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Joined 11-29-10, id: 2636334, Profile Updated: 02-18-18
Author has written 1 story for Star Wars, and Harry Potter.

Reviewers

before we talk about me I'd like to share a review I got...not two days into my first fic (also posted over on hpffarchive where the review is from) and my response.

I leave it here as an idea why fanfiction authors get disheartened and why some (like one of my favourites Robst) consider leaving.

I also freely add my reply for the record and to show my thinking, I won't bother naming the 'reviewer' and I will not be answering reviews like that again. Ever.

I'LL BE HONEST, NOT THE KIND OF STORY IWAS HOPING FOR, ESPECIALLY SINCE HE HAS BASICALLY LEFT HIS REAL LIFE BEHIND, LEFT YTHE GIRL WHO LOVES HIM BEHIND, ONLY TO DISCOVER *. WHAT IS IT WITH THE WRITERS OF THE HARRY POTTER FAN STORIES THAT THEY NEVER SEEM TO GIVE HIM A BREAK, AND THEN , I'M SORRY BUT I AM REALLY UNSURE ABOUT HOW MUCH MORE I WILL FOLLOW THIS STORY, I HOPE IT GETS A HELL OF ALOT BETTER SOON OR I WILL SIMPLY STOP READING IT.

Well that was...informative and not very useful... my considered reply was:

Okay lets deal with this issue by issue shall we

1. He hasn't left his real life beind, in fact if you paid attention you'd notice that his entire purpose is to get home back to his 'real' life. Adding time travel and cloning and the length of time it takes for him to get home is not the same sort of factor. In fact its more about who Harry will be when he gets back, if he gets back and alot less about the age. That is not to say that his adventures between are merely filler...they have importance too.

2. Of course*... we make big decisions for uncertain rewards and its is a useful plot device.

3. Speaking of useful plot devices, Harry is getting alot of flak at the moment...Do i like it? No. Is it part of the story? Yes. Why? because through moments of intense suffering or joy I can more fully explore what Harry is at his core and how that may change. It is a legitimate writing tool and if you cannot wait for the bad times to end ( which of course they will good and bad are on a cycle after all) then its your loss... I will not apologise for moving MY story along.

4. I can't speak for other authors...don't ask me too.

5. You have the distinction of being the only wholly negative review that I will respond to personally. I don't mind constructive criticism as it helps my writing but in no way is just threatening to quit reading constructive. If you have something useful to say...say it otherwise go elsewhere.

6. Finally on a personal note... All Caps really? I feel like everyone in the world is better than that.

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the review and point 2 has been edited to remove spoilers...

I hope that clears it up fore everyone

About Me

So I'm old enough that I probably should be doing something else with my time and after reading a lot of fanfictions I have decided to give my own one a ago.

I will say that I am generally against cannon pairings (due to the fact that so few of them are good in my opinon), I will also say that it has been years since I've written anything professionally so please bare with me.

Though i read alot of things..on here it tends to be Harry Potter and/or Starwars with the occasional SG-1 one thrown in... they also tend to be Harry Centric.

I also generally detest the youngest weasleys/percy/molly. Though I don't mind them very well written...though only one example of good Weasley's well written comes to mind. Otherwise I freely admit I enjoy reading about them suffering.

I also find as I get older that Dumbledore is less and less excusable. As a child I could have possibly accepted the affable old man act but as I age all I see are the inconcistancies and the mistakes.

The final thing I tend to ignore is Cursed Child...simply didn't like it all that much...but as I tend not to read cannon pairing it has less of an effect.

I have no patience for flamers and trolls

My favourite pairings are H/Tonks or Honks if you will (first pairing I read still sometimes one of the best), HP/HG,HP/LL,HP/DG/,HP/FD and HP/GD

My fanfiction tends to be dictated after being hand written and I have no Beta so if anyone finds erros of that sort I would cently be appreactive.

My First Fanfic is being written and posted and as of now and I will try to update once a week but iy could be as late as once every two weeks. Though at the moment it has been twice in two days so...you never know...

