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Author has written 10 stories for Persona Series, Transformers/Beast Wars, Transformers, and Dragon Age.
Yo MarZ here, and my words for now until my next profile update would be
To those who are interested still at my story 'In the Eyes of a Wolf' please do bare in mind, I will be redoing that. Starting everything from scratch and possibly recreate the characters as well, my characters. The comic will need to be paused since after reading the story again for the fifth time, because I dislike how I wrote it. So rewriting it is the best way to fix my mistakes.
Word from me: After two years ago, I began to support flamers against arrogant and immature authors. One reason is because I had the urge to help those immature and arrogant ones to open their eyes to reality, to the real and harsh life. So just because I'm a flamer supporter doesn't mean I'll start flaming everyone and be like those haters that flame for their own amusement. No, no, no. My reviews are gonna be criticism, I'm not flaming because I want to, I'm criticizing so please do know what that means or find a dictionary. It is a comment. So expect it to be either good or bad, especially bad. Trust me, learned it from experience once from my art professors. There's a reason how our skills improve, it is because of the mistakes we learn. I have to admit, I'm not a professional and I will never tell anyone that I'm better than anyone, perfect than any person in this universe. Heck, that's bull &$#@ if you ask me. Anyone read this, please don't hate me because I despise young writers, I said this because it is a way to let you guys know about me and how truthful, and respectful, I am to everyone. Plus I could never be mean to people unless they want me to, oh yes I can be mean if if you cross the line when someone throws me a very 'immature' response that my comment is so offending to them. Guess what, it's reality and start learning the mistakes. I am also starting to get aware of how much slash stories are being stacked here like trash. Come on guys, this is a website to read GOOD and ENTERTAINING stories not a waste bin to throw your trashy stories here! Seriously!
This my dear readers is why I am going to start being a critic, I love reading stories that has been developed and thought very well. I stopped writing to develop my writing skills and critical thinking, but I am open for criticism AND NOT IGNORE THEM. Writers, don't use FF.net a reason to put your trash in here. Readers like myself are going to see them and will not hesitate to review them with our own voice. AKA don't start crying and accusing us being sick f$cks because we like to make you feel horrible, after giving you a truthful review. Because if you can't deal with what we say or learn the mistakes we pointed, sad to say you are an immature writer who can't deal REALITY.
(PS: Yes my old stories are horrible but I like to keep them to show progress. Don't judge me for being horrible, I'd like to keep them as an example. And the ones that are not yet complete are going to be incomplete forever because I plan to rewrite them. I may be a fan girl but I'm not that crazy and will write fan shit smut fics for that purpose. I write because I want to write a good story, with a good plot and character development. Criticism are always welcome)
:BETA READER IN NEED:
English is not my first language so I'm trying to hone my english skills
Gender: Doctors said I was female
Birthday: March 29,1992
Shows & Cartoons: Transformers (G1,G2,Armada, Animated,Prime series), Bones, CIA, House, Supernatural, Simpsons, Big Bag theory, That 70's Show, The Offce, The Late Night show, Colbert Report, The Daily show, and more!
Movies: Iron Man 1&2, Transformers (first, ROTF, and DOTM), Zombieland, All Zombie Movies, japanese horror movies, Scary Movie 3&4, The Onion Movie (totally hilarious! watch it and be stunned!), and others!
Games: Resdient Evil, Super smash Brawl, Muramasa, Super Robot Wars series, Rune Factory, Harvest Moon, Persona series, Neverwinter nights 1&2,Dungeons and Dragons Role Playing, House of the Dead Overkill, Transformers War on Cybertron, and others
Music: J-rock, J-pop, Rock (not metallic), sometimes classic, Pop, and Techno.
Music Bands: Linkin' Park, Pink Floyd, Goo Goo Dolls, Ok Go, The Naked and Famous, Skillet, Evanscene, Stan Bush, Jam Project, Celtic Woman, Savage Genius
Here is my DeviantArt page: - I do art commissions but when it comes to your OC, please give me info of what they look like, and I'll try to do my very best to draw them. Of course, please do be patient, I am busy at my part time job and college. But I will be able to finish them.
My favorite quotes:
"The parents are very annoying. Can I take them out?" - Ironhide, Transformers
"The boy’s pheromone levels indicate he wants to mate with the female." - Ratchet,Transformers
'You feelin' lucky, punk?' - Ironhide, Transformers
'Freedom is the right of all sentient beings.' - Optimus Prime, Transformers
'What's crackin' lil bitches?' - Jazz, Transformers
"You'll never stop at one. I'll take you all on!" - Optimus Prime, Transformers: Revenge of The Fallen
"Damn, I'm good!" - Sideswipe, Transformers: Revenge of The Fallen
"Fate rarely calls upon us in a moment of our choosing." - Optimus Prime, Transformers: Revenge of The Fallen
"[Bumblebee appears, transforms] That's my car." - Sam Witwicky, Transformers: Dark of the Moon
Now, we need a truce. All I want is to be back in charge. Besides, who would you be without me, Prime?" - Megatron, Transformers: Dark of the Moon
"The evil thing's looking at me! [Shockwave summons the Driller] And it even got an ugly Decepticon with it!" - Robert Epps, Transformers: Dark of the Moon
"In any war, there are calms between the storms. There will be days when we lose faith, days when our allies turn against us. But the day will never come, that we forsake this planet and its people." - Optimus Prime, Transformers: Dark of the Moon
"Your leaders will now understand: Decepticons will never leave your planet alone. And we needed them to believe we had gone. For today, in the name of freedom, we take the battle to them!" - Optimus Prime, Transformers: Dark of the Moon
"[trapping Sam and Carly] What a treat! You and me, alone!" - Starscream, Transformers: Dark of the Moon
My eye! I can't see! I can't see! " - Starscream, Transformers: Dark of the Moon (Always a whiner)
"That's the way, ha-ha, ha-ha! We like it, ha-ha, ha-ha!" - Little Einsteins, Night at the Museum: Battle of the Smithsonian
Story in Progress:
-Persona Death and Rebirth - ON HIATUS
-My Little Angel - Optimus must accept the fact that his mate is gone and move on with his daughter, Nebula. But when they found out the Decepticons have a weapon, highly dangerous to his daughter, he is forced to send her to a safer place. After he had arrived on earth and killed Megaton in Mission City, will he be able to find her?
