Aizen2468
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Joined 06-21-10, id: 2413072, Profile Updated: 12-03-10
Author has written 1 story for Naruto.

Hello everyone, I'm a long time reader, but a new writer. My current story, "Seven Deadly Sins" is my attempt at this whole writing fascination that I have. It involves action and suspence mixed, keeping the writers quesing as to what's going on with the newly arrived organization, and their identies. At least that's what I hope to accomplish. I'm still not entirely sure how this site works with all the little parts now that I'm a member, but I'm trying. I'm not quite sure what to add so I'll try again later.

Oh, I also wanted to address the Full Metal Alchemist part of the crossover. Please note that the connection to Full Metal Alchemist is completely abysmal, and if you have no knowledge of what FMA is, it will not detract from your understanding of the story. Though I do suggest that you give the anime a try; it is an excellent show. I merely put the FMA crossover in the description because my story does use a single idea from that anime. Those of you that have seen the show will likely be able to identify it instantly.

Another small note, please don't judge the story on the first chapter as it is merely an opening. I personally feel that its a poor opening, but it is still important. It introduces the story in all the ways it needs to; its just a little slow since it was my first chapter. I've tried to sharpen my skills and improve the quality of my other chapters.

Even though I've just started writing, I do believe I understand what it takes to be a great writer, and why I still have a long way to go before I can even consider myself close to that title. To be a great writer, you must be able to draw a comprehensible picture for the reader. You must be able to understand that the amazing thoughts in your head can be extremely difficult to convey to the reader. Knowing how to translate your thoughts into the ancient language of story telling is something that only the truly great can do well. Giving people an amazing summary is how you draw people into your story. Controlling the emotions of the reader through your words is how you keep them.

While I believe I can do all those things with practice, I firmly believe my weak point is updating. Updating your stories is just as important as writing a comprehensive story. Too often have I seen authors call themselves "One of the Best" even though they hardly ever update. While it may be true that the quality of their stories is off the scale; what does that matter if it takes them a year to update. Guiding the readers emotions cannot be done if they go too long without an update. Small tidbits of your story get forgotten, mysteries get lost in translation, twists become confusing, newly introduced characters seem boring as old characters become dull. In order to recapture the emotional ride of your story, readers sometimes have to reread your story, and the story still loses its flavor. Not everyone wants to reread a story, and the few that do, usually are not too pleased about it. I do, However, understand that life often gets in the way of writing. But please, don't let time stretch the distance between updates too much on you. For the sake of your readers, Update!

One of the only authors that I believe truly deserves the title of "Great" is Lord Of The Land Of Fire. He has the ability to weave an easily understandable picture, while having a complex plot that draws people in and keeps them hooked. Not only that, but he updates at a level that is above the calling of the masses. Truly a great writer.

Therefore, I must work hard to avoid this achilles heel of writers, and maybe someday, I'll be as great of a writer as the likes of Lord Of The Land Of Fire.

