sing to the sunset, cry to the sunrise. Allow me to utter unto you hidden words never to have been touched by a tongue once before. Out of all, hush, hush, and stay with me.
    Warriors - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Fantasy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,370 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 1/30/2015 - Published: 1/6/2015
    The Daughters Trilogy: Daughters of the Thorn by ShoutFinder reviews
    She has survived her apprenticeship. Now the daughter of Dovewing must uphold her prophecy foretold by the stars, that she will bring peace only through destruction. She must undertake an incredible journey to unite the lost Clan with the four, fulfil an ancient oath, and protect against the shadows of the Clans' past. She won't walk alone. Sequel to Daughter of the Sun.
    Warriors - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Spiritual - Chapters: 22 - Words: 178,064 - Reviews: 139 - Favs: 27 - Follows: 25 - Updated: 11/15/2014 - Published: 12/30/2013 - Firestar, Scourge, Breezepelt, Sol
    Firelight by twinkle.exe is not tired reviews
    And in her eyes the firelight danced, a forever memory that remained even after her spirit had lifted to join the stars.
    Warriors - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,200 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/3/2014 - Complete
    The North Remembers by qqueenofhades reviews
    In the ashes of war-torn Westeros, the fate of the remnants of House Stark - and that of their lovers, allies, friends, and foes - hangs in the balance. Has turned into my best attempt to complete the entire ASOIAF saga. ***COMPLETE***
    A song of Ice and Fire - Rated: M - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 113 - Words: 617,085 - Reviews: 1873 - Favs: 1,382 - Follows: 1,082 - Updated: 8/1/2014 - Published: 1/27/2012 - Complete
    The Thief That Never Stole by BlueAsh666 reviews
    Winter is coming, and so are the wolves. An odd, mysterious girl born from the wilds struggles to try and join her own kind. After a not-so-great first meeting with Elsa, she stops an attempted assassination and ends up being dragged in the Ice Queen's life by an entranced and excited Anna. Elsa would be fine with it... if only the girl would ever take off her damned hood.
    Frozen - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 27 - Words: 109,495 - Reviews: 485 - Favs: 421 - Follows: 429 - Updated: 5/16/2014 - Published: 12/10/2013 - Elsa, OC - Complete
    Your Aunt Elsa by robert3A-SN reviews
    Post movie: Anna only told Elsa she was having a baby hours ago. Yet as Anna and Kristoff sleep, Elsa winds up introducing herself to her future niece or nephew - and making heartfelt promises about what their future together will bring. Now an ongoing story. Chap 33 is up on Mothers Day.
    Frozen - Rated: K - English - Family - Chapters: 33 - Words: 119,201 - Reviews: 665 - Favs: 555 - Follows: 633 - Updated: 5/11/2014 - Published: 12/24/2013 - [Anna, Kristoff B.] Elsa, OC
    The Daughters Trilogy: Daughter of the Sun by ShoutFinder reviews
    An apprentice with prophetic dreams. A forgotten Clan returns. The land of the dead threatened. The peace of the world shattered with the arrival of a strange kit with wisdom far beyond her years, who knows not only of the past, but also of the future of the Clans. Can Skypaw and Aura work together to save both this world and beyond from a danger that even Rock did not foresee?
    Warriors - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Spiritual - Chapters: 26 - Words: 196,995 - Reviews: 201 - Favs: 67 - Follows: 46 - Updated: 4/15/2014 - Published: 12/11/2012 - Sol, Rock, OC - Complete
    Queen Elsa's War by cgtrial reviews
    When Anna goes missing during a diplomatic mission to the Northern Isles, Elsa resolves to find her and bring her home. Rated T for some violence. Disclaimer: I do not own Frozen or its characters. Disney does.
    Frozen - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 18 - Words: 25,779 - Reviews: 74 - Favs: 58 - Follows: 61 - Updated: 3/6/2014 - Published: 2/20/2014 - Anna, Elsa, Kristoff B., OC - Complete
    A Song of Wolves and A Dance of Dragons by ravenria reviews
    Five years since the last book, Denaerys Targaryen returns to Westeros with the aim of Conquest. With her nephew Aegon at her side and the Stark children allying to her cause, Westeros taking shape in the image of the wolf and dragon. A/N: actually everyone's here, but the focus in on Aegon, Arya, Sansa, Dany, and later Jon
    A song of Ice and Fire - Rated: T - English - Family/Romance - Chapters: 37 - Words: 43,796 - Reviews: 68 - Favs: 148 - Follows: 235 - Updated: 11/4/2013 - Published: 8/10/2012 - Aegon T., Arya S., Sansa S., Jon S.
    C H I L L E D by Prin Pardus reviews
    The first chill of leafbare is the most deadly; it is this chill that kills more than any other. The first betrayal is the most damaging; it is the act that shatters bonds of trust and kinship, crushing even the strongest heart, tearing Clans apart.
