Author has written 11 stories for Cyberchase, Pokémon, Neopets, Legend of Korra, Naruto, A-Team, X-Men: Evolution, and Huntik: Secrets & Seekers.
Name: Tari J. Deitrich (used to be Tari J. Deiter but changed it in a moment of insanity because it sounds better).
Age: 1/4 Century
Nationality: American; Roots in:
Germany/Switzerland (we're not sure which and perhaps could be both)
Native Americans from the eastern coasts.
Favorite foods: Anything that's not covered in hot peppers or sauce, or green vegetables. Um, pasta, candy, pop (mostly root beer but i'll drink mountain dew, dr. pepper, sprite, and Canada Dry Ginger Ale). Oh, and I also like chocolate and ice cream.
Gender: Female, epic Tomboy.
Favorite TV Shows:
Avatar: Last Airbender
Avatar: Legend of Korra
Huntik: Secrets and Seekers
Favorite Movies: If you promise not to laugh I will tell you that I love the movies:
FullMetal Alchemist: Conqueror of Shamballa
While You Were Sleeping
Kung-Fu Panda 1&2
Other info: I've been writing ever since elementary school, but my writing style has matured since then--I add more action and less dialogue. I think I've gotten better since reading the Redwall novels by Brian Jacques and the Twilight Saga (i only read it b/c of supernatural aspects, and not b/c of the romance--that i could do without). However, this is the first time I've ever actually written a fanfict that someone's actually liked. My parents get on me a lot about writing stories that aren't my own work. However, I have explained that it is perfectly alright to write a fanfict so long as I'm not looking for a profit. True? Anyway, if you want to know more about me, you are more than welcome to pm me.
I also have a fanpage on facebook. Tari J. Deitrich. It's under pages, not people. Anyway, if you want to like the page, more power to you. You'll get chapter updates and info on stories I'm either going to be working on or I am working on.
Favorite Things: I like hugs, animals, colors, writing, watching movies, playing video games on my laptop and Nintendo 3DS, and being with friends.
Pet Peeves: Racism/narrow-mindedness, negative comments, and rudeness.
My fanficts: Okay, guys, I'm about to get nasty here. If this doesn't pertain to you, than ignore it. But I'm only going to say this once: Leave. My. Storylines. Alone. When it comes to reviewing my stories, I don't mind if you tell me how good it is or where I may need to improve for future chapters. You could say "I want to see more of this thing or this person". That's fine. You can correct me with my grammar and spelling. But do not mess with my storyline. I've had too many problems with this particularly with one story and I deleted the story b/c I got tired of what I could only consider to be ridicule. It may or may not go back up but for now, all my notes and handwritten chapters were in "cold storage". I'm only going to repost chapters when I'm ready to do it and not b/c anyone wants me to.
That story (Hoshi's Legacy: Tale of the Lost) had a lot of fans and viewers and followers but it wasn't really all that appreciated. My other stories have very few fans but are greatly appreciated. Why? B/c nobody takes it seriously. Hoshi's Legacy was being taken waaaay too seriously by Naruto fans and it needs to stop. I'm writing just for the fun of writing, nothing more. So, in other words, I would rather have a story with very few fans but a great deal of appreciation than a story with a lot of fans and no appreciation. That is all.
-Hot Lips Hoolihan
-Charles Emerson Winchester III
-Sakura (in her more mature moments)
-Hinata (i gained a little more respect for her after she stood up to Pain)
-Choji (he's hilarious when he gets all fired up about something)
South Park (I will never claim Cartman as my favorite; Cartman is evil and he needs to die)
-Dr. Donald "Ducky" Mallard
-Leroy Jethro Gibbs
Books: (In chronological order, not in the order I've written them in; x means completed) (includes rating - before and after if they changed any and reasons why they changed - and synopsis)
Cyberchase (Evil Within trilogy)
XA Black Heart (T - for mild language)
Synopsis: So it begins! Dr. Marbles made the decision to make two cyborgs. A daughter named Max, and an assistant named Hacker; little knowing one was destined for evil, the other was destined to be the hero of the Cyberworld.
