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Author has written 6 stories for Pokémon, and Persona Series.

The Author

So. I'm Jimmy, male obviously, age 30. I'm just a guy who writes during his free time, that is in desperate need of practice, and likes to rant. Which is funny because I'm actually a really quiet person.

Huge thanks to my beta reader, DarkAngelTorchic. I promise to go easy on you.

And that's all I can stand to discuss about myself and my interests, so instead how about we move on to some notes, comments, and progress reports about my stories that I couldn't think to put anywhere else! Oh and then there's some other extra rants and opinions after that. Ignore if you so choose.


The 'Fics

Sweet Sacrifice: A standard OC Journey intertwined with a more seasoned plot which I must give credit to my friend (username Plasma Pegasus on here) for, as she granted me exactly the inspiration I needed to make this more than just a badge quest. This is the one I'm going to be really focusing on. Also, I may make references to the plots of other fics that I've read and enjoyed, with credits to the fic and author in a note. Progress: Posted ch. 19 on 2/23/19. Chapter 20 has been started because I decided chapter 19 would be better off ended where it is and I moved the last scene to the beginning of chapter 20 instead.

Eventually I plan to also release an "Extras" story, which would actually only be some one-shots, side stories, and trivia for Sweet Sacrifice that I wouldn't be putting into the main story for some reason or another. The following list is mostly for my own reference, though if anyone has any specifics they'd like to see, feel free to let me know (fair warning, there are spoilers here). While I sincerely doubt most of these would make for interesting reading, I will keep this list here as a reference anyway. Current ideas include: A page of trivia and comparisons between the original story and the current version; Shadow's training of Thorn before the official start of the journey; Kirsten's battle with the forest ghosts; the story of exactly how and why Kirsten became a poison-type specialist.

Guardian of the Sea: Probably going to be another fairly standard OC journey type thing, just in a fairly uncommon setting. Or, at least, I haven't seen a single other 'fic out there set in the Orange Islands, so if you have (and it's good), please do direct me to it. There is a bigger plot to it than just the gyms though, as hinted in the summary. Progress: Posted ch. 5 on 1/26/15. Chapter 6 is started but not very far along; SS has been the focus recently.

Johto's Dark Secrets: Bit of a different plot, but I'm not happy with how I've started it, so I plan to re-write this eventually, perhaps starting a bit further down in Carrie's quest. Progress: The overhaul has not begun, so all of the glaring flaws are still there in all their painful glory.

Proteus: A bit of a different story than my typical writing. This is a one-shot, about twice the length of an average chapter of mine. It is yet another OC story, but unlike my others, this one does not follow the entire badge quest, but rather the rest of the adventure and the relationships that this particularly different main character forms, both with her team and her traveling partner. Of course, she has a secret she's keeping from them all and has to live with the unexpected results of hiding it.

There Is No Greater Hell: An OC-centered Persona story. Basically my own "game" with my own characters. Progress: Posted ch. 5 on 5/29/19. Ch. 6 and 7 both in-progress.

As for the last one... well, it's not really even a story, just excerpts from the others. I was going to take it down once it wasn't needed anymore but I think they're fairly good examples, so I'll leave them there. If it gets taken down for me, so be it, but why not let someone else get some use out of it while it's there?

Other Authors': My OC's I've submitted to other authors. Currently three have made a debut of the five I've submitted: First, Krystina Marshall, in Frozen Archer's A Legendary Cure. Second, Savannah Grace Decaro, in Starspejd's The Gawaro Chronicles. And third, Cassandra Pierce, in Engraved.In.Ink's Ripples in the Water.


The Opinions

Reviews are called that for a reason: Unlike most people on here I'm not craving reviews, since I write for my own enjoyment rather than praise or criticism. But if you feel like leaving one for any reason, I'm not going to stop you. However, that means an actual review, please. Tell me what you liked, didn't like, theories, predictions, problems, possible solutions, etc. It's got nothing to do with "not being able to handle flames" but more with the fact that flames offer no real feedback and just wastes the time of both the one writing them and everyone who happens to read them. Don't like, don't read, don't comment. It's not rocket science.

On a related topic, I fully support Farla and co. While I realize their reviews can be taken as a little harsh, all of the ones I've seen have been genuinely informative and intended to be helpful. If you don't want constructive criticism, (or simply don't want to improve/would rather people flower your story in compliments), then you might want to specify that in the summary or something when you post your story. As for me, while I'm not actively looking for feedback, I'm not going to turn it away. You can see the comments on JDS if you need that validation.

