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Joined 04-14-10, id: 2327545, Profile Updated: 03-30-14
Author has written 18 stories for Sonic the Hedgehog, Phineas and Ferb, Aliens/Predator, Veggie Tales, Ghost Rider, Bionicle, Slender, and Teen Titans.

Hello, I am Comment person. I comment on stories I read, and make stories. Maybe you read some of my reviews when i was an annoyomous reviewer, and maybe you haven't. At this point in time...most of you haven't.

I DO NOT HAVE A YOUTUBE ACCOUNT. I HAVE NO RELATIONS TO THE ACCOUNT UNDER THE NAME 'Comment Person' ON YOUTUBE! I AM SERIOUS.

IF THIS BOLD STATEMENT IS NOT CHANGED BY APRIL 30, 2014, THEN I HAVE DIED.

MAJOR NOTICE: They storylines that I create belong to me. The characters belong to their creators, not me. I do not own anything in my stories, execpt for the storylines and plots. Characters, no. Storyline, yes.

I read stories, leave reviews (or comments...hence my pen name), and make stories. Feel free to read my stories if you want.

So, I guess I can take requests to make a story. Any story acually. I'll be happy to take a request...that is, if you request.

I leave reviews on whatever I like (or occasionally dislike).

I was born and raised in Texas! I still live in Texas!


I have a life, a good one, it's just I do this on my spare time, and some how I have alot of spare time...
I love rock and metal.
I comment alot.
I watch alot of movies.
For some reason, I always loved planes...any kind of flying crafts actually.
I chat with other writers and stuff.
Comment person doesn't post stories just for reveiws, Cp posts stories to get his ideas out in story form, and by Comment person...I mean me.
Reviews provide some moral support for me...feedback is the best gift on FanFiction...aside from having author friends, too.
To many things from my childhood are either going down hill, or are no longer going to be avalible, making the things I have turn into collectables...it's a shame when something you like alot is no longer with you.
I LOVE VEHICLES! AND Cp (me) has a knack with mechanics.
In real life, I barely talk. In PM's, I love to type chat.
If my writing skills are poor at times, please forgive my sloppy-ness. If my writing skills are great...let me know if you want.


Sorry, I had to do this down below.

If you are against fur coats or killing animals just to look good, copy this into your profile

If you want to stop child abuse, copy and paste this onto your profile.

If you love life, you better copy and paste this onto your profile.

If you ever wanted to beat up some one, but couldn't due to the possible consequences, copy and paste this onto your profile.

If you ...never mind, DO NOT COPY AND PASTE THIS ONE!

If you are a Sonic fan and hate the haters of Sonic games, copy this onto your profile.

If you are sad that Bionicles are no longer going to come out, copy and paste this part onto your file.

I remember when I was in touch with this 'Copy and Paste' stuff...now I'm not so in touch with it.

Does anyone remember the time when 'Copy and Paste' was a trend? Is it still a trend?


If I don't like a story, I don't read it, but SOME occasions I will read something I dislike. My review/comments on the story will tell if I like it or not.

If a story is in progress, I will continue to read until the last part is added, unless I don't like it much.

I DON';T like stories that are made and not completed...
I mean all stories are great. It's just if there is no ending part, what will happen with the story? What will happen to the main characters?!
So please, if you started something, its best if you finish it.

If you read one of my stories and think its crappy...R&R!!! How else would I know if its bad or not?!

My favorite couples are ones that are Girl/Boy, Boy/Girl couples, not really a fan of lesbians or gay couples...sorry for those out there.

NOTE: I would gladly accept most request.


OC's of Mine

Character: Neon the Hedgehog
(this is a Sonic The Hedgehog OC)

Side: Neutral

Powers: Levitating, telekinesis, teleportation, mind reading, fast reflexes, running while levitating, mental shield, and spin dash.

Description: A neon-green hedgehog from another planet, which was destroyed. He literally ran through space until he crash-landed in Mobius.
He has a purple crest of fur on his chest, gloves with black trimmings, and shoes similar to Sonic's, but have metal edges and straps.
He has three quills, two going down, and one going up.
Neon did have a girlfriend, but she died when his planet was destroyed.
Neon levitates, and then runs while he levitates...so he is able to run on air.

Now before anyone sends me flames, Neon is faster than Shadow, Silver, and Sonic.
I know Sonic goes faster than sound, maybe light...but Neon was able to run through the void of space to escape his planet's destruction...so he might have been running like...faster than light?
He reached Sonic's planet within a 24 hour time! His planet was like...millions of miles away in space!

Reminder, this is an OC...not an actual character!


Character: Phosphate Knight
(this is a VeggieTales OC)

Side: Good
Height: 7 ft. 1 in.
Description: A highly disciplined cucumber with white armor and helmet.
Armed with a huge potassium charged sword and a mastered heavy swordsman.
Mostly quiet.
Known as the 'Fighter against Temptation', because he is only focused on hunting down the Bad Apple for reasons currently unknown.


OCs are fun to have, but one must be careful not to make them into a Mary-Sue.
They may feel good to have, and they may FEEL as if they are in the right place, but a character with no flaws isn't as interesting to read as a character WITH flaws.

It's a shame that this isn't usually invoked in real life, with many of us frowning upon peoples' social flaws.

I have begun to post my final 'Phineas and Ferb' story. You can find it in the Rated M section in the 'Phineas and Ferb' Archive...just letting y'all know.

I hate to inform that story progress is once again slow. Aside from school work, I also begun my applications for college and continuing my work on my novel. Nevertheless, I do my best to find time to work on Fanfiction stories. Of course, I won't abandon my Fanfiction stories, so be assured that they will be completed.

Though, it is getting increasingly difficult to become focused...or at least motivate me to do so. I have little doubt that if I apply myself to it that it will get done. It's that I need to work on getting rid of my laziness as well as to stop being addicted to the Internet. In concept, that's a little ironic, considering FanFiction.net and all.
Oh well.

I ought to stay on top of my NOTICES in bold at the top of my profile page...

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Timely Love Stories reviews
Just a collection of moments between Larry and Petunia over the years. I do not own this franchise, and copyright belongs to the people who work on the show VeggieTales.
Veggie Tales - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 33 - Words: 60,635 - Reviews: 131 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 10 - Updated: 3/20 - Published: 8/10/2011
LarryBoy: Good VS Evil reviews
Under vigilant eyes of superheroes and the police, the flowing crime in Bumblyburg has been reduced to a trickle. But when a new villain bent on destroying Bumblyburg arrives, the ultimate question arises from the flames: Can good prevail against evil? Rated T for safety.
Veggie Tales - Rated: T - English - Parody/Crime - Chapters: 8 - Words: 36,854 - Reviews: 18 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 1/3 - Published: 6/8/2013
Reasons Why Raven Hates Beast Boy reviews
Raven gives some insight on what she particularly hates about Beast Boy and why. Does she really hate him, or is it just tough love? A 'TTG' based one-shot. Reviews, critique, and flames are welcomed.
Teen Titans - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,386 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 11/22/2013 - Raven, Beast Boy - Complete
Ages and Maturity reviews
"The more things change, the more they stay the same." My final Phineas and Ferb story. Rated M for a reason. Jeff 'Swampy' Marsh and Dan Povernmire own the copyrights.
Phineas and Ferb - Rated: M - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 20 - Words: 77,469 - Reviews: 59 - Favs: 24 - Follows: 22 - Updated: 10/14/2013 - Published: 8/11/2011 - Phineas
Slenderman Encounter reviews
What happens when Slenderman visits the dreams of an author with instincts? You get these experience stories. Also my first Poetry story. R&R if you choose.
Slender - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 2 - Words: 729 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 1/24/2013 - Published: 12/5/2012 - Complete
Ice Hearted reviews
While travelling Ko-Wahi, Kopaka Nuva finds Jaller, who is looking for Hahli. What seems to be a simple escort soon turns into a search and rescue. Kopaka Nuva soon finds his duty put to the test. His duty: protect the Matoran. Rated T for a safety. I do not own Bionicle. Read & Review if you wish.
Bionicle - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 8,143 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 7/30/2012 - Published: 7/22/2012 - Kopaka, Jaller - Complete
Blazing Silver reviews
A short story between Silver and Blaze. I hope you enjoy it. The characters belong to SEGA except for my OC. R&R if you want. Rated T because...I don't know what else to rate it. Enjoy!
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,379 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 2 - Published: 11/24/2011 - Silver, Blaze - Complete
Riders of Flames reviews
A short incident when Johnny Blaze runs into another Ghost Rider while he is after some sinners in the Mojave Desert at night. My first Ghost Rider story. R&R if you wish. I do not own the Ghost Rider franchise.
Ghost Rider - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,394 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 11/12/2011 - Complete
Phineas and Ferb BACKSTAGE! reviews
The sequal-series to "Summer Belongs To You OUTTAKES"! Nothing belongs to me, and none of this is real, only in FanFiction. Copyrights belong to Dan Povernmire and Jeff "Swampy" Marsh. I give credit to anything else that was used in this.
Phineas and Ferb - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 13 - Words: 115,719 - Reviews: 82 - Favs: 25 - Follows: 10 - Updated: 8/8/2011 - Published: 9/4/2010 - Complete
The Wild West reviews
The adventures in the West were wild, and this is one of them. The first Western Phineas and Ferb story. R&R and enjoy. I DO NOT OWN PHINEAS AND FERB, OR ANY OTHER CHARACTERS. Rated T for a reason.
Phineas and Ferb - Rated: T - English - Western - Chapters: 19 - Words: 67,481 - Reviews: 76 - Favs: 25 - Follows: 16 - Updated: 6/28/2011 - Published: 7/10/2010 - Complete
NIGHTMARES reviews
Phineas has not just one, not two, but many nightmares at once. Can he escape to reality? When he does escape, is he still dreaming? Rated T for a reason. Read at your own dreamy risk. R&R. I dont own any characters.
Phineas and Ferb - Rated: T - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,097 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/29/2010 - Phineas - Complete
IN LOVING MEMORY AND HONOR reviews
In loving memory of those who had lost so much in 9/11. A short story that honors those people. R&R, and please leave a review in memory of those who had lost so much. I dont own Phineas and Ferb, or any characters except Cp. If format is wrong, srry!
Phineas and Ferb - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,295 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/11/2010 - Complete
Summer Belongs To You Outtakes reviews
Outtakes of Summer Belongs To You! R&R, I dont own any of the characters in the story. Rated T for safety. This wasnt meant to be a story, just something funny I decided to make. Enjoy!
Phineas and Ferb - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,257 - Reviews: 48 - Favs: 35 - Follows: 7 - Published: 8/27/2010 - Complete
Shadow's Mission reviews
A very brief rescue mission that G.U.N has asigned to Shadow. I dont own any characters, ecxept for Neon and the R.C.A. R&R and enjoy!
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,357 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/16/2010 - Shadow - Complete
JUNGLE HUNT reviews
Basically, a group of marines are hunting down some xenomorphs in a jungle, then a predator decides to hunt/brawl them. R&R PLZ!
Aliens/Predator - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,627 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/1/2010 - Complete
Love in the Meadow reviews
Amy is bored one day and takes a walk in a meadow. Sonic happens to dash by and see her. He sees her bored, and decided to cheer her up. Plz R&R, no flames, my first one shot! Requested by Gargel. SONIC CHARACTERS BELONG TO SEGA!
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,206 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 6 - Published: 5/28/2010 - Sonic, Amy - Complete
Perry's Secret reviews
Perry fights Doof like always. Except this time, Doof's creation gets a little out of hand, causing Perry to use his secret weapon. Rated T for the actions that happen. R&R!
Phineas and Ferb - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,982 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 2 - Published: 5/1/2010 - Perry - Complete
2 Girls 1 Cup Sonic Style reviews
This is my first fanfic. Rated T for the topic it covers, if you have seen the video: 2 Girls 1 Cup, you should know why then. Plz R & R. This is my first fanfic. I do not own Sonic, or any of the characters in this story. I know there are a few typos.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,435 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 2 - Published: 4/17/2010 - Complete