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Joined 02-16-11, id: 2752867, Profile Updated: 10-23-13
Author has written 5 stories for Kingdom Hearts.

Not much to say, but here goes.

Gender: Male (Shocker, I know.)

Age: 19 as of 4/20/13

Profile Picture: Mudkip. You know you like it.

Well, I started college, and have my own dorm, so there's that.


Intrests: THE VIDYA, WoW when I'm feeling like it, reading, hanging with freinds, weightlifting (Did it with freinds one day, and it kinda grew on me), and as of recently, writing fanfiction.

My favorite game is Birth By Sleep, but a close second would be Phantasy Star Portable 2.


Regarding fanfics, I only have two things I don't like:

1. OCs as main characters- Don't really know why, but it just annoys me. Unless the story is making fun of Mary Sues, or is meant to be humorous in a parady like way.

2. Yaoi- No, just no. As to why, see above gender.


Stuff I'm workin on:

The Apple Incident: Still on hold, but I have an idea for the epilouge, still need to flesh it out though.

I have an idea for a new one shot, and another chapter for Circle of Memories, but I'm not sure if I'll get around to them. Time will tell.


IMPORTANT STUFF: I mostly keep this here to remind myself, but if it helps you too, take a gander.

(Also, a nod to WishingDreamer5 for providing this list. I think this should actually be put on the home page of the site, but whatever.)

Guidelines: Take some time to read them before you post a story. If your story violates any of the rules, it doesn't belong here. Sometimes, it seems that people find it hard not to act like a spoiled 12 year old when I remind them of the guidelines in a review. Now ask yourself, is that the right way to react? -Got this down pat.

Titles: There are loads of stories on this site, but please try to come up with an original title. And check that when you search your title, there isn't already a story by that title in the same category as yours. Remember, the more interesting and original your title is, the more people want to read it. -It's been a few years since I've started and I still struggle with this.

Summaries: It's the first peek of your story that people get. It makes them decide whether or not to read it. Don't waste it. And please don't do any of the following:
- "I suck at summaries," or "Better summary inside." Do we care? If you suck at summaries, people will automatically assume you suck at writing too, and you'll lose half of your perspective audience.
- "R&R!" Newsflash: you can't force them. More likely, it will work the other way around. It's okay at the end of a chapter to subtly ask people for reviews.
- "First story" or something like that. Again, do we care? In fact, writing "first story" just makes them think it's bad before they've even started reading.
- "No flames plz!!" Obviously, this will only make the flamers want to flame you more. Heck, it pisses me off, and that says much.
- "CHAPTER XX IS UP!!11!" Yes, I can see that, too, since under every story you can see how many chapters the story has.
- Writing the name wrong/use a nickname; "Voldie" instead of Voldemort. It's annoying and it looks stupid. People will take you less serious too, because you don't take the effort to write a name right.
- "Don't like don't read!" Not only will people take the tip so nobody reads it, but it's rude in many ways too. Plus, in my eyes it just shows how less experience you have and that you can't take critics.
-I'm only guilty ONCE for the First Story thing. And I always remind the audience if they want to give their opinion, drop a review.

Chapter Length: As a multi chapter story, you can't write an amazing piece that's only 400 words long. If it's too short, you should either add more information, such as description or history, or if you have enough of those, combine it with another chapter. Short chapters finish before they can even get started. Your chapter should span more than one scene. But one scene shouldn't span more than one chapter, 'cause then you're adding too much description or history and you're going to bore your reader. -Don't even get me started. My attention span will not let me do a multichapter story. I'm struggling as is with 'The Apple Incident'. And I feel saying something with 4k words is a one shot is dumb. Plus, you have the chance to use the chapter interruptions to your advantage. Honestly most of my story ideas are just random ideas that I find funny at the time. Except 'I Carry Your Heart', that was inspired. Fufufufufufufu

Before you post a story: If your story has correct spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization it's already 10 times better than most writing here. When you write here, hundreds of people are reading your work. They'll judge you on it. If you want their respect, you need to use correct spelling. And use spell check. It doesn't take long, and it will catch most errors. Then read what you wrote. Just once. Then you can post to your heart's content...or let it rest for a week and then look at it again, which is what I often do. -I do this WHILE I'm typing, but spell check is a nice safety net. During my typing process, every 1/6 of the story that I get typed, I stop and read everything I've composed. This allows me to catch grammar problems, and inconsistencies within the chapter.