Know any good stories?: I'm a little bit obsessed with finding other good 'fics, which on this site seems to be only slightly easier than finding a proverbial needle in a haystack, so if you think you've got something worth reading I welcome you to harass me with links, via PM. Just a heads up, I generally prefer OC-based stories. Just try to keep it within the Pokemon universe; that's all I really enjoy reading (in terms of fanfiction).


The End

And that's about it... Yeah, that got long. Oh well. Feel free to PM me if you have questions about stuff.

Last profile edit: July 4, 2019: Forgot I've had a birthday this year. Also added a bit of critique ranting.

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Spirited: the Rewrite by OceanSpiral reviews
Pokemon training was never her choice, but when Sienna finds her mum gone, claiming to be pursuing her estranged father, the she discovers the path of a trainer is now inevitable. Partnered up with a feisty Mareep and some new friends, Sienna sets out to find her mother. Along the way, she uncovers a sinister plot bigger than anything she thought possible. Rewrite of Spirited.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Family - Chapters: 6 - Words: 16,468 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 33 - Updated: 6/6 - Published: 4/13
Spirited by OceanSpiral reviews
Pokemon training was never her choice, but when Sienna finds her mum gone, claiming to be chasing her dad, she discovers the path of a trainer is now inevitable. Partnered up with a feisty Mareep and a plethora of other 'spirited' Pokemon, Sienna seeks out revenge on her violent estranged father. But the sinister plot she uncovers proves a doorway for something entirely unexpected.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 56 - Words: 218,844 - Reviews: 582 - Favs: 381 - Follows: 186 - Updated: 4/9 - Published: 7/10/2010 - Mareep/Merriep, OC - Complete
Fracture (SYOC) by Kiyuyuri reviews
In recent months, mysterious occurrences have resulted in spontaneous death on an unprecedented scale, resulting in the government scrambling to formulate countermeasures, as well as to prevent the public from discovering the true supernatural nature of these events and causing panic. At the same time, a group of High School students awaken to a mysterious power. (SYOC Closed)
Persona Series - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Mystery - Chapters: 6 - Words: 24,657 - Reviews: 46 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 19 - Updated: 7/24/2018 - Published: 5/18/2017 - OC
The Quest for the Legends by Dragonfree reviews
The story of an ordinary boy on an impossible quest in a world that isn't as black and white as he always thought it was.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 78 - Words: 390,247 - Reviews: 359 - Favs: 156 - Follows: 115 - Updated: 6/19/2018 - Published: 6/25/2004 - Complete
Gods and Demons by Keleri reviews
They knew the Gaiien region could be dangerous, but they didn't expect anything like this. Three trainers test their skills in a strange land as ancient powers awaken, and demon pokémon, giants, and hybrids converge for a showdown they couldn't imagine. (Finished at last.)
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Supernatural - Chapters: 42 - Words: 206,490 - Reviews: 353 - Favs: 80 - Follows: 45 - Updated: 8/24/2017 - Published: 7/8/2004 - OC - Complete
The Nooses We Tie by LeafyDream reviews
The bond that linked the two of them had become a noose around her neck. She hung from it, gasping for air as she reached out to him. She pleaded for him to come back, to accept her, to love her, but he was walking away. He was ignorant of her plight as she hung there. He let her body hang there as he held another girl in his arms.
Persona Series - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,525 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 60 - Follows: 21 - Published: 4/25/2017 - Protagonist, Makoto N., Futaba S. - Complete
Appreciation by Ryuu Masken reviews
Futaba's next encounter: coffee.
Persona Series - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,488 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 74 - Follows: 18 - Published: 4/21/2017 - Protagonist, Futaba S. - Complete
Ree Majors' Wonderful Journey by Digital Skitty reviews
Ree Majors issues a challenge to herself: get eight Unovan badges in under a year. Fifth time's the charm, right? But she's not really cut out for training, not like her boyfriend or her sister, and it's not like she can rely on anyone but herself. And her pokemon, she should probably remember that it's a team effort. So they can go on a wonderful* journey together. (*not at all)
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 40 - Words: 327,476 - Reviews: 703 - Favs: 628 - Follows: 641 - Updated: 2/16/2015 - Published: 7/1/2011 - OC
The City and the Ghost: Redux by DarkAngelTorchic reviews
Once an elite trainer famous for defeating Team Galactic, Delaney has been in isolation for nearly a year following the events of the Spear Pillar. Surely nobody would think to look for her in Unova, posing as a novice trainer beginning her journey amidst overzealous liberation groups, annoying neighbors and pokemon that hide under the bed from her, right?
