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Author has written 28 stories for Pokémon, My Little Pony, Pitch Black / Riddick, Dungeons and Dragons, Assassin's Creed, and Equilibrium.
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i'm male, and bisexual, I write all kinds of stories, violent, romance, and sexual, even lemon, also I enjoy writing in realism.
In other words I like writing about characters who can think quick on their feet but still screw up and make mistakes now and then because they're you know... HUMAN! I think it's very important in stories to keep characters believable, and if two characters are going to take a relationship further, then I HAVE to come up with a realistic scenario of why their relationship changed, I can't stand stories that just shove characters into those kinds of relationships when in a normal day they would have never done that, you have to build up to it you know?
I don't know maybe I'm just really anal about that stuff but oh well, anyway, I love getting reviews whether they're good or bad, that's how writers grow and better themselves, and I think it's nice to let readers submit OCs every now and then, it always breathes new life into a story you know?
and some people wonder who the hell Bemanl is? he/she (can change gender at will) is a made up persona of mine, backstory is that when the seven arch angels of the seven sins came to earth to experience human life, Bemnal was one of the angels traveling with the arch angel of lust, and after the whole scenario of God getting pist and cursing them to be fallen angels, some chose to join hell as demons, but Bemnal decided to stay a fallen angel and travel the earth, collecting stories in his ever growing book, the secret book of Bemnal the Fallen and thusly the stories end up here on this site, how i don't freaking now... its magic...
Bemnal's description, he has three basic forms, Alpha form in shich he stands about 5'9 has black steel boots and greaves with red tints on the spiked edges, and wear's a black trench coat that sotr of melds into itself at the chest, but at the waist it separates and comes outword coming down to a foot above the floor, the fron of the waist is open, and the ends of either long sleve have a red tint on the edge, he also has black fingerless gloves, a sickly blackish red tins to the skin on his fingers and his neail are actually full on blood red claws about two inches in length, on the front and back of this trench coat, are blood red desings of lines turning at angle and swirlling about forming a demonic sigil on the front, and angel wings on the back, his head and face are hidden by a black hood that ends around its edges in tattered shreds, the face is mostly hidden in balckness except for seraded whitesh yellow teeth in a huge smile and red glowing eyes that are angled inward at the bottom and outward at the top, the edges of the eyes are jagged, he also has chains that are wrapped around his forearms dug into the flesh while they come down a foot beyond his hands, the links are a copperish rusted color and rather then being chain links, they are barbed spike like links, on his back rests a folded up scythe that seems to magically stay there, (full description of scythe look up the fully upgraded scythe from ninja gaiden two) and when he chooses, he can have black angel wings sprout from his back, which allow him to fly at 400 miles an hour at max speed, they are also indestructable and bake excellent sheilds and weapons when the edges are sharpened.
preffered weapon, his scythe, or psionic powers
anywho, enjoy the stories!
ok so this is another update to profile, I wanted to just get something out there... I'm a horrible speller, but since joining college literature classes I have gotten much better,
often I have long paragraphs and my story plots are... ok they're fucking weird, they're somewhere between crack induced 'bad trip' and mental patient talking about the planet zelcion that they ruel over, I think that's a pretty apt description, I have a fucked up mind so I write fucked up stories, now certain generes I'm not too familiar with so I won't be as good, an example would be Rossario Vampire, I haven't watched that show in years, I honestly don't know what's my 'thing' in terms of what I'm good at writing, I mainly write yuri based stories and a few yaoi, but rarely ever straight unless it's like a herem type deal (idk why) for example, I was experimenting when I wrote my first pokemon story and people loved it, so I wrote another, more people loved it, and both stories are like "WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON!!!???"
but anyway, if you don't like a story of mine that you read, then stop reading!!! everyone's entitled to their opinion but if you continue to read something you hate and leave repeated bad reviews then go suck Mechazilla's mechanical dick while Mothra shits white diarrhea on your face cause you are a fucking retard I mean who keeps reading something they hate? you touch a stove and burn your hand, maybe that means you shouldn't touch it? also don't be saying that it's a horrible story all together because of content, just cause you don't like the type of story it is doesn't mean someone else won't like it, everyone has different interests get used to it, I've come accross stories that pissed me off and made me think -you just shat on the foundation of that anime!!- but I found tons of reviews saying how much they loved it, that's because THEY HAVE DIFFERENT INTERESTS THEN ME!!! and I respect that, so just don't be a dick and ruin it for everyone else.
ok now that I got that anger out of the way, some updates
1. Eeveeloution is finished, I'm planning a sequel but don't expect it for many moons.
2. lusty adventures of Anna is doing... bad, I've lost all interest in it, if anyone wants to adopt it please PM me, I have no desire to continue writing it, it has no plot, no direction and I don't know... it's become a spiked drink at a high school drink, no one knows what it is or who messed with it but... it's done so what can ya do?