Betas: It's going to make your story so much better if you have someone else to check your conventions and tell you what needs more work. However, that doesn't mean you should let your beta do all the work and not proofread the chapter yourself. -I don't think i'll ever look into this, when I first joined, I thought I might, but I'm just not active enough anymore...

Reviews and Flames: When someone reviews one of your stories, you should respect their opinion when they respect you, too. There is a clear difference between CC (constructive criticism) and a flame. CC is intended to be helpful. It gives ideas of how to improve (don't we all want that?), why they think you should change things, and mention what you're doing well. They're often left by some well-meaning writer who's then reported, yelled at and ganged up on for flaming. Please don't get mad at these people. Flaming, for those who don't know, is when people leave pessimistic reviews that are usually something like, "You suck! This is the worst writing EVER. I can't believe people actually read this! Learn to write, %&@#!" Hopefully, you can see the difference between the flame and the CC. -THIS. 100%.

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Between the Earth and the Wind by Poetry-In-The-Ending reviews
Her best friend loves her, her boyfriend cherishes her, and she loves them both. Now it's up to Aqua to make sure both their hearts don't get broken. But what do you do when you're going to be the cause of their heartache? Ven x Aqua x Terra.
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 10 - Words: 19,594 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 17 - Updated: 11/10/2011 - Published: 2/22/2011 - Ventus/Ven, Aqua
It's Just a Crush by The Accident-Prone Klutz reviews
Instantly the gravity of the situation really hit me like a giant yellow school bus, Roxas likes me. But he knows I like Sora. And I know Sora likes Namine. But Namine likes Riku. And Riku likes... well he likes girls." AU Roxiri Namora SoKai Namiku
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 45 - Words: 220,868 - Reviews: 679 - Favs: 178 - Follows: 109 - Updated: 8/8/2011 - Published: 6/20/2009 - Kairi, Roxas - Complete
A Day At Destiny Islands by ForbiddenKHfan216 reviews
Randomness involving the Islands Trio!Rival fic to Day At The Castle. Petnapper's Arc- Some of the local pets have gone missing. When Sora's dog disappears, Detective Sora's on the case!
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Humor/Family - Chapters: 41 - Words: 45,214 - Reviews: 252 - Favs: 53 - Follows: 29 - Updated: 8/7/2011 - Published: 12/26/2009 - Sora, Kairi
Waffles by WonderHeroe reviews
Riku, Ven, and Terra has a interesting talk about waffles. 'nuff said. OneShot, Drabble.
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,794 - Reviews: 28 - Favs: 30 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 6/6/2011 - Published: 12/10/2010 - Riku, Ventus/Ven - Complete
What's Your Sun Sign? by kingdomheartsgirl101 reviews
Roxas is put into a situation that to him is 'the end of the world'. In order to preserve the Strife family name, he must marry in fourteen days. So instead of being given a girl to marry of the bat, he decides that he'll date one of each zodiac sign.
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 17 - Words: 31,658 - Reviews: 139 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 20 - Updated: 5/2/2011 - Published: 9/3/2010 - Roxas - Complete
It's All the Same by Braco Boy reviews
Which is better; Bleach or One Piece? Roxas really doesn't care, but Axel will do everything in his power to prove his point, no matter how pointless it may be.
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,218 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 1 - Published: 2/21/2011 - Roxas, Axel
Prankwar by WishingDreamer5 reviews
Hairdye, chocolate, chilli, balloons and glue. Who says that Terra and Aqua only have a mature side? Ven could tell you all about how wrong that assumption is. It all started with a combination of sleeping pills, painkillers, Terra and... Da Bomb? What chaos will an epic prank war between them cause when both parties are too stubborn to admit their hidden feelings; Love or Hatred?