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 10 - Words: 49,116 - Reviews: 26 - Favs: 17 - Follows: 22 - Updated: 8/10/2014 - Published: 4/21/2014 - OC
The Gawaro Chronicles by starspejd reviews
A story of three teenagers travelling through the huge region of Gawaro. Filled with mystery and lore, they meet new fiends and enemies. But an evil organisation is working behind the scenes, as they try to harness the power of legendary Pokémon. "It's like a good book you just can't put down. Every chapter, every scene just leaves you wanting more." Shadow Serenity 57, 10/14/2013.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 29 - Words: 124,202 - Reviews: 119 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 7/30/2014 - Published: 5/12/2013
Mailboy by Fluffy Parrots reviews
I started out my journey with my stupid uniform, figuring that the world would be a happy enough place. I thought that maybe I'd be fine with not being a full-fledged trainer and just working as a messenger, delivering everyone's mail. Then, of course, the economy had to collapse, Team Rocket had to take over, and I'd be clueless on what I had to do.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 11 - Words: 52,651 - Reviews: 39 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 18 - Updated: 3/6/2014 - Published: 4/30/2013 - OC
Feeling Guilty About a Doll? by SergeantSarcasm1
A trainer reminisces about an old doll while alone on Route 14...
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,115 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/4/2014 - Complete
Free Spirits by OceanSpiral reviews
Sequel to Spirited. Two years after foiling Team Quantum's plans, Sienna is thrust back into the world of Pokemon training when she is given a proposition by her reformed father: four Johto league badges in exchange for a long sought after battle with him. Easy, right? Wrong. A new threat is hovering on the horizon, and Sienna soon finds she and her friends are at war once again.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Adventure - Chapters: 52 - Words: 254,690 - Reviews: 498 - Favs: 123 - Follows: 75 - Updated: 5/28/2013 - Published: 7/8/2011 - Ampharos/Denryu, OC - Complete
To Be a Master of the PokéUniverse by Scheherazado reviews
So you wanna be the master of the PokéUniverse? Do you have the skills to be number one? Chances are, you don't. In order to help you achieve that goal, I have generously given you this handy-dandy guide. Read and be enlightened. A guide to writing Pokémon fanfiction. Formerly known as 'Puff's Tips to the PokéUniverse.' Chapter 9: Titles!
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 9 - Words: 21,933 - Reviews: 75 - Favs: 45 - Follows: 36 - Updated: 5/4/2013 - Published: 12/11/2010
The Spirit Carries On by Superbeans reviews
A short, Spirited based one-shot. While 'renovating' her father's old dojo, Sienna Volbeda comes across a strange box, full of memories...
Pokémon - Rated: K - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,440 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 5 - Published: 5/1/2013 - Ampharos/Denryu, Girafarig/Kirinriki - Complete
Master's Degree by OceanSpiral reviews
After failing a module at Saffron University Ivy McKenzie has to find some way to attain extra credit to continue her degree. Faced with a list of unattractive summer study courses, Ivy chooses the final option; a demanding three month Pokemon journey with a list of not so common Pokemon to obtain. Following along? Sassy best friend, hotheaded sister and a pair of enigmatic cousins
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Adventure - Chapters: 20 - Words: 101,703 - Reviews: 147 - Favs: 40 - Follows: 50 - Updated: 3/4/2013 - Published: 11/22/2011 - OC
Dreams by RenegadeWarrior reviews
Sometimes Pikachu dreams of things that he shouldn't. One-shot. Slight angst.
Pokémon - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 549 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 128 - Follows: 31 - Published: 12/4/2012 - Pikachu, Ash K./Satoshi - Complete
Spirits of Lavender Town by silver rosebud reviews
Maybe you should stick around... Rated T for safety.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Supernatural - Chapters: 3 - Words: 444 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 11/19/2012 - Published: 11/17/2012
The Autobiography of a Magikarp by PikaBulbasaur reviews
I wasn't sure how I felt on the prospect of evolution. Gyarados seemed scary, and I liked the way I looked. I once commented to my mother that I enjoyed how my scales were more of a deep tangelo instead of carroty. I also said that I observed my cheekbones were about 0.5 centimeters higher than the average Magikarp. Mommy then told me I was a special child.
Pokémon - Rated: K - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,933 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 29 - Follows: 3 - Published: 11/12/2012 - Feebas/Hinbass, Magikarp - Complete
Clouded Sky by Negrek reviews
The truths upon which Tobias's life was founded are shattered, leaving him stranded in a strange, dangerous world. Soon he can no longer tell whether his enemy lies in the ones who hunt him or within himself. After all, evil is in the eye of the beholder.
