Hello everyone, my profile from before was annoying me. SO, I decided I would do something else with my profile. And this is what I'm going to do. I really hope you enjoy this poem, because I know I do. It's so pretty that I might post another one on too. You tell me, should I post another one?
What may be thoughts?
Well, thoughts are butterflies.
Those that sweep down from the dark sky.
Those who are bright if they are given the nurturing they need.
A monarch that lodges itself in a flower,
A moth that daintily dances above the head.
They flutter and flap, enticing others to catch it.
A flying acrobat that lures us into pondering.
It leads us, inspires us, and motivates us.
Then, it shuffles through a meadow,
Soaring high enough to be free but low enough to grab.
And as soon as you think you’ve got it,
The butterfly disappears.
This is a poem I wrote. I wasn't going to originally put it on my profile, but now I thought I should.
My poem is about thought, inspiration. Those are some words I use in there also. Anyway (did you know that the word 'anyway' is never pluralized? I didn't! I might still pluralize it though, so don't be upset), I wanted to put this on because I had left Fanfiction a little while ago. I was younger than I am now, obviously, but I never felt good or proud about some of my work. So, I deleted what I didn't like.
I had gone to the sister site, Fictionpress, and read wonderful work; truly amazing. And then, it caused me to write my own work. And now, I'm actually proud of what I have accomplished.
So many people before have told me what a horrible writer I am, that my plots make no sense, my characters are not developed well, that my characters are not fitting, too perfect, that my writing was not good enough, and I didn't feel too good after that. I once tried to delete some comments, but people misunderstood and probably thought I was erasing them because I was ashamed. Not right. I was doing it because that was the worst kind of "advice" you could have given a person.
"You're writing sucks," or, "you are a horrible writer, stop before my mind explodes." Those kinds of things are not acceptable, so don't say them. How is degrading someone without as much as one word of advice, of revision, supposed to help a person's writing. Advice is only helpful when you hand the other person some sort of reasoning, some sort of practice they can work on. Let's all get along and try to be nice for once. Please?
Thanks for reading!
Oh, and my account on Fictionpress and on Wattpad account are under "Untainted". Just saying if you're interested because I have some great work. On supernatural and normal things, of course.
And remember, love love. That's all.
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