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Joined 11-06-10, id: 2604637, Profile Updated: 11-12-10
Author has written 4 stories for Touhou Project, Pokémon, and Team Fortress 2.

I am currently working on "Autobiographies of interesting characters".

The premise is that a lot of characters have rather unspecific qualities - Remilia's fate manipulation and Keine's history manipulation. Others have very unspecific qualities - such as what Flandre did for the last 500 years. Others I simply disagree with - Currently, I can't imagine Mokou who has been in combat for over 1000 years to lose on even terms to a princess with no combat experience that spent 700 consecutive years in her house doing nothing. So I'm making molds I like better.

Feel free to criticize any chapter, and to do so very harshly and very specifically. I need these backstories to be good, consistent, and logically sound; I don't care too much about canon, and there are some characters for which I'll define their powers however I feel like defining them, but it would be very helpful to review any character description that is lacking so that I can make the descriptions more interesting/less bring, avoid using my common words (words I repeat a lot when describing something specific, like fate manipulation with Remilia), and most importantly, define the powers and the characters such that their qualities are all logically sound and consistent.

So please, review my works and help me describe the characters in a more interesting and consistent way.

Thank you,

capt. h

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Autobiographies of interesting characters reviews
Character descriptions, as told by the characters themselves. Currently drafted: Flandre, Mokou, Keine, Remilia, Reiuji Utsuho, Medicine Melancholy, Yukari Yakumo, Yuuka Kazami, Rin Kaenbyou
Touhou Project - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Fantasy - Chapters: 8 - Words: 6,770 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 10/3/2013 - Published: 11/8/2010 - Flandre S., F. n. Mokou
Raven versus the machine
Utsuho and Mokou fight machines in the team fortress 2 universe
Crossover - Team Fortress 2 & Touhou Project - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Western - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,003 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 3 - Published: 10/3/2013 - Utsuho R., F. n. Mokou - Complete
Mokou crosses over into pokemon reviews
What it says in the title. Mokou seeks out 8 badges, and stuff happens. Uses parser storytelling format.
Crossover - Pokémon & Touhou Project - Rated: T - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 6 - Words: 11,012 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 12/26/2012 - Published: 11/30/2012 - Haunter/Ghost, F. n. Mokou
Mokou and Cirno Crossover into Pokémon reviews
Battles in Gensokyo are dangerous. Which is why Yukari calls on Mokou and Cirno to investigate a less lethal way of resolving conflicts. It goes about as well as one would expect from tossing a pyromaniac and a stupid fairy into the world.
Crossover - Pokémon & Touhou Project - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 2,136 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 1/25/2012 - Published: 7/4/2011 - F. n. Mokou