Victory's Wonder
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Joined 02-19-10, id: 2261674, Profile Updated: 03-14-16
Author has written 9 stories for Alvin and the chipmunks.

I have moved to a new account! You can find me here:
I will still respond to any PM I get on this account, but I'm just letting you all know that I will be writing and posting on a different account from now on. Feel free to Follow/Fave/etc me there if you want. :)

About me:

I own nothing more than my own story ideas and any original characters.

Have a question? Just wanna chat? Message me!

I don't and won't write crossovers.
I don't like crossovers.
I won't use strong language in my stories except for a few words here and there.
I like to write stories with a little humor in it.
In all of my stories, the 'munks and 'ettes are 100% human.


Chipmunks (This is what I chose)

Name: Alvin Jerome Seville
Name: Simon Chase Seville
Name: Theodore James Seville

Chipettes (This is what I chose)

Name: Brittany Anne Miller
Name: Jeanette Lucille Miller
Name: Eleanore Page Miller


*Second Generation* (...before I knew that Alvin and Brittany had two sons. I haven't watched that episode. :/)

*Alvin and Brittany's Kids*

Name: Aaron Michael Seville
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Dark blue
Signature Color(s): Red and Black
Age: 15
Description: Like his dad, Aaron is a daredevil, sporty, a flirt, and can easily learn any music instrument. He likes to annoy his siblings but deeply cares for them.

Name: Brandan Shane Seville
Hair: light brown
Eyes: crystal blue
Signature Color(s): Dark Blue and White
Age: 12
Description: Brandan, somewhat like his uncle Simon, loves to read and has school work come easy for him. Although, he is very charismatic and loves the outdoors.

Name: Autumn Nicole Seville (Dustin Cody Seville)
Hair: Brown
Eyes: blue
Signature Color(s): Dark Purple and Black
Age: 14
Description: Being the only transgender (Female to Male) child in the Seville family, Autumn (Dustin) is a loner. She (he) is great with instruments, though not as well as Aaron, and finds school work hard but is able to keep up her (his) grades enough to pass.

Name: Sophia Brittany Seville
Hair: Brown
Eyes: crystal blue
Signature Colors: Pink and White
Age: 14
Description: Being Autumn (Dustin's) twin, she gets treated better than her sister (brother) because Brittany doesn't like that her daughter wants to be a boy. She is great with instruments, though not as well as Aaron and keeps her grades at average level. She is very charismatic and no where near shy.

*Simon and Jeanette's Kids*

Name: Wyatt Chase Seville (adopted)
Hair: Red / Orange (either way you wanna go)
Eyes: brown
Signature Color(s): Brown and White
Age: 13
Description: Wyatt is very talkative with a shy side. He can easily make and keep friends and is very easy to get along with.

Name: Jacqueline Dawn Seville
Hair: dark brown
Eyes: green
Signature Color(s): light blue and light purple
Age: not born
Description: Jacqueline is often forgetting what she was going to do and can hardly ever keep track of things. She is clumsy like her mother and a bookworm like her father.

*Theodore and Eleanore's Kids*

Name: Emily Shawna Seville
Hair: sandy blond
Eyes: brown
Signature Color(s): light green and soft pink
Age: 10
Description: Being a great cook at a young age, Emily takes after both of her parents. She is somewhat sporty and very intelligent at times.


To the readers and the writers of FanFiction,net...


Jumping right to the point: REVIEW.
Writers- all of them, from famous authors to subtle FF writers- ALL depend on the feedback from our readers.
Vision Dominican brought up an interesting albeit tragically true idea:

"Lackofreviewsitus is the greatest killer of fan fic writers out there. We at the institute wish to let the public know of how they can pitch in to save our dying writers.

1) Drop a review every other chapter. It may not seem like much, but reviews are actually what many of us want to see. That, and hits. Hits do make us happy but we don't really know if people like our story or not.

