Thoughtful Tikal
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Joined 07-25-10, id: 2465188, Profile Updated: 01-18-15
Author has written 21 stories for Sailor Moon, Sonic the Hedgehog, Legend of Zelda, Mario, Dragon Ball Z, Pokémon, Anime X-overs, Dragon Ball, Inuyasha, and Ty the Tasmanian Tiger.

I dedicate this and all of my other stories to the Lord Jesus Christ, for helping me come up with the ideas and making my points across in them.

Even when you can’t see him GOD is there! If you believe in GOD put this in your profile. I certainly do!

I've read and watched different explanations about how to write fanfiction and how to write good ones, but that's not what drives me to write this one. What does it is constantly being disappointed from even the fanfics that seem decent at first, but later turn out to be different. I'm not the best writer out there, but sharing these words, I'm sure, could still help someone. Before I explain the tips, let me just say this: This document is only written for those who aspire to make more excellent material, if you purposefully write bad or humorous fanfic, then this might not really help you. So let's get to it. Here are the rules I've came up with:

1. First off, explore the fandoms you're going to write about. People could still review and like your work, but without that foundation it will lack some credibility. This is the main reason why most fanfiction is bad, because it's hard for people to believe some of its events or characters. Visiting the wikia of your fandom and researching its characters, plots, and even locations and items would help out so much, trust me, I always have wikias opened when I work on my fanfics. It's like building a house. You wouldn't want to build a house on sand and have it collapse when rain comes. So build your house on the rock. Learn your fandoms inside and out before or as you start writing so it can have that credibility.

2. Like I said above in the first rule, make sure your story is believable. I understand that fans like to try new things and experiment. I do that too, but there's a way that you can have twists and still have that credibility. Setting your story in your fandom's canon seasons, arcs, or even movies would help you achieve this a lot. There's a way that it can be done without copying it, you could still add your own twist to it. It's just that this helps boost your story's appeal by a lot because it will seem like it really connects to the season that you say it takes place after or before. Fans pay more attention to the canon side than we think. They expect to have the same feelings they get from its canon side when they read your story. Now I'm not saying that you should borrow everything from your fandom. It's just good to borrow enough that makes your story more believable.

3. Try not to get carried away with bashing the characters you don't like. If that's how a person feels then those who read their stories won't really care about that. They just want to read your story. It would be wise to not even really give those disliked characters a role, but maybe make them minor. You don't want to put your emotions into the story, but it's the imagination that fuels it. Too many times we can find stories where people bash characters and they put them in the worst of situations. Avoid that risk and simply write about the liked ones.

4. Avoid unnecessary description. One of the most loved things about reading is that people like using their imagination, not the authors, always. When describing someone's outfit or how something looks, getting carried away on every part or detail could make your reader bored. They usually know the thing that you're talking about, and if they don't then they could research it, but that doesn't mean you should have to do that extra writing just to inform them.

5. If characters are fused with too many real life problems or situations, that could also cause your story to falter a little. It is a good strategy, but only works when the situations your characters face connect with them. For example, in a Sonic the Hedgehog fanfic called Survivor's Resolve by DC111, Sonic faces the problem of being captured and trapped in a prison for like 3 months. We all know that he is a free spirit and hates when anything keeps him down. So this is a believable story. Something else like Sailor Moon's friends all abandoning her is something that could seem far-fetched, I'm not even sure how she became the target for that. But hopefully you get the jist of what I'm saying about this rule. Don't mess up the balance of fan-fiction. They're two words for a reason, because fans are attempting to write about their favorite fictional pieces. Often times we see too much fan and not enough fiction, or vice versa.

6. Don't let the review numbers discourage you. The beauty of fanfic is that it can be yours and about your favorite fandom. If not enough people review it, then don't feel like it's not good enough. If you give it enough editing, give it that credibility, and avoid the fanfic dont's, then you've done all you can. Sometimes everyone won't understand your writing, everyone is their own person and has their own views on a particular fandom. We make getting reviews too important sometimes and let it affect our self-esteem. If you've seen how some people hold their stories hostage and say they'll continue it unless they get more reviews, then you know exactly what I mean. Don't let your passion for writing become a pacifier that you suck on to stay happy.

7. Perhaps using pictures for your fanfiction's book covers could be an extra thing to add pizzazz to your story. I know for me when I see a cover it gets me more interested. Especially when it fits to the title or summary, and it's a created picture, not just something you nab from Google.

