Author has written 6 stories for Naruto, Bleach, and Death Note.
Likes and Dislikes:
Likes: Well I like watching anime, manga, playing pc games, reading and writing fanfiction, reading novels (sweatdrop, no I'm not a bookworm), my parents, little brother (although sometimes he's a royal pain in the ass), a certain female, drawing manga characters(mainly Naruto, DBZ, Bleach….or sometimes my own creations _) etc.
Dislikes: Hypocrites, Rapists, Racists, people who can't stand for themselves, people who try to impose their views just to prove that their right, Terrorists (especially who claim their deceitful acts as a matter of protecting their religion) etc.
Anime: Naruto, Bleach, One Piece, Inuyasha, Tower of Drouga:The Aegis of Uruk, Dragonball Z, GT, Beyblade, Kekkaishi, Busou Renkin, Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya, FMA Brotherhood, Rosario Vampire, Death Note, Nurarihyon no Mago, Maid sama!, Suzuka (reall like this one) and some others which I can't remember right now.
Pairings I like:
NarutoxKushina (most favourite lol, our fiery redhead Kushi-hime)
NarutoxAnko, Yugao, Hana, Kurenai (what can I say, each of them have different personalities and can fit with Naruto in one way or the other)
NarutoxHinata (She’s cute and kind hearted. The only that puts me off about her is stalking but I can ignore it. And if anyone of you have those idiotic reasons that she’s weak, spineless BLAH BLAH BLAH, or her shyness is frustrating BLAH BLAH BLAH or she disdn’t defend Naruto in the academy and other stuff BLAH BLAH...I simply don't care. I have plenty of reasons to like a character such as Hinata, and if I need to spell it for you...may Kami help you.
One thing I don't understand is the sudden increase in the amount of Hinata haters. People give so many reasons for hating her...but I still don't get it! Since Naruto began, Hinata has ranked the highest for female characters in most of the official polls. Here on this site, the fics having the maximum reviews are NaruHina. So many fics having crossed the 1K mark in reviews are NaruHina...why? It's cause people USED to love NaruHina and read it with passion. It's these same people, about 50% of the readers of FF who are Hinata haters who used to read these fics. I understand that you became tired of NaruHina and due to the overabundance of it on this site, that reason is fine. But to HATE a character like her, and then justifying your hate with reasons you dug out forcefully...it's kinda shallow. If SO MANY of you hate Hinata, why didn't you say so when the series started, when she was introduced? And unlike Sakura, Hinata's character has continued to improve as the manga progressed. So it makes utterly no sense that as the years passed by, these Hinata haters emerged with their own made up reasons. If you really hated her, or disliked her character, you would have done that from the start, when she was introduced, cause that's when she was the shy-iest- the most commonly used adjective to describe one's reason of hating her-- "Her shyness is soooo frustrating!!"...blah! That's your opinion! If a shy girl is not your thing/preference, it's fine...but that doesn't gives you the right to judge one's character and hate her! O.o
Once again, no matter your reasons and other stuff, we ALL used to love her [and I still do, I can't hate a girl like her...NEVER!]. What I think is that over the years you guys got tired of reading the same NaruHina 'cliched' fics and wanted something new, and rather gave the name to your boredom of NaruHina as 'I FUCKING HATE HINATA!'...that just doesn't make any sense. If you're tired of reading it, that's perfectly fine...but to actually hate the character to the point of writing large rants about her on your profile and utterly despise her, man that's just...really, do I need to use the adjective here? ;D)- lol I myself wrote a rant regarding her- but HEY! It was in a positive way! XP
NarutoxGuren (She’s beautiful, has a strong bloodline, good natured if you get to know her and that this pairing is EXTREMELY rare!)
NarutoxKonan (I like her, she’s good hearted, ofcourse beautful and wants to attain peace just like Naruto, although her methods are a bit different, okay...a lot different, but still this pairing is rare too)
NarutoxSamui (Hehe, our busty Kumo icy ninja, what can I say more, like she says, the pairing is ...cool)
NarutoxYugito (jinchurikixjinchuriki and that she’s beautiful, also the perverted Nibi is an added bonus and gives a lot of room for humour)
NarutoxMikoto(Second most favourite pairing, not just because I want to watch the teme’s face when he sees Naruto fucking his mother, but because I like her as a person)
NarutoxMei(Our favourite busty, trusty, tasty and the flirtiest, sexiest, deadliest Mizukage with her long flowing red hair, just like Kushi-hime! Seriously, I have doubts if she’s an Uzumaki, who knows what’s going on in that confused brain-wreck Bakamoto!)
NarutoxRangiku Matsumoto (No….if you think I like her only because of her assets, then NO! The main thing I like about her is her bubbly and carefree personality, she’s always smiling, keeps the mood light and can get serious when needed…..just like our favourite blond prankmaster. And hence, these two are a great match for each other _)
I’m a pretty open guy and can accept almost any pairing with Naruto if it’s well written. _
Pairings I Dislike:
NarutoxSakura (But I can tolerate it as long as the fic is well-written)
NarutoxSasuke or any other yaoi.
SasukexAny Other Female (It’s Sas-gay, have some mercy on the woman, will ya! lol...anyway I no longer hate Sasuke, still I just prefer reading fics that are Naruto-centric)
Any other malexAny other Female (don’t know, it’s the way I prefer things to be- Naruto-centric again lol :P)
Just something I came upon while reading Newton’s biography, thought I’d share with you if you haven’t read this-
Okay! So recently I've been thinking (yeah, my brain started working just now), that like, almost all the people nowadays think that money is everything, like... 90% out there is money. They say it's that important in life. I, dunno about this. I mean, I really, really don't believe in this shit. It's just my opinion of course, and everybody have their own opinions. But, there is so much important in life than something superficial such as dough. Yes, it's absolute necessary to survive in today's world. And for people who are starving out there, have no water, no clothes, no shelter...money is the world to them.
