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Joined 05-22-10, id: 2373658, Profile Updated: 01-16-11

Okay So I'm a critic in everything. That means everything! Clothes, food, weather, smells, FANFICTIONS. Everything. So If your fanfiction isn't in my list I ether haven't read it or Sorry I'm a critic of everything so don't take it personally and try again. You can send me fanfictions to read, yours and anyone you think should be on the list, At my email or pm me. Make sure the story is completed incompletes are not going to be read until they are completed or put into the lists.

Somethings about me are:

Name: You don't need to know

Nickname: whatever your are calling me

Age:younger than you think but don't let it stop you from sending those M rated ones I'll read anything.

Country: USA

Reason I'm the critic: I am VERY picky about everything especially fanfics and food. but I can't write or cook for my life. so I'm the critic that uses opinion and other stuff so check below for more rating stuff.

Umm I guess that's it well one more thing but don't let that stop you from sending other things.

Favorite pairings: Does it matter I'll read it all if you recommend it

So onto the list of favs!

Ok So I have a list of Favorite Fanfictions and they will go here. I feel they are the best there is out there but prove me wrong find a better one and send it. remember I'm grading it on 1:Flowing of the story (does it fit together and make sense) 2: spelling/grammar 3: story line 4:emotional effect 5: if I would recommend to my friends.

1 and 2 were almost tied but not quiet 1 just barely won over 2.

1: Candy Coated Sugar Sex by Anemone Kurosaki. M rated. 1 chapter. 4672 words. 25298 characters. Link:

2: Do I, by Dlvvanzor. T rated. 1 chapter. 3105 words. 15974 characters. Link:

3: Backstage by PrincessPika. M rated. 16 chapters. 36819 words total. 2301.1875 average words. 177929 characters. 11120.5625 average characters. Link:

4: Athenae by Shadow Dancer666. M rated. 5 chapters. 31531 words total. 6306.2 average words. 163141 characters. 32628.2 characters average. Link:


I'll fill in the rest later when I find a 5.

Flops: This area of my profile has been deleted do to the fact that when someones story is placed under FLOPS people tend to been hurt and you never know what is going on in their lives at the time and who really needs that kind of sadness.

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Do I by Dlvvanzor reviews
He stopped, looking at me dispassionately, and in his eyes I saw... nothing. Well, nothing for me, at least. Based on the song by Luke Bryan but not a songfic. Requested by Sen-Chan21. Happy birthday!
Death Note - Rated: M - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,145 - Reviews: 42 - Favs: 95 - Follows: 9 - Published: 6/5/2010 - Matt, Mello - Complete
Backstage by PrincessPika reviews
Matt/Mello, Mello/Near. Mello,a badass idol that causes drama wherever he goes,is hired to star in a movie! Read on to experience how he changed the lives of Matt and Near, two best friends who suddenly fall head over heels for the crazy blonde! Completed
Death Note - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 16 - Words: 33,121 - Reviews: 145 - Favs: 40 - Follows: 33 - Updated: 4/3/2010 - Published: 12/13/2009 - Matt, Mello - Complete
Candy Coated Sugar Sex by Anemone Kurosaki reviews
Hormones and sugar are always a good combination when the Death Note gang is involved. Follow L, Light, Misa and Sayu as they explore the world of sweets and love.
Death Note - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,685 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 6 - Published: 3/14/2010 - L, Light Y. - Complete
Athenae by Shadow Dancer666 reviews
Mello is the son of the head of the Mafia, but he has a secret that even his best friend doesn't know. What happens when Matt realizes that Mello isn't the boy he thinks he knows? MattxMello; AU, smut, angst, etc. READ THE WARNING AT THE BEGINNING.
Death Note - Rated: M - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 5 - Words: 31,907 - Reviews: 108 - Favs: 116 - Follows: 36 - Updated: 2/1/2010 - Published: 11/20/2009 - Mello, Matt - Complete