StoryMaker the Echidna
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Joined 09-25-10, id: 2554217, Profile Updated: 06-03-14
Author has written 12 stories for Sonic the Hedgehog, Pokémon, JumpStart, Calvin & Hobbes, Peanuts, Batman, Bronze Bow, and Teen Titans.

Avatar: Hopsalot from the JumpStart series as seen on the cover of the workbook JumpStart Kindergarten: Time and Measurement. With a magic red background of prosperity added by me.

Hello. I'm a teenage girl called StoryMaker the Echidna (formerly StoryMaker-Xy the Echidna) - or at least, that's my pen name. Typically, I am known online as simply StoryMaker. You can call me Story if you want; after all, I'm a story written by God.

I have various fictional interests, including Sonic the Hedgehog, JumpStart (educational software by Knowledge Adventure), ClueFinders (educational software by The Learning Company), Peanuts, Calvin & Hobbes, Toy Story, Pokemon, My Little Pony, Superman, etc. (Not necessarily in that order. Which one is my favorite tends to vary.) Yes, that's a lot of things to be a fan of, but it's good to live a balanced life, right? :)

I don't read a lot of stories, but I do sometimes. So if you have a good one from a category I like, send me a PM and I'll consider reading and reviewing. I prefer oneshots because they take less time to read. I can handle violence. No cursing please (though a few of my favorite fan fics that are rated T do contain some - I guess I can handle a little, but I prefer zero), and NO sexual or suggestive content of any kind. I am very interested in all kinds of fan fics with Christian themes, but don't expect me to laud your fic just because it's Christian. In fact, it being Christian will probably make me judge it by a higher standard, and I won't ease up on the slightest theological error. So yeah, that should be great incentive to send all your Christian fics to me >:D

Note to self: PLAY! YOUR! CELLO! There's no excuse. You know you want to, you know you should, you know this won't really be a "tiny break" what's your excuse?

If U r HomeSchOOld and dont no how to spel as a resalt, PLZ put tis in ur profil! ;)

If you put your faith in Jesus Christ and are not ashamed of it, put this in your profile!

Stories I contributed to:

I wrote the battle scene, plus some other stuff.

Want me to write a battle scene for your Pokemon story, or somehow contribute to one of your stories in another way? Drop me a PM!

A message from me:

Where will you go when you die? Heaven or hell? The time to think about the answer to this question is now – not after it’s too late. No one knows how much time they have left.

In order to answer this question, we need to consider who God is and how he decides who goes to heaven and who goes to hell. His standards are clearly set out in the Bible. In it, he says we must not lie – which includes so called “white” lies (Exodus 20:16), we must not use the name of the Lord to swear (Exodus 20:7), we must not covet (Exodus 20:17), we must not steal – regardless of the item’s value (Exodus 20:15), hating others is a form of murder (Matthew 5:21-22, 1 John 3:15), and lust is a form of adultery (Matthew 5:27-28), and we must love God with all our hearts and our neighbors as ourselves (Matthew 22:36-40), among other things. NONE of us keep all of these commands all of the time. We may think that we don’t disobey them that often, or that we don’t disobey them that badly (which is admitting that we did, in fact, disobey them), or that we do a lot of good things, or had a “good” reason to disobey them. But would any of these excuses work in a court of law? Of course not. If we disobey the law, we must be punished. It’s as simple as that. God is just, good, and perfect, and He can’t just ignore our crimes. He must punish everyone who disobeys His righteous laws.

However, there is good news. God is incredibly loving and merciful. He sent His own Son to come into the world as a man – Jesus Christ, who is as infinitely perfect as His Father. He died on the cross and took the punishment for the sins of anyone who would believe in Him. He faced God’s wrath. He paid the price that we should’ve paid. Then, He rose from the grave, showing that He has full power over death. If we believe in His atoning sacrifice, not our own efforts, then our sins are paid for. We don’t have to face eternal punishment after we die, but will rather experience eternal joy in heaven! Also, His Spirit will live inside us and give us a new heart!

God is just. He punishes all crimes against His perfect law. But if we trust in Jesus, we don’t have to fear death. We don’t have to fear God’s wrath. And we don’t have to live a sinful life. The price for our sins is already paid – if we confess our sins, repent, and believe in Jesus Christ! Will you do that today?

Want to learn more? See And why not go to and read God’s word for yourself?