    Warriors - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 75 - Words: 522,217 - Reviews: 1110 - Favs: 194 - Follows: 120 - Updated: 7/11/2013 - Published: 5/16/2011 - Complete
    Inner Demons by SapphireLibra3 reviews
    On her twenty-first birthday, Twilight Sparkle comes across an ancient prophesy which starts a downward spiral into darkness. Will her friends be able to rescue both Twilight AND Equestria from the monster within? Will their friendship survive? Warning: This story is NOT for the faint of heart.
    My Little Pony - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 34 - Words: 150,754 - Reviews: 285 - Favs: 222 - Follows: 96 - Updated: 6/29/2012 - Published: 3/28/2012 - Twilight Sparkle, Applebloom - Complete
    Flying High: A Warriors Parody by Prin Pardus reviews
    Kitekit, born to CenterClan, the center of the universe, doesn't think she's a hero. However, as she battles enemy Clans and her own demons, she must rise to the challenge of a terrible prophecy, that will change StarClan forever....Or not.
    Warriors - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 6 - Words: 9,976 - Reviews: 199 - Favs: 73 - Follows: 55 - Updated: 1/3/2012 - Published: 4/21/2010
    Dawn of Technology by Cloister reviews
    - Ch.5 Posted - The battle on the Ark between the goddess of the sun and the emperor of eternal darkness is said to have no clear victor. But if Amaterasu is defeated, Yami is free to spread his weapons of destruction across the land...
    Okami - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 5 - Words: 13,069 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 8/1/2011 - Published: 6/3/2011 - Yami, Waka
    S H A T T E R E D by Prin Pardus reviews
    Shards come together to form a whole, cats come together to create a Clan, lives come together to form a story.
    Warriors - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 55 - Words: 339,900 - Reviews: 979 - Favs: 263 - Follows: 77 - Updated: 5/13/2011 - Published: 6/28/2010 - Complete
    Fallen Angels by TheVioletGleek reviews
    It is written in the stars that a battle with the Dark Forest is inevitable. But no matter how hard she tries, Ivypaw may be destined to fight against her sister, her Clan, and everything she's ever believed in on the side of evil.
    Warriors - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Tragedy - Chapters: 39 - Words: 61,764 - Reviews: 168 - Favs: 37 - Follows: 15 - Updated: 8/2/2010 - Published: 4/12/2010 - Ivypool, Hawkfrost - Complete
    Tigerstar's Redemption by Prin Pardus reviews
    StarClan has trusted Tigerstar to be reborn, without any memories of his old life. But when his past lives create a scheme not even StarClan knows of, what path will Tigerkit choose? Ambition, or loyalty?
    Warriors - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 79 - Words: 98,350 - Reviews: 885 - Favs: 218 - Follows: 61 - Updated: 2/13/2010 - Published: 1/5/2010 - Tigerstar - Complete
    Murder by Publicity by Seraphina2 reviews
    Set from Act II on. Finding murder too inelegant, Dr. Horrible finds a different way to destroy Captain Hammer.
    Dr. Horrible's Sing-Along Blog - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 784 - Reviews: 48 - Favs: 290 - Follows: 26 - Published: 8/5/2009 - Dr. Horrible/Billy, Captain Hammer - Complete
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    The Promised Land reviews
    Far away, hidden away beyond the horizon, lies sanctuary for the lost, home to thriving cultures and an evolving world. As the passage of time moves ever onward, lives rise and fall, blood is shed, and stories of legend are born. A collection of challenges for the Clan of Clouds.
    Warriors - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,881 - Reviews: 4 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 4/14 - Published: 12/13/2015
    Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star reviews
    This is a submission for the 13 February to 20 February weekly challenge on the Clan of Clouds, effectively involving a flanderized version of myself running a series of simulations trying to understand the rather spontaneous mind of another forum member, Twinkle. It was supposed to be a shipping fic, but I kind of chose to ignore that, so instead you get this abomination.
    Warriors - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,440 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 4 - Published: 2/20
    Song of the Earth reviews
    With the passing days, the river of time flows onward - the sun and moon dance across the heavens, the seasons come and go with the cycles of the moon. Yet over all of these lies the path of life and death, and it is the earth that shall bear the memories of these intertwining paths. Written for the September writing contest of The Clan of Clouds.
    Warriors - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 401 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/29/2015 - Complete
    A Single Moment reviews
    In life, a single moment cannot be told by mere words. Yet when all living memory has faded into the dark night and the words of the ancients are all that remain, it is those remembered moments that are told. A collection of four drabbles with themes Pursuit, Lost, Helpless, and Tribute. Challenge for the new EbonyClan.
    Warriors - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 400 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/2/2015 - Complete
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