2) Visit our author page. Those kind of hits really make us happy. It's where we showcase our entourage of friends, beta readers, and stories. Some of us even tidy up with set areas for upcoming story ideas and character bios.

3) Send an email. While normally I'd perfer a review, emails are just as good. Really, it warms my heart to communicate with another reader or writer."

What you call being "too lazy to review" is what we call "a flame to the pages" as the writers. That one minute or two that you felt "too lazy" to review is another minute of creeping discouragement that all writers feel as they begin to think...

"Why am I even here…?"

"What's even the point of continuing?"

"My skills must be terrible…no one cares for my story…"

"I'll never be a good writer...I quit."

These are only a few thoughts that go through every writer's head- that go through MY head- when we put out a chapter / story with all our heart and soul within, and we sit there…and sit…and wait…and not a single person says even a word.

If you're not a writer, you have NO IDEA how much that hurts…

If you ARE a writer, then I'm sure you know just how great it feels when someone is kind enough to leave a heartwarming and encouraging review, and you read it, smiling while thinking…"Wow…I did it…"

So, why not give fellow writers the same luxury here?

Too many times I've seen epic and utterly beautiful works of literary art fall to pieces before finally being abandoned due to the terrible discouragement that the lack of reviews can cause.

Sometimes, it is so severe that the very writer himself decides to quit, denying the world his skills of writing that I'm it would have deeply enjoyed.


Just one minute, that's all it takes. Just a few gentle taps of the fingers on your keyboard, a few seconds or so of your time, and your words can SAVE a writer from a dark demise.

Do me a favor: Go find a story, ANY story, anywhere here on Fanfic,net, and see if you can help it. If it has very little / no reviews at all, just check it out, and say whatever comes to mind.

And enjoy the thought in mind that you could have just SAVED that story, with just a few taps of the keyboard…

If you agree with what I have said then please copy and paste any part of this story you wish onto your profile.
Modify it in any way you see fit; there is no need to use my exact words. You make it say what you want it to say.

Thank you so much for reading, and please try to complete the 'mission' I have given you. With just a minute of your time, you could save a writer…so please, do it.

Because, my readers…

Silence, is truly deafening…

-Victory's Raconteur-


One day, an old man is sitting with his twenty-five year-old son in a train. The train is just about to leave the station and all the passengers are settling down into their seats. As the train begins to move, the young man is filled with joy and curiosity. He is sitting in a window seat, and he sticks one hand out the window, feeling the passing air.

He shouts, "Papa! See! All the trees are going behind us!"

The old man smiles and admires his son's feelings. But beside the two is a couple, sitting and listening to the conversation. They feel uncomfortable with the attitude of the son, behaving like a small child.

Time passes, and suddenly the young man shouts again, "Papa! See the pond and the animals? Can you see all the colors? And the clouds, they're moving with the train - with us!"

The couple watches along in embarrassment, but it becomes quiet after a moment so they say nothing. Then they notice that it begins to rain, and the water drops onto the hand of the young man.

He is overjoyed and closes his eyes before opening them, tear-filled and amazed. "Papa! It's raining! It's raining! Water is touching me! Do you see the water, papa?"

The couple finds themselves unable to stand the sight anymore and interrupt, asking the old man, "Why don't you visit a doctor and see if you can find treatment for your son."

The old man looks from his son to the couple and smiles. "I did... and we're coming from the hospital now. Just today, my son got his eye sight for the first time in his life."


We the members of who have signed our names below and put this message on our profile pages hereby agree to live healthy, happy lives above the influence of harmful drugs and drug abuse. ADD YOUR NAME! LoverHater124, Drkseeker233, Victory'sWonder


The Stupid Test! Teehee. Put an 'x' next to the one that is you, than in the end, add up all of the 'x's. if you have 18 or less, than your not stupid. P.S. This is not a real test, just something for fun!