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Uncharted by Lucillia reviews
Someone once told me that back during the Golden Age they handwaved Clark Kent's lack of Military service during WWII by having him being declared 4-F after he accidentally read the eye chart in the wrong room. What if the consequences of the misreading hadn't ended with the examination? What if Clark Kent had accidentally convinced someone who spread the word that he was "blind"?
Superman - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 7 - Words: 7,010 - Reviews: 97 - Favs: 251 - Follows: 187 - Updated: 9/15/2014 - Published: 9/2/2014 - Clark K./Kal-El/Superman, Lois L., Jimmy O., Perry W.
A Typical Day in the Office by kln101 reviews
One-shot story about Lois & Clark and how they relate to one another. Works for any Superman version. Set early in their relationship. They're comfortable working together and feeling some real chemistry, but Lois is unaware of Clark's identity as Superman. Ch. 1 tells the story from Lois's point of view, while Ch. 2 tells the events from Clark's perspective.
Superman - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,613 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 4 - Published: 6/29/2014 - Lois L., Clark K./Kal-El/Superman - Complete
The Mystery of the Silent Forest by kidatheart20 reviews
The cluefinders are off on another adventure. This time they are trying to solve a mystery behind a series of disappearances in the Sierra Mountains. This is the first chapter in what I hope will be a longer story.
ClueFinders - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 8 - Words: 17,227 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 12/29/2013 - Published: 10/7/2011
Old Scars by Chocolatedog reviews
Crookedstar is in StarClan, and he couldn't be happier... but he has to know one thing. - Minor spoilers for Crookedstar's Promise. Oneshot.
Warriors - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 750 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/19/2012 - Crookedstar, Silverstream - Complete
Determined to be Delusional by Chocolatedog reviews
An alternate beginning for the first Toy Story movie. What would've happened if Buzz had fixed his spaceship? Oneshot. Reviews appreciated greatly!
Toy Story - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,085 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 1 - Published: 4/12/2012 - Woody, Buzz Lightyear - Complete
The Leader Who Sought War by Chocolatedog reviews
Everyone who read "Battles of the Clans" knows that that Morningstar decided to attack WindClan in "The Leader Who Sought Peace" for stealing prey. But what happened afterward? Reveiws are greatly appreciated. Oneshot.
Warriors - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,688 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/15/2011 - Beechfur - Complete
Death of a Toy by Gwen Gamgee reviews
Now we know exactly why Miss Bo Peep did not make an appearance in Toy Story 3... a very sad fic, but good. You have been fore warned...
Toy Story - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,392 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 25 - Follows: 5 - Published: 7/17/2010 - Woody, Bo Peep - Complete
Buzz Lightyear Hit Me in the Face by MeganKoumori reviews
Bo is unhappy when she finds out that Woody wasn't completely truthful about his first adventure with Buzz.
Toy Story - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,385 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 23 - Published: 12/17/2009 - Woody, Bo Peep - Complete
Why the world doesn't need Superman: by Clark Kent by Summersfan reviews
First in a series of revealing essays penned by alter egos
Superman - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 475 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 2 - Published: 12/2/2009 - Complete
I, Robian by Hawki reviews
Oneshot: This is how it feels to be roboticized. This is how it feels to be converted from flesh and blood to metal and circuit. This is how it feels to lose your soul...
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,171 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 3 - Published: 11/28/2008 - Dr. Robotnik/Dr. Eggman, OC - Complete
I Am by Iris Sweetheart reviews
Super Sonic… A second form, an alter ego, or something more? Super Sonic is defined and Sonic comes to an understanding and agreement.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,445 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 12 - Published: 1/16/2008 - Sonic - Complete
White Dress Shirts and Water by Alia G. L reviews
White dress shirts, water, and blue Superman costumes do not go together. So what happens to Clark one rainy day at a dedication ceremony? Will his secret be revealed to Lois? Or will he come up with a plan to save his identity? Read and find out!
Superman - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,385 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 2 - Published: 7/18/2006 - Complete
Hell Comes to Mind by Catbee reviews
SatAM based. Not Archie or SEGA. A look into the mind of a roboticized Mobian and the ultimate loss of freedom. Rated T simply for the fact it's unsettling.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 877 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 7/8/2006 - Complete
Resurgence of Self by Roland 'Jim' Lowery reviews
Damnation and redemption for a roboticized soul.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,333 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 6 - Published: 1/11/2004 - Complete
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Three Poems on Metal Sonic reviews