In mankind's earlier days- there was only ONE distinction between us- male and female. And now, money has changed that distinction- rich and poor.
I'd like to compare money with oxygen here, we need it to survive yes, that's absolutely true. But it's just that, oxygen, what we need to survive. But when people start obsessing after it, that's when your life goes down the drain. This thing, 'money', it can destroy relationships, tear families apart...and I've had more than my fair share of witnessing it in real life (well, that's the reason I'm ranting here isn't it?), and also leads to corruption. Of course, it can buy us all those things we want, but there should be an imaginary line drawn in our head which separates 'sufficient' from 'abundant'. Because there's no limit to 'abundant money', it will just keep growing and you'll just want more. You want to save it, save it...and save MORE in your accounts! It's a hunger which can NEVER be quenched.
It's a race out there, people running around like dogs, trying to overtake each other- property, cars, social respect, parties, fame, love, sex, up and anything. It's a fucking race with no finish line, everyone running, stepping over each other (no empathy or sympathy), will zillions of other competitors out there with you! You'll be running forever behind it, your entire life passes like that, and then what...it's fucking over? That was life for you? Without experiencing the countless other joys that life has to offer, you finally made it rich, are old, and about to die.
Earn money, eat expensive junk food, party excessively hard, ruin your health, get sick, that same earned money goes in for treatment, aaaaaand you're back to from where you started. Great! Give yourself a medal! What did you gain in the end? An IV stand??
If you just earn 'enough' for your desires and...your responsibilities towards your family, I think that's sufficient. I just don't want to run blindly like almost all others, and miss what good life has to offer. I want to do what makes me happy, as long as it doesn't hurt others, and just...live life as a whole. It's a journey, which you can either complete by running non-stop, pushing others around and ultimately destroying the true value of relationships- or you can stroll through, enduring the difficulties, but also enjoying it's positives at the same time. At least, you can do yourself a favor and live it to the fullest. :)
It's sad how much negative people are these days, I can hear almost everyone saying 'Life is shit!' or the more patented- 'The world is full of shit!' And I'm always like WTF?! Really? Yeah well, everyone faces difficulties, but that's a part of the package known as 'life'. Everyone has problems, and it sometimes hurts so much that you feel like you're having a heart attack. Yeah, it hurts that much...and even worse. But that does not mean that you just blame it on others, and the world is like a big bad monster, which only wants to eat you. People say "Yeah I was a kid back then when I used to smile like an idiot. Life is full of shit, and I've matured enough to know that no one gives a shit about you."
'Sigh' I wish there was an alarm that could wake these guys up, and beat this 'negativity' out of them. Are you that weak? Is that it? Is that what you call being 'mature'. You think you faced problems, and you become mature?? No. You become mature WHEN you stand up again after falling. Again and again, each time you become mature. If you just mope around in depression with a natural talent for 'Yeah I have the ability to take anything for negative', then you are just becoming more immature, a prick.
Oh well, this was supposed to be a rant about money lol, not people. But yeah, I guess, it makes me really sad to see people losing their original personalities because they faced problems. Most of the people I hold dear have changed, a pale imitation of who they used to be...it's really heartbreaking.
And here's something concerning 'REVIEWS', which I copied from 'Heartless demon wolf'-
Writers- all of them, from famous authors to subtle FF writers- ALL depend on the feedback from our readers. Vision Dominican brought up an interesting albeit tragically true idea:
"Lack of reviews is the greatest killer of fan fic writers out there. We at the institute wish to let the public know of how they can pitch in to save our dying writers.
1) Drop a review every other chapter. It may not seem like much, but reviews are actually what many of us want to see. That, and hits. Hits do make us happy but we don't really know if people like our story or not.
2) Visit our author page. Those kind of hits really make us happy. It's where we showcase our entourage of friends, beta readers, and stories. Some of us even tidy up with set areas for upcoming story ideas and character bios.
3) Send an email. While normally I'd prefer a review, emails are just as good. Really, it warms my heart to communicate with another reader or writer."
What you call being "too lazy to review" is what we call "a flame to the pages" as the writers. That one minute or two that you felt "too lazy" to review is another minute of creeping discouragement that all writers feel as they begin to think...
"Why am I even here…?"
"What's even the point of continuing?"
"My skills must be terrible…no one cares for my story…"
"I'll never be a good writer...I quit."
These are only a few thoughts that go through every writer's head- that go through MY head- when we put out a chapter / story with all our heart and soul within, and we sit there…and sit…and wait…and not a single person says even a word.
If you're not a writer, you have NO IDEA how much that hurts…
If you ARE a writer, then I'm sure you know just how great it feels when someone is kind enough to leave a heartwarming and encouraging review, and you read it, smiling while thinking…"Wow…fuck...I did it…"
So, why not give fellow writers the same luxury here?
Too many times I've seen epic and utterly beautiful works of literary art fall to pieces before finally being abandoned due to the terrible discouragement that the lack of reviews can cause.
Sometimes, it is so severe that the very writer himself decides to quit, denying the world his skills of writing that I'm it would have deeply enjoyed.
Just one minute, that's all it takes. Just a few gentle taps of the fingers on your keyboard, a few seconds or so of your time, and your words can SAVE a writer from a dark demise.
Do me a favor: Go find a story, ANY story, anywhere here on Fanfic,net, and see if you can help it. If it has very little / no reviews at all, just check it out, and say whatever comes to mind.
And enjoy the thought in mind that you could have just SAVED that story, with just a few taps of the keyboard…
If you agree with what I have said then please copy and paste any part of this story you wish onto your profile. Modify it in any way you see fit; there is no need to use my exact words. You make it say what you want it to say.