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The Family that Slays Together, Stays Together by ChealseaGrins reviews
It's been 14 years since Darth Vader has slain his Master, taking the Throne for himself and raising his son as heir to his Empire. Young Luke Skywalker, eager to prove himself to his father, is sent to Alderaan to uncover a Rebel Operative. He is unprepared to find that his estranged, Jedi sister and her Master, Obi-Wan Kenobi are waiting for him. But they're not the only ones.R&R
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 10 - Words: 135,154 - Reviews: 81 - Favs: 44 - Follows: 72 - Updated: 7/9 - Published: 5/16 - Luke S., Leia O., Darth Vader, G. Marek/Starkiller
The Paths We Choose by lord of the land of fire reviews
Naruto becomes the villain everyone in the village always thought he would be. Only one person will risk everything to try and redeem him. His best and most loyal friend, Uchiha Sasuke.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 43 - Words: 116,100 - Reviews: 2919 - Favs: 1,932 - Follows: 1,603 - Updated: 6/30 - Published: 5/14/2009 - Naruto U., Sasuke U. - Complete
Why Kakashi Should Never Read Out Loud by lord of the land of fire reviews
What would happen if Kakashi started reading out loud passages from his favorite book? The idea for this just occurred to me and I wrote it up. Very light hearted please don't take it too seriously!
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Humor - Chapters: 40 - Words: 35,797 - Reviews: 3272 - Favs: 2,617 - Follows: 1,423 - Updated: 10/30/2014 - Published: 10/26/2007 - Kakashi H. - Complete
The Demigod by Brotherhood Of War reviews
takes place during the fifth season. A messenger of the Gods wants to change history by giving a little help to the Scoobies. 1st story read and tell me what you think
Buffy: The Vampire Slayer - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 36 - Words: 57,316 - Reviews: 71 - Favs: 21 - Follows: 30 - Updated: 8/7/2013 - Published: 12/13/2010 - Faith L., Tara M. - Complete
That Look by lord of the land of fire reviews
Anko sees something that worries her and decides to do something about it.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 70 - Words: 154,558 - Reviews: 7629 - Favs: 4,951 - Follows: 4,802 - Updated: 4/18/2013 - Published: 4/22/2009 - Anko M., Naruto U.
The Flashing Dagger Technique by lord of the land of fire reviews
Naruto masters a LETHAL jutsu and begins his climb into legend. Naruto X Sakura Yes,you read that right.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 10 - Words: 23,652 - Reviews: 1083 - Favs: 1,365 - Follows: 1,379 - Updated: 6/4/2010 - Published: 4/5/2010 - Naruto U., Sakura H.
A Mother's Love: Fire and Blood by lord of the land of fire reviews
Uzumaki Kushina survived her son's birth and the Kyuubi's attack. Now she must do everything in her power to protect him and help him reach his dream, to conquer and rule Konoha. Nar X Hin
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 45 - Words: 118,073 - Reviews: 3525 - Favs: 2,062 - Follows: 1,852 - Updated: 4/2/2010 - Published: 2/16/2009 - Naruto U., Hinata H.
Sekirei of the Leaf by lord of the land of fire reviews
A gift from the gods falls out of the sky and changes the world of shinobi forever. Naruto X Tsukiumi
Crossover - Naruto & Sekirei - Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 10 - Words: 21,542 - Reviews: 243 - Favs: 261 - Follows: 224 - Updated: 12/1/2009 - Published: 10/3/2009 - Naruto U.
The Master of Discipline by lord of the land of fire reviews
Can one ordinary man bring light into darkness and change the heart of a woman who believes only in violence? How much can one man really accomplish? Can he change the world?
Sekirei - Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 25 - Words: 56,973 - Reviews: 666 - Favs: 703 - Follows: 258 - Updated: 9/14/2009 - Published: 8/10/2009 - Complete
A Few Angry Words by lord of the land of fire reviews
A few angry words from Neji lead to a great many changes: “Hiashi-sama,” Naruto bowed once more. “I ask you to make a bargain with me.” To be with the girl he loves he makes a bet. The stakes? Only his future and his dream. Nar X Hin
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 61 - Words: 172,186 - Reviews: 5944 - Favs: 3,644 - Follows: 1,856 - Updated: 5/7/2009 - Published: 5/12/2008 - Naruto U., Hinata H. - Complete
The True Monster by lord of the land of fire reviews
A Rosario Vampire and Naruto cross over. Naruto, the hated Kyuubi jinchuuriki is sent to a school for monsters to complete his education before he can return to Konoha. But in a place filled with monsters he wonders just who the true monster is. Nar X Mok
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 73 - Words: 228,346 - Reviews: 5473 - Favs: 3,482 - Follows: 1,560 - Updated: 12/20/2008 - Published: 8/5/2008 - Naruto U. - Complete
A Different End In The Valley by lord of the land of fire reviews
A very different conclusion to the battle in the valley of the end. The story of a death and all that follows. Character death.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 16 - Words: 32,019 - Reviews: 315 - Favs: 528 - Follows: 180 - Updated: 2/1/2008 - Published: 8/9/2007 - Tsunade S. - Complete
By the Grace of Lady Vader by A21a-pFern reviews
When Amidala stands by her husband's side, no power in the galaxy can stand against them. COMPLETE, 5/8/02
Star Wars - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 24 - Words: 123,102 - Reviews: 79 - Favs: 154 - Follows: 45 - Updated: 5/8/2002 - Published: 4/18/2002 - Complete
Seven Deadly Sins reviews
October 16,Madara, angered by the loss of the Kyuubi, does something drastic, unleashing something that not even he could comprehend. Now, sixteen years later, familiar faces come back to capitalize on a tragic event. Please dont judge by first chapter
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 5 - Words: 36,206 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 42 - Follows: 27 - Updated: 12/2/2010 - Published: 6/23/2010 - Naruto U.