XA Tortured Soul (K - acceptable to all readers)
Synopsis: Digit remembers Max well and especially remembers the day she exchanged her own life for his, making him believe she went offline. But when Digit comes across a gargoyle named Zhanne on Radopolis, he suspects she may not be who she says she is.
XA Warrior Reborn (T - for mild language and some crude humor)
Synopsis: Nine years ago, Hacker deleted a young gargoyle named Max, daughter of Dr. Mathias Marbles. Or so he thought. Now that he's found out she still lives, the race is on for one to eliminate the other. First item on the agenda for Hacker, take over Cyberspace and apprehend Max in the process. Trouble is, can Max really do what she's supposed to?
Cyberchase (Like Souls saga-a continuation of the Evil Within trilogy; in collaboration with Kawaii Stella's PUTBG)
XA Sheildmaiden's Strife (T - for mild language, crude humor, and intense themes)
Synopsis: It was 7 months after Max defeated Hacker. Cyberspace has never been more peaceful. But, where there is peace, violence is soon to follow. A shadow is coming across Cyberspace. While Max is trying to train a new Sword-Thane, a new ally suddenly appears. And this war could cost Max her sanity, and her life.
XA Lost Memory (T - for mild language)
Synopsis: Motherboard, out of kindness, asked Erasmus Pi to do something: Erase Max's memories of her traumatic past. Now, Max is muddling through life unaware of who she was before. Until certain events awaken her to horrible truths. Truths she has to learn with the help of her friend Echo Glasgow.
A Deadly Secret (coming soon)
A Broken Wing (coming soon)
Cyberchase (Paths of Life saga-coming soon)
This is going to be multiple books all rolled together and told from the 1 POV of many of the different characters and 3 POV of the antagonist. I've done some lines here and there based on some of these characters and have yet to connect all the dots, but these stories have a long way to come before they're even close to be completed. Also, I have yet to decide on titles, let alone how many there will be.
A-Team (Soldiers Brand series - Side-stories with A Broken Wing as well as with each other)
Can Anybody Hear Me (was T for mild language, is now M - adult themes and moderate language; can still be read by teens if you so choose)
Synopsis: Ezra Sanders spent seven years in captivity in a psychiatric hospital in Mannheim Germany, undergoing thrice-weekly electroconvulsive therapy to help him overcome his PTSD. Problem is, Ezra's treatment could be compared to torture. Ever since he left his quiet, rural life in Erie, PA in America, Ezra's life was turned upside down. And was going to get more interesting.
Battle Scars (coming soon) (Will be M - adult themes and moderate language)
X-Men Evolution (MewTwo's Chronocles)
The Science-based Mutate (T - mild language)
Synopsis: When Logan discovered little MewTwo in an abandoned lab, he knew she was a Science-Based Mutate meant for evil needs but the X-Men adopted her anyway and protected her. But when Niles Hudson, her creator, comes back to claim her, not even the X-Men are able to protect her from his dreams and desires. Now she has two choices: serve Niles . . . or die.
Survivor (coming soon)
Adventures in Kanto (T - mild language)
Synopsis: Dan Santos promised to take Tyler Ketchum with him on his adventures in two years. But, when he doesn't return, Tyler has to start her own adventure. But first, she must get away from her father. On her way to Viridian City accompanied with an Arcanine she calls Sunwolf, she runs into an unlikely character.
XBreaking Through (T - very mild language and themes not for children)
Synopsis: Outcast from her classmates, Tamara was wondering where her life would go. Meeting Fangore, a red Lupe, changed her life forever.
Avatar: Legend of Korra (Twisted Destinies Trilogy)
Fire (T - language, suggestive themes)
Synopsis: Toph, middle child of the Bei Fong clan, never wanted to be the Avatar. But now that the Order of the White Lotus had named her as such, she has no choice but to accept it. She is sent away to study Firebending under the tutelage of Roku, a White Lotus member, alongside Duku, a rebellious Firebender. But, is her life all a publicity stunt set up by her parents?
