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Joined 01-29-11, id: 2727094, Profile Updated: 09-24-13
Author has written 10 stories for Mentalist, and Hawaii Five-0.

The voices in my head may not be real, but they have some damned good ideas!

California native but don't know how to swim and have never been on a surfboard or called anybody 'Dude'. Lived in Hollywood for a while . . . interesting place but not for the tender of heart.

Favorite California moment: During rainstorms one year Malibu had some serious flooding and mudslides. Resident to television reporter: "Dude, I knew it was all over when I saw the hot tub go sailing out the window!"

I apologize in advance for my grammar and punctuation. By the time we got to that part in English class, I'd already wandered off to draw and write and plot to overthrow the government. Fortunately or not, none of those things really worked out for me. I write because I must . . . sadly, not because it contributes to my income.

My spelling isn't usually too bad but I'm a poor typist and even worse proof-reader. Punctuation is beyond me. I gave up on that a long time ago. All mistakes are mine - don't let them ruin your day.

Would love to hear any comments you'd care to make on my stories - good or bad. There's always room for improvement and, until I win the Pulitzer, I can't really afford to ignore any suggestions! If you've enabled pm's and haven't submitted your comments anonymously; I will always try to answer or acknowledge what you've taken the time to say.

Favorite Quote: Nothing is foolproof because fools are so ingenious

Thank you for reading.