8. Don't insist on mentioning in your summary that you suck at summaries, or you tell us what the pairings are. That's a story spoiler and could make some people back away from your story sometimes. Try letting it be a surprise, and that way you can see who was really into it and who wasn't.

9. Make sure to never let your fanfic lose it's canon feel. For example, if I'm writing a Sonic the Hedgehog story then I want it to be 'Sonic-y', meaning it still has that sense of Sonic with its character, dialogue, setting, and plot. Like I mentioned before in rule number 5, some people slowly shift from their fandom's universe and their story becomes pure fiction. Don't let that happen yours.

10. Don't let the flamers get to you. Some of us get so upset when people bash our stories. Sometimes these writers see flaws in our stories that we don't and just don't know how to explain their points the right way. You don't have to always take their advice but getting mad about it isn't going to change anything. Compared to the other feedback, their comment is small.

11. Always hold on to that joy of writing fanfiction for yourself, not only for others. It's not good to get to a place where you write stories only for feedback then get disappointed when there's no responses. People may not always love their stories or they read them and just don't add a review. It happens to me all the time. I don't get reviews for every single chapter, and it doesn't bother me because I still have fun writing. You shouldn't feel that way either.

12. Make it a hobby to read other fanfiction. Doing this not only helps improve your writing style, but it gives you insight on how fanfics are written well sometimes. One of the best ways to learn something is by seeing it, not just doing. I hope this and the other 11 tips helps! We can't fix the already published bad fanfiction, but can work on our own and still share tutorials with others! Good luck all of you and God bless!

