BlueMercury13
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Joined 02-06-11, id: 2738246, Profile Updated: 01-20-14
Author has written 2 stories for Dragon Ball Z.

Hey, y'all, I'm BlueMercury13 (although, if you are reading this you probably already know that).

I don't really have much to say about myself. Actually, I don't have anything to say about myself.

Wait, yes I do...


Stuff I like (especially in a story).

Romance - I like romance stories (on the condition that they are well written). No, I don't like "OMG, I love you!" "No, I love you more!" type crap. I like realistic romance. I like romance where the relationship has it's ups and downs. I've never written a romance story before. I do have one coming up, but it's part of a series and I'm not to that part yet.

Action - As a guy, I love action. Lots and lots of butt-kicking is my thing. But, like romance stories, I like well-written action stories. I can't stand a story that's nothing but action. If the story's nothing but butt-kicking from line one, I'm probably not going to enjoy it. You need intermissions between the action. Even if it's only for a minute, it'll probably help. The only exceptions to that would be crack!fics.

Tech - As a Sci-fi nerd, I also love technology. Especially space ships. But, like I said before, it has to be well written. If the protagonists are losing and they suddenly make up some tech crap out of nowhere, with absolutely no prior knowledge of anything that even remotely resembles what they built, then I'll definitely hate it. I don't mind if they find some tech that's been left behind by someone else and figure it out in time to save their butts. As long as that plot isn't overused, I'll read it.

Comedy - I love comedy! Self-deprecating humor is usually my favorite. As long as the joke was made in good taste, I'll laugh. Even a walking cliche that was made into a joke can be funny, if done right. Jokes that are in bad taste (for example, racist jokes) will generally turn me off of a story.


Stuff I hate.

Bad spelling (and grammar) - Really?! Their are several programs out their that have spell-checker built in. If you use OpenOffice software or Microsoft Word, you should already know this. What? You don't? Okay. You see that little red squiggly line that appears under some words when you type? Yes, that one. That means you spelled it wrong. Got it? To check alternate spellings, just right-click on the word and a list will pop up. Choose the one you think fits best. Voilà, spelling fixed!

Mary-sues - I don't mind seeing original characters. They are often very well written. However, they can be overdone. When this happens, they are generally referred to as 'Mary-sues'. To know if yours qualifies, take a Mary-sue litmus test. A good one can be found here:


Other stuff.

Let's see. I'm definitely not normal. I do love action and some of the gore that goes with it, but can't stand extreme gore. Prom Night gave me nightmares for a week.

I'm into sci-fi and anime, with anime being a preference. I don't actually like too many shows, though. The early seasons of Stargate SG-1 and the first season of Stargate Atlantis. SGU sucked, but looked like it might have gotten better, before they cancelled it, that is. I'm a major fan of Dragonball and Dragonball Z. I've been a fan since I first saw the english dub of the series here in America. I've never seen the Japanese dub, though.

I'm also into Sailor Moon. Yeah, I know, I've heard it all before. "That's too girly!" "OMG! You're a Pedophile!" *DISINTERESTED FACE* Do I look like I care?

Actually, that's no true. I do care, but I just let the bad comments slide. If people really, truly wanted to be my friends, they'd understand. I don't mind the occasional joke about my interests, as long as it's in good taste. I even make a few jokes every so often.


Anyway, on to stories.

My Stories:

"Gohan blows up the kitchen" - Gohan gets a cold and comedy ensues.

Gohan blows up the kitchen is a humorous short story about what happens when a Saiyan-human hybrid child comes down with a cold. Because so many people liked it, I've written two more chapters for a total of three. I expect another one to be churned out, but I won't know until a little later. Thanks for the reviews! =)

"Mysterious Beginnings" - John, an ordinary person, is thrown into a new reality when his planet Earth is attacked by an enemy that shouldn't exist. He is given the chance to train under the Z Warriors in the hope that he will be able to return and defend his home and avenge those who have been killed. But, can he do it? Can he find the necessary strength to overcome the obstacles in his way? And even if he does, can he win the final battle? Or is he doomed to failure?

