Author has written 34 stories for Full House, Alvin and the chipmunks, Suite Life series, Baby Sitters Club, Harry Potter, Victorious, and iCarly.Please R&R my stories.
Sadly, I have noticed that the AatC archive has really gone downhill. Is it due to inexperienced authors? Actually, no. Is it due to all the little author's notes instead of stories which are against FF rules? Partially. But the main thing is, we aren't a community anymore. And why aren't we? Almost every author here tries their best to post really good stories with amazing plots, perfect grammar, little to no mistakes, and how many reviews do they get? 1 or 2. Sometimes even zero. Now it's all about the popularity, not about becoming friends and sharing Alvin and the Chipmunks stories. If you look at the Septimus Heap archive, for instance, they have no problems. You write your story, get reviews and favourites, and suddenly people want you to update. Here? You post a good story, get maybe one favourite and no reviews. You post a story that needs some work and you get flamed. It's sad. One thing in particular, the reviews! Now, when people review, it's just "Great! Update soon!" No one's giving proof that they a.) read the story or b.) actually care. Sometimes people just review to be known. Also, if someone makes mistakes, help them, don't turn away and maybe send them a mean review. I make tons of mistakes, and so do you, so you deserve help. And also, here in the AatC archive, I find that there are tons of underage people. I know I am one, but at least I write like a 13 or 14 year old, which technically if I hadn't given out my age people would've thought that I was old enough. But that's not the problem. The underage people don't write like they're 13 or 14, and they get all the popularity. In reviews people tell me I write good, but compared to these underage writers I feel extremely unknown! Please add this to your profile (edit it, to make is slightly personal) if you want the old, at least 12-and-over archive back, where stories were reviewed truthfully, and not just for the popularity. Thank you. Repost!!! Make this known!!!! We need a better community and just one person makes a big difference(:
That,above originally was written by DorkandProudOfIt,with a few of my edits. I think that all of it is true. I mean,I've seen totally good stories that are probably 10 times better than some of the writers on here's stories and they get like 4 reviews just because they didn't write a disgusting story(You know what I mean,i'm not explaining it!),a story that was stolen(Even though I think some writers are making new accounts and doing that for publicity),or a story that was written by someone who is totally a horriable writer. And reviews are so simple and easy that it gives no critization or any judgements on the writing skills or even the plot of the story! I would rather want a review saying whats good and what I need to work on than a review telling me,"Good story please update". Something I also noticed not mentioned in the above(Awesomely written)writing is that everyone is using chat speak in stories. Its one thing making a misspelling,but when you make it like this,"Brittany waz txtin alvin nd she wuz @ a g8 party,"Sure,that was a little overdone but people are still using words like,"Plz,"or"wuz"instead of typing the real word. Its exceptional in reviews,some people are in a rush,but in a story it means your downright lazy! Two years ago when I joined this site not everyone was friends,but everyone had a place and everyone got decent reviews. But now after the second fox movie came out,noobs joined us! And nobody is actually making them better,just saying,"You suck,"or"Bad story"!!!
Please repost these two messages around because we NEED to make a change before we are totally gone as a community! Thank you(:
What a Boyfriend SHOULD do:
When she walks away from you mad
When she stares at your mouth
When she pushes you or hits you
When she starts cussing at you
When she's quiet
When she ignores you
When she pulls away
when you see her at her worst
When you see her start crying
When you see her walking
When she's scared
When she lays her head on your shoulder
When she steals your favorite hat
When she teases you
When she doesn't answer for a long time
When she looks at you with doubt
When she says that she likes you
When she grabs at your hands
When she bumps into you
when she tells you a secret
When she looks at you in your eyes
When she misses you
When you break her heart
When she says its over
When she repost this bulletin
Stay on the phone with her even if she's not saying anything.
When she says she's ok don't believe it, talk with her- because 10 yrs later she'll remember you
Call her at 12:00am on her birthday to tell her you love her
Treat her like she's all that matters to you.
Tease her and let her tease you back.
Stay up all night with her when she's sick.
Watch her favorite movie with her or her favorite show even if you think its stupid.
Give her the world.
Let her wear your clothes
When she's bored and sad, hang out with her.
Let her know she's important.
Kiss her in the pouring rain.
When she runs up to you crying, the first thing you say is;
If you do post this in the next four minutes the one you love will :
What letters Mean!
A : has a smile to die for
Lets do my name!
A.Has a smile to die for
E.Has beautiful Eyes
E.Has Beautiful eyes
Who said sky is the limit when Man have stepped on the moon?
-?IDk who wrote that,but i love that saying!
Hermione: Do I ever cross your mind?
Hermione: Do you like me?
Ron: Not Really.
Hermione: Do you want me?
Hermione: Would you cry if I left?
Hermione: Would you live for me?
Hermione: Would you do anything for me?
Hermione: Choose me, or your life
Ron: My life.
Hermione walks away, holding back sobs, and Ron runs after her and says...
"The reason why you never crossed my mind is because you're always on my mind.
The reason why I don't like you is because I love you.
The reason I don't want you is because I need you.
The reason I wouldn't cry if you left is because I die if you left.
The reason I wouldn't live for you is because I would die for you.
The reason why I'm not willing to do anything for you is because I'll do everything for you.
The reason I chose my life is because you ARE my life."
Copy and paste if you love Ron and Hermione
If you have ever stayed up after 3:00A.M readin or waiting for a story or chap to be posted CATNIP
I HATE HATERZ.
I have JBOFDF. Post this on your page if you have Justin Bieber Obsessive Fan Disorder FOREVER.=)
I have HPOFDF. Post this on your page if you have Harry Potter Obsessive Fan Disorder FOREVER=)