Deleted Fanfiction! (Copied from 'LoliBat'- Had to agree with her on this!)
So. I had the misfortune of discovering the actions of one of my favorite authors of one of my first fandoms; she deleted her fanfiction. And her bio. All of it. This really, really makes me upset since I have very fond feelings towards that particular fandom. I started following the anime in sixth grade, and I love it very dearly. Even though I no longer follow it (now that I've grown up, I find it slightly ridiculous), I am still very thankful for all it has taught me. In fact, I still smile whenever I hear the OPs. Thus, it brings me great sadness to know that my favorite story of that fandom was deleted.
As an author, I vow to never delete any of my fanfiction because I know what it feels like to search for hours for that one specific story only to find it gone forever. I have experienced that feeling a great number of times, and I truly hate it. No matter how badly things get for me or how mean the readers, I vow to never ever delete my fanfiction because I know that somewhere, there is a reader who would be disappointed if I did. And I refuse to let that person down.
As a reader, I guess I blame the author to a certain point. It's hard to actually pinpoint the emotion that I'm feeling at the moment, but if I had to put a name on it, it would be this: disappointment. I'm disappointed in the author for deleting it. Why? Why would authors do that? Delete a story that they worked so hard for and spent so many hours laboring over just because of one or two bad reviewers? What about the rest of the reviewers? Do we not matter at all? Yes, if we liked the story, we should have spoke up. Yes, I know that, but I did speak up. I know that many, many other people did as well; I saw a number of gushing reviews (properly punctuated or not). I thought about PM-ing the author; I really did. I ended up not doing so though- what good would it do? The author knew exactly what she was doing when she hit the delete button. Nothing I can say would do anything. Heck, I don't even know if she will read it. It's highly probable that she won't even reply me. It's odd how writers expect readers to review when they either a.) don't read them or b.) don't act like they read them. And so, I refrained from hitting that button.
The fault is not entirely the author's though; I understand. I've been following that particular fandom for many years; about five, if my memory is correct. In those six years, I saw my favorite stories disappear one by one. It's sad- it really is. I'll probably never see those stories again- never smile over them, never laugh over them, never feel the urge to strangle someone over them. In those five years, I also saw the quality of readers deteriorate. It's actually quite easy to tell; the cap locks, the lack of grammar, lack of punctuation, lack of capitalization, lack of sense. So what if you don't like a story? What gives you the right to say such hurtful things to a person who's not even paid to write this for you? I understand if the story itself is particularly badly written, but those stories weren't. The grammar was fine, the spelling was fine, the chapter length was fine. Just because something is different does not mean that it is bad. So what if the story is genderbent? Slash? Unusual? Does that give you the right to put down an author? No! So instead of writing flames, kindly sit down, shut up, and read, or press the back button. I'm pretty sure those types of readers won't be missed by the authors. The sad thing is, this particular type of readers, while not representative of the whole population of readers, are the ones who get the most attention. Negativity stands out so much more, you see. Not to mention the number of those readers are increasing at an alarming rate.
Chronicles of My Shinobi's Way
Well, first of all thanks to everyone who has continued to review and show me support until now. Now, as you know, this is a Harem, Strong but not godlike, bloodline,incest Naruto fic. The harem is massive which you’ve probably read in Ch-3 but I’m gonna specify the final Harem here- Kushina, Mikoto, Mei, Fem. Kyuubi, Konan, Samui, Yugito, Tayuya, Kin, Hinata, Guren, Temari, Kurenai, Anko, Yugao, Hana, Ino and Kiyohime.
Also, I just wanted to specify that I’ve changed my mind about increasing the power of the enemies as stated earlier, as they already are too strong. So they will be powerful as shown in the manga with some changes here and there.
So here’s the tabular form for Naruto’s current skills which will be updated as the story progresses:
Taijutsu: Low-Mid Jounin
Ninjutsu: High Jounin
Genjutsu: Low Chunin
Bloodline: Rinnegan (Level 2-Abilities stated below)
Fuinjutsu: Low Jounin (Kage level fuinjutsu signifies a seal master. Normal shinobi or elite jounins like Kakashi Hatake are normally at a low-mid chunin level in fuinjutsu. Kushina Uzumaki is at a high Kage level in fuinjutsu, Minato Namikaze was at a mid Kage level with Jiraiya being on low Kage level. Nevertheless, all these three are considered seal masters considering they were Kage level fuinjutsu specialists.)
Summoning Contracts: Elemental Dragons (Info stated below) and Toads Summoning Contract.
Chakra Reserves: High Kage level
Chakra Control: Low Chunin
Chakra Type: Light
Chakra Colour: White (sometimes glowing white)
Chakra Abilities: As of now, the only abilities we’ve discovered are its healing properties. So although, it reduces pain drastically but the healing rate is much slower for the one being healed as compared to medical ninjutsu. It’s nature is opposite to that of demonic chakra(youki), as it spreads a feeling of peaceful, calm and a serene aura, but strength it’s just as dense and potent as youki. However, in Juubi mode (stated below), the healing properties of Naruto's chakra are enhanced by a considerable margin.
Basic Elements: Wind, Water, Lightning and Earth
Sub-Elements or Secondary Elements (Only according to the scroll written by Mito Uzumaki): Ice, Storm(Different than the one Darui uses) and Wood.
Skills in Basic Elements: Naruto is proficient enough in the usage of Wind, Water and Lightning elements and can execute jutsus upto S-rank now. However, regarding his recently unlocked Earth element, his jutsu aresnal is limited to B-rank ones.
