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Poll: I have some ideas for my next short Warhammer 40k stories, either one-shot or containing three chapters. However, I don't really have the time and skill to write them all. So I would like to know which one you would want to see most. Vote Now!
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Joined 03-30-11, id: 2813649, Profile Updated: 02-26-15
Author has written 14 stories for Warhammer, and BlazBlue.

There's not much to say about me.

I study at a school known as CNN, guess it right and I'll give you a present.

My hobbies: Nothing, just watching videos on Youtube (especially Dawn of war).

Likes: Warhammer 40k (I have an unpainted squad of Space Marine at home), anime in general, Steven Spielberg (odd isn't it?)

Dislike: The fact that half of one of my teeth is broken but no one notices.

I can't give reviews as active as before, I am afraid. I am busier and more depressed with the current Warhammer 40k state right now. Sorry about that.

Here are my opinions regarding reviewing in Fanfiction:

  1. It takes a lot of effort to write and post a story, and takes only a tenth of such amount to write and post a review. So, it is encouraged that readers should appreciate the writer and give him/her some feedbacks as much as possible.
  2. Reviews should be something neither the author not the critic would regret. Don't just praise too much, but don't make people feel abashed. I resent all kinds of bullying, especially ranting someone's PM box. I have received this, people insulting me at my PM box, teaching me history about how the Axis are despised by the Allies after WW2 had ended. I will try my best to be as patient as possible.
  3. I have no preference as to what kind of story you are writing, although more than 1000 words per chapter it better. All genres are welcomed, except explicit sexual contents. I am no fan of Star Trek so, Mary Sue means nothing to me.
  4. If you read one of my review saying: "This story is bad, you need to try harder." and then go down attacking my PM box, I won't tolerate. You are worse than a kindergarten child.
  5. There are points given to a every chapter I review. 10 is the highest, which mean little grammar mistake, good fluency, satisfying actions and awesome characters. I won't give anything lower than 5 because I don't have the gut to tell off people.
  6. Here are some of the things I find hard to forgive: ridiculously long paragraphs, over-reactions, misuses of English, attempts to show off your Japanese skills (I am OK with Kawaii or Baka here and there, but NOT a FULL sentence in Japanese except unless you are writing an anime-based fanfiction or using Eldar language), dialogues in wrong format, cliches, non-detached paragraphs (each paragraph should be one line away from the next as well as the former), Warhammer fanfic based entirely on Codex. Make sure you are having NONE of these.
  7. This you must excuse me. There are times in my life where I am very upset, like my favorite team has just lost a game. In those occasion, I will become Mr. Hyde and may not be nice to those I review. If you don't have any of the mentioned in 6, you'll be fine.
  8. If you disagree something with my review, speak up and I will see to it. But don't, don't you dare try to school me unless you have read and review as much as I have.
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Boots First by dontaskimdissapointed reviews
A drop trooper is thrust into combat for the first time. He will have to learn fast in the cauldron of war or die. The conflict is not as simple as it would seem, and Sev will have his faith and better judgement put to the test. Action does start a little late in the story. Big thanks to anon on /tg/ for cover image. Put on indefinite hold so I can work on a new story.
Warhammer - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 17 - Words: 56,874 - Reviews: 103 - Favs: 75 - Follows: 110 - Updated: 6/26/2014 - Published: 10/17/2013 - Eldar, Imperial Guard, Orks, Space Marines
Never See, Never Know by Cardlover95 reviews
Saya entered the Observer's Room and caused the time loop. Noel went back to the past, met Jin and his siblings when they were young. How the story happened next? Let's read and find out about that. My ninth fiction.
BlazBlue - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 8 - Words: 23,484 - Reviews: 56 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 14 - Updated: 1/8/2012 - Published: 3/5/2011 - Jin K., Noel V.
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The long journey reviews
On the brink of losing his humanity, an Imperial soldier finds his hope restored as he falls in love with Eldar woman. But such things as hope and love tend not to last in the galaxy of war. Together, they must protect their relationship from encroachments of those who wished to make puppets out of them, be they friends or foes. What can remain when the journey is so long?
Warhammer - Rated: T - English - Romance/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 5 - Words: 30,086 - Reviews: 47 - Favs: 41 - Follows: 82 - Updated: 9/6 - Published: 4/25 - Dark Eldar, Eldar, Imperial Guard
The Guardian Angel reviews
An Imperial Knight is invincible in battle against the Tau. But as he bathes himself in his glorified delusion, little does he realize he is merely a chest piece in a much larger game where the stake is higher than anyone could comprehend. When the Emperor's protection is not enough, it is up to someone else to take up the duty.
Warhammer - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,987 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 3/1 - Published: 2/28 - Eldar, Imperial Guard, Tau - Complete
