Author has written 2 stories for Andromeda, and Harry Potter.
When I initially began reading fan fiction, I absolutely loved the TV series, Andromeda, (the character Tyr Anastasi was poetry in motion) and the movie fanfiction that related directly to the actor, Vin Diesel. I am looking for a low content, high muscle man movie in the next installation of Fast and Furious.
I used to love PWP or lemon fics. I tried to write one and failed miserably. The story remains here in its modified form. I lost my desire to write anything because I misread a reader critique and went off the deep end. I stopped reading fanfiction for about 5 or 6 years.
I watched the first Harry Potter movie and became hooked all over again. This story, Inheritance and Fate, grows out a parody idea I've had for HP fanfiction. I'll see whether anyone catches which paradigms I am twisting out of shape. If there are works you think are great and follow my style or emphasize what I try to focus on with the characters I write...let me know. Any review which gives me ways I can improve or enhance my skills, I definitely appreciate.
I have read 3 reviews who have asked me to pay greater attention to my writing style. I have only edited for content thus far. I have listened to your pleadings. I have sought out the help of a beta.
I do listen to helpful criticism. If you are interested in the story itself and are interested in improving it, please feel free to take charge of being beta for this story. Readers, please please please (did I say please?) allow me to respond to criticisms directly. If you disable the message portion of your profile settings, then I can't do anything with the review. I have three reviewers so far that have commented multiple times but I can't respond to their commentary.
I like exchanging ideas even when I have two readers tell me, THAT'S IT. I CAN'T READ ANYMORE. UNTIL YOU DO THE FOLLOWING THINGS..., THIS STORY can't be embraced. At least with them, I have the opportunity to say, hey! can you tell me what you hated before you left the story... Either way at least I am more mature than I was.
On the upside, I have more readers than I ever thought I would. Your story and author alerts/favorite selections have made me feel ten feet tall. I must be doing one or two things right for so many of you to take your time reading my story. Thank you so very much. But if you are dissatisfied, you might want to ask for a fiction refund for what it cost.
THANK YOU ALL for posting how to work around the problem of updating chapters. I did everything I could think of except google the answer. It worked because someone posted it. Change property to content when you receive the error message. Thank you so much. It was aggravating coming back over and over again trying to find a way to post, but it was worth it.
I have posted a new incomplete chapter today. Hopefully, you will enjoy it.