Skills in Sub-Elements: His recent ascension to level of the Rinnegan has granted him a much improved chakra control. Now he can execute Sub-Elemental jutsus without wasting much chakra and can perform upto two or three S-rank ones. But if these jutsus are used three or more times, it can lead to chakra exhaustion even with his large chakra reserves. His storm element is made up of wind and lightning natured chakra, extremely helpful in long as well as close range widespread damage, but uses a larger amount of chakra than required in ice element. But concerning the wood element, no progress in this has been shown so far as he hasn't even started training in this element yet.
Skills in Tertiary-Elements: So far, Naruto is only capable of using the crystal element. He's not much skilled in using this element considering the crystals need to be accurately and tightly packed at molecular levels and usually his crystals structures are much weaker than their actual strength (shown by Guren in manga). He has only been shown using this element for defensive purposes only, those one or two jutsus too were no more than B-rank ones- which even those exhausted him quickly due to the amount of control and chakra required in implementing Tertiary elements nature manipulation.
Due to many readers requesting info on some of the main concepts introduced in CoMSW so far, I've decided to do some work for my readers for once :D -
Rinnegan (Transmigration Eye)The scroll written by Mito Uzumaki (revealed in Ch 38) concerning the abilities of Rinnegan according to her is as follows-
Level 1: When Rinnegan is activated, the user is automatically on level one identified by one black ring around the black dot-like pupil. It’s abilities are- physical enhancement, increased chakra reserves, better chakra control, affinities for any three basic elements in addition to gravity element is granted, can see chakra like Byakugan though at a lower level and the user can sign multiple summoning contracts.
Level 2: When level two of Rinnegan is activated, two black rings (concentric circles) can be seen surrounding a black dot-like pupil. The abilities which come with second stage are- slight increase in chakra reserves, chakra control is improved drastically, one more basic element affinity is added to your arsenal, ninjutsu and taijutsu can be copied upto some extent except the bloodlines, fast movements can be seen and predicted which are not visible to naked eye, the user is not affected by genjutsu upto A-rank, and lastly chakra can be seen in more detail but still lesser than Byakugan.
Level 3: When level three of Rinnegan is activated, three black rings can be seen surrounding a black dot-like pupil. It's abilities include- improved chakra control so much that with enough practise, the user can do upto A-rank jutsus without any handseals, last of the six basic element's affinity is now unlocked and also the user can see chakra points like Byakugan.
Level-4-Kageyoshi Rinnegan (Vibrant Display of the Ocular Eye): This is the highest known level that any Rinnegan user can attain and only Rikudou sennin is said to have accomplished this level. In this upgrade, the appearance of Rinnegan changes noticeably. There are four rings but glowing yellow in colour surrounding a dark blue dot-like pupil. Due to this glowing ability of Rinnegan in fourth stage, you can say that the user is granted night vision upto some extent. It's other abilities are- Chibaku Tensei (Bursting Earth Celestial Body), Izanagi( Forefather God) and the user can revive a dead person by using some of his life force. Although, there might be some other abilities since not much is known about the fourth stage.
However, there are some abilities not mentioned in the scroll which Naruto Uzumaki discovered by himself-
Interlinked Vision: Like the ability shown by Nagato Uzumaki’s six paths of pain in the manga, Naruto Uzumaki’s shadow clones also possess the ability to share their visions with each other as well as the original. However, this ability (first discovered in Ch 29) came as a result of activating the level two as Naruto Uzumaki hadn’t noticed this when using the shadow clones before.
Juubi Mode (Ten Tailed Beast Mode): This mode has been rarely seen and it seems Naruto Uzumaki has no control over this mode whatsoever. In this, Naruto’s while body starts to get glow white; the glow in fact is so bright that anyone near him would have to shield his/her eyes. Another astonishing change that Hana Inuzuka noticed in this mode is that his Rinnegan now has three tomoes in each of the two rings (level two) just like that of Juubi’s eyes. We saw the first glimpse of this mode just after Naruto had activated Rinnegan’s second level. In this mode, the only effect we have discovered so far is that the healing and regenerative powers of his white chakra are given a sky rocketing boost. Such are the healing effects of his chakra that Naruto Uzumaki was able to heal a hole in Anko Mitarashi’s stomach caused by Sasuke Uchiha’s katana (in Ch 27). Naruto was also able to bring back Hiruzen Sarutobi from the verge of death (in Ch 31) by using this mode. That time however, it seemed as if he had somewhat used this mode on will- deeply concentrating in his adrenaline pumping situation as he had desperately tried to save his grandfather-like figure. All in all, this mode has been used by Naruto in extreme situations so far and has only been seen twice in the fic. It is still unknown if the Juubi mode came with the second level of the Rinnegan or if it was because of Naruto Uzumaki’s emotions at those times during the Invasion Arc.
Toyotama Byakugan (Luminous Pearl White Eye): This is an ascended level of the primitive Byakugan used by the members of the Hyuga clan and Ao of Kirigakure no Sato. It was activated by Hinata Hyuga during the preliminaries of the Chunin exams while fighting against Kankurou and Abumi Zaku when she was about to get hit my Zaku’s ultimate technique- Zankyokukuuha (Extreme Decapitating Air Waves).
Conditions for Activation:Toyotama Byakugan, as named by Hinata Hyuga herself, is something that no one thought to have even existed before it was activated. Since the Hyuga Clan was formed, according to Hiruzen Sarutobi and Hiashi Hyuga- no one has ever been able to achieve this level. So, no one is sure as to how exactly a Byakugan can be upgraded. However, when Hinata Hyuga achieved this upgrade, there were several things she was experiencing that most probably were responsible for this- seeing death in your face, high emotional tension and heat of the battle. Still, these conditions must have been faced by other Hyuga members in the past too, and yet no one was able to ascend their Byakugan- so no one is yet sure how she achieved this until yet.
