
Author has written 1 story for Naruto.
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Rant on Naruto series.
-- Naruto --
He is too idiot, imbecile, retarded. moron, extremely naive, above all GULLIBLE. it's tolerable when he is still rookie genin ( 13 years old with LACK of guidance ). but when Shippuden season start, he is still the same with slight change that is height. 3 year under the guidance of jiraiya, the one who knows the ways of the world like the back of his hand, power rivaled only by selected few, and none change at all ( no stance in taijutsu, no new ninjutsu, genjutsu at academy level ( magen : narakumi, showing bloody sasuke the same 13 years old sasuke. he is lower than retarded if fall for that), fuinjutsu and kenjutsu is absolutely NONE). so the shippuden Naruto is a total failure, either he is slacking, jiraiya gone peeping, or both at the same time, I DON'T CARE (it's kishimoto-3). "naruto is the underdog", the motto is good, wins through hardship and failure, prevail where the others fall. But you can't expect 1,5 inch cockroach win against 50cm adult cats. naruto is so weak, so underskilled, with children brain capacity, and left too much to be desired.
-- Sasuke --
He is skilled, none can argue with that, and more skilled when shippuden season start. He is cool, it runs in the family, and he is lucky because he has two teammate that will do anything to ensure that he still alive (the blond idiot and pink hair cheerleader). But when madara comes to his life, he becomes a puppet. Act, talk according to the puppeteer desire. he becomes a side character that not worth mentioning, but still view as some sort a main character.
-- Sharingan --
Gameshark, cheat codes, back doors, you name it you got it. you can do anything, even CHEATING DEATH itself . JUST STARE. the way I see doujoutsus until now, byakugan and Rinnegan is just an aiding tool, just having them won't make you powerful if you don't know how to utilize them ( jyuuken of hyuuga clan and all elemental affinity of rinnegan ) you need to master them by training, starting from zero. but none of that matter to sharingan, the second you activate it, you got a superpowers. Predict the enemy movement, copy any jutsu, cast illusion (JUST STARE),. When mangekyo comes to play, you instantly got UNBREAKABLE deadly illusion, INDISTINGUISHABLE black flame, UNDEFEATABLE mystical warrior. and eternal mangekyo provide you with near immortality ability. ALL YOU HAVE TO DO IS JUST STARE.
-- Madara --
In my opinion, this guy is SEPHIROTH of naruto series. GODLIKE, one word can describe him. So, what shinobi alliance will do against this single mighty enemy, making him out of chakra by overwhelming him, well that plausible but remember he has enough white zetsu and undead shinobi at his disposal (and more on the making). Well there is more than one way to defeat him, after all nobody is invinsible.
But what I don't want to happen is, by some twist of plot, madara is soooo invinsible he can not be touched by anything both material and non-material but because bijuu chakra is poisonous by nature and also youki (demonic chakra), just sliver amount of bijuu chakra is enough to kill madara instantly. IT'S TOTALLY SUCK.
And the other one(this is my favorite);
" naruto face off against madara with nine-tails chakra mode, with his sub-par taijutsu because frog kata is not effective when he is not in sage mode, he armed himself with bijuu rasengan, madara in a rare momentary lapse because he never thought naruto would stupid enough to come alone, naruto hit him with bijuu rasengan full powered, SCORE, MADARA DEATH end of naruto story". suck SUCK SUUUUUUUUCK.
Anyway, Seeing manga chapter 560, Where did he pulls that damn meteor? out of his ass?
So, Why did I rants on naruto series especially SHIPPUDEN season? simple, the SHIPPUDEN story idea is half bake. no more, no less.
As far as I'm concern, the legendary "Kage bunshin training method" is BIG LOAD OF BULLSHIT.
1). Memory backlash will make your blood vessels burst cause of nerve working overdrive. an easiest example will be ourselves, just read a book with mild conflict, conspiration theory, where the characters not dandy looking and happy all the way. and read it all day straight. I guarantee you will have a headache, now multiply that headache by any numbers of kagebunshin and Congratulations you meet your creator because of memory overloads.