Pokémon - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Supernatural - Chapters: 47 - Words: 252,760 - Reviews: 453 - Favs: 316 - Follows: 190 - Updated: 10/25/2012 - Published: 11/25/2004 - Murkrow/Yamikarasu, OC - Complete
Survival Project: The Hero's Game by The Dawn of Chaos reviews
When you get drawn to enter the Arena, it's practically a glorified invitation to die. One Pokémon. No supplies. Twenty-three others out for your blood. One goal: Survival. And that's not even half of it. Only one of us gets out alive, and there's no chance that I'm winning this game. It's not like that's ever stopped me from trying. Based on The Hunger Games. OC Submissions Open!
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,809 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Published: 9/22/2012
Red Replayed by SailorMikuMoon reviews
A reminiscing person plays her beloved Pokemon Red, only to be guilt ridden by her pokemon. Please comment and constructive criticism encouraged!
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Horror/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 468 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/22/2012 - Charizard/Lizardon, Blue O./Green O. (male) - Complete
Bits and Pieces by Plasma Pegasus reviews
N wants the world to realize they need to free Pokemon. But for some reason, he wants a young man named Touya in particular to listen and understand... N/Touya
Pokémon - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 18 - Words: 90,525 - Reviews: 212 - Favs: 372 - Follows: 205 - Updated: 7/6/2012 - Published: 3/7/2011 - N H./Natural H. G., Hilbert/Touya - Complete
At Weeks' End by Plasma Pegasus reviews
Green/Red. A lot has happened over the years - but now it's time to set things right again. So Green goes up that stupid mountain, decides to stay for a week, and... how do you talk to an asocial hermit again? Never shutting up sounds like a good plan.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 46,693 - Reviews: 215 - Favs: 680 - Follows: 140 - Updated: 5/5/2012 - Published: 3/25/2012 - Blue O./Green O. (male), Red - Complete
Holidays and Horrors by Plasma Pegasus reviews
NTouya. Touko and N are the heroes of the Unova region. While Touya is no champion or hero, much like his sister he's still a competent trainer that lives with their mother. On Halloween night, however, he meets her rival N... and everything changes.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 31,884 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 51 - Follows: 33 - Updated: 4/1/2012 - Published: 10/29/2011 - N H./Natural H. G., Hilbert/Touya
In Absence of Light by Frozenleaf reviews
With the Pokemon League announced to end, two new trainers set out into a world where the conflict between man and Pokemon, years in the making, threatens everything they thought they knew about training, pokemon, and the world in general.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 30 - Words: 128,438 - Reviews: 105 - Favs: 39 - Follows: 38 - Updated: 1/13/2012 - Published: 6/29/2010
Butterfree by Dragonfree reviews
Trainers aren't supposed to have favorites, but you were my favorite. And then you started losing.
Pokémon - Rated: K - English - Angst/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,773 - Reviews: 58 - Favs: 267 - Follows: 35 - Published: 1/10/2012 - Butterfree - Complete
Regret by Crukix reviews
Death. War. Destruction. The world of the future lies in ruins. I got the chance to go back and stop it from ever happening, only to discover that I was the cause. This is how I destroyed the world.
Pokémon - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 60 - Words: 520,045 - Reviews: 833 - Favs: 876 - Follows: 445 - Updated: 10/29/2011 - Published: 3/11/2010 - OC - Complete
Pedestal by Digital Skitty reviews
For some people, training isn't easy. For some people, training is beyond easy. Unfortunately, for me, training is beyond hard. Double weaknesses, attacked by wild Pokemon, mistrust of trainers, and much more. I just CAN'T catch a break, can I?
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 160 - Words: 545,006 - Reviews: 4121 - Favs: 2,998 - Follows: 1,308 - Updated: 10/3/2011 - Published: 2/17/2009 - OC - Complete
Fanfiction Theatre by Plasma Pegasus reviews
A fanfic written by request for a panel. For some reason they didn't already have one on hand... Features Draco Malfoy, Dante, Roy Mustang, Sailor Mars, Link, and of course the Evil Overlord Pinkie Pie.
Crossover - Harry Potter & Devil May Cry - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,094 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/22/2011 - Complete
Awesomeness of the Ocarina by Villain-of-Awesome reviews
The Holy Land of Hyrule is facing the greatest danger in history... but is it Ganondorf, or our supposed heroes, Link and Navi? An all new Ocarina of Time Parody like you never seen before! Romance! Drama! Comedy! Drugs! Et Cetera!
Legend of Zelda - Rated: M - English - Parody/Adventure - Chapters: 9 - Words: 26,741 - Reviews: 58 - Favs: 67 - Follows: 57 - Updated: 3/6/2011 - Published: 1/10/2011 - Link, Navi
I Want To Join Team Rocket by Crazy Amazing reviews