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Deceivers by simkhalou reviews
Tag to Ki'ilua - Somehow they had made it back home. But no matter how hard Danny tried, they just couldn't go on pretending that everything was fine.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,048 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 2 - Published: 3/31 - Steve M., Danny W., Chin Ho K., Kono K. - Complete
All Clear by sym64 reviews
A split second can change your life forever.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 17 - Words: 69,702 - Reviews: 353 - Favs: 44 - Follows: 84 - Updated: 2/23 - Published: 11/4/2013 - Steve M., Danny W., Catherine R., Chin Ho K. - Complete
Classified by magikmarker reviews
Danny said nothing, just stood looking at the door his best friend had literally stormed out minutes before wondering what fresh hell was upon them. Episode tag and missing scenes for Olela Pa'a 3x20 cos I wanted to know what Danny made of it all...actually finished it!
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Family - Chapters: 8 - Words: 23,006 - Reviews: 161 - Favs: 52 - Follows: 54 - Updated: 9/16/2013 - Published: 7/7/2013 - Steve M., Danny W., Catherine R. - Complete
Lessons Learned by AriesTaurus reviews
He never saw it coming. Severe injuries, beware. More notes inside.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 777 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 2 - Published: 9/6/2013 - Danny W., Steve M. - Complete
One More Year by WofOZ reviews
Danny doesn't do unnecessary crazy things. He genuinely gets sick at the idea of putting himself in harms way and risking not being able to come back home to Grace. But one day a year, all bets are off. One day a year, Danny likes to just throw caution into the wind and simply live. THIS year, Danny is finally ready to let someone who can understand that, come along for the ride.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,855 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 5 - Published: 6/18/2013 - Danny W., Steve M. - Complete
Little Stars by Kourion reviews
It's a three week countdown to find a serial killer and his most recent victim: a psychologically damaged little girl with a remarkable likeness to Charlotte Jane. So of course, Lisbon's stressed and Jane's obsessed. Noncon/ Jisbon overtones/Hurt-comfort
Mentalist - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 35 - Words: 184,970 - Reviews: 428 - Favs: 144 - Follows: 205 - Updated: 2/26/2013 - Published: 10/6/2010 - Patrick J., Teresa L.
Aftermath by Jetb reviews
A short story that's been in my mind for a while. Spoilers for I Ka Wa Mamua.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,259 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 19 - Follows: 7 - Published: 2/7/2013 - Danny W., Steve M. - Complete
His Name is Ammo by WofOZ reviews
A rough week, a furry rodent and a best friend are all that Steve needs to remind himself he's still a human being. It's amazing what a pet can do for your sanity.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,646 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 24 - Follows: 3 - Published: 1/28/2013 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
A Fragile Balance by simkhalou reviews
What did it take for Steve to realize that he couldn't do the job right until he got some answers about who or what Shelburne really was? (set between episodes 2.19 and 2.20)
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Angst - Chapters: 10 - Words: 32,996 - Reviews: 70 - Favs: 18 - Follows: 38 - Updated: 11/14/2012 - Published: 10/28/2012 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
Rant a friend by sym64 reviews
Steve's thoughts on being a danger magnet. Tag to 3.03
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,856 - Reviews: 39 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 2 - Published: 10/10/2012 - Complete
Bolt Hole by artigiano reviews
When an old enemy surfaces and McGarrett flees, it's up to Danny to try to bring him back before his partner is gone forever.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 7 - Words: 28,689 - Reviews: 193 - Favs: 55 - Follows: 67 - Updated: 9/8/2012 - Published: 8/14/2012 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
Black Raven by praemonitus praemunitus reviews
A slight AU on what I thought could and should have happened after Steve rescued Joe from Adam Noshimuri.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 18 - Words: 41,122 - Reviews: 316 - Favs: 60 - Follows: 102 - Updated: 8/10/2012 - Published: 1/24/2012 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
Cross My Heart by Shakespeare's Lemonade reviews
This seemed too much to believe. As he felt his partner's pulse stop beating under his fingers and saw the blood on his wrists, he asked himself what went so wrong that he thought he had to do this. WARNING: rated M for suicide and graphic violence.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: M - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 17 - Words: 34,872 - Reviews: 125 - Favs: 32 - Follows: 56 - Updated: 7/25/2012 - Published: 1/9/2012 - Steve M., Danny W.
Never So Vulnerable by Gwalchmai reviews
He's not sure what hurts more, the rejection or the indifference towards the sacrifices that have been made, towards what he himself and his team had to go through because of Shelburne, because of secrets Joe's known about all this time. Danny-Steve centric episode tag for 2x13. Friendship, Comfort, Angst.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Angst/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,226 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 38 - Follows: 9 - Published: 7/2/2012 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
Lelepau by AriesTaurus reviews
Coda to 2X13. Joe... hasn't betrayed him. Not quite. Not yet. But he hasn't been truthful either and what's bugging him the most is that he knows Joe's lying to him, and Joe knows he's aware of it too.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,324 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/12/2012 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
Lost by montez reviews
How lost can a person get before it to late? Will they be able to reach out for help and will that help arrive in time? Warning-contains dark themes.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 10 - Words: 22,278 - Reviews: 140 - Favs: 44 - Follows: 54 - Updated: 4/3/2012 - Published: 3/18/2012 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
Out of the Depths by Kristen999 reviews
Steve's team vowed to bring him home, but escaping North Korea was just the first step in the journey. Coda to 2x10. Complete.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 3 - Words: 27,075 - Reviews: 42 - Favs: 73 - Follows: 4 - Published: 3/11/2012 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
E kala mai Forgive me by Elanthra reviews