(x) Gum has fallen out of your mouth when you were talking. (almost every time I chew gum)
(x) Gum has fallen out of your mouth when you were NOT talking. (sadly, its true)
(x) You have run into a glass/screen door. (and it hurt)
( ) You have jumped out of a moving vehicle.
(x) You have thought of something funny and laughed, then people gave you weird looks. (all the time)
(x) You have run into a tree. (plenty of times)
(x) It IS possible to lick your elbow. ( is?)
(x) You just tried to lick your elbow. (well DUH)
(x) You never knew that the Alphabet and Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star have the same rhythm. (really?)

(x) You just tried to sing them. (I guess they are lol)
(x) You have tripped on your shoelace and fallen. (yesterday)
(x) You have choked on your own spit. (gross...but true)
( ) You have seen the the Matrix and still don’t get it.
(x) You didn’t notice that in the last question “the” was spelled twice. (O.o)
(x) You just looked at it. (you know me so well)
( ) Your hair is blonde/dirty blonde/has blonde in it.
(x) People have called you slow. (because I'm annoying... xD)
(x) You have accidentally caught something on fire. (no comment)

(x) You tried to drink out of a straw, but it went into your nose/eyes/cheek. (this morning)
(x) You have caught yourself drooling. (I also drool in my sleep =S)
(x) You’ve fallen asleep in class. (tons of times...and I've never been caught)
(x) If someone says “fart” you laugh. (LOL)
(x) You just laughed. (maybe...)
(x) Sometimes you just stop thinking.
(x) You tell a story and forget what you were talking about. (I DO NO-wait...what?)
(x) People are often shaking their heads and walking away from you. (My dad... xD)
(x) You are often told to use your “inside voice”. (my mom ruins all the fun Dx)

(x) You use your fingers to do simple math. (I'm not a math person...)
( ) You have eaten a bug.
( ) You are taking this test when you should be doing something important
(x) You have put your clothes on backwards or inside out, and didn’t realize it. (many, many times)
(x) You’ve looked all over for something and realized it was in your hand, pocket, head, etc. (all the time)
( ) You sometimes post bulletins because you are scared that what they say will happen to you if you don’t even when you know it won’t happen to you. (...what?)
( ) You break a lot of things.
(x) Your friends know not to use big words around you. (my friend's dad is like a human dictionary and he loves to confuse me)
(x) You sometimes tilt your head when you’re confused. (my bro thinks its funny)
(x) You have fallen out of your chair before. (everyone laughed at me..)
(x) When you’re lying in bed, you try to find pictures in the texture of the ceiling. (I've found a dog, cow, cloud shaped like a hat...)

Total : 31 (Wow... I'm stupid...)


So you're saying that-

I'm a loser because *I don't want to be popular.
I'm a pansy because *I don't ask every guy out.
I'm "special" because *I act silly in public.
I'm a slut because *I actually dance at...dances.
I'm nasty because *I have a single zit on my face.
I'm a hippie because *I'm not cool with violence.
I'm a wh*re because *my boyfriend kissed me.
I'm a freak because *I don't dress just like you.
I'm a b*tch because *I stand up for myself.
I'm a retard when *I make a C on a test... but a nerd when I make an A, or a B.
I'm anorexic because *I forgot my lunch one day- the next day, I'm fat because I eat all of it.
Can I tell you something, sweetheart?

Labels don't define me.


I'm the girl that if you call my friend a brat I will say something.
I'm the girl that will punch you if you push me.
I'm the girl that speaks my mind, whether you like it or not.
I'm the girl that you don't wanna be on her bad side.
I'm the girl that doesn't take crap from anyone.
BUT I'm also the girl that carries a book in her purse.
I'm the girl that wears sweat pants to the dance.
I'm the girl that no one knows her name, for good or bad, and I like it that way.
I'm the girl who acts shy one second and the next will be laughing like an idiot.
I'm the girl that people call "B*tch" and "Freak", "Mean" and "Weird"... but I take that as a compliment.
I'm the girl that doesn't have normal hobbies. I read and I write.
I'm the girl who isn't a people person, but I am when it comes to friends.
...I'm also the girl they call "best friend".


