Author has written 2 stories for Sherlock, and Doctor Who.
I am The Deranged Pegasus of The Maniacal Critics for World Domination.
We are a group consisting of 6 friends. We all happily suffer from some sort of psychosis, mania, or dementia. And we are perfectly happy this way.
We have yet to decide on our overall purpose for our group forming, however we have, for the meantime, settled on reviewing FanFics based on a point system.
I welcome you to my page.
The Points-System/Review Format
Characterization - x/10 : This is based on how well you develop your character(s), how well you keep your character(s) WITHIN the boundaries you have set for that character(s), and the overall character('s) depth.
Plot - x/10 : This is the basic story that you, as the writer have established. The points are given based on how prominent the plot is, how solid the plot is, and how original/interesting it is.
Story Line - x/10 : Prior to contrary belief, Story Line is different from Plot. Points given in this area are based on how well you execute not only your plot, but subsequent sub-plots and ultimately the entire story as a whole.
Grammar - x/10 : This should be self-evident. How well you spell, correct punctuation, capitalization, quotation marks, new paragraphs, GROUPED paragraphs, run-on sentences, the list goes ON and ON. *Note: If you actually read the terms to agreeing to be a part of FanFiction, proper grammar is ACTUALLY included in one of the clauses. Go back and read it. I'm seriously not making this up.
Emotional Impact - x/10 : You can tell a phenomenal story with in-depth characters, an intense plot, perfect grammar...but if we, as the reader, aren't emotionally involved in the story, then you're essentially wasting your time. Because without emotional depth, there won't be any lasting impact from the story.
Final Rating - x/50 : An addition of all of the points given to each section, which will give your overall grade of the story.
The Maniacal Critics
As stated before, I am only a part of a group, consisting of 6 slightly mad friends. They are all on FanFiction, and are known as the following:
The Deranged Pegasus a.k.a. Smiles
The Schitzy Thestral a.k.a Cuddles
The Demonic Scorpion a.k.a. Bubbles
The Loony Gryphon a.k.a. Giggles
The Moonstruck Dragon a.k.a Mumbles
The Crazy Coctrice a.k.a. Babbles
If for any reason you need to contact any of them, just look in my Subscribed Authors section.
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