Air (Coming soon)
Water (Coming soon)
Naruto (Hoshi's Legacy trilogy)
Tales of the Lost (T - language)
Synopsis: Hoshi was two years old when she was taken from Konoha by Orochimaru. A child of both Hyuga and Uchiha lineage, she was deemed precious. But now, Orochimaru has no more use for her. Except for one. Now that Hoshi has run away from Otogakure and returned to Konoha, will she find a home in the place she had once left? Will anyone trust a Missing-Nin from a rival village?
The Ninja Way (coming soon)
Tools of War (coming soon)
X-Men EvolutionXPokemon (X-Men Evolution: The Science-based Mutate)
CyberchaseXHuntik (Cyberchase: A Shield-Maiden's Strife)
CyberchaseXVampire Knight (Cyberchase: Paths of Life saga Mattimeo)
CyberchaseXFullmetal Alchemist (Cyberchase: Paths of Life saga Seth)
A-TeamXCyberchase (Can Anybody Hear Me)
Stories I'm taking into consideration; may not actually be written
Huntik: Search for Eathon
FullMetal Alchemist: Chimera at my Side
Dark Times for a Seer
Other stuff I would suggest checking out:
4/4/12-Opened deviantArt profile (wolfsdarkshadow90)
4/5/12-Posted 2 pictures: Dematerializer and Max and Digit
4/7/12-Posted 1 picture: Max and Digit Revamp
4/15/12-Removed 1 picture: Max and Digit
4/23/12-Posted 1 picture: Sheildmaiden's sash-as requestd by Blondewolf16
4/24/12-Posted 1 picture: A Father's Love
4/27/12-Posted 1 picture: Max Marbles-Borg Form
4/28/12-Posted 1 Photo: Get this thing . . . off my head! (Starring my bunny, Shadow, and my foster rabbit, Nidorino)
6/1/12-Posted 1 picture: Avengers 2012 w/ Ghost Rider
6/2/12-Posted 1 picture: Naruto 2013 Calendar
6/11/12-Posted 6 pictures: Cyberchase cover 1-A Black Heart, Cyberchase cover 2-A Tortured Soul, Cyberchase cover 3- A Warrior Reborn, Dino-Rider Saga-1 Abeliosaurus Attacks, Dino-Rider Saga-2 Baryonyx Bombardment, and Cyborg Files
6/20/12-Posted 2 pictures: X-Men Evolution: The Science-Based Mutate, and Hoshi's Legacy: Tale of the Lost
7/10/12-Posted 1 picture: Cyberchase Cover 4- A Shield-Maiden's Strife
8/4/12-Posted 1 picture: Glass
8/20/12-Posted 1 picture: Lok, son of Eathon, Seeker Sword-Thane
4/2/13- Posted 1 picture: Run, Max, Run
5/19/13- Posted 1 picture: Max Marbles, Black coat form
9/25/13- Posted 1 picture: Apprentices Five
Oc's by Story (I will update when new characters appear and new stories are added)
Tales of the Lost:
The Science-Based Mutate:
(Completely OC oriented)
Evil Within Saga:
Adventures in Kanto:
(Completely OC oriented)
Twisted Destinies: Fire:
(Completely OC oriented with a few references to people in the original series as well as some appearances)
Can Anybody Hear Me:
(Mostly OC oriented with a few appearances of characters from both Cyberchase and A-Team)
Okay guys, it's not often you'll get an opportunity like this, but I'm writing a series of stories based around "The Legend of Korra" about Korra's successor, Toph. I have limited spaces available for participants in these stories and as of right now, I'm considering rewriting the first novel. So, once again, you'll get the chance to jump in if you choose.
