YoungTakinom
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Joined 05-13-11, id: 2919544, Profile Updated: 06-19-13
Author has written 6 stories for Chaotic.

Hi. I'm new to Fanfiction, so my first few stories may not be that good. I'm also new to profiles, so please excuse me if mine isn't very impressive yet. I'm a huge fan of Chaotic, which is where I got my penname from. Since I have other things to do, it may take a while for me to post new chapters, but I promise I will try my best to make the wait totally worth it.

Something I'd like to tell you before we get onto the important stuff; most of my Chaotic fics will contian my favorite pairings, but will not have heavy fluff; just lots of light fluff.

If you love Jesus, copy and paste this into your profile.

If you don't cuss, copy and paste this into your profile.

If you believe in Jesus Christ put this in your profile and don't just ignore this, because in the Bible it says if you deny me, I will deny you in front of my Father in the gates of Heaven.

If you think Fanfiction.net is way better than Myspace could ever hope to be in eternity, copy and paste and add your name. otherrelmwriter, ChibiSkitty-donna, Clockwork Oracle King, Skoolgrl09,starryblossoms, An Anime Fangirl, Fuzzy Blue Boy, YoungTakinom

If you love Jesus Christ, copy and paste this into your profile.

I believe in God and have given my life to him. If you're a Christian too, copy and paste this to your profile.

If you agree that the Chaotic TV show needs a fourth season, copy and paste this to your profile.

If you think that standing out is better than fitting in, then copy and paste this to your profile.

"Mommy, I colored your sheets with lipstick!" With anger, she starts to hit her child 'til he was unconscious. Then she regrets what she has done and, crying, says to her child "Please open your eyes." But it's too late, his tiny heart had stopped ...beating...When she walked to the bedroom, the sheet said "I LOVE YOU MOMMY!" Copy and paste this onto your profile if you against Child Abuse. :'(

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If you can read this, put this in you profile

A teenage girl about 17 named Diane had gone to visit some friends one evening and time passed quickly as each shared their various experiences of the past year. She ended up staying longer than planned, and had to walk home alone. She wasn't afraid because it was a small town and she lived only a few blocks away. As she walked along under the tall elm trees, Diane asked God to keep her safe from harm and danger. When she reached the alley, which was a short cut to her house, she decided to take it. However, halfway down the alley she noticed a man standing at the end as though he were waiting for her. She became uneasy and began to pray, asking for God's protection. Instantly a comforting feeling of quietness and security wrapped round her, she felt as though someone was walking with her. When she reached the end of the alley, she walked right past the man and arrived home safely. The following day, she read in the newspaper that a young girl had been raped in the same alley just twenty minutes after she had been there. Feeling overwhelmed by this tragedy and the fact that it could have been her, she began to weep. Thanking the Lord for her safety and to help this young woman, she decided to go to the police station. She felt she could recognize the man, so she told them her story. The police asked her if she would be willing to look at a lineup to see if she could identify him. She agreed and immediately pointed out the man she had seen in the alley the night before. When the man was told he had been identified, he immediately broke down and confessed. The officer thanked Diane for her bravery and asked if there was anything they could do for her. She asked if they would ask the man one question. Diane was curious as to why he had not attacked her. When the policeman asked him, he answered, "Because she wasn't alone. She had two tall men walking on either side of her." Amazingly, whether you believe or not, you're never alone. Did you know that 98 of teenagers will not stand up for God, and 93 of the people that read this won’t repost it?

People come to this site to learn how to write. No one automatically knows how to, professionals can tell you that much. This site is for people to get together and have fun. No one wants a flame but most can turn their cheek as long as if it has constructive criticism. But as this site grows more popular more people join this site for the wrong reasons. Thus the new and blossoming writers are a target for their foul mouths. Many new writers do not understand the concept of a flame and discontinue their story. They never had the chance to blossom and become beautiful writers; instead they give up because someone decided to call them a foul name and didn't even bother to tell the author what was wrong with the story in the first place. I’m telling you this because I feel that this should come to stop. These people honestly believe that they're doing good by flaming. What they don't realize is that it's doing more harm than good. If they really wish for people to become better writers, than they should be straight with them in a mature manner. No flaming, just telling the author politely what's wrong with the story. Feel free post this on your profile if you agree.

Black and White:

A black man was talking to a white man and said: "I'm black. When I was born I was black. When I grew up I was black. When I'm sick I'm black. When I go in the sun I'm black. When I'm cold I'm black. When I die I'll still be black. But you: When you were born you were pink. When you grew up you were white. When you're sick you're green. When you go in the sun you're red. When you're cold you're blue. When you die you'll be purple. And you have the nerve to call me colored. Re-post this to help stop racism

I don't care if you're gay or straight, everybody needs love.
I don't care if you're diseased with an incurable sickness, everybody deserves a chance.
I don't care if you're ugly or pretty, everybody has flaws.
I don't care if you're black or white, everybody has the same capabilities.
I don't care if you're weird, everybody needs to change.
I don't care if you're rich or poor, everybody needs warmth.
I don't care if you’re different, everybody is.

I may not be able to fully relate to the following people, but they are human to, even if I don't agree with them.

I am the girl kicked out of her home because I confided in my mother that I am a lesbian.

I am the prostitute working the streets because nobody will hire a transsexual woman.

I am the sister who holds her gay brother tight through the painful, tear-filled nights.

We are the parents who buried our daughter long before her time.

I am the man who died alone in the hospital because they would not let my partner of twenty-seven years into the room.