Appearance:The Toyotama Byakugan, while maintaining the base lavender shade of the primitive Byakugan- has several noticeable differences as seen by Naruto and others during the preliminaries. The sclera is lavender in color, but progressing towards the pupil- it fades to sky blue color. Surrounding the sky blue pupil are standard dark pink flower petals (only one petal is present when the ascended Byakugan is first achieved). Another marking difference is that the bulging veins on the temples of a Byakugan user are no longer visible in case of Toyotama Byakugan. ‘Luminous Pearl’, literal English for ‘Toyotama’, was named by Hinata Hyuga probably due to the lavender-sky blue sclera reflecting off light somewhat like a pearl. Unlike Sharingan, which somewhat intimidates the opponents, Toyotama Byakugan, as stated by those who have seen it so far (even Tayuya) to be one of the most beautiful things they had seen in the shinobi world; thus most people find it very attractive.
Abilities and Effects:Upon the activation of Toyotama Byakugan, the user’s vision is improved tremendously- far better than the Byakugan with even the most miniscule details visible and easily distinguishable. The range of the vision is enhanced with the user now being able to see the full three-sixty degree angle without any blind spots. Also, the user is now able to see more chakra points as compared to the 361 chakra points visible to the primitive Byakugan- termed as the ‘latent’ chakra points by Neji Hyuga and Kakashi Hatake. This was seen when Hinata Hyuga closed a chakra point (which Neji could not see with his Byakugan) with a finger strike on the back of Zaku Abumi’s neck during the preliminaries, rendering him unconscious- something which not even the experts of gentle fist are capable of. Also, the speed and agility of the user is shown to increase by a considerable factor. Due to this, Hinata Hyuga’s gentle fist improved by leaps and bounds abruptly as she quickly got rid of Zaku Abumi and Kankurou during the preliminaries thereafter. One physical change that Hinata Hyuga underwent was the length of her hair increasing to reach her lower back. Another effect could be termed as more on a person’s nature- it was basically seen when the aura around Hinata Hyuga changed suddenly after the activation of the ascended Byakugan during the preliminaries. She had suddenly begun to enjoy her fight (something which was completely opposite as compared to before the activation), had somewhat became bolder with her lesser stuttering being the testament for this. Another example can be cited from when Hinata Hyuga displayed anger towards Kankurou due to him mocking her as the ‘weak heir’- completely opposed to her usual personality. However, this could also be because of Naruto Uzumaki’s influence due to him confronting her just before the preliminaries (in Ch 8). As stated by Hinata Hyuga in Ch 38, this ascended doujutsu is also capable of seeing through most visibility barriers. Also, using Toyotama Byakugan for sustained periods of time can lead to chakra exhaustion.
So far, two techniques special to only Toyotama Byakugan have been shown by Hinata Hyuga (both in Ch 37)-
Uzume (Goddess of Mirth and Revelry):In this technique, the user goes through a short number of required handseals- ending the set on the ‘ram’ one. Afterwards, the user slams one of his/her’s hand on the ground while maintaining the ‘half-ram’ seal with the other hand. The result is a large glowing circle (only the circumference being blue in color) forming around the user with his/her hand as the center. Afterwards, glowing pink petals start to originate from the user’s hand, expanding outwards until they touch the circumference of the circle (the size of the circle depends on the strength of the user’s Toyotama Byakugan). The number of petals depends on the level the user’s Toyotama Byakugan is currently on. When Hinata Hyuga used this technique (in Ch 37), two petals emerged signifying her Toyotama Byakugan being on level two. The effects are that the user’s vision is given a mind boggling boost for a short amount of time- the range, sharpness, perception….everything is flared up. An example of this could be cited from when Hinata Hyuga activated this technique, she could easily scan the whole of Tanzaku Town while just standing on its outskirts. Another disadvantage of this technique is that the glowing colors on the ground can easily give away stealth during missions.
Shinto (Way of the Penitent God):This was another technique demonstrated by Hinata Hyuga (in Ch 37) which she used in conjunction with Uzume. This mainly involves sharing the user’s vision with another person. To use this, the person (with whom the vision has to be shared) has to go through these handseals- Ox, Dog, Dragon, Tiger and Ram. Then, keeping the ‘half-ram’ seal in position with one hand, the person touches the user with his other hand- preferably putting the hand on the user’s shoulder. The persons with whom the vision is being shared can be multiple and the number solely depends on the skill of the user. For instance, Hinata Hyuga was able to share her vision with Jiraiya and Tayuya at once. Once the technique is activated, the pink petals of the Toyotama Byakugan start to revolve around the small sky blue pupil while the veins on the user’s temple again bulge out just like in the case of primitive Byakugan. The person touching the user can now see everything as if he/she has a Toyotama Byakugan himself/herself for a short period of time- also gaining the complete angle vision around them. For the person to control this newly acquired vision- pushing chakra into his/her eyes ‘zooms-in’ his vision (depends on the amount of chakra being applied) and pulling chakra off his/her eyes would ‘zooms-out’ his vision.
Using Shinto in conjunction with Uzume is extremely difficult and takes a long time to master- the reason as to why Hinata Hyuga had become exhausted quickly after using these techniques in collaboration. Also, these techniques can be used independently and in no way do their functionality depends on each other.