Steve's first mission as a Navy Seal commander didn't go to plan. He might have to pay for that mistake... Season One. Steve Whump.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Crime - Chapters: 11 - Words: 76,996 - Reviews: 185 - Favs: 63 - Follows: 64 - Updated: 2/29/2012 - Published: 1/15/2012 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
Speeding Cars by simkhalou reviews
Missing scene from 2x16, I Helu Pu. Kono confronts Steve before he leaves.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,809 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 7 - Published: 2/18/2012 - Kono K., Steve M. - Complete
Stand By Me by Fifilla reviews
McGarrett doesn't realize that he needs help but Danny is there to provide it, whether Steve wants it or not. Takes place between 2x13 and 2x14, before the revelation of Shelburne.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,481 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 48 - Follows: 4 - Published: 1/31/2012 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
They said there'd be peace on Earth by Kylen reviews
Summary: It's the holiday season, and merry doesn't enter the conversation when Steve is called up to join a Naval Intelligence operation the week before Christmas. In a time of great conflict, there is peace – and vice versa.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 6 - Words: 14,586 - Reviews: 72 - Favs: 37 - Follows: 36 - Updated: 1/11/2012 - Published: 12/23/2011 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
Of Guilt and Responsibilities by praemonitus praemunitus reviews
"It's ... over," he managed, his voice strained and barely audible, "t-tell ... Danny... I'm... s-sorry..." Steve angst. Steve whumpage. Steve/Danny friendship non-slash . This is my first attempt at a Hawaii Five-0 story, so please be kind.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 18 - Words: 35,762 - Reviews: 510 - Favs: 202 - Follows: 164 - Updated: 11/14/2011 - Published: 5/13/2011 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
Dug Deep by Tari Roo reviews
Prompt fill for Hawaii 50 hc commentfic meme – kristen999's prompt. After the adrenaline rush is over, even will power can't keep Steve from crashing.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,895 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 44 - Follows: 4 - Published: 10/4/2011 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
When The Ocean Meets the Shore by Kristen999 reviews
Some cases are personal. Others become an obsession. The death of a friend leads Steve and the team on a collision course with his past, the collateral damage endangering them all.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 25,074 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 49 - Follows: 5 - Published: 9/18/2011 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
Danny Williams' Rules for Take Downs, Version 2 by Cokie316 reviews
Danny has an abundance of lists and rules. And isn't afraid to share them.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,177 - Reviews: 30 - Favs: 50 - Follows: 5 - Published: 9/1/2011 - Danny W., Steve M. - Complete
a Road lEss traveleD by 221b Baker Street reviews
In physics, there are things that are called Quantum Events, small, seemingly insignificant events that change things on a grand scale, and in theory, creating multiple universes or timelines as repercussions. This is one of those stories...
Mentalist - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 13 - Words: 45,185 - Reviews: 170 - Favs: 88 - Follows: 36 - Updated: 8/5/2011 - Published: 6/2/2011 - Complete
We All Bleed Red by Ridley C. James reviews
Tag to Episode 1.09. Danny and Steve deal with the fall out of Nick Taylor's betrayal.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: K - English - Angst/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,559 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 38 - Follows: 2 - Published: 7/3/2011 - Danny W., Steve M. - Complete
The Hairy Dolphin by Ridley C. James reviews
Tag for 1.16. Every guy needs a place to turn to when things go bad-enter The Hairy Dolphin. They also need a best friend to pull them the hell out of there before things get worse-enter Steve McGarrett, Super SEAL.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,757 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 44 - Follows: 2 - Published: 6/22/2011 - Danny W., Steve M. - Complete
Hekili Pao by Cokie316 reviews
The words 'back up' aren't even in his dictionary!
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 12 - Words: 22,937 - Reviews: 261 - Favs: 139 - Follows: 106 - Updated: 5/25/2011 - Published: 4/19/2011 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
Superhero by Indigo2831 reviews
Danny regards Steve McGarrett as a real life superhero. Turns out he might be one too, but at what price? Danger, angst and friendship abounds.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 4 - Words: 13,447 - Reviews: 75 - Favs: 117 - Follows: 79 - Updated: 5/16/2011 - Published: 4/12/2011 - Danny W., Steve M. - Complete
Trust People and They Will Be True to You by Kristen999 reviews
Danny's face goes white. "Oh my God. Look at you. With your Rambo paint and hardware from the latest issue of Guns and Ammo. You're in Super-Seal mode! Please don't tell me those clowns were right and that you're the strike-force?
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12,281 - Reviews: 54 - Favs: 174 - Follows: 10 - Published: 5/8/2011 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
After the Red Daze by IntoDarkness reviews
This is a follow up to Red Daze. I would suggest reading that first. Jane hijacked this story and I've no idea what he's up to, but he is really twisting the heartstrings of his CBI family. Warning Jane pain.
Mentalist - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 11 - Words: 10,151 - Reviews: 68 - Favs: 34 - Follows: 49 - Updated: 4/26/2011 - Published: 8/21/2010 - Patrick J.
Jack of Diamonds, Queen of Hearts by 221b Baker Street reviews
A series of short stories set in the early years of Patrick Jane and Angela Ruskin Jane , events and experiences all leading up to that fateful day. A continuation of Courting Fire, because so many asked. Dedicated to allanon9
Mentalist - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 14,995 - Reviews: 32 - Favs: 27 - Follows: 23 - Updated: 4/8/2011 - Published: 11/17/2010
Red Crazed Vase by melraemorgan reviews
Patrick Jane is in trouble,can he overcome it?
Mentalist - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 15 - Words: 19,066 - Reviews: 102 - Favs: 41 - Follows: 53 - Updated: 3/17/2011 - Published: 12/26/2009 - Patrick J.
The Truth About Cats and Dogs by 221b Baker Street reviews
A quiet evening with a bottle of Scotch, a little white dog, a television and the new chief of the CBI.
Mentalist - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,594 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 2 - Published: 3/16/2011 - Complete