I am the foster child who wakes up with nightmaresof being taken away from the two fathers who are the only loving family I have ever had. I wish they could adopt me.

I am one of the lucky ones, I guess. I survived the attack that left me in a coma for three weeks, and in another year I will probably be able to walk again.

I am not one of the lucky ones. I killed myself just weeks before graduating high school. It was simply too much to bear.

We are the couple who had the realtor hang up on us when she found out we wanted to rent a one-bedroom for two men.

I am the person who never knows which bathroom I should use if I want to avoid getting the management called on me.

I am the mother who is not allowed to even visit the children I bore, nursed, and raised. The court says I am an unfit mother because I now live with another woman.

I am the domestic-violence survivor who found the support system grow suddenly cold and distant when they found out my abusive partner is also a woman.

I am the domestic-violence survivor who has no support system to turn to because I am male.

I am the father who has never hugged his son because I grew up afraid to show affection to other men.

I am the home-economics teacher who always wanted to teach gym until someone told me that only lesbians do that.

I am the man who died when the paramedics stopped treating me as soon as they realized I was transsexual.

I am the person who feels guilty because I think I could be a much better person if I did not have to always deal with society hating me.

I am the man who stopped attending church, not because I don't believe, but because they closed their doors to my kind.

I am the person who is afraid of telling his loving Christian parents he loves another male.

I am the person who has to hide what this world needs most: love.

Re-post this if you believe homophobia is wrong. Please do your part to end it.

Month one

Mommy I am only 8 inches long but I have all my organs. I love the sound of your voice. Every time I hear it I wave my arms and legs. The sound of your heart beat is my favorite lullaby.

Month Two

Mommy today I learned how to suck my thumb. If you could see me you could definitely tell that I am a baby. I'm not big enough to survive outside my home though. It is so nice and warm in here.

Month Three

You know what Mommy I'm a boy!! I hope that makes you happy. I always want you to be happy. I don't like it when you cry. You sound so sad. It makes me sad too and I cry with you even though you can't hear me.

Month Four

Mommy my hair is starting to grow. It is very short and fine but I will have a lot of it. I spend a lot of my time exercising. I can turn my head and curl my fingers and toes and stretch my arms and legs. I am becoming quite good at it too.

Month Five

You went to the doctor today. Mommy, he lied to you. He said that I'm not a baby. I am a baby Mommy, your baby. I think and feel. Mommy, what's abortion?

Month Six

I can hear that doctor again. I don't like him. He seems cold and heartless. Something is intruding my home. The doctor called it a needle. Mommy what is it? It burns! Please make him stop! I can't get away from it! Mommy! HELP me!

Month Seven

Mommy I am okay. I am in Jesus's arms. He is holding me. He told me about abortion. Why didn't you want me Mommy?

Every Abortion Is Just . . .

One more heart that was stopped. Two more eyes that will never see. Two more hands that will never touch. Two more legs that will never run. One more mouth that will never speak.

If you're against abortion, re-post this

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Fireworks by Elememtal1000 reviews
MaxxorxIntress. A drabble of Maxxor giving Intress a gift during an Overworld holiday in Kiru City. Contains fluff.
Chaotic - Rated: K - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 813 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/26 - [Maxxor, Intress] - Complete
Drabe's Heart Broken Apart by Elememtal1000 reviews
A poem written in Drabe's POV about how he feels towards Intress.
Chaotic - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 2 - Published: 2/13 - Intress, Drabe - Complete
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Revolutions reviews
The power struggle on Perim is carfully balanced, but now a tribe has gain new advantages upsetting that balance. How will the other tribes react? How will it affect the M'arrilian Invasion? And what do Aivenna and Nivenna have to do with it?
Chaotic - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 8 - Words: 11,591 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 2/15 - Published: 5/14/2013 - Aivenna, Nivenna
Babysitting reviews
She had been kick out of daycare. She had pushed Najarin over his limit. Yes, even the High Muge of the Overworld could not handle that one little girl. But yet Drabe had been chose to look after her for the next ten to fourteen days. How hard could it be to take care of one little girl? Harder than you think.
Chaotic - Rated: K - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,108 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 10/1/2014 - Published: 6/22/2014
nature and experiance reviews
Somehow Von Bloot was put on Earth with no memory of who he is, so Kaz helped invent a machine to send him back. At first, Von Bloot wanted to repay his debt, but as his memories come back, so does his old personality. With the help of his friends, both old and new, he will have to face new battles; both inner and external.
Chaotic - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 7,109 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 4/11/2014 - Published: 8/11/2013 - Lord Von Bloot
For my Guest reviews
Aivenna thought it would just be a simple trip to the Underworld and back. Sure, she would have to get the girl out of prisson, but it would be worth it. It's not like she would wind up going back in time, endanger Intress, get her parents killed, and have to track down a boarderline psychotic witch who doesn't even exist to get back home. Or so she thought.
Chaotic - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 380 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 4 - Published: 9/2/2012
In their minds reviews
No two people will ever agree on everything. Creatures are no exeption, so here is a little something to help you understand your favorite creatures, and the ones you don't like quite so much.
Chaotic - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 6 - Words: 2,185 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 8/6/2012 - Published: 5/29/2012
It's just the begining reviews
Have you ever wondered why there's The Passage, why Von Bloot was Chaor's second in command, why Chaor was so tolerant of his rebelliousness, how they met, who Nivenna and Aivenna's parents are, or why those two have different tribes?
Chaotic - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 13 - Words: 9,920 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 8/21/2011 - Published: 7/30/2011 - Chaor, Takinom, Intress - Complete