Uzushio Curse Seal: This seal, can be called as a descendent of Orochimaru’s curse seal derived from Jugo. This was basically developed by Ayumi (Fem. Kyuubi) when Orochimaru had given Naruto the heaven’s curse seal. After completely destroying and wiping out Orochimaru’s influence from the seal on Naruto’s neck- she modified it to create her own version called the ‘Jinchuriki’s Mark’ or simply- as termed by Naruto and Kushina—the Uzushio Curse Seal. Its appearance is just like the swirling mark of the Uzumaki clan; only red in color. Here the seal can be used to store youki (demonic chakra) and can be given to others without any side effects- which requires for Naruto Uzumaki to bite the person (preferably on the neck) while being in demonic cloak mode (transferring chakra through his fangs). Another strength of this seal is being able to overcome Orochimaru’s version of curse seal- an example of this could be seen from when Naruto got rid of the curse seal on Anko Mitarashi’s neck by giving the Uzushio curse seal during the one month timeskip. The person gaining the Uzushio Curse Mark can also use the stored up youki reserves (assuming the person is a jinchuriki or was a former one) just like Naruto Uzumaki, can telepathically contact the others (possessing the Uzushio Curse Seal) in a circular area of radius 2 miles and lastly , they can also feel each other’s life force and position (upon activating the seal). So to activate the seal, the user has to tap the mark on his/her neck with chakra laced index and middle finger before speaking ‘Kai’ (Release). To deactivate it, the user has to do the same again before verbalizing ‘Fuin’ (Seal).
Terumi Clan’s Mating Seal: This seal, as told by Mei Terumi, was initially developed by the Uzumaki Clan for the Terumi Clan to help them in finding their life partners. Here, Mei Terumi went through several unknown hand seals before her right hand was covered orange-yellowish flames. To complete the ritual, she extended her hand towards Naruto Uzumaki to shake- stating that it would solidify their friendship when in real it was a test to see if Naruto Uzumaki would be the correct life partner for her or not. According to her, if Naruto Uzumaki was her true life partner- then the flames wouldn’t affect him or else they will simply act as a harmless barrier; preventing him from shaking her hand. Once he had passed the test, something unexpected had happened as the orange-yellowish had completely covered their forms. The end result was a seal on their right hand each. This event had shocked both Mei Terumi and Naruto Uzumaki as this had never happened before. One effect of this seal noticed so far is that whenever Naruto Uzumaki was in a life threatening situation, the seal on Mei Terumi’s hand would glow- as if telling her that her mate is in danger. This has happened twice in the fic- first when Naruto was on the verge of death during the invasions just before the second level of his Rinnegan; at that time the seal on Mei’s hand had glowed as she fought in the Four-Corner Sealing Barrier. The second instance was when Naruto Uzumaki was badly injured after Itachi had stabbed him with a kunai coated by Sasori’s poison, again the seal on Mei Terumi’s hand had glowed as she travelled from Konoha to Kiri with Ao and Choujiro. So far, these are the only effects revealed in the fic.
Elemental Dragon Summoning Contract: This contract, as told by Kushina, was possessed by the Uzumaki Clan and as such, can only be used by an Uzumaki or it can be said in reverse that the elemental dragons only allow an Uzumaki to summon them. Based on the nature of chakra the user pours into the summoning technique, different dragons corresponding to that chakra nature are summoned. Therefore if a user pours fire chakra into the summoning technique, a fire dragon would be summoned. However, there are also those dragons who get summoned if the user pours his/her normal chakra. These dragons are the non-elemental ones which are mainly used for scouting and are easier to summon. There are three levels in this summoning contract just like in the case of a shinobi.
Rookie Claws:Dragons being on the first level are called the ‘Rookie Claws’. They have one claw on each of their four limbs, possessing a single basic element as their major affinity and hence can be divided into five types- Earth Dragons, Fire Dragons, Water Dragons, Lightning Dragons and Wind Dragons. The size of these dragons is equivalent to an adult human. Here are some of the Rookie Claw dragons introduced so far-
-- Mizuchi- ‘A river dragon and considered as a water deity in Japanese Mythology’— Mizuchi is a wind type Rookie Claw dragon and also the commander of the Imperial Guards of Watatsumi (boss summon for water dragons). He is a red dragon having a typical dragon body with the only difference of one claw on each feet and hands, pale yellow scales, a glowing light blue insignia of wind on both his wings while on the back he has a black Uzumaki's swirling sign, his size almost double to that of an average human- another exception among the elemental dragons.
-- Kiyohime (Purity Princess)- ‘In Japanese mythology, she was initially a tea house waitress who fell in love with a young Buddhist priest. After he spurned her, she studied magic, transformed into a dragon and then killed him’ (lol)—Kiyohime is a non-elemental feminine dragon who is pinkish-red in colour, her usual bright shining eyes are a beautiful shade of green with black slits while her scales are oceanic blue in color. There’s a red scarf wrapped around her neck on which is the stitched Uzumaki swirling sign. Overall, Kiyohime looks very attractive to even the humans and is considered the cutest female dragon among the Rookie Claws. She has a caring personality seems to have a ‘crush’ on Naruto Uzumaki and deeply admires him- often openly expressing her concern for his health.
In the Elemental Dragons clan, non-elemental dragons are usually looked down upon and are unable to ascend from the first level- and hence are bound to forever being stuck as a Rookie Claw. However, there is a myth that a non elemental dragon named Kinryu (Golden Dragon) had ascended to the third level- the Fifth Blaze, which had happened during the Rikudou Sennin’s era. This is only treated as some sort of fairy tale in the Elemental Dragons clan. Kiyohime too, like the other non-elemental dragons was looked down upon and this had put the seeds for her dream of one day becoming the Fifth Blaze. Other dragons constantly made fun of her considering her dream while she just ignored them and continued on, training herself every day. Finally she became strong enough to be chosen as the only non-elemental dragon for serving Watatsumi by being one of his imperial guards. Still, she continues to pursue her dream and this is the main reason she admires Naruto Uzumaki.
--Koryu (Flood Dragon)- ‘Name of a Japan’s midget submarine’— Koryu is a fire dragon and is one of the Imperial guards of Watatsumi. His scaled skin is a light shade of brown in color, his scales typical pale yellow in color while his eyes are blood red with a thin black slit. Most of the time he’s serious and often gets into arguments with Kiyohime- who he considers as his sister and inwardly believes in her dream.