Calling me FAKE won't make you REAL,
Calling me STUPID won't make you SMART,
Calling me WEAK won't make you STRONG,
Calling me UGLY won't make you PRETTY,
Calling me POOR won't make you RICH,
Calling me FAT wont make you PERFECT,
Calling me UNCOOL wont make you COOL,
So why bother?


Now my stories...

My Lips are Sealed by Seymour Butz reviews
Something happens to Brittany that she desperately wants to keep a secret. What will happen when her secret is out? And what will Alvin do about it? Rated T.
Alvin and the chipmunks - Rated: T - English - Angst/Friendship - Chapters: 8 - Words: 24,319 - Reviews: 50 - Favs: 33 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 1/21/2009 - Published: 1/15/2009 - Brittany M., Alvin S. - Complete
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The Phobia Girl reviews
Alvin gets more than he expected when he starts dating the new girl in school named Skylar. She's sweet, caring, and pretty, but she has a list of phobias that seem to never end! Join them in a trip to Spain, a jealous Brittany, and... a duck? *ON HOLD*
Alvin and the chipmunks - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 6 - Words: 5,053 - Reviews: 43 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 3/25/2012 - Published: 8/5/2011
GlowInTheDark Glasses reviews
Alvin and the chipmunks - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 532 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 4 - Published: 7/6/2011 - Complete
Secrets That Stay: Book Two reviews
Dustin's life is getting better.. but when Jerry and Phil return, what happens? Who's life will they ruin forever? Why are they not going after Alvin? Rating may change. Chapter EIGHT and UP are written by Timothy C.
Alvin and the chipmunks - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 14 - Words: 12,109 - Reviews: 54 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 3/25/2011 - Published: 11/23/2010 - Complete
Math Class reviews
Alvin put his pencil sideways of his desk. Half off and half on. Chris looked over at him and snickered. 'Do it.' he mouthed. One. Two. Three! His hand came down on the pencil and it flew in the air. It stuck in the ceiling with a loud 'thud'.
Alvin and the chipmunks - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 769 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 3 - Published: 11/24/2010 - Alvin S. - Complete
Secrets That Stay: Book One reviews
Being the only trans-gender child in the family, Dustin's life is hard all over. When his secret gets out, what will happen? And who told? Read and find out in this second generation FF.
Alvin and the chipmunks - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 9 - Words: 10,186 - Reviews: 30 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 11/13/2010 - Published: 10/3/2010 - Complete
Alvin's Bloody Mary reviews
Alvin's friends dare him to say Bloody Mary 3 times in front of a mirror. He never believed she actually existed...until now. How can Alvin save himself and his friends from this terrible creature?
Alvin and the chipmunks - Rated: T - English - Horror - Chapters: 6 - Words: 3,845 - Reviews: 31 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 9/19/2010 - Published: 5/3/2010 - Alvin S. - Complete
Why Me? Part 2 reviews
The sequel to Why Me? Brittany has a secret she doesn't want the boys to know. Phil and Jerry return, but this time they go after someone else! Who is it? Read and find out.
Alvin and the chipmunks - Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 17 - Words: 12,469 - Reviews: 63 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 9/19/2010 - Published: 4/15/2010 - Complete
Why Me? reviews
Alvin deals with his bad childhood past. His uncle Phil and dad Jerry show up, and they're the reason its not so great.
Alvin and the chipmunks - Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 8 - Words: 6,181 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 4/13/2010 - Published: 4/4/2010 - Complete
Brittany's Dare reviews
Jeanette dares Brittany to ask Alvin out on a date,and Alvin says yes. Revised and updated
Alvin and the chipmunks - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 1,706 - Reviews: 46 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 3/12/2010 - Published: 2/21/2010 - Brittany M., Alvin S. - Complete