I might actually write the whole series one day. Mabye.
Seriously though, I've had the whole storyboard for the series (it's a 4 story series with "Mysterious Beginnings" as the prequel (sort of)) done, I just have to write. But my creative juices are kinda stifled with school right now.

Mysterious Beginnings is an alternate universe story for DBZ. It starts in December of Age 763, 2 months after the Garlic Jr. saga and 9 months before the Trunks saga (according the timeline on the Dragonball Wiki).

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The First Avatar: Legend of the Star by Silver Omega 01 reviews
Sequel to The First Avatar: Twenty years after the Black Invasion, the Avatar has been reborn into the world. Young Kyora is thrown headfirst into a world of wars and spirits and everyone praises the birth of the Avatar. Only problem is, she doesn't want to be the Avatar. Many seek to take advantage of her but at least Team Avatar will help her. Cover by XMidnight Rose.
Legend of Korra - Rated: T - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 105 - Words: 279,226 - Reviews: 611 - Favs: 31 - Follows: 24 - Updated: 11/20/2013 - Published: 11/10/2012 - Korra, Jinora
Dragon Ball AF: The Alpha Tour Saga by JTX1000 reviews
Following the overload of the Namekian Dragon Balls, Goku and company fly out into the depths of space to protect the Earth and combat their greatest threat yet. Post-GT. Sequel to the Room of Spirit and Time Saga - Full synopsis in chapter 1. COMPLETE!
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 40 - Words: 273,052 - Reviews: 394 - Favs: 112 - Follows: 88 - Updated: 8/15/2013 - Published: 3/31/2011 - Goku, Vegeta - Complete
Stargate:The Legend of the Arcturus Maximus Primus by Alpha Omega Protocol reviews
Alternate universe of Stargate Atlantis. This is a story about my 3d ship I made based on the Ancients! This first story is going to be the cross over from Stargate to Star Trek. Others universe will come later.
Crossover - StarTrek: Other & Stargate: Atlantis - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 26 - Words: 129,973 - Reviews: 89 - Favs: 152 - Follows: 158 - Updated: 10/1/2012 - Published: 11/11/2009 - John S.
Empress in the shadows by voider reviews
The story of a Goa’uld who lacked the insanity of her race, her rise to power and the birth of an empire.
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 27 - Words: 88,805 - Reviews: 1280 - Favs: 1,260 - Follows: 1,154 - Updated: 1/23/2011 - Published: 11/26/2008
Dragon Ball AF: The Room of Sprit and Time Saga by JTX1000 reviews
Six months following the defeat of Omega Shenron, Vegeta drags Trunks back into training using the recently mended, but unpredictable Room of Spirit and Time. Catastrophe follows as the room turns out to be far more dangerous than anyone ever thought. COMPLETE!
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 36 - Words: 172,304 - Reviews: 157 - Favs: 136 - Follows: 75 - Updated: 12/24/2010 - Published: 8/27/2009 - Goku, Vegeta - Complete
Round Shaped Spiky Things by Darkened-Storm reviews
It's P.E class for Tyson and the gang, and Hiro has devised a game of Poison Ball. Involves a Round Shaped Spiky Thing for the Creative Insanity Challenge.
Beyblade - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,363 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 2 - Published: 12/15/2010 - Complete
Kill Them All by Darkened-Storm reviews
Kill Them All - a Bryan fanfic dedicated to AquilaTempestas
Beyblade - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 849 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 6 - Published: 12/12/2010 - Bryan - Complete
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Gohan blows up the kitchen reviews
Gohan comes down with a cold and comedy ensues.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 2,552 - Reviews: 22 - Favs: 19 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 2/23/2012 - Published: 2/22/2011 - Gohan, Goku - Complete
Mysterious Beginnings reviews
After being attacked by an unlikely evil, John is thrown into the DBZ reality and given a chance to train in the hope that he will one day return to save his home. But, can he do it? Can he gain the strength necessary to win the final battle? AU.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,535 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/24/2011 - Goku, Cell