-The Girl and The Leader- The landing on earth wasn’t quite what Optimus Prime was expecting. His systems went haywire when he was entering the earth’s atmosphere, causing him to be off course and land in a country known as Philippines. Upon driving the busy street of Metro Manila, he comes across a little girl being beaten by teenage boys, so he comes to her aid and drive the boys away. What will happen to her if he finds out about her family to be dead?
Stories being Rewritten: (After reading them again and again, I have the need to rewrite them)
In The Eyes of a Wolf - After reading this fic over and over again, I found out that it was utter Mary-Sue shit. Yes, I will admit that this has become my first Mary Sue fic. Kinda sucks, but, I will rewrite this. No, I NEED to rewrite this. Everyday I read this fic it kept on telling me that my OC became a Mary Sue.
Family Bloodlines - Okay I am going to admit that this fic made my eyes bleed so much. Grammar, spelling, etc. are in need of fixing.
Randomness to it's Fullest - Yes that's why I removed it from the story list, plot is being changed and my OC as well
The Beginning of Darkness - Sad, but I have to.
If you believe in Jesus Christ as your savior put this in your profile and don't just ignore this, because in the Bible it says if you deny me, I will deny you in front of my Father in the gates of Heaven. 96 percent of adults in the world today don't stand up for God. If you are one of the 4 percent that does put this into your profile
female come backs
Man: Where have you been all my life?
Man: Haven't I seen you someplace before?
Man: Is this seat empty?
Man: Your place or mine?
Man: So, what do you do for a living?
Man: Hey baby, what's your sign?
Man: How do you like your eggs in the morning?
Man: I would go to the end of the world for you.
Man: If I could see you naked, I'd die happy.
Man: If I could rearrange the alphabet I'd put u and i together.
Man: Going my way, babe?
GIRLS REPOST THIS AS "female comebacks"
You know you are obcessed with Transformers when...
1) You know exactly what the characters are going to say before they say it.
2) When you watch the movie with your friends, you pick characters and act like them.
3) When you see a picture of your favourite characters you start screaming.
4) Your friends are scared of you because of your obsession.
5) People call you weird because you talk about it all the time.
6) You have seen the first movie 10 times or more.
7) Even though you have seen the movie before, you are still amazed when the robots transform.
8) You scream when you see a car that looks like one of the robots.
9) You are that your first car transforms into a super cool robot like Bumblebee.
10) Last of all... You are in love with Optimus Prime!!
Transformers: Which side are you on?
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WARNING!! 25 SIGNS OF A RABID TRANSFORMERS FANGIRL!!
1. Can recite the entire movies from memory.
2. Can tell you what Autobot is fastest, toughest and smartest and can give you exact specs.
3. Always has tabs on the best Autobot fanfiction, wallpaper and apparel.
4. Gets into accidents on the off chance Ratchet might pick her up.
5. Whenever she leaves home yells ROLL OUT!!
6. Will stare out their car window as a Camaro, Peterbuilt Semi, Pontiac Solstice, GMC Topkick, or Hummer drives by.
7. Dreams transformer pairings.
8. Wishes that her phone was an Autobot and would name it after a fallen Autobot.
9. Has used movie quotes to finish her sentences.
10. Cusses like Ironhide, Ratchet, or the Twins.
11. Makes refrences to Transformers in every school subject.
12. Wishes that Wheeljack could help blow up some certain people.
13. Immediately snaps awake from sleep when someone says something about Transformers.
14. Sings the Transformers theme in the shower, on the way to school, and on the way home just to annoy her sister.
15. Gives her friends labels as some of the Autobots.
16. Gives her enemies labels as some of the Decepticons.
17. Wishes she could use a double plasma cannon on her sister. (I'm gonna have to ask Hide about that one...
18. Has posters of her favorite Transformers.
19. Reads wayyyyyyyyyyyy too many fan-fictions about these guys.
20. Has her username having to deal with Transformers.
21. Listens to a song and then immediately thinks of a Transformer.
22. Pairs the TFs with other TFs because it's fun.
23. Squeals at the sight of a Police car and thinks of Barricade.
24. acts and pretends to be a transformer constantly.
25. Thinks every electronic device she owns is a Transformer...
Boys say that in everything they do, they can kick a girl's butt so bad that they cry. If you're a girl who kicks the boys' butts so bad they cry like girls, copy this into your profile, and add your name. KaidaThorn Gingerstar14 Spottednose, Pink Kitty Cat, Snowfeather, Tawnyfur, Child of the Storm, WhispertheWolf,Catwolf109, justiceintheworldofhp-yearight, MARZ009j.