Aquaheart
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Joined 03-13-10, id: 2287091, Profile Updated: 09-08-13
Author has written 7 stories for Naruto.

Name: Aquaheart

Status: Extinct. Alas, it seems like fanfiction is no longer going to be a part of my life. I loved writing here and am really grateful that I did, but I just don't have the time to continue here. Thank you to all my wonderful readers and reviewers for making it a fantastic few years. Good luck to everyone.

Stories: I like reading romance, angst, suspense, etc. And I suck at writing action and humor. For some reason, things just don't work out for me when I try to make a fic funny. Ah well, you win some you lose some.

Thoughts: Please, do use proper grammar and punctuation if you expect to be taken seriously as an author. Like most other authors on this site, I'm fairly decent with that aspect, but no one is perfect. However, the irritation comes in whens someone has a wonderful idea for a story and then the grammar is atrocious. Please, get a beta reader if you plan on writing a story and you KNOW you need help with that. Misspelling the word "like" as "liek" is unacceptable if one is going to continuously going to do that.

Beta Reader Thoughts: A note to all beta-readers. Yes, I understand that you are good at grammar, but shouldn't you be if you're going to be a beta? I have the hardest time trying to find betas for my story because they all say the same thing. "I'm great at grammar and am super nit-picky about it. Also, my criticism is extremely harsh, almost to the point of being rude." I see no necessity in criticizing someone's work so harshly that it borders rudeness. There is absolutely no reason you should be so bad-mannered when involved with someone's (supposedly) hard work. Now, there is a fine line between constructive criticism and down right disrespect. No one is going to want your advice if all you do is flame the piece. And as for being tenacious with grammar, we get it. All betas are good at grammar. Good luck finding someone to help with that skill alone. Chances are, if the writer knows that they have grammar issue, they will consult either an English textbook or spell check. Thus ends my rant.

Reviews: They are greatly appreciated and I enjoy giving authors a real, honest review of their story. It doesn't help to tell a suckish author that their story is wonderful because then we have trash littering the site. If the story sucks, just tell them unless they've specified not to. In that case, they need a major reality check that their story is NOT perfect and someone really should tell them that. I won't review a story every single time, but if something really stands out and I think that there is something that should be said either good or bad, then I won't hesitate to tell the author. Oh and yes, flames are welcome to my stories. They will be Natsu Dragneel, but they are welcome.

Interests: A lot of things, though one would never guess based on my profile. To be honest, I hate people who have incredibly long profiles and because of that, I'll just cut everything short. I like Naruto, SA, The Gentlemen's Alliance Cross, Kaichou wa Maid Sama, Deathnote, Darker than Black, Code Geass, Full Metal Alchemist, among various other things.

Favorite Pairings:

Naruto: NejixTenten, KibaxHinata, ShikamaruxTemari, ObitoxRin, MinatoxKushina. Currently debating SasukexSakura. Those plots are just so trite.

Vampire Knight: ShikixRima, ZeroxYuki, KainxRuka,

Special A: TadashixAkira,

Maid Sama!: UsuixMisaki

Well anyways, since you've taken the time to read through my profile, why not scroll down and check out a few stories! Oh and if you think you can beta stories pretty well, send me a PM (though, please read through my rant at the top before you do so.)

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What Friends Are For by Cat In My Fridge reviews
Lelouch and Shirley are ready to take their relationship to the next level, but being the inexperienced, blushing virgins they both are, Suzaku has to help. Suzaku/Lelouch/Shirley. Long, fluffy, awwwwkward first-time sex.
Code Geass - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11,493 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 49 - Follows: 7 - Published: 1/20/2011 - Suzaku K., Lelouch L. - Complete
the Receipt by Xmarksthespot reviews
She wakes up one day to find an abundance of packages on her front door and a letter. Everything that she claimed Sasuke owed her were in those boxes. Sequel to the You Owe Me List.
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,123 - Reviews: 106 - Favs: 419 - Follows: 35 - Published: 12/26/2009 - Sakura H., Sasuke U. - Complete
the You Owe Me List by Xmarksthespot reviews
He wakes up one day to find a list, composed of fourteen things he has owed Sakura over the past several years. SasuSaku, oneshot
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 670 - Reviews: 55 - Favs: 323 - Follows: 37 - Published: 12/21/2009 - Sakura H., Sasuke U. - Complete
Promise Me Later by earthlyXangel reviews
He didn’t know how he was able to carry her into the hotel room. His brain was fogged and his steps weakening from lack of rest. All he knew was that he had to get her somewhere safe, somewhere warm. It was all that mattered. Shima.
Vampire Knight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,518 - Reviews: 46 - Favs: 124 - Follows: 12 - Published: 5/25/2009 - Rima T., Senri S. - Complete
Not All Presidents are Diplomats by NecroQueen reviews
Kaichou wa Maid Meido Sama! Misaki goes to meet with Tora, as she does in the series, but in this version, Takumi doesn't save her in time from his perverted antics. Warning: this story is not for the weak. A full list of warnings is listed inside.
Maid Sama! - Rated: M - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,874 - Reviews: 38 - Favs: 86 - Follows: 27 - Published: 7/31/2008 - Misaki A., Tora I. - Complete
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Illusions and the Truth reviews
She had done well enough not to cry out, but Neji could only watch for so long until their captor did something drastic. "Are you going to answer me? If not, she'll be screaming something entirely different tonight,"
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 7 - Words: 16,341 - Reviews: 64 - Favs: 35 - Follows: 66 - Updated: 9/8/2013 - Published: 12/18/2010 - Neji H., Tenten
Sorrows of the Rain reviews
Konan and Pain have always been together, their bond only strengthened by each-other. This became more-so after Yahiko's death. KonanxPain Lime
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,726 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 5 - Published: 2/13/2011 - Konan, Pain/Pein - Complete
Your Words, My Life, Our Destiny reviews
Not everything has to fall apart. Sometimes, there is still a future. NejixTenten one-shot of their future.
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,911 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 1 - Published: 10/3/2010 - Neji H., Tenten - Complete
Of Piercings and Pain reviews
In the end Nagato couldn't help but give his angel what she wanted. And even if that meant hurting himself and her in the process, he would proceed to give her happiness.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,805 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 19 - Follows: 3 - Published: 10/1/2010 - Konan, Pain/Pein - Complete
Letters to the Soul reviews
Sasuke's eyebrows arched as he read the words on the page before him printed in girly script. Sakura narrowed her eyes in rage, grabbing the paper and resisting the urge to tear it to shreds on site. SasukexSakura
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 13 - Words: 23,859 - Reviews: 45 - Favs: 35 - Follows: 34 - Updated: 7/17/2010 - Published: 4/13/2010 - Sasuke U., Sakura H. - Complete
The Girl Who Played in the Desert reviews
Do I know her? I think I do; at least I hope I do. Does she know me? Of course. She knows me better than I know myself. So why did I get caught up with a girl who can only surpass me in every aspect? Shikamaru
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,180 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/18/2010 - Shikamaru N. - Complete
Unfallen Tears reviews
Sakura willed herself not to cry. And she succeeds, until a certain Uchiha makes her.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,162 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/21/2010 - Sakura H., Sasuke U. - Complete