SC-Jupe
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Joined 11-20-10, id: 2622841, Profile Updated: 01-12-11
Author has written 2 stories for Naruto, and Joker/Clover/Heart no Kuni no Alice.

Destitus ventis, remos adhibe.


I'm a proud member of Critics United. If you've recieved a review from me and want to complain about it (or thank me for it), do it right here.

However, if you'd like to discuss your review further, feel free to send me a PM. You also might be here on the odd chance that you saw one of my reviews, and wanted some constructive criticism of your own. If that is the case, I will happily oblige via PM requests. Or I may send you to my group's forum if I'm too busy.

The Reviewer Revolution

I, SC-Jupe, do solemnly swear to review every story I read, both enjoyable and atrocious. I will give credit where it is dues and will never leave a review that reads like “gr8 job! i luv this so much so plz update asap!11”. I recognize my right of freedom of speech, and I acknowledge that I am entitled to my honest opinion – not that of the majority of your readers. I also promise to enforce the rules of this site and will not hold back on reminding you that by posting your work on this site for everyone to see, I am allowed to review how I see fit and if you do not like it, you can either leave the site or limit the viewing of your work to only your friends and family.


My critiquing style:

My critiquing style now is different from the one that I began with. I feel that the style that I’ve adopted is very thorough and easy for most to understand. First, I’ll mention specific sentences/phrases, usually to point out grammatical errors and how to fix them, but sometimes to praise especially good writing. I’ll then summarize how well your grammar and spelling are, and mention the error that you make most frequently. Next, I’ll describe how your characters come across to the reader, whether I’m able to sympathize with them, whether they are OOC, if they have any Mary-Sue traits, etc. After that I’ll describe how well you describe setting, and use it as a literary tool. (My own writing needs the most work in this area.) I’ll also describe how the plot is progressing, and whether I notice any holes. Lastly, I’ll summarize with how good the story is in general and its major strengths and weaknesses. I critique this way usually only when requested; rarely will I do this on any random story, mainly because it takes so long.

My reviewing style:

I go over the four topics (grammar, characters, setting, plot) briefly. I’ll basically say which areas need improvement, and areas in which your writing excels. Occasionally I will cite specific examples in the story for clarification. I review this way most often.

Reviewing rulebreakers:

If your story is in violation of one of the site’s rules, my review will be short and to the point. I’ll tell you which rule you broke and how to fix it. If I think that the story is salvageable, I’ll also give some concrit.

My Stories:

Allaying Ennui – Joker/Clover/Heart no Kuni no Alice This is going to be a multi-chapter fic that centers around Vivaldi and Alice. I've tried to look at Vivaldi in a sympathetic way, and show her sensitive side that isn't often displayed in the manga.
- In Progress

Salvation and Despair - Naruto My first fanfic. This is a romance/tragedy fic about Itachi and his lover Kana, my OC. If you're wondering, she is not a Mary-Sue, and scored a 16 on the Universal Mary-Sue Litmus Test which I recommend to anyone with an OC. Currently re-posting.
- In Progress


Fandoms:

Naruto, Avatar: Last Airbender, Star Wars, Joker/Clover/Heart no Kuni no Alice


My Info:

Name: SC-Jupe or just Jupe. Formerly ablondegeek/Blondie.

Age: 17

Sex: Female


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Little Piece of Heaven by Leanne Ash reviews
SasuSaku: "I don't do it because I think you're weak! I do it because—! Because I… just… Never mind." Years later it finally happened. Unfortunately, she just didn't care anymore. A story of love and irony, where one is oblivious… and the other is Sasuke.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 26 - Words: 72,634 - Reviews: 3624 - Favs: 3,538 - Follows: 2,171 - Updated: 10/24/2012 - Published: 2/3/2006 - Sasuke U., Sakura H. - Complete
Seducing the Men of Wonderland by Vampirette Knight reviews
Victim # 5 - Julius. He was like the father I never had. Or, the father I never knew. I cared about him dearly, even if he did think my coffee sucked.
Joker/Clover/Heart no Kuni no Alice - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 10,324 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 36 - Follows: 33 - Updated: 11/9/2011 - Published: 7/27/2010 - Alice L.
Darker Wonderland by EarthRiddle reviews
Wonderland has a dark future. Alice is gone, leaving her daughter and son with Ace behind to fend for themselves in a world that doesn't take well to those who play outside of the Game.
Joker/Clover/Heart no Kuni no Alice - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 33 - Words: 71,537 - Reviews: 125 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 15 - Updated: 3/15/2011 - Published: 9/12/2010 - Ace, Alice L. - Complete
Go Ahead With It by ncfan reviews
Kakashi's idea of asking a woman out was, as with every other aspect of his life, not quite socially correct. KakaShiz.
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,011 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 5 - Published: 10/2/2010 - Kakashi H., Shizune - Complete
Frozen by Salieri reviews
A few years after the manga: Sasuke managed to kill his brother, but there is no feeling of relief. He uses Sakura to fill the emptiness within his heart in a way she did not expect. Rating just to be safe. Sasuke x Sakura FINISHED!
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 29 - Words: 54,981 - Reviews: 2064 - Favs: 1,977 - Follows: 342 - Updated: 7/26/2005 - Published: 10/5/2003 - Sasuke U., Sakura H. - Complete
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Allaying Ennui reviews
Vivaldi is the beautiful, daunting female not many dare cross. However, even she does not have everything. Alice, the sweet and odd foreigner, encounters adversity, despite her gracious intentions. In the end, only one woman will get what she wants.
Joker/Clover/Heart no Kuni no Alice - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,074 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 12/17/2010 - Published: 12/4/2010 - Alice L., Vivaldi
Salvation and Despair reviews
After he joins the ANBU, Itachi struggles with deciding where his loyalties truly lie. ItachiXOC.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 3 - Words: 7,330 - Reviews: 5 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 12/14/2010 - Published: 11/26/2010 - Itachi U.