Just an Old Fashioned Love Song by Tari Roo reviews
Danny took a CPR class when Gracie was born, just in case. Danny never once imagined that he'd have to do bastardised rescue breathing to keep 'I'm a Navy Seal, I can hold my breath for five hours' Steve McGarrett alive. Sick!Steve Worried!Danny
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 4 - Words: 11,807 - Reviews: 66 - Favs: 122 - Follows: 84 - Updated: 2/23/2011 - Published: 2/5/2011 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
Ho'ailona by Cokie316 reviews
Not everyone in Hawaii wants the Five-0 team on the island.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Mystery - Chapters: 12 - Words: 19,357 - Reviews: 93 - Favs: 111 - Follows: 41 - Updated: 1/30/2011 - Published: 1/28/2011 - Complete
Tyger, Tyger by 221b Baker Street reviews
Chicago, 1975. Just one theory about the very beginning, the powerful world of trauma and the fearful symmetry of life.
Mentalist - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,457 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 24 - Follows: 1 - Published: 11/19/2010 - Complete
Arsenic and Red Lace by 221b Baker Street reviews
Stomach flu epidemic at the CBI and murder at a Nursing Home in Rocklin, CA. Jane is getting sick and Lisbon is getting worried - could there by more than milk and sugar in the tea? A tribute to a classic play, dedicated to Alamo Girl!
Mentalist - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 9 - Words: 26,294 - Reviews: 151 - Favs: 104 - Follows: 52 - Updated: 11/16/2010 - Published: 10/20/2010
Courting Fire by 221b Baker Street reviews
One possible scenario of a rather important time in the life of young Patrick Jane. A one-off.
Mentalist - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,440 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 1 - Published: 10/14/2010 - Complete
Red Daze by IntoDarkness reviews
A distant figure lurched and stumbled, like a scene stolen from a zombie movie. Carlos recognized the man's profile and curly honey blond hair. Crap, all he needed was a Patrick Jane incident. Jane pain.
Mentalist - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 5 - Words: 3,901 - Reviews: 32 - Favs: 24 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 8/19/2010 - Published: 8/12/2010 - Patrick J. - Complete
Red Roan by castiello reviews
A fresh tragedy in Jane's life awakens ghosts of the past. Facing them means more pain, but also some redemption. Set in Season Two, between "Throwing Fire" and "Rose-Colored Glasses." Inspired by Chapter 15 of SpaceAnJL's wonderful "Scarlet Threads."
Mentalist - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,925 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 29 - Follows: 3 - Published: 6/20/2010 - Patrick J., Teresa L. - Complete
Scarlett Blade by CindyT63 reviews
This is an alternate ending to Season Two, Episode 2, The Scarlett Letter. Why did Jane say "No…" when Lisbon told him to chase after the janitor? What if he had a good reason? What if Lisbon doesn't figure it out until it's too late?
Mentalist - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Drama - Chapters: 9 - Words: 15,363 - Reviews: 69 - Favs: 82 - Follows: 25 - Updated: 5/25/2010 - Published: 5/21/2010 - Patrick J., Teresa L. - Complete
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The Man Who Would Not Break reviews
Chapter 11 now up. Steve is as determined to find trouble as Danny is determined to keep him out of it. To quote Hemingway: 'The world breaks everyone'. Steve is no exception.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 11 - Words: 29,540 - Reviews: 211 - Favs: 23 - Follows: 65 - Updated: 4/12 - Published: 3/8 - Steve M., Danny W.
Cujo III Reloaded - This Time It's Personal reviews
Last Chapter. Fistfights, shootings, drownings and, oh yeah, fish theft all contained herein.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Humor/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 40 - Words: 158,027 - Reviews: 724 - Favs: 29 - Follows: 81 - Updated: 2/19 - Published: 4/6/2013 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
Wet Work reviews
Two words, two friends, a world of regret. A conversation between Steve and Danny during one dark night.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Angst/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,322 - Reviews: 28 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 3 - Published: 7/23/2013 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
The Shallow Grave of Secret Longing reviews
A story of Steve's painful journey to escape memories that may rob him of his sanity and his ohana's struggle to find him before it's too late. Strong warnings for chapters 32 and 36.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 39 - Words: 134,933 - Reviews: 854 - Favs: 83 - Follows: 142 - Updated: 3/5/2013 - Published: 8/21/2012 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
Cujo II The Return of the Buzzsaw reviews
Cujo and his human have a lot in common - mostly the ability to find trouble or have it find them.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: T - English - Humor/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 24 - Words: 119,589 - Reviews: 325 - Favs: 43 - Follows: 79 - Updated: 7/27/2012 - Published: 2/1/2012 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
Blood Wind reviews
Blood, the 'Murder Winds', a full moon and a psychopath.
Mentalist - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 14 - Words: 51,582 - Reviews: 135 - Favs: 55 - Follows: 50 - Updated: 1/12/2012 - Published: 9/13/2011 - Patrick J., Teresa L. - Complete
Blood Music reviews
Going undercover in a gay dance club could be interesting. Will the guys survive it? Startling revelations of someone's past. Much angst.
Mentalist - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 24 - Words: 67,987 - Reviews: 248 - Favs: 52 - Follows: 52 - Updated: 9/6/2011 - Published: 4/19/2011 - Patrick J., Teresa L. - Complete
Small Comfort reviews
Sometimes the smallest things can make a difference to an injured man; especially, small things with teeth and an attitude.
Hawaii Five-0 - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 12 - Words: 33,707 - Reviews: 222 - Favs: 85 - Follows: 66 - Updated: 8/7/2011 - Published: 3/8/2011 - Steve M., Danny W. - Complete
Wallet reviews
Finding your family is a good thing even if you have to get shot to do it.
Mentalist - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 8 - Words: 16,679 - Reviews: 88 - Favs: 60 - Follows: 30 - Updated: 4/12/2011 - Published: 3/24/2011 - Patrick J., Teresa L. - Complete
That They Matter reviews
A quiet night and revelations of sometimes painful things in common.
Mentalist - Rated: T - English - Angst/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,352 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 9 - Published: 2/12/2011 - Patrick J. - Complete