Author has written 8 stories for Naruto, World Only God Knows/神のみぞ知るセカイ, and Bleach.
12-02-2012 Update: IT LIVES
I'm Alive. Still.
Capturing God is Undead.
I have something new for you guys to fap to.
Look for Subversion Illusion
12-11-2012 Update: Packaging the God
Balls to the walls man.
Just caught up with TWGOK
I stopped reading after approximately Chapter 172 because I thought they were going to make a One Piece-esque turn in story line and make an endless arc.
Really nicely wrapped up.
And I will be continuing The Capturing God in the future. Think, the next month or so.
In regards to Subversion Illusion, I feel that stories in the archive are beginning to take a soliloquy-like tone. Authors like Third Fang, obsidian dreamer, and Radaslab have paved the way for explaining every little fucking thing. Yet Again is amazing, but the humor gets old fast when it requires paragraphs before the punchline. I've been leaning towards stories that use the Canon as scaffolding. Namely, they don't explain major plot points that occurred except how they changed.
Subversion Illusion is that. The one review I have gotten, thank you Lazy Eyes Conway, in its fleetingness said that it seemed to jump into the middle of story. I intended for that to be the case. For everyone who was confused on reading that first chapter, the premise is that an apathetic Naruto who will be looping until oblivion finds out how to create the perfect illusion with the help of people he sealed within himself during his first life. Look for details on it in the final chapter.
I wrote Subversion Illusion, in class, on my phone, with only a couple of thoughts in mind.
1) Take a cliche and run with it
And so a Time Traveling Naruto with no morals, a god complex, and obscene powers that exist because of his god complex is born. And bored. And as horny as I am, but much more virile and imaginative.
I also want to thank the people who were brave enough to say that they enjoyed my story and gave me their names. As of now, more than 30k views have been given to the Capturing God. Not all from the USA. Which leads me to believe that there are plenty of depraved people in the world. If one of you are chicks, please drop me a line. I promise I'm not a perv all of the time.
Also. For people that are searching for non-testosterone fueled stories, I have opened another FF account. For other fun stuffs. Right now I have a single chapter written for a TF2 fanfic. Not sexual in any way, shape, or form.
Please visit RiverM8rix for that stuff.
Final note: Please for the five people who actually visit my profile, that the Follow Story button on fics don't really work if the fic is completed. Favoriting is fine. Following it tells me you don't know what that button does.
Also, if you favorite my story, I will go and look at ANY stuff you have written. I might be iffy on Yaoi, but I'll try.
12-14-2012 Update: Estrogen driven rant?
I originally was going to put this in the beginning of Chapter 17, but I didn't want to break flow.
Now before we start, I would like to make certain things clear. The Capturing God originally was an outlet for a boy who was going through testosterone treatment. That boy had been visiting this site since his freshman year in high school. But by the time he started Junior year, it was clear that he wasn't all that energetic, or driven. Reason being? A sad sad state. The boy's body wasn't producing enough testosterone. For puberty, for growth. And so he started treatment.
But that changed him. It took him a good year to get a grasp on his sporadic bursts of anger, but he never got a hold on his sex drive. With stories he read on his favorite amateur writing site and an erotic mind control story site, his development went weird.
And so in 2010, he began to write. Write stories of things that existed on other portions of the web, but not on this one. Four stories were pushed out relatively quickly. Then he went to college. And things changed. The long term treatment stopped working, he stopped updating, he stopped going to class, he dropped out in his second semester. He was amazed that he had lasted so long with so little drive.
He started treatment again three months later, in July. And slowly, his drive returned. And so did his libido.
I'm back in school now, struggling with a libido that doesn't quit. Having testosterone injected into your body every two weeks does that to you. Can't really tell my parents thats why I'm struggling in school. So this site will get to see what I write. Every day. In class, on my phone, at home. My parents know I write stories. They don't know what I write though. You will know.
Chapter 17 - 20 should be up this week.
12-14-12 Update? The calendar's fucking with me
Chapters 17-20 are up today. For people who view my profile, please note that I went back and made the rest of the chapters longer. Slight grammar tweaks and better flow are now included in a piece of work that I have spent more time on then my Macro Final.
12-15-12 Update: Repackaging the God
Finally replaced that damn stupid Summary that I had for the past year and a half. It probably turned off so many people trying to read it. I showed it to a friend at college, and she just started laughing at it hysterically. So its been toned down. I need to hide the story a bit better, and screaming LEMON LEMON on the front seemed to get some good ones taken down. So I rejoice for the poor souls who walk into my temple and leave more screwed up.
2-13-13 Update: Happy Forever Alone Day Guys and Girl(?)
It has been almost exactly two months since I last reported on status. Now for the most part, I have been idle. But not completely so. By the beginning of Summer, I'll have a Bleach Fic up and running, with a possible One Piece one on the way. The reason for the sudden stories? I found out how to write. Not well, mind you. But it'll be more interesting with actual plot now. Of course, not much plot, but more than now (Not really). Maybe for the One Piece one.
Now for some more info on Subversion Illusion. It was an experiment. On multiple levels. The first was to see if the allusion to sexual acts rather than describing them in porny ways made the story hotter. It seemed to do so. The second is a question for the people who actually look at my profile page:
Does it make more sense to do a update dump, like I did with this story, or to spread out the updates over days or months?
Please respond with a PM, I enjoy learning that people read what I write.
10-28-13 Update: Eight Months Later...
No, I'm not pregnant.
Remember that Bleach fic I talked about way back in the previous update? Yeah that's never going to be finished. I'm at the point where I'm losing interest in writing altogether. I have six chapters done, and it's pretty obvious where I would go with it, if I were to continue. Unlike Subversion Illusion, I'll try doing the weekly update thing for the next two months, and see if I can get people to Plagiarize the shit out of my stories. As I said when I first started this account, I have no intention of finishing anything I start, even on my new ADHD meds.
On a separate note, I've been getting some really hilarious PMs. Not a lot mind you, but enough to give me a laugh once in a while. One dude/tte? told me that he couldn't review with his actual account because he had friends on the site that would get angry at him. Good Job Bro.
On a separate note, I do still read fanfics, but they are tending to be fanfics of each other than fanfics of the original story line. Yay Fanon.
I've found, kinda sadly, that since Naruto is nearly over and Harry Potter is over, and everyone whose making fics now have bought into the mechanics that the stories are all falling in the same line as each other.
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