What I need from you is simple. If you want to see a character based off of yourself in this story, let me know. I need to know name, nationality, bender or nonbender, and anything else you think would be useful to know. Stuck? Here's something I think could help you get unstuck:
Name: Toph Beifong
Birthdate: April 28
Blood type: O
Affiliation: Beifong Clan; Earth Kingdom nationalist; Team Avatar
Occupation: Future Avatar
Special Ability: “Earthquake”
Oma Beifong (mother)
Yorie (adoptive mother)
Tyro Beifong (father)
Lutok (adoptive father)
Haru “Boar” Beifong (older brother)
Brik Beifong (younger brother)
Lin Beifong (grandmother – deceased)
Saikhan (grandfather – deceased)
Toph Beifong (great-grandmother - deceased)
Lotek (adoptive uncle)
Miakoda (adoptive sister)
Cherokee (adoptive brother)
Sokka (adoptive cousin)
Komanchi (adoptive cousin - deceased)
Toph was born and raised in a higher social class than many of her schoolmates; a fact Toph was none-too-proud of. Her parents continuously chose to relate to people of power within Republic City's own, turning their noses up at those who had to work for a living. Because of this, Toph often had to maintain her friendships with “lower-class ruffians” behind her parent's backs, although her best friend, Miakoda, was the daughter of two council members.
Toph was named after her great-grandmother, Toph Beifong who had aided Avatar Aang in ending the hundred-year-long war between the Fire Nation and the rest of the world. Because of her namesake, Toph's parents expected for their middle child to be able to do great things, including bend metal. As it turned out, Toph was only able to bend metal only to a certain degree when touching it, but her earthbending skills were very impressive to say the least.
Sixteen years after Avatar Korra passed away, the Order of the White Lotus was sent out to locate the new Avatar, naming Toph as such. Toph, not wanting the title to begin with, couldn't help but doubt that the White Lotus had made a mistake. However, dispite her protests and because the bodies of two benders (a young waterbender named Komanchi, and an earthbender named Shard), Toph was relocated to a compound for protection and put through Avatar training. First, under the tutelage of Grand Lotus Roku's son, a master firebender named Duku.
However, Duku was a harsh teacher, incapable of handling Toph's lack of progress in firebending. After Toph accidentally earthbent during a match with Duku. Duku lost his temper and Toph ran away on her kangorse, Ichiru. After being captured by a firebender named Maul and was taken to his leader, Sidious. That was when she learned how Komanchi, Shard, and Abinsur (an airbender friend of Toph's) had died. While Toph knew that Sidious planned to do the same to her, Toph gave up on life. She became completely willing to allow Sidious to kill her.
Just before Sidious could kill Toph, Miakoda, Zephir, Ashera, Duku, and a few members of the White Lotus arrived to save her. As it turned out, Sidious had a bloodbender in his band who stopped Toph's friends so Sidious could finish the ceremony. Upon seeing her friends in such horrible pain, Toph – quite by accident – unlocked the Avatar State and saved her friends.
Stubborn. Can be sweet sometimes but she tends to keep that to a minimum when in public. Short-tempered when it comes to many of her rival classmates. Kindhearted toward her brothers and adoptive family. Fiercely protective of everyone she's close to. And overly-possessive of her kangorse, Ichiru.
Hair: Long and dark-brown. Usually worn tied up in a bun with a headband to hold it into place. Sometimes, on special occasions, it is wrapped around a support or braided. When Toph lived with Miakoda's family, it was braided and styled like the Water Tribe. And when Toph was learning how to firebend, it was styled in a partial ponytail with a holder and pin.
Eyes: Jade green.
Clothing: Toph is usually seen in a variety of different outfits as she dresses according to various situations.
-School clothes: A green and gold tunic and trousers beneath a long, knee-length robe supported by a brown sash and soft boots. The green denotes her Earth Kingdom heritage and the gold indicates her earthbender status.
-Brawling clothes: A sleeveless vibrant yellow tunic, knee-length muted beige trousers, leather belt, bracelets, and anklets. She doesn't wear any shoes when brawling as she feels shoes comes between herself and her natural element.
-“Charity” clothes: “Beifong white” robe with sash, long trousers, and soft shoes.
-Barn clothes: Green and gold tunic, brown trousers, wrist and ankle bracelets, a belt, and boots. Her barn clothes are almost identical to her brawling clothes.
-Water Tribe clothes: A blue, sleeveless tunic, brown, baggy trousers, leather boots, and a cloak lined with accent beads and tufts of fur.