A heretic's desire reviews
The Chaos rebel leader receives blessing from a source he never expected. But as victory seems near, will his quest for freedom to his people be answered? Does such thing even exist in a galaxy torn by war?
Warhammer - Rated: T - English - Drama/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,875 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 3 - Published: 1/14 - Chaos Space Marines, Lost and the Damned - Complete
Value of a human life reviews
In the grimdarkness of the far future, how much could the life of a single human be worth? What is the length to which an Eldar would go to achieve victory? Whether because of need, or of pride, the consequence is inevitable.
Warhammer - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,102 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/30/2014 - Eldar, Planetary Defence Forces, Tau - Complete
The Emperor's Greenest reviews
The life of a young Imperial Guard lieutenant changed forever one day. Good news: he was promoted to Lord General. Bad news: his regiment is entirely Orks. Worst news: they are immediately thrown into war against the Necron. Facing cultural conflicts from within and without, they must pull themselves together and prove once and for all who are the Emperor's greenest.
Warhammer - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 3 - Words: 10,625 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 32 - Follows: 30 - Updated: 12/16/2014 - Published: 11/18/2014 - Imperial Guard, Orks, Necrons - Complete
The melacholy of Shizuka Miyamoto reviews
Nine Eldar individuals are dispatched by the Swordwind on the world of Marinesh to counter the Ork threat. A tenth member joined them, a human child rescued by Fire Dragon Shizuka. As the situation becomes more complicated by the moment, the question remains: why nine Eldar would risk their lives to save one human?
Warhammer - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Family - Chapters: 7 - Words: 43,855 - Reviews: 55 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 18 - Updated: 9/20/2014 - Published: 12/16/2013 - Chaos Space Marines, Eldar, Orks, Tau
5 guardsmen and an Ogryn reviews
Six of them (Ogryn included) come from six different regiments: Cadian, Mordian, Krieg, Catachan, Tanith and Savlar Chem Dogs. Trapped behind enemy lines, they must use their different skills and combat tactics to survive, let alone changing the course of the entire war. Will they succeed, or will they die forgotten? (Completed)
Warhammer - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 3 - Words: 9,630 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 15 - Updated: 5/30/2014 - Published: 4/25/2014 - Chaos Space Marines, Imperial Guard, Ogryns - Complete
Motivation reviews
Sometimes, on the road to greatness, even the mighty Space Marines need a little push.
Warhammer - Rated: T - English - Humor/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,500 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 4/12/2014 - Published: 4/11/2014 - Dark Eldar, Eldar, Space Marines - Complete
Dire strait reviews
Cut off from the rest of the army, a Tau Fire Warrior must do everything to survive, even if that means allying with the fickle-minded Eldar. Up against seemingly endless tides of Greenskin, can they trust each other long enough to survive? Eldar x Tau story, not much in Fanfiction here. Hope you enjoy.
Warhammer - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 5 - Words: 27,150 - Reviews: 50 - Favs: 29 - Follows: 37 - Updated: 3/27/2014 - Published: 11/27/2012 - Eldar, Tau, Orks
Never forget Never forgive reviews
Sequel to A simple story in the 41st millenium. Company Master Ragna leads his brothers against the Orks on the planet Quadesh. Things get complicated when relic STC and the Chapter's second greatest shame are involved. Mistrusted by the Sisters of Battle, can Ragna keep his cool to snatch yet another victory?
Warhammer - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,564 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 2/15/2014 - Published: 7/23/2013 - Orks, Planetary Defence Forces, Space Marines, Sisters of Battle
A simple story in the 41st millenium reviews
Failing to convince his Captain of the Greenskin threat, Sergeant Ragnar of the Dark Angel must assemble the most ridiculous army ever to counteract. Warhammer and children story style. Hope you enjoy. One shot.
Warhammer - Rated: T - English - Humor/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,116 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 1 - Published: 10/19/2012 - Orks, Space Marines - Complete
Milk for the Khorne Flakes reviews
All Khârn the Betrayer wants was a victory to make up for his disatrous campaign. But when two Eldar brothers ask him for a favor, thing goes CRAZY. Your comments are highly appriciated. Chapter 2 is up!
Warhammer - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,428 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 7 - Updated: 9/29/2012 - Published: 11/6/2011 - Khârn the Betrayer, Chaos Space Marines
Ragna vs the World reviews
All Ragna the Bloodedge wants is a nice, warm, quiet day. But how is he going to get one when eveyone is trying to get him instead?
BlazBlue - Rated: K+ - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,645 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 4 - Published: 7/26/2012 - Ragna
A servant for a day reviews
The ever irritating Rachel Alucard wants to have a maid for her castle. Unfortunately, the position is filled by none other than Ragna the Bloodedge. How will this turn out?
BlazBlue - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,452 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 7/16/2012 - Ragna, Rachel A. - Complete