Author has written 5 stories for Harry Potter, Odd Thomas series, and Green Mile.
I like a lot of stuff, I don't like other stuff... I read alot of fanfics and have for years. I'm lazy but I usually make any deadlines I need to. I go to college, love the family, etc... If you like a fic you should review it. Writers should get feedback for their time and effort. Nobody gets paid for this.
I seriously don't like mary sue's or stu's they are the work of young writters who think their writing is actually good. I have talked to some of these people and some (not all) grow out of it and are later ashamed of their creations. If new writters could be warned about using these horrible caracters then maybe some good could come about and they would become better writters. I don't like flaming people, but I came up with something intresting and I guess I can pass it on here. Please use this if you come across a sue or stu, most writters are glad to know and even the older stories would be better of being removed, as long as you ask politely they tend to listen.
This is a mary sue fic, you have created a character with unrealistic qualities to overshadow the main characters and obsene plot holes. This is a cliche. I repeat this is a cliche story. Please try to refrain from using mary sue's or stu's in your fics, visit www.helium.com how to write original fanfictions without cliches. Many younger authors don't realise they are doing it and their work improves later, I'm sure you can do better. Thank you Greenbow
this is an outake from encyclopediadramatica.com/Mary_Sue
"Mary Sue" is a term for a character who is overly ideal, unrealistically perfect in every way and without significant character flaws. This character often serves as a stand-in for the writer, an idealized version of him- or herself.
Telltale signs of a Mary Sue include:
Her name is...
Has the surname of some canon character the suethor likes or is otherwise related to at least one cannon character Common names with unusual spellings usually with K's or Y's in weird places- Ravyn, Jennifyr, Erika, Elizabetteth... Names that are overused or meant to describe an appearance or object in connection with the character - Raven, Luna, Anya, Felina... Names that are a combination of the above characteristics - Enoby Darkness Wray Common Traits
Eyes that change color, hair that takes more than five words to describe. Speshul magik powers (even in fanons or games where magic doesn't exist) and/or unusual appendages such as wings. Ability to master anything with ease. Cute baby version of an imaginary creature for a pet (baby ancient dragon, baby griffon, baby unicorn, baby great Cthulhu, baby goatse) The ability to make male canon (and original) characters fall instantly in love with them. Or, failing that, just simply having the author play god to force the story to bend for them. Is written as sexually attractive or attracted to some canon character. Sparkles where there shouldn't be sparkles. Purple prose or badly-written prose No actual flaws. Being "too beautiful" or "not being able to play the banjo" are not flaws. Obvious author self-insertion TL;DR: A "perfect" character that supercedes everybody in looks, personality, etc
please help with the mary sue/stu's.
A message from MARY QUIET CONTRARY
THE END BY MARY QUIET CONTRARY
I will be putting my stories up for adoption. This means if you would like to use what's already posted and continue the story yourself, please feel free. Some people have told me I should keep going, but writing which I once enjoyed has now become an albatrose around my neck along with a lot of other things in my life. To the reviewers and readers I hope you enjoyed the stories and if anyone wants to use what I've written so far to make more, then may the muses sing you through
ALL STORIES MUST BE ADOPTED OR DELETED BY 6-20-12. Please let me know if you'd like to use what's there. I am also willing to send along the original plot notes, or you could just take the story down the rabbit hole. Thanks
Up for adoption are
A different kind of bravery
A mothers blessing and curse
Balance of reality
Serpent awakening (this seems to be very popular and I hope someone will continue it)
The goodbye letters
The graves of friend and foe
The veil and dreamers reality
Many of my complete stories like will you read me a fairy tale will be given to my friend greenbow.