Tri Clapperclaw: The next level is the ‘Tri Clapperclaw’ in which the ascended dragon has three claws on each of his/her four limbs and may gain a new basic element or retain his previous basic element and the dragon generally becomes twice as large as before. Also, if a dragon gains a new element in this second level, then he/she wouldn’t be able to use the previous basic element they could when they were on level one. For the ones retaining the same element, their affinity of said element gets stronger with their attacks related to that element getting stronger. Here are some of the Tri Clapperclaw dragons introduced thus far-
-- Ri Riu- ‘Ri Riu is recognized as one of the main Japanese dragon kings, having a wonderful sight who can see more than 100 miles’—This is Kushina’s personal summon first introduced in Ch 22, and is a Tri Clapperclaw water dragon. Coming to Ri Riu’s appearance, he is a human sized blue dragon (an exception considering Tri Clapperclaw dragons are usually twice the size of an average human), it's eyes light red with black slits, two mass tendrils on his nose, his teeth razor sharp, three claws in each hand, two large scaled wings a tail. According to Ayumi, Ri Riu is a special dragon among his species having several unique abilities- which she stated to be able to read other’s mind by just staring into their eyes. However, it is unknown as to if he was a water dragon when he was on the Rookie Claw level or if he possessed some other element.
--Tianlong (Heavenly Dragon)- ‘A Chinese celestial dragon that guards heavenly palaces and also pulls divine chariots’—Tianlong is a lightning dragon and was introduced in Ch 25 when Naruto Uzumaki summoned it during the Invasion Arc. It is a giant blue dragon, almost equalling Shukaku’s hieght, two large wings with large glowing yellow bolts imprinted on each of them, three sharp claws on each four limbs, it's teeth razor sharp with two fangs protruding out of his mouth, pale yellow scales on the frontal part of his body while his eyes are a light shade of yellow with black slits in each of them along with several battle scars on his body. His personality is shown to be pretty laid back and carefree- often tending to joke and get on Naruto Uzumaki’s nerves. Regarding its large size comparable to the Fifth Blaze dragons and the tailed beasts- Tianlong is also an exception just like Ri Riu.
Fifth Blaze: Finally, the third and the last level, in which number of claws on each limb of a dragon increases to five- the ‘Fifth Blaze’. The size of the dragon increases to that of boss summons or tailed beasts and may even surpass them. In this , the elements which the double ascended dragon possessed when he was the Rookie Claw and the Tri Clapperclaw add up to create a new secondary element. Example- suppose a wind dragon (Rookie Claw) ascends to the Tri Clapperclaw and becomes a water dragon, then when he/she becomes the Fifth Blaze—he/she becomes an ice dragon. Therefore the dragons can further be divided into- the ‘Pure Fifth Blaze’ and the ‘Mixed Fifth Blaze’. The dragons belonging to the Pure Fifth Blaze are those who had retained their basic elements since they were the Rookie Claw and the Tri Clapperclaw- and thus keep the same element when they become the Fifth Blaze. Example- suppose an Earth dragon (Rookie Claw) ascends to the Tri Clapperclaw to remain as an Earth dragon, then when he becomes the Fifth Blaze—he will become a Pure Earth dragon. The advantage of this is that the dragon gains godly affinity for that specific basic element and his/her attacks related to that basic element are given a massive boost. Now coming to the Mixed Fifth Blaze- here as the name signifies and as said above, two elements (one when the dragon was a Rookie Claw and the other when the dragon was the Tri Clapperclaw) combine to form a new elemental dragon—called the Mixed Fifth Blaze. Now coming to one of the main abilities of the Fifth Blaze dragons; these dragons gain a human form when they become the Fifth Blaze. Therefore, they can change their forms at will. In their human forms, these dragons are much faster and can fight in areas where their size may be a hindrance. However, human form of any Fifth Blaze dragon hasn’t been shown yet in the fic. Some of the Fifth Blaze (Pure and Mix both) dragons introduced so far are as follows-
--Watatsumi (Sea God)-‘Known as the ruler of seas and oceans and renowned for having a human form in Japanese mythology’—The boss summon for the water dragons, hence Watatsumi is a Pure Fifth Blaze. He too is not officially introduced in the fic but was mentioned by Kushina Uzumaki in Ch 25.
-- Sui Riu- ‘Sui Riu is also one of the main recognized dragon kings in Japan mythology. It is a rain dragon, which when in pain causes red rain, covered by its blood’—The right hand ‘man’ of Watatsumi- Sui Riu is a major summon among the water dragons, and hence is a Pure Fifth Blaze. Though not officially introduced, Ri Riu did mention Sui Riu in Ch 22. As such, not much is known about the abilities or the appearance of Sui Riu.
-- Qinglong (Azure Dragon)- ‘A mythological creature in Chinese constellations and is also related to the East of the Chinese Four Symbols’—Qinglong is an ice dragon, and hence a Mixed Fifth Blaze. He too isn’t officially introduced yet thought Naruto Uzumaki did summon him during the one month timeskip and was mentioned in Ch 22. Not much has yet been revealed about Qinglong though.
--Dilong (Earth Dragon)- ‘Controller of rivers and seas’—As the literal meaning obviously suggests, Dilong is an earth dragon and also a Fifth Blaze. He is a huge brown serpentine dragon (like Shenlong in Dragonball series), possible taller than Gamabunta, his eyes are blood red with no pupils whatsoever, five claws on each of its limb with two typical large wings. His large stature and booming voice itself is pretty intimidating. One ability of Dilong which has been shown so far is he can sense seismic activity by just keeping his feet in contact with the ground. Another special ability of his is that once inside him, a person (except the summoner)cannot mould his chakra- though Dilong can allow the person to mould his charka for some period of time.
