Author has written 4 stories for Bleach, and Naruto.
Not that anyone really visits my profile but I thought I might as well put up my current progress for the new chapters of what I'm currently working on.
Done away with the usual chapter progress format to make a simple announcement. I'm still here, yay. I'm not quite sure when I'll be finishing up the newest chapters of my current stories but they will be posted. When they are it will be most likely a slew of updates and a new short story or two to go with. Unfortunately, writing is simply not at the top of my current list of priorities.
By the way, I take the time to respond to every single review or pm I get, so feel free to voice any concerns you might have. Although you have to be logged in so I can pm you. I don't want to be one of those people who publishes a new chapter and half of it is replies to reviews. Also, if I don't respond to you, then either I've forgotten like an idiot, or you have blocked pm. I only say this as I've ran into a few reviewers who have blocked pm and I can be rather forgetful. Also, if you wish to pm me simply to talk, go right ahead.
Finally, I'm currently willing to beta if anyone wants me to.
My favourite stories I've written.
3) The Path to Peace
I actually really like this story, but its early chapters are poorly written and lack clear focus. I have, in my opinion, a rather exciting vision for the future of this story, but as such a thing as yet to be written, I can't give this story any preference over my other two stories. Perhaps once I begin writing for this story once again and rewrite the previous chapters I'll rate this story higher, but for now it's my least favourite.
2) The Twins
After thinking it over, I have to admit that I like this story more than PTP at the moment. It is better written and more engaging, despite the fact that I don't like its plot and future as much as PTP. I feel that at the moment this story is a much better representation of my abilities as a writer, however meagre they might be, and as such I prefer this story.
1) The Folly of Man
Even though it's only a single chapter, I absolutely love this story. Unlike either of my other two stories, it is taking a completely different route from canon and is a rather original idea. The plot is something that I'm excited to write and I find myself wanting to put far more effort into it than either of my other stories. I like it so much that I've already got a whole side story nearly completely written to accompany it.
1) The Death of a Human (A side story to The Folly of Man) - To stand tall in the light, one must cast a great shadow. One man learns exactly how true those words are as he slowly loses himself to the greater good.
This would be a sorta prologue/side story to the main story, set before the main story begins and goes far more in depth into what happened. It would also be through the eyes of one who isn't actually a major character in my main story. I won't post it until I've gotten farther into The Folly of Man. To be honest though, I've almost written the whole story already and am itching to post it, so it will be coming sooner rather than later.
2) The World of the Sword (tentative title) Naruto - In a world where the age of chakra never truly began, a shinobi wanders the land trying to bring peace both to it and himself.
In this story the samurai rule the land while shinobi are few and far between. Many are simply fighting against corruption to protect their families, but there are those who sell their talents to the highest bidder. Then there are those who fight with a purpose. Naruto is one driven by purpose and he will impact the world as he moves towards it. This story actually excites me as much as The Folly of Man does. Unfortunately I will not be writing much of it for a while as I simply would not be able to concentrate on other stories properly.
3) Title Unknown Naruto
I don't have a summary for this story yet. In this story chakra usage has been forbidden and almost all can't access it. The governments of the world have evolved other ways of fighting. Those who can use chakra are either hunted down or hired for unspeakable tasks, but now there are those in the newest generation who wish to upset the status quo.
4) A Peaceful World - Naruto - How does life continue when everything has changed? How do people continue living when their purpose has been torn away? Sometimes peace just isn't enough.
This would be a relatively shorter story, barring unforseen inspiration, probably around 20k-45k words. It would be my look at the future of the Elemental Nations after the war. Some things from the canon would be changed, