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Joined 04-14-10, id: 2327545, Profile Updated: 07-19-18
Author has written 19 stories for Sonic the Hedgehog, Phineas and Ferb, Aliens/Predator, Veggie Tales, Ghost Rider, Bionicle, Slender, Teen Titans, and RWBY.

Hello, I am Comment person. I comment on stories I read and make stories. Maybe you read some of my reviews when i was an annoyomous reviewer, and maybe you haven't. At this point in time...most of you haven't.


IF THIS BOLD STATEMENT IS NOT CHANGED BY AUGUST 30th 2018, THEN I HAVE DIED. (that should take care of this for awhile).

MAJOR NOTICE: They storylines that I create belong to me. The characters belong to their creators, not me. I do not own anything in my stories, execpt for the storylines and plots. Characters, no. Storyline, yes.

I read stories, leave reviews (or comments...hence my pen name), and make stories. Feel free to read my stories if you want.

So, I guess I can take requests to make a story. Any story acually. I'll be happy to take a request...that is, if you request.

I leave reviews on whatever I like (or occasionally dislike).

I was born and raised in Texas! I still live in Texas!

Sorry, I had to do this down below.

If you are against fur coats or killing animals just to look good, copy this into your profile

If you want to stop child abuse, copy and paste this onto your profile.

If you love life, you better copy and paste this onto your profile.

If you ever wanted to beat up some one, but couldn't due to the possible consequences, copy and paste this onto your profile.

If you ...never mind, DO NOT COPY AND PASTE THIS ONE!

If you are a Sonic fan and hate the haters of Sonic games, copy this onto your profile.

I remember when I was in touch with this 'Copy and Paste' I'm not so in touch with it.

Does anyone remember the time when 'Copy and Paste' was a trend? Is it still a trend? (Probably not...oh well.)

OC's of Mine

Character: Neon the Hedgehog
(this is a Sonic The Hedgehog OC)

Side: Neutral

Powers: Levitating, telekinesis, teleportation, mind reading, fast reflexes, running while levitating, mental shield, and spin dash.

Description: A neon-green hedgehog from another planet, which was destroyed. He literally ran through space until he crash-landed in Mobius.
He has a purple crest of fur on his chest, gloves with black trimmings, and shoes similar to Sonic's, but have metal edges and straps.
He has three quills, two going down, and one going up.
Neon did have a girlfriend, but she died when his planet was destroyed.
Neon levitates, and then runs while he he is able to run on air.

Character: Phosphate Knight
(this is a VeggieTales OC)

Side: Good
Height: 7 ft. 1 in.
Description: A highly disciplined cucumber with white armor and helmet.
Armed with a huge potassium charged sword and a mastered heavy swordsman.
Mostly quiet.
Known as the 'Fighter against Temptation', because he is only focused on hunting down the Bad Apple for reasons currently unknown.

