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Author has written 33 stories for Professor Layton, Phantom of the Opera, Nightmare Before Christmas, Doctor Who, Inuyasha, Invader Zim, Dragon Ball Z, Penguins of Madagascar, Darren Shan Saga/Cirque Du Freak, American McGee's Alice, Beetlejuice, Mina and the Count, StarTrek: The Original Series, Hetalia - Axis Powers, Romeo and Juliet, and To Kill a Mockingbird.
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My FictionPress Profile. ====>>> http://www.fictionpress.com/u/793766/
To the People Critics United Members,
I just want to point out some things to you all.
1) It helps people with there spelling and grammar. It' also spaces out things that they want to say, show actions. Isn't that what Shakespeare did? Even if they made that into a book, or an Anime/Manga, guess what, it's still in script format.
2) It help people to ENCOURAGE to write. If they start doing it, and EVERYONE can join in it, they can be influence to write, and get an account and start slowly do fun stories and do other stories like those 'Allowed' ones as you Critics United members call it.
3) Who said Musses where not ALLOWED? The rules did not say they couldn't do that, I mean come on, the rules did not say that! You all know that.
4) Plus, with the Disclaimer, isn't that an Author's Note as well? I don't see *which goes with reason 3* why that you can do it FUNNY? I see no reason at this at all!
5) What if you saying you are saying that you are doing a poll on there? Is that ALRIGHT? Apparently not to you Critics United.
Some things with second person/you based are OK, Q&A, are Ok, even though choose your own adventure can be kinda confusing, and I can see that, but REALLY? . Plus you Critics United members, stop flaming! You can at LEAST tell them NICELY you are not fallowing the rules, and not stay it BLUNTLY. It's quite rude and that means you are trolling another person which is, last time I checked, against the rules as well. You all just go on and just list the rules, and make people feel BADE which goes on to 6!
6) It help people to be proactive about writing. Do you know that in America, that most people read three books in one year? When you flame them, it make people feel bad, they stop writing, and that mean they stop reading and watch T.V, Video games, Ect. Don't you find that hard to believe that you, Critics United member's do that? You just take one person to read and write less and less. What you do does not encourage people at all, isn't it FanFiction- unleash you IMAGINATION?!?
You can kick me out of fanfiction if you have too, but I want to talk to the person who created fanfiction and see if I can get answers.
Thank you for one more American's to become those who read three books a year.
THIS IS A NO INSANE CLOWN THAT COULD KILL ME ZONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HI im a vary nice yet random person so please do not be mad at me!i hope you like any new story's so ... CHICKEN TACO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
P.s i like pie.
Layton-Do you have anything else to say my dear?
Co-Well excuse me if i have the need to say something and SCHOOL is almost here.
Co-Maybe during lunch.
Jack-We are all doom
Artemis-How long do we stay here?
Vegeta-As long as she wants.
Co-WILL YOU EIGHT SHUT UP???
Co-Their we go. Just need to tell you that i will be busy and school is coming up so chapters will be slow. Sorry. :(
I Like this video.====>> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d4IOZvTBwQQ&feature=related
And this one. It's so Professor Layton. XD ======>> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GCQVkqIVV9w&feature=related
If it's not blue just put it up on that bar like thingie. I forgot what it was called. XD
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-This is a true story. A girl died in 1933. A man buried her when she was still alive. The murder chanted, "Toma Sota balcu," as he buried her. Now that you have read this chant, you will meet this little girl. In the middle of the night she will be on your ceiling. She will suffocate you like she was suffocated. If you post this on your profile, she will not bother you. Your kindness will be rewarded. -Lucillia
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Did you know before you go to sleep at night there is one person of the opposite rainbow is thinking of you. They want to kiss you ,they want to be with you,are always thinking about you before they go to sleep at night they are longing to be with you this is not at all fake if you re post within 5 mins the person who is longing for you will approach you in 1 month and ask you out or grab you and kiss you. But if you break this chain no one will ask you out in 5 years.