-Fire Nation clothes: A red, short-sleeve tunic, black trousers, knee-high boots with pointed toes, black gauntlets.
Distinguishing marks: A tattoo of a flying boar on her right shoulder. The boar is the symbol of the Beifong clan and Toph has had it since she was five to mark her as a member of that clan.
Still don't know what to put in? Make something up! It's okay to bs when you're writing fanfiction. I do it all the time, truth be told. Somehow it all fits together quite nicely.
Do YOU remember the 90s?? (*stuff i actually remember)
Just because you were born in '97 doesn't mean you're a 90's kid. It's not like you could remember the original Simpsons. I am sorry but three conscious years of the 90's just wont cut it. You're a 90's kid if you remember:
-You remember watching -Doug -Ren & Stimpy -Pinky and the Brain -AAAAAAAH Real Monsters! -Rockos modern Life. -Animaniacs -Gargoyles*
-You've ever ended a sentence with the word "PSYCHE!"
-You just cant resist finishing this . . . "in west Philadelphia born and raised . . ."
-You remember -Step by Step -Family Matters -Dinosaurs -Boy Meets World-Full house*
-You remember when it was actually worth getting up early on a Saturday to watch cartoons.*
-You remember reading "Goosebumps"*
-You still get the urge to say "NOT" after (almost) every sentence . . . not*
-When everything was settled by -rock paper scissors or -bubble gum bubble gum in a dish or -ms. mary mack (Or catch a tiger, or...)*
-When kick ball was a daily activity.*
-When we used to obey our parents*
-You used to listen to the radio all day long just to record your FAVORITE song of ALL time on a tape.*
-You remember when Super Nintendos and Sega Genisis became popular.*
-You remember The Original Game Boy.*
-You always wanted to send in a tape to America's Funniest Home Videos . . . but never taped anything funny.*
-You remember watching -The Magic School Bus -Wishbone -Reading Rainbow -Mr. Rogers' Neighborhood-and Ghostwriter on PBS*
-You remember when Yo-Yos were cool.*
-You remember those Where's Waldo books.*
-You remember eating Warheads and Splashers Gum.*
-You remember watching -the 1st Batman -Aladdin -Ninja Turtles -Ghostbusters*
-You remember Ring Pops.*
-You remember when every thing was "da BOMB!"*
-You remember boom boxes vs. cd players.*
-Making those little paper fortune things, and then predicting your life with them.*
-You played and/or collected "Pogs"
-You had at least one Tamagotchi, GigaPet, or Nano and brought it everywhere.
-One word. . . . . . . .trolls.*
-Windows 95 was the best.*
-You watched the original cartoons of -Rugrats -Wild Thornberry's -Power Rangers -Rocket Power.*
-All your school supplies were "Lisa Frank" brand.*
-You collected those Beanie Babies.*
-You remember Care Bears*
-You know that Lamb Chop's song never ended. *
-Silver dollars, which were cool to have.*
-Everyone watched the WB.*
-If you even know what an original walkman is.*
-You know the Macarena by heart.*
-"Talk to the hand" . . . enough said
-You went to McDonald's to play in the PlayPlace.*
-You remember playing on merry go rounds at the playground.*
-Before the MySpace frenzy . . . Before the Internet & text messaging . . . Before Sidekicks & iPods . . . Before PlayStation3 or X-BOX 360 . . . Before Spongebob . . . Before Tupac was shot.*
-When light up sneakers were cool.*
-When you rented VHS tapes, not DVDs.*
-When gas was 0.95 a gallon.*
-When we recorded stuff on VCRs.*
-You had slap bracelets!*
-You actually played outside until it was dark!*
-You had a furbie and grew sick of it because it wouldn't shut up!!
-You remember the ORIGINAL cooooookie crisp commercial with with the little doggy and not that stupid wolf they have now...*
-TGIF was both worth watching, and actually on Friday.*
-Way back. Before we realized all this would eventually disappear.*
Post this in your bulletin if you remember these days . . . .
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If you've ever wondered what you are like in another dimension, copy and paste this in your profile.
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If you talk to yourself, copy and paste this into your profile.
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