3.I'm not sure if I'll make another pokephillia story or not when eeveeloution is finally over, simply because I have some ideas but they may end up seeming like rip offs of other stories that I've seen on here, I mean what I've noticed is some writers really stand out with a particular story such as, ShinjiHiroku who wrote 'the club' stands out with that particular story and it's like its own thing it's almost its own genre of pokephillia altogether; and I think I may or may not have done that with the lusty adventures of Anna, problem is, I don't know if I make another story, if it will end up like its own thing, or being like adventures of anna or end up being more of a rip off that's too similar to something like 'the club' so after eeveeloution is gone, it might just be lusty adventures of anna as the only pokephillia story i have left, but not for certain, I've had some Ideas brewing around so not to sure on that
4. Isn't my Twilight avatar simply adorable? if so, check this out http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YXDCnv0B4Tw
Ok now that that's outta the way, I wanted to point out some good stories that I've read on here, just in case readers of my own stories share my interests.
The secret life of Rarity: (mlp, a grimdark murder tale) whoever wrote this deserves a freaking medal, this is the best written story I have ever read, I mean this rivals professional writers, it's got a solid plot, sticks to the main focus, and is very well grammared and has like zero mispells, it's also very artistically portrayed and, being a fan of dark disturbing stories, I love it when a slasher tale is told from the murderer's point of view, Rarity grows an addiction to killing ponies (don't worry she doesn't go cupcakes on any of the characters we know and love) and it's almost as if we follow her on her journey through self exploration as well as her mind gradually disassembling itself, slowly falling apart and more often than not, the writer gets the audience to hate her victims as much as she does, to the point where we're almost cheering her on, I absolutely love this fic and recommend it to any fan of dark mlp stories.
The Club: (pokemon hentai story) since there's a lot of stories with this title I'll include the author: ShinjiHiroku. this is definitely my fav pokemon fic, it's definitely for those who um... like the more lemony side of pokemon fanfiction but anywho, it's got very nicely clean cut edges and though it's based a lot around sex that's not what it's all about, it brings to mind the fight for human/pokemon equality and even fits in a serious romance angst strife, yet it also manages to fit in character development as well as delving into the more base and carnal nature of the human mind, definitely a good read and long too!
The dragon in Twilight: it's ironic to say that this story could be a book since the plot line gets highly influenced by a book that Twilight reads which you guessed it, is called 'the dragon in twilight' being that Twilight Sparkle is my favorite pony, I naturally love all stories with her included, but I particularly like how this one takes a very realistic view on the characters and personalities of Spike and Twilight but, more importantly, sticks to those personalities. This story isn't one of the longer ones but it seems to be... long enough you know? it has a goal in mind, takes off towards the goal, has character development, and finishes off with a satisfying conclusion, it's also very romantic and even if you're not a clop fan I think you'll still enjoy it.
well I've read a lot more good ones but so far these are the only ones that I believe are worth making note of.
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Hey! I made a new Forum based on Dungeons and Ponies Book 1, Staff of Wishing; the Forum is called Dungeons and Ponies book 2, role play; it is a dungeons and dragons based role playing forum filled with a large array of races, classes, magic, and stealth abilities; it takes place 3,500 years before the show with anthro ponies and is just begging for eager adventurers! And knowing my -censored- up mind, it'll be an adventure you won't soon forget. I'm also looking for DMs interested in running an MLP DnD campaign since I'm only planning on running a 3-4 person campaign but if others would like to join as DMs they're more than welcome.
Here's the rundown...
3,500 years ago in the early days of Equestria; the world was full of strife and dark rumors of elder beings stirring within the fey. A segregated society of all the races and gender forced apart by creed and culture; but within this world a small group of adventurers find that fate brings them together only to thrust them into a world of adventure and perile; will you be Warrior or Wizard? Rogue or Priest? Hero or Nightmare? Strong or Cunning? The choices are yours, the decisions you make shape the world around you; will you bring the world of ponies into a new age of light and harmony, or plummet it into a necropolis of hate and death?
Here's the Link: http://fanfiction.net/forum/Dungeons-and-Ponies-book-2-Role-Play/137574/
And here's the link for mobile devices: http://m.fanfiction.net/forum/Dungeons-and-Ponies-book-2-Role-Play/137574/
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