Daphne only wanted to join Team Rocket. She didn't think they'd put her in the peewee training school. As she and her partner work through the program, they experience things that make them change the way they see the world, themselves - and each other.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Adventure - Chapters: 12 - Words: 32,381 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 8/14/2010 - Published: 4/25/2010 - Complete
Denial of Service by TehMiniHippo reviews
The world of Pokemon has changed. No longer the world of peace and safety that it once was, now two eighteen year olds, a boy and a girl, find themselves journeying together as they attempt to dispel the evil that lurks.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 8 - Words: 13,393 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 8/2/2010 - Published: 5/26/2010
No Antidote by FalconPain reviews
Bulbasaur and his trainer had an agreement: they would make it to the Pokémon League, or go down trying. So even when faced with utter tragedy, he decides that he and his trainer will live up to their promise. By any means necessary.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 69,839 - Reviews: 250 - Favs: 912 - Follows: 204 - Updated: 1/19/2009 - Published: 7/12/2008 - Bulbasaur/Fushigidane - Complete
Starlight by Digital Skitty reviews
Once upon a time, Staryu were weak. That was before the red star fell from the sky.
Pokémon - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 877 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 27 - Follows: 6 - Published: 11/11/2006 - Staryu/Hitodeman - Complete
Here We Go Again by Negrek reviews
A pokémon journey just like all of the others, only more so. A parody 'fic that I wrote to poke fun at some of the recurring problems in pokémon fan fiction. Please R&R.
Pokémon - Rated: K+ - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 5 - Words: 15,422 - Reviews: 67 - Favs: 34 - Follows: 13 - Updated: 2/6/2005 - Published: 12/29/2004
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There Is No Greater Hell reviews
Miyako Tsukino; a high school student just trying to live her life, until she and her classmates discover they have the ability to summon actual Egyptian gods in the basement of their new dorm and are perhaps a little too excited about it... at least after they have to face themselves. Contains (hopefully) everything you've come to know and expect from a Persona story. OC-Centric.
Persona Series - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 5 - Words: 32,307 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 5/29 - Published: 3/23/2017 - Igor, OC
Sweet Sacrifice reviews
In the dangerous Pokemon world, it isn't uncommon for new trainers to go missing. However, lately the number of disappearances has been rising, including many notably skilled trainers. Meanwhile, two young adults begin their journey and unknowingly become entwined in a bizarre plot that threatens to overwhelm them. Thankfully, they don't have to combat this new threat alone...
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Supernatural - Chapters: 19 - Words: 97,850 - Reviews: 34 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 22 - Updated: 2/23 - Published: 6/21/2010 - OC, Sableye/Yamirami, Gastly/Ghos
Guardian of the Sea reviews
I'm just a girl from Sunburst Island who longs for an adventure. Luckily, the Orange Islands have their share of action, mysteries, and gorgeous beach weather! With Cissy's blessing, and my unorthodox starter at my side, I'm ready for whatever these waters have in store for me, including... wait, you want ME to be the Festival Maiden? And do WHAT about the giant silver bird?
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 6 - Words: 25,462 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 1/26/2015 - Published: 9/23/2012 - Kabuto, OC
Proteus reviews
All I ever wanted to do was train Pokémon, to leave a legacy, a story to be told around the world. I prepared for years for the day I would finally begin my dream. The road was long and difficult, but with the help of my team and an unexpected guest by my side, I had come close, but of course nothing ever goes the way one plans. My story is no different, but I sure am. One-shot.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10,277 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 7/22/2014 - OC - Complete
Johto's Dark Secrets reviews
(Being re-written. Cliche plot will remain.) Carrie's got an abusive ex-boxer father who trained an abusive Machamp too well. Soon enough, the Machamp begins turning the wild pokemon of Johto against trainers, and Carrie must overcome not only her difficulties training, but her own bad attitude, or she might find that even the people willing to help her will leave her on her own.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Supernatural - Chapters: 9 - Words: 42,806 - Reviews: 27 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 3/17/2013 - Published: 5/16/2010 - Cyndaquil/Hinoarashi, OC
Pokemon Battle Examples reviews
Just some excerpts of battle examples from my other two stories to show a friend how I write them so she can get an idea of how to improve. Slight explanation/details after each one. Feel free to read them over and tell me what you think of them, I'd love to get better at them myself.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,877 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/11/2011 - Complete