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Harry Potter, The Jedi That Would Not Die by TheGuardianOfLight reviews
Three Jedi come to Earth on an exploration mission and accidentally land on the Hogwarts front lawn. What happens when some of our favourite students encounter the wonders and terrors of the galaxy.
Crossover - Star Wars & Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 57 - Words: 306,080 - Reviews: 1265 - Favs: 1,959 - Follows: 2,374 - Updated: 10/16/2016 - Published: 10/12/2011 - Harry P.
Harry Potter and the Power of the Dark Side by Faykan reviews
Only the strong may rule, this was the way of the Dark Side, and Darth Millennial was about to prove to his master that he was worthy of the title Dark Lord of the Sith, but first a tremor in the Force draws him to the Unknown Regions of space... I do not own the picture
Crossover - Star Wars & Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 53 - Words: 329,639 - Reviews: 940 - Favs: 1,759 - Follows: 1,544 - Updated: 2/1/2016 - Published: 9/10/2012 - Harry P., Draco M., Luna L. - Complete
Endless Night by The Modern Sorcerer reviews
After an incident during his Occlumency lessons, Harry Potter finds that his life is not his own. So he takes it back... violently. Struggling to find who he really is when his memories are fabricated, Harry embraces the life he didn't even remember he'd lost, while trying to not just kill everyone responsible... and then some. After all, he's half-demon, not criminally insane.
Crossover - Charmed & Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Humor - Chapters: 12 - Words: 35,030 - Reviews: 209 - Favs: 695 - Follows: 924 - Updated: 11/7/2015 - Published: 8/19/2015 - Harry P.
Spring Equinox by Harry50 reviews
Umbridge wants to restore a certain old tradition. It backfires nicely with some very unexpected results. Harry/Harem
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Romance/Family - Chapters: 16 - Words: 38,253 - Reviews: 762 - Favs: 1,994 - Follows: 1,534 - Updated: 3/14/2015 - Published: 11/29/2014 - [Harry P., Hermione G., Minerva M.] - Complete
Broken Bonds by broomstick flyer reviews
Harry is not happy about the adult responce to the Dementor attack in Little whinging. His letter to the order at Grimmauld place has some unforseen consequences some of which turn out quite good for both Harry and Hermione.
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 22,265 - Reviews: 597 - Favs: 1,971 - Follows: 1,463 - Updated: 1/28/2015 - Published: 12/7/2014 - [Harry P., Hermione G.] - Complete
Harry Potter and the Power of Thirteen by Lord-Marauder-2013 reviews
My attempt at Reptillia28's time-travel challenge. dieing isn't as simple as some seem to believe. and the paperwork... i thought it was never ending while i was alive.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 16,189 - Reviews: 60 - Favs: 209 - Follows: 386 - Updated: 6/16/2014 - Published: 5/6/2014 - [Harry P., Hermione G.]
The Hufflepuff Alternative by Mionefan reviews
A darker end to the Battle of Hogwarts. Replacement for part of chapter 7 and the Epilogue.
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 12 - Words: 30,201 - Reviews: 188 - Favs: 260 - Follows: 262 - Updated: 6/6/2014 - Published: 4/2/2012 - Harry P., Hannah A. - Complete
A Champion by Takao1160 reviews
4th Year - Starts with Harry's selection as a champion. Harry is different he is angry, intelligent, and he absolutely does not want to participate in the tournament. Harry has a secret that he has shared with no one and new Harry is released and the pay-back begins. Strong Powerful - Harry /Fluer/ Daphne - Hermione later in the story.
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 29 - Words: 78,206 - Reviews: 445 - Favs: 2,712 - Follows: 1,203 - Published: 6/3/2014 - Harry P., Hermione G., Fleur D., Daphne G. - Complete
Inseparable by Ares.Granger reviews
A hopefully different time travel story. Adult Harry and Hermione jump back in time to the Halloween the Potters were killed and baby Harry became an orphan. These adult versions change the past in the hopes of a better future. Won't-know-what-hit-him Dumbledore, AU, Harry/Hermione. Summaries are hard.
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Family - Chapters: 9 - Words: 32,068 - Reviews: 581 - Favs: 2,860 - Follows: 1,741 - Updated: 5/23/2014 - Published: 12/17/2013 - [Harry P., Hermione G.] - Complete
Losing Control by JackPotr reviews
Harry becomes an outcast during fourth year and ends up reaching out to new people to help him along the way. What he ends up with is a girlfriend and a new lease on life with the freedom he has never had before. The title refers to Albus and the Order. Grey Harry
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 15 - Words: 154,616 - Reviews: 1367 - Favs: 4,190 - Follows: 2,568 - Updated: 8/21/2013 - Published: 3/31/2013 - Harry P., Megan J. - Complete
Fleur's Surprise by Harry50 reviews
Fleur found something that may change Harry's life, yet she needs Hermione's help. How will this change their lives? Will Harry survive the tournament? Will Voldemort let them live? Warning: Some mature scenes inside. Read at your own discretion.
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Romance/Family - Chapters: 15 - Words: 42,124 - Reviews: 713 - Favs: 2,308 - Follows: 1,736 - Updated: 7/2/2013 - Published: 3/26/2013 - Harry P., Hermione G., Fleur D. - Complete
Eye of the Basilisk by Takao1160 reviews
Harry learns of the plans and plots that have been laid out before him. He is tired of never knowing what is coming his way and he takes matters into his own hands. Along the way he has a set of parents that he has adopted, a crazy elf, a best friend, and a friend like no other to help him out. Let the adventure begin! Pairings H/HG/SB.
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 18 - Words: 77,074 - Reviews: 256 - Favs: 1,452 - Follows: 629 - Published: 2/22/2013 - Harry P., Susan B. - Complete
Potter's Angels by Takao1160 reviews
Dumbledore is Dark in this story. Harry finds out after the triwizard tournement who his real friends are. Tonks visits and they kiss, then Hermione shows up and let's him know what she wants, then there is Dobby and his menagerie of friends to spice up the mix. Did I mention the goblins wish to adopt him. This is a Harry/Tonks/Hermione/ Daphne/Astoria/ Luna story.
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44,108 - Reviews: 107 - Favs: 1,199 - Follows: 463 - Updated: 12/18/2012 - Published: 11/5/2012 - Harry P., N. Tonks - Complete
Harry Potter and The Master of Time by DarkLordHufflepuff reviews
Standing by his best friends grave Harry Potter is given the chance to fix everything that went wrong in his life. HHr, Weasley Bashing, Dumbledore Bashing, Time Travel. My first fic.
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 17 - Words: 54,267 - Reviews: 1111 - Favs: 2,879 - Follows: 3,643 - Updated: 7/22/2012 - Published: 3/5/2012 - Harry P., Hermione G.
Harry Potter: Lost Very Far Away reviews
Harry Potter is distraught at the loss of his Godfather and with a little understanding from a blonde friend of his runs though the Veil after him. In Doing so he becomes so lost...but will he find his way home again? What will he discover while gone? If he does return home will he ever be the same? HP/LL ALL CHAPTERS NOW BETA'D
Crossover - Star Wars & Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 31 - Words: 288,792 - Reviews: 984 - Favs: 2,044 - Follows: 2,619 - Updated: 9/12 - Published: 5/21/2017 - Harry P., Luna L.