Currently very occupied with duties overseas. Production is inhibited :(

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The Folly of the Toa by Scorpion-Strike reviews
Spherus Magna, 9,000 years after the Reformation. Time has not been kind to the Toa Nuva; some have died, some are fading away... and one has vanished, until now. A young Toa meets a legend, accompanies him on a journey and meets his former allies, whose actions helped to create a paradise; one that they have no reason to exist in.
Bionicle - Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Fantasy - Chapters: 56 - Words: 174,398 - Reviews: 30 - Favs: 35 - Follows: 27 - Updated: 10/15/2016 - Published: 1/30/2016 - Gali, Kopaka, Pohatu - Complete
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Timely Love Stories reviews
Just a collection of moments between Larry and Petunia over the years. I do not own this franchise, and copyright belongs to the people who work on the show VeggieTales.
Veggie Tales - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 45 - Words: 93,375 - Reviews: 159 - Favs: 37 - Follows: 24 - Updated: 6/17 - Published: 8/10/2011 - Complete
Future Restructured reviews
"Reverse time, save the future." Hailing from a future of destitute, Jaune Arc travels to the past to circumvent the future. Can the knight stop the events from unfolding and guarantee a safe future for all of humanity in Remnant? He has no choice. He must, he shall, and he will. No matter the costs.
RWBY - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Tragedy - Chapters: 10 - Words: 42,295 - Reviews: 77 - Favs: 276 - Follows: 363 - Updated: 4/17 - Published: 5/10/2016 - Jaune A., Pyrrha N., Team RWBY, Team JNPR
Ages and Maturity reviews
"The more things change, the more they stay the same." My final Phineas and Ferb story. Rated M for a reason. Jeff 'Swampy' Marsh and Dan Povernmire own the copyrights.
Phineas and Ferb - Rated: M - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 24 - Words: 100,434 - Reviews: 76 - Favs: 35 - Follows: 38 - Updated: 3/17/2017 - Published: 8/11/2011 - Phineas - Complete
LarryBoy: Good VS Evil reviews
Under vigilant eyes of superheroes and the police, the flowing crime in Bumblyburg has been reduced to a trickle. But when a new villain bent on destroying Bumblyburg arrives, the ultimate question arises from the flames: Can good prevail against evil? Rated T for safety.
Veggie Tales - Rated: T - English - Parody/Crime - Chapters: 10 - Words: 46,009 - Reviews: 33 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 2/23/2016 - Published: 6/8/2013
Reasons Why Raven Hates Beast Boy reviews
Raven gives some insight on what she particularly hates about Beast Boy and why. Does she really hate him, or is it just tough love? A 'TTG' based one-shot. Reviews, critique, and flames are welcomed.
Teen Titans - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,386 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 2 - Published: 11/22/2013 - Raven, Beast Boy - Complete
Slenderman Encounter reviews
What happens when Slenderman visits the dreams of an author with instincts? You get these experience stories. Also my first Poetry story. R&R if you choose.
Slender - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 2 - Words: 729 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 1/24/2013 - Published: 12/5/2012 - Complete
Ice Hearted reviews
While travelling Ko-Wahi, Kopaka Nuva finds Jaller, who is looking for Hahli. What seems to be a simple escort soon turns into a search and rescue. Kopaka Nuva soon finds his duty put to the test. His duty: protect the Matoran. Rated T for a safety. I do not own Bionicle. Read & Review if you wish.
Bionicle - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 8,143 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 7/30/2012 - Published: 7/22/2012 - Kopaka, Jaller - Complete
Blazing Silver reviews
A short story between Silver and Blaze. I hope you enjoy it. The characters belong to SEGA except for my OC. R&R if you want. Rated T because...I don't know what else to rate it. Enjoy!
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,379 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 1 - Published: 11/24/2011 - Silver, Blaze - Complete
Riders of Flames reviews
A short incident when Johnny Blaze runs into another Ghost Rider while he is after some sinners in the Mojave Desert at night. My first Ghost Rider story. R&R if you wish. I do not own the Ghost Rider franchise.
Ghost Rider - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,394 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 1 - Published: 11/12/2011 - Complete
Phineas and Ferb BACKSTAGE! reviews
The sequal-series to "Summer Belongs To You OUTTAKES"! Nothing belongs to me, and none of this is real, only in FanFiction. Copyrights belong to Dan Povernmire and Jeff "Swampy" Marsh. I give credit to anything else that was used in this.
Phineas and Ferb - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 13 - Words: 115,719 - Reviews: 83 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 12 - Updated: 8/8/2011 - Published: 9/4/2010 - Complete
The Wild West reviews
The adventures in the West were wild, and this is one of them. The first Western Phineas and Ferb story. R&R and enjoy. I DO NOT OWN PHINEAS AND FERB, OR ANY OTHER CHARACTERS. Rated T for a reason.
Phineas and Ferb - Rated: T - English - Western - Chapters: 19 - Words: 67,481 - Reviews: 76 - Favs: 23 - Follows: 16 - Updated: 6/28/2011 - Published: 7/10/2010 - Complete
Phineas has not just one, not two, but many nightmares at once. Can he escape to reality? When he does escape, is he still dreaming? Rated T for a reason. Read at your own dreamy risk. R&R. I dont own any characters.
Phineas and Ferb - Rated: T - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,097 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/29/2010 - Phineas - Complete
In loving memory of those who had lost so much in 9/11. A short story that honors those people. R&R, and please leave a review in memory of those who had lost so much. I dont own Phineas and Ferb, or any characters except Cp. If format is wrong, srry!
Phineas and Ferb - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,295 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/11/2010 - Complete
Summer Belongs To You Outtakes reviews
Outtakes of Summer Belongs To You! R&R, I dont own any of the characters in the story. Rated T for safety. This wasnt meant to be a story, just something funny I decided to make. Enjoy!
Phineas and Ferb - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,257 - Reviews: 49 - Favs: 34 - Follows: 6 - Published: 8/27/2010 - Complete
Shadow's Mission reviews
A very brief rescue mission that G.U.N has asigned to Shadow. I dont own any characters, ecxept for Neon and the R.C.A. R&R and enjoy!
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,357 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/16/2010 - Shadow - Complete
Basically, a group of marines are hunting down some xenomorphs in a jungle, then a predator decides to hunt/brawl them. R&R PLZ!
Aliens/Predator - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,627 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/1/2010 - Complete
Love in the Meadow reviews
Amy is bored one day and takes a walk in a meadow. Sonic happens to dash by and see her. He sees her bored, and decided to cheer her up. Plz R&R, no flames, my first one shot! Requested by Gargel. SONIC CHARACTERS BELONG TO SEGA!
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,206 - Reviews: 26 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 10 - Published: 5/28/2010 - Sonic, Amy - Complete
Perry's Secret reviews
Perry fights Doof like always. Except this time, Doof's creation gets a little out of hand, causing Perry to use his secret weapon. Rated T for the actions that happen. R&R!
Phineas and Ferb - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,982 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 5 - Published: 5/1/2010 - Perry - Complete
2 Girls 1 Cup Sonic Style reviews
This is my first fanfic. Rated T for the topic it covers, if you have seen the video: 2 Girls 1 Cup, you should know why then. Plz R & R. This is my first fanfic. I do not own Sonic, or any of the characters in this story. I know there are a few typos.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,435 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 2 - Published: 4/17/2010 - Complete