From what this thing I did I am in: Hufflepuff
Said Hufflepuff, "I'll teach the lot, and treat them just the same."
11 LAYERS OF YOU...
LAYER ONE: ON THE OUTSIDE
Name: You don't need to know at all so SHUT UP!! XP
LAYER TWO: ON THE INSIDE
Your heritage: German, Irish, American Indian, and other stuff i cant remember.
LAYER THREE: YESTERDAY, TODAY, TOMORROW:
Your thoughts first waking up today? Do I HAVE TO GET UP??Stupid brain, stupid self alarm clock, LET ME SLEEP AND I WILL BE HAPPY...Oh...Erik...HI ERIK! Your best physical feature? Eyes. Your bedtime: Around 9 and 10 sometimes 11
LAYER FOUR: YOUR PICK:
Pepsi or Coke: Neather. Dr.Pepper or Root beer for me.
McDonald's or Burger King: Burger King
Single or group dates: never had a date
Lipton Tea or Nestea: neither.
Chocolate or vanilla: CHOCOLATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
Cappuccino or coffee: BOTH!!!
Co-Oh do SHUT UP.
LAYER FIVE: DO YOU?
LAYER SIX: IN THE PAST MONTH:
Drank alcohol: Nope.
LAYER SEVEN: HAVE YOU EVER:
Played a stripping game: no
LAYER EIGHT: GETTING OLD:
Age your hoping to be married: In either my twenties or thirties.
LAYER NINE: IN A GIRL/GUY:
Best eye color: Blue, gold, brown, or purple...and black.
LAYER TEN: WHAT WERE YOU DOING:
1 MINUTE AGO: Answering questions.
LAYER 11: FINISH THE SENTENCE:
I LOVE: Gir, Erik, Sesshomaru, Orion, Zim, Dib, and this will keep going on so i will shut up now.
Name of Character: Amber
Basic: (All worth 1 point)
[x ] An Irken with a human name.
Current points: 8
Uncommon: (2 points)
[x ] Enhanced mystical or scientifically (super speed, mechanical limbs, faster natural healing)
Current Points: 10
Unnatural: (3 points)
[ ] Is based on social and ethnic stereotypes (geishas, cowboys, emos, goths)
Current Points: 15
De-Suifiers: ( Subtract 1 to score for each)
[ ] Over weight (chunky, chubby)
Current Points: 4
De-Suifiers 2: (Subtract 2)
-4 to 15 (Normal Character)
16 to 30 (Border Sue)
31 to 116 (Mary Sue)
27. Border Sueing. I should warn you all she does have a dark past that you all don't need to know about. So that can REALLY bring down some points.
YOUR GUY SIDE:
You love hoodies.
YOUR GIRL SIDE:
You wear lip gloss/stick.
Oh god, I may be a girl, but I am a TOMBOY! 0_0 Hehe, wow...um...shesh...this is a lot to take in. My sister is my TOTAL opposite. 0_0.
This is really sweet...
When a girl is quiet, a million things are running through her mind.
When a girl is not arguing, she is thinking deeply.
When a girl looks at you with her eyes full of question, she is wondering how long you will be around.
When a girl answers "I'm fine." after a few seconds, she is not fine at all.
When a girl stares at you, she is wondering why you are lying.
When a girl rests her head on your chest, she is wishing for you to be her's forever.
When a girl wants to see you everday, she wants to be pampered.
When a girl says "I love you." she means it.
When a girl says "I miss you." nobody could miss you more than that.
Life only comes around once, so make sure you spend it with the right person.
Find a guy who calls you beautiful instead of hot, and calls you back when you hang up on him.
The guy who will stay awake just to watch you sleep.
Wait for the guy who kisses your forehead,
Who wants to show you off to the world when you are in your sweats.
The one who holds your hand in front of his friends and is constantly reminding you of how much he cares about you and how lucky he is to have you there for him.
The one who turns to his friends and declares "That's her.".