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My Cruel Fate
Sweet passion can become cruel fate no problem when Amy's life catches up to her. As things from her past return, she might not get to keep up with Sonic like she had hoped.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,966 - Published: 21h - Amy
Return To Her Beginning reviews
Today passes, tomorrow comes, and she wakes up.
Crossover - Sailor Moon & Inuyasha - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Adventure - Chapters: 14 - Words: 52,117 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 23 - Updated: 11/26 - Published: 4/24/2011 - Kagome H.
Sonic Adventure Submerged reviews
Just think about how Sonic's hydrophobia could affect someone else... someone who held no clue at all about it.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 2 - Words: 8,010 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 9/29 - Published: 5/7/2011 - Sonic
Dashed to Pieces reviews
Yamcha had had his share of experiences, and came to the biggest decision of his life. No one made the choice for him; he orchestrated it, taking the turn that'd been so unlike him. His efforts, time, might… his whole life had become like pottery dashed to pieces.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,264 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 8/1 - Complete
Sonic Riders Saga reviews
"Forget about Oolong and the Turtle Hermit. It wouldn't matter if Goku wished for the world's biggest buffet! I'd rather see him wish for that instead of you wishing for some new boyfriend. You can't find the Dragon Balls."
Crossover - Sonic the Hedgehog & Dragon Ball - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 13 - Words: 37,681 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 6/20 - Published: 10/13/2010 - Sonic, Bulma - Complete
Sonic Genesis reviews
This Dexter person changed Sonic's entire day just with his appearance. His actual appearance? Or was it only coincidence? Dexter wasn't supposed to be real. He'd been a figment of Amy's imagination, nothing more.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: K+ - English - Mystery/Drama - Chapters: 10 - Words: 33,305 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 5/22 - Published: 9/2/2014 - Sonic, Amy - Complete
Down Under The Rainbow reviews
When the Sailor Scouts go on a vacation to Coolrangah, Southern Rivers, they're in store for so much more than they think. No one told them they would meet talking animals or a new enemy. Where will they find the vacation in that?
Crossover - Sailor Moon & Ty the Tasmanian Tiger - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Adventure - Chapters: 22 - Words: 61,507 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 5/18 - Published: 10/17/2011 - Minako A./Mina/Sailor Venus, Ty
Chasing After Stars reviews
Gohan meets a girl from Grass Park City and gets dating advice sent to him from a divorced parent, meanwhile another girl secretly loves him. Could things get anymore complicated?
Crossover - Sailor Moon & Dragon Ball Z - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 10 - Words: 32,272 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 22 - Updated: 3/19 - Published: 4/1/2011 - Minako A./Mina/Sailor Venus, Gohan - Complete
Sailor Moon Aura: Storm of Ending reviews
Kakyuu becomes a permanent citizen of Crystal City and learns the true meaning of family and friendship. Ash must continue adapting to a Pokemon less world and learn these same values. Life isn't perfect but it's those flaws that makes it beautiful, so that should never change.
Crossover - Sailor Moon & Pokémon - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Family - Chapters: 3 - Words: 11,179 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 2/12 - Complete
Sailor Moon Aura reviews
Ash is confused by why he's been asked to come to the past, but the future has the answers he wants. The Death Busters are still at work and the Outer Scouts found what they were looking for, so the saga continues!
Crossover - Sailor Moon & Pokémon - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 13 - Words: 47,173 - Reviews: 65 - Favs: 40 - Follows: 15 - Updated: 1/3 - Published: 1/13/2011 - Ami M./Amy/Sailor Mercury, Ash K./Satoshi - Complete
Reborn Saga reviews
Serena and friends discover a strange yet interesting book inside of their school's library and decide to unlock its secrets. And in the midst of it all, plans for their Christmas Party are still underway and need tending to.
Crossover - Sailor Moon & Legend of Zelda - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 32 - Words: 115,143 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 17 - Follows: 21 - Updated: 11/7/2014 - Published: 11/5/2010 - Ami M./Amy/Sailor Mercury, Link - Complete
Sailor Moon U reviews
What if Professor Tomoe didn't hire the Witches 5, but instead he hired a mysterious high school graduate named Lola? And what if Ash was given the chance to a journey besides his usual adventures?
Crossover - Sailor Moon & Pokémon - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 11 - Words: 36,536 - Reviews: 59 - Favs: 39 - Follows: 10 - Updated: 10/3/2014 - Published: 8/5/2010 - Setsuna M./Sailor Pluto, Ash K./Satoshi - Complete
Two Worlds, One Mirror reviews
When Nehelenia is given a second chance to plot revenge on Sailor Moon, she decides to take a different approach. Meanwhile Lita is depressed with her usual school issues, until a sweet and gentle rabbit takes all those bad feelings away.
Crossover - Sailor Moon & Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 43 - Words: 189,231 - Reviews: 63 - Favs: 21 - Follows: 15 - Updated: 10/24/2013 - Published: 9/24/2010 - Makoto K./Lita/Sailor Jupiter, Cream/Cheese - Complete
Sonic Oracles reviews
Before any adventure starts, heroes must be born and there must be an oracle. Amy vowed to always chase Sonic and later becomes discouraged, but she remembers the story of the eight-year old king and his oracle and gets her confidence back.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 11,038 - Reviews: 3 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 10/19/2013 - Published: 10/17/2013 - Amy - Complete
Sailor Moon S Special: She Is The One Named Detective Rini reviews
Sonic looked Luna in the eyes before he spoke again. He hoped that Tails and him would be able to help Rini. This girl not having her brooch could be a huge problem for the Sailor Scouts, and so as their rightful allies, Sonic and Tails had a duty to support them solve this mystery.
Crossover - Sailor Moon & Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Mystery - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,147 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 1/21/2013 - Published: 10/16/2012 - Chibiusa T./Rini/Sailor Chibi (Mini) Moon, Sonic - Complete
Legend of Zelda: Fire And Ice reviews
Behold, as the Hero of Time melts the coldest of ice and freezes the hottest of fire in an all new adventure.
Legend of Zelda - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,299 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 6/5/2012 - Published: 12/15/2010 - Link
Behind The Shadow reviews
His real identity didn't lie that much farther away and here was this Shadow Beauty, suggesting accompanying the 'shadow' on his perilous quest.
Mario - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,976 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 4 - Published: 8/19/2011 - Mario, Vivian
Changed His World reviews
He could feel their hearts beat the same rhythm... it was nothing he'd ever expected.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 941 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/22/2011 - Amy, Shadow - Complete
The Fateful Wish reviews
All that could seem to commence now was the loving stares each echidna was exchanging. It was because of their wish they could have this romantic one.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,677 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 9 - Published: 5/19/2011 - Knuckles, Tikal - Complete
Dead Moon Circus
"Surely this magical mirror of hers wasn't lying, so Nehelenia developed a scheme to alter her future events: she would develop a circus, and not just with usual skilled performers, but the persistent Queen had other characters in mind..."
Crossover - Sailor Moon & Anime X-overs - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 4 - Words: 15,192 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 1/10/2011 - Published: 10/8/2010 - Nehellenia/Nephrenia - Complete
Amy's Awaited Promise reviews
Now she understands what this warm feeling is in her hand... meanwhile he is indeed the precious hero she's been waiting for.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 12/25/2010 - Amy, Shadow - Complete
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