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 20 - Words: 54,832 - Reviews: 205 - Favs: 128 - Follows: 29 - Updated: 2/20/2011 - Published: 6/20/2010 - [Aqua, Terra] Ventus/Ven, Eraqus - Complete
Watch Me Fly by SaphireWaves reviews
Naminé decides to play matchmaker for her best friends while juggling her new friendship with Roxas. But there's something odd with the way Roxas acts around, well, everybody. Namixas Sokai
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 15 - Words: 45,649 - Reviews: 146 - Favs: 102 - Follows: 31 - Updated: 10/9/2010 - Published: 6/14/2010 - Naminé, Roxas - Complete
Disillusion by SaphireWaves reviews
Roxas finds himself moving back to his old town. However, he begins to have dreams of a certain girl. Do these dreams have anything to do with reality? Namixas
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 16 - Words: 38,571 - Reviews: 58 - Favs: 25 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 5/2/2010 - Published: 1/21/2010 - Roxas, Naminé - Complete
LoveFool by SaphireWaves reviews
Roxas is a conceited actor. Every thing's perfect until Olette dumps him. To get her back, he decides to make her jealous by using his beautiful co-star, Namine. Heaven forbid he actually falls in love with her. Namixas Sokai Haynette
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 15 - Words: 33,573 - Reviews: 173 - Favs: 96 - Follows: 27 - Updated: 12/9/2009 - Published: 9/20/2009 - Naminé, Roxas - Complete
Right Here by SaphireWaves reviews
Namine has always felt invisible. However, that all changes when she notices Sora has taken an interest in her. Wait, is she also falling for his cousin, Roxas? Namixas, Sokai, SoraxNaminexRoxas love triangle COMPLETE
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 15 - Words: 28,764 - Reviews: 73 - Favs: 50 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 9/14/2009 - Published: 6/6/2009 - Naminé, Roxas - Complete
Kicked in the Keys! by ExistenceIsFutile23 reviews
Oneshots. Tifa and Sora drabbles. next one soon!
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 9 - Words: 8,103 - Reviews: 28 - Favs: 17 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 5/8/2008 - Published: 5/3/2008 - Sora, Tifa
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Circle of Memories
A series of connected shorts about Sora and a ring he holds close to his heart. Just what do half frozen ponds, shooting stars, stale attics, and zoos have to do with each other anyway? T for language, warning THERE IS CURSING IN THIS.
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 808 - Published: 8/4/2013 - Sora, Kairi, Riku, Roxas
Boredom in Human Anatomy reviews
One-shot of Sora and his attempt to goof off in Human Anatomy. It probably doesn't work.
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 746 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 3/2/2012 - Sora - Complete
The Pixie Stick Incident reviews
It's a beautiful Sunday afternoon. And Ventus is bored as hell. But what's this? He finds a sugary sweet tucked away in his armor.
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,173 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 4/19/2011 - Published: 2/23/2011 - Ventus/Ven, Terra - Complete
The Apple Incident reviews
Terra hates apples. Aqua knows it, Eraqus knows it, and unfortunately, Ventus knows too. Who would dare try to give Terra an apple? Rated T just cause.
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,849 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 21 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 2/22/2011 - Published: 2/19/2011 - Terra, Ventus/Ven
I Carry Your Heart reviews
'I wonder if I'll ever figure out what having a heart is like.' 'If I'll ever understand what it feels like to have emotions like sadness and love.' Its not that Roxas didn't try to understand, its just he couldn't. First fic, please review
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,064 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 2/18/2011 - Roxas, Xion - Complete