If you read this, you have to repost it, guy or girl, or you will have bad luck for the rest of your life.
If you repost this, in five minutes your true love will call or message you.
Tonight at midnight, they will realize that they love you.
Something good will happen at approximately 1:42 pm tomorrow, and it could happen anywhere.
So get ready for the biggest shock of your life.
If you don't repost this, you will be cursed with relationship problems for all of eternity.
Repost this to your profile, and spare yourself the emotional stress.
I was walking around in a Target store, when I saw a cashier hand this little boy some money back.
The boy couldn't have been more than 5 or 6 years old.
The cashier said, "I'm sorry, but you don't have enough money to buy this doll."
Then the little boy turned to the old woman next to him: ''Granny, are you sure I don't have enough money?''
The old lady replied: ''You know that you don't have enough money to buy this doll, my dear.''
Then she asked him to stay there for just 5 minutes while she went to look a round. She left quickly.
The little boy was still holding the doll in his hand.
Finally, I walked toward him and I asked him who he wished to give this doll to.
"It's the doll that my sister loved most and wanted so much for Christmas. She was sure that Santa Claus would bring it to her."
I replied to him that maybe Santa Claus would bring it to her afterall, and not to worry.
But he replied to me sadly. "No, Santa Claus can't bring it to her where she is now. I have to give the doll to my mommy so that she can give it to my sister when she goes there."
His eyes were so sad while saying this. "My sister has gone to be with God. Daddy says that Mommy is going to see God very soon too, so I thought that she could take the doll with her to give it to my sister.''
My heart nearly stopped.
The little boy looked up at me and said: "I told daddy to tell mommy not to go yet. I need her to wait until I come back from the mall."
Then he showed me a very nice photo of him where he was laughing. He then told me "I want mommy to take my picture with her so she won't forget me. I love my mommy and I wish she doesn't have to leave me, but daddy says that she has to go to be with my little sister."
Then he looked again at the doll with sad eyes, very quietly.
I quickly reached for my wallet and said to the boy. "Suppose we check again, just in case you do have enough money for the doll?''
"OK," he said, "I hope I do have enough." I added some of my money to his without him seeing and we started to count it. There was enough for the doll and even some spare money.
The little boy said: "Thank you God for giving me enough money!"
Then he looked at me and added, "I asked last night before I went to sleep for God to make sure I had enough money to buy this doll, so that mommy could give it to my sister. He heard me!''
"I also wanted to have enough money to buy a white rose for my mommy, but I didn't dare to ask God for too much. But He gave me enough to buy the doll and a white rose.''
"My mommy loves white roses."
A few minutes later, the old lady returned and I left with my basket.
I finished my shopping in a totally different state from when I started. I couldn't get the little boy out of my mind.
Then I remembered a local newspaper article two days ago, which mentioned a drunk man in a truck, who hit a car occupied by a young woman and a little girl.
The little girl died right away, and the mother was left in a critical state. The family had to decide whether to pull the plug on the life-sustaining machine, because the young woman would not be able to recover from the coma. Was this the family of the little boy?
Two days after this encounter with the little boy, I read in the newspaper that the young woman had passed away.
I couldn't stop myself as I bought a bunch of white roses and I went to the funeral home where the body of the young woman was exposed for people to see and make last wishes before her burial.
She was there, in her coffin, holding a beautiful white rose in her hand with the photo of the little boy and the doll placed over her chest.
I left the place, teary-eyed, feeling that my life had been changed forever.. The love that the little boy had for his mother and his sister is still, to this day, hard to imagine. And in a fraction of a second, a drunk driver had taken all this away from him.
Now you have 2 choices:
1) Repost this message.
2) Ignore it as if it never touched your heart
I am so sorry that I havn't been here in forever. I just want you all to know that I am moving on to DeviantART. (Been there for awhile as well)
If you want me to FINISH some of the stories...please nag me on there as much as you can XD It's CrazyandCalm1218. ;)
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