There was also this one special summoning which Naruto Uzumaki did during the Invasion Arc-
Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Watatsumi no Kōteikeibi-in (Summoning Technique: Imperial Guards of the Sea God)This is a mass summoning technique used by Naruto Uzumaki during the Invasion Arc in Ch 25. Basically this technique needs considerable amounts of chakra and summons a group of thirty Rookie Claw dragons. According to Kushina, the dragons in this group lead by Mizuchi, are the imperial guards of boss summon of the water dragons- Watatsumi. Also, it is yet unknown if each boss dragon has guards for his/her protection. This group includes elemental as well as non-elemental dragons. The known dragons in this group aside from Mizuchi are- Kiyohime and Koryu. These dragons treat each other as siblings while their attacks are usually well coordinated and can be really destructive. The dress code for this group- however, can be termed as unusual and funny. Though if they find you making fun of them or laughing at them- only the summoner can save you!
The Burdened Deathcake(In progress): Just to inform my readers that an info section (Name of Zanpakutou's, OC's, Teuchi's inventions, the Spirit Society and some other important things) for this fic too will be put up soon. As the fic progresses, many concepts are going to add up and may confuse you readers just like in the case of CoMSW. ALthough, there are many concepts already introduced into the fic, still I'm going to wait for some more to add up before I put up the info section for this too.
The Jinchuriki's Note (In progress): Ok...yeah, for this fic too, an info section has to be there, though it will be a short one. It will mainly include the rules I created for this fic, some other stuff and finally the concept that is the 'Rebirth Note' (opposite of Death Note).
Future Projects (Don't worry, I'll definitely write this idea)
So in my fourth epic fic (which would contain incest, so don’t bother if you don’t like it), which I would be soon publishing, will mainly be one of those dimensional travel fics. And now…..don’t reach to conclusions too soon, that is if you’re tired of this concept. In this, the fic begins with Naruto first dying due to Orochimaru’s Kusanagi impaling him because of him trying to protect Tsunade (in the Tsunade Retrieval Arc, after he slams Kabuto with the Rasengan) and hence meets the beautiful shinigami(female) and you know the drill afterwards I guess…..she sends him to a different dimension, a dimension she believes would be much better for Naruto.
Now, the conditions before Naruto jumps to another dimension is that he would NOT retain any memories of his past life in the beginning….but as he grows older, he would slowly regain them. Meaning, in the other dimension, he would start by taking birth (i.e. right from the start, and not in between where he’s six or eight years old).
The alternate dimension would be quite different (AU), where first of all, Minato and Kushina would be of the three sanin’s age……therefore, Minato will be quite the best friend of Jiraiya, the same with Kushina and Tsunade. The rest is same in that world, meaning Naruto will take birth in Kakashi’s generation with him already having an elder sister….and also, during the birthnight of Naruto, it’s the same deal of Kyuubi(Female) attacking due to Madara interfering and hence sealing the bijuu into Naruto, leading to the death of Minato(who is NOT the fourth hokage at that time, rather Hiruzen would be the third hokage at that time…..and hence the guy would be in his prime, but only Minato could seal the Kyuubi because of only he knew the Shiki Fugin besides Kushina……thus, Minato never became the fourth hokage. Also, at the same night, Kushina gives birth to Naruto’s twin sister (I think you know where I’m going with this _).
Kushina and his elder sister would be extremely overprotective of him, but they would also train him to the ground so that he can protect himself from the abusive villagers…..and his twin sister would be fond of him, would admire him from the beginning and her admiration would turn into a crush and later into romantic interest for her. Naruto’s elder sister (name not decided yet), would be of six years old when he and his twin sister takes birth. So the blond jinchuriki and his twin sister would attend the academy with other guys like Kakashi, Gai (oh the possibilities for humor!), Anko, Hana, Kurenai, Yugao, Itachi, Obito, Rin, Asuma, Hayate, Genma and others and hence, one thing will connect to other from there.
Note that Naruto would be close to Orochimaru in this fic……who too would be fond of Naruto, but….well you know, there would be many twists and turns, some of which you guys can already guess I think. The enemies here would be the same but they might appear earlier than in manga’s timeline or they might appear at the same time as that in manga. But you should already know that just from the scene that I’ve set up, there are like tons of things which can happen, so much room for action, humour as well as romance. Assuming that you’ve already read my Chronicles of My Shinobi’s Way and that you liked it…..you should know that you’ll like this fic too. Naruto here would be strong, but not godlike…..just like in my CoMSW and would actually train his ass off to become strong, and for that you can rely on his sweet Mom and his cute elder sister. His twin would be strong too though.
The pairings in this would be (most probably): NarutoxHarem- Kushina, Elder Sister, Twin Sister, Tsunade (young; same age as that of Kushina), Fem. Kyuubi, Fem. Shinigami, Anko, Yugao, Kurenai, Hana, Rin, Mikoto and Mei. Sorry if the harem is still long (but atleast it’s five girls short than before), but what I can I say….Naruto deserves to be smothered in love after everything he would endure in the fic. Also, Naruto in this fic would have Sharingan (oops, should have told that a bit early ne? _), I don’t know but I like bloodlines, though not all of my fics in the future will be bloodline ones. So I just want your suggestions and opinions on what do you think of this idea…..even if some of you don’t like this, or plainly confused by this, but still I’m definitely going to write this one and I know this WILL be epic just like my CoMSW. And what’s more, the ones who don’t like Sakura, Sasuke, Ino, Hinata, and other young ones can rejoice! Though the rookie would appear MUCH later in the fic….but they wouldn’t play much part in this one. Do PM me about if you like the idea or if you think something’s lacking here and other things you know. It would be good to have my readers opinions on this before I start this one. Your ideas and suggestions would be greatly appreciated. _
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