A trio of mostly-unrelated poems that didn't take too long to make and won't take too long to read. Rated K-plus only for mentioning killing and vaguely alluding to death 'n' destruction (better safe than sorry bro).
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 297 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/2/2014 - Metal Sonic - Complete
The Accidental Thought Police reviews
King Acorn attempts to use Nicole to eradicate all of Robotnik's programming from the Robians. But when Tails' father starts forgetting chunks of his life, Sonic and Tails suspect that Max may have done more than just that... Resembles Archie canon, but modified.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 5 - Words: 7,238 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/26/2013 - Sonic, Tails, Sally, Amadeus P. - Complete
The Bronze Bow: A Brief Epilogue reviews
I was assigned to write an epilogue for this book, and I thought I might as well upload the results. Revised 4/26/2013. Please R&R! (Obviously a oneshot.)
Bronze Bow - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 783 - Reviews: 5 - Follows: 1 - Published: 4/22/2013 - Joel bH., Leah bJ., Malthace bH., Daniel bJ. - Complete
Shermy's Revenge reviews
Shermy's tired of being a personalitiless nobody, and he'll do anything to change the situation - even using some dangerous (well, sort of...) interdimensional technology! Very goofy. In later chapters there's a little random preachiness shoved in for no good reason. Still good for a laugh, tho'.
Crossover - Calvin & Hobbes & Peanuts - Rated: K - English - Humor/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 6 - Words: 8,189 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 4/9/2013 - Published: 5/5/2012 - Complete
The Life Saver reviews
A very short and badly written story (I don't even know much about Teen Titans), but it's basically just a joke. You won't get it if you haven't seen the 1960's Batman movie. No romance or anything like that. Just...enjoy.
Crossover - Batman & Teen Titans - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 300 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/15/2012 - Bruce W./Batman, Dick G./Robin I/Nightwing, Garfield L./Beast Boy - Complete
The JumpStart Gang Spends and Saves reviews
Well, here it is, Chocolatedog. The story that we never made up. What would it have been like? Well...maybe a bit like this. But probably just a little bit. Happy birthday, sis, and God bless you with many fruitful years of serving Him. And if you're anyone aside from CDog - enjoy the story, but you won't understand it! uploaded prematurely for CDog's birthday, proofread 7/19/12
JumpStart - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,637 - Reviews: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 7/13/2012 - Casey, C.J. - Complete
Fabula Sonici reviews
Fabula insulsa. Review, but only comment on how good the Latin is, because the story is VERY boring and I know it! I just wrote this for practice!
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: K - Latin - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5/14/2012 - Sonic, Tails - Complete
Lucia et Linus Insulsa Fabula
Fabula mea habet illatinismum! Fabula est insulsa, sed scribo exercere.
Peanuts - Rated: K - Latin - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Published: 5/13/2012 - Linus V., Lucy V. - Complete
JumpStart Travel Troubles reviews
I wrote this short oneshot when I was 8 in a failed attempt to show off my geography knowledge. XD Based on JumpStart Around the World. The JumpStart gang decides to take a trip, but when Casey accidentally lands in Brazil, problems arise...R&R!
JumpStart - Rated: K - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,292 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/6/2011 - Frankie, Casey - Complete
Totally Sonic Beginnings: Children of the Ring reviews
Two hedgehog brothers, Jules and Charles, have mighty destinies to fulfill that will take them down very different paths...and shape Mobius' future. This story is lamely written, but has some interesting fanon ideas, so you might enjoy it. It was going to be the first installment of my own Sonic canon, which I haven't continued, but this story can stand by itself.
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: K - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 11 - Words: 19,343 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 10/15/2011 - Published: 10/2/2010 - Charles H., Dr. Robotnik/Dr. Eggman - Complete
A very stupid story I wrote when I was little. Laugh at the truly excessive descriptions on things which have no bearing on the story, the lame emotions, and the inconsistent, non-driven plotline. NOTE: I am not responsible for wasted time. Enjoy!
Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: K - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 4,951 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 1/1/2011 - Sonic, Amy - Complete
From Oridnary Life to Extraordinary Strife
I'm never going to finish this story...oh well! In a weird alternate universe that's Pokemon-based with SatAM mixed in, Ash's pal Brock moves to Robotropolis...and then, Ash finds a mysterious computer. DUN DUN DUNNN! It has fantasy Pokemon violence, hence the rating. Since it's kind of old, it's badly written. So badly written, I find it pretty hilarious! Give it a try, mate!
Crossover - Pokémon & Sonic the Hedgehog - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Humor - Chapters: 9 - Words: 17,310 - Published: 10/5/2010 - Ash K./Satoshi, Brock/Takeshi, Pikachu, Squirtle/Zenigame