2). Why is only naruto that we see able to use "kagebunshin training method". surely it's not because he is the only have enough chakra to use kagebunshin, we see at least ebisu and kakashi able to use the same technique despite lower amount of clone quantity. So, it seems the conclusion had been reached, that many of us already knows, and that is, kishimoto-san the creator of naruto series only use the "Kage bunshin training method" excuse as a way for naruto to gain powerfull technique quickly (with his brain capacity it's already miracle itself he is able to learn rasengan, and don't start talking about tech that use handseals ). Surely tennis ball and basket ball sized rasengan wont do anything against any member of akatsuki. I know that, we all know that.
But of course, the aim of fanfics is WE WRITE WHAT WE WANT (don't forget the site rules). so if the story having naruto abuse kagebunshin by having 1000+ each day to train, as long as it's good enough to read, then I will read the said fics.
In the end, fictions is a place where LOGIC and PHYSICS LAWS doesn't matter. the place where you can stretch you imagination to the fullest. And for ME, a place where I can relax, free of stress, forgetting the the problems in my life for a while.
CHALLENGE.
Background Story :
Naruto is death, killed by konoha villagers itself. because of four way interference during kyuubi sealing, there must be some one to takes naruto place, it falls to minato because he is the only mortal left among the four who had not move on to the afterlife ( pure world ). So it begins, minato new life as naruto uzumaki, his son in his son body. the horrors, trials, discriminations, and betrayals his son will encounter, minato knows nothing at all, because all the shinigami inform him is, his son is death. Minato purely believe his son was hailed as a hero, savior. He believes his sensei will be there to take care of his son for he is his son godfather. He believes in his village, konoha citizen to treat his son like a hero, for that is his dying wish. So when he hears his son is death he believe it was his enemies that kill his son. So what will happen when he knows who's responsible for his son's death? How's his son's was treated? Knows the nature of of his own villagers who he believe during his life as minato namikaze?
the rules :
1. The fate of kyuubi is up to you.
2. The pairing is up to you, AS LONG AS IT'S NOT YAOI, though I prefer older women (NOT married women like tsume or god-forbid Tsunade) IN konoha or girls outside konoha (temari, Samui, even mei terumi the fifth mizukage), depending on route you'll take. Because all girls of naruto generation except tenten is "FAN-GIRL" . Embarrassment for kunoichi everywhere.
3. The route is fairly simple, 2(two). Stays in konoha, earn recognition, kind hearted and full of forgiveness to the point even saint look likes a sinner. Basically the same as canon minus idiocy, naivety, and lacks of abilities. Or, a heart full of vengeance, wanting to end the shinobi world and it's start from konoha.
4. You may twist the timeline a little, like graduation age, naruto's age, or chunin exam which maybe not held in konoha, or someone must be genin at least a year before entering chunin exam.
5. Naruto or rather minato in naruto body can have a bloodline or not is up to you, though I prefer if he have a bloodline it will be like his mother, Chakra chains, able to restraint bijuu's. and of course being an uzumaki and jinchuriki means extraordinary chakra reserve, uzumaki longevity.
6. There will be no rasengan and hiraishin, basically everything that makes minato a legend, at least until jiraiya or maybe kakashi teach him rasengan, and he receive his inheritance.
7. characters bashing is up to you, and my favorites is sakura and sasuke bashing and others in power like hokage, council, or daimyo is in grey area, manipulative for their own end.
8. This is all of it for now, GOOD LUCK AND HAVE A NICE DAY.
CHALLENGE
background story:
Right after Naruto finish his training trip with jiraiya and arrive at village, he immediately submit his temporary retirement from ninja corps. He reason that there's nothing he got from his training because 90% of time waste for traveling, jiraiya research(peeping), brothel daily visit, and waiting for jiraiya to recover from hangover. 10% of remaining time consist of mastering kyuubi chakra which was banned after four tailed state almost kill jiraiya, occasional sparring then self training while jiraiya nowhere to be found.
1. It's up to you to which choice will naruto make. Stay as shinobi, or resign and pursue other life(which was unlikely but who knows).
2. the reason for why naruto can't train on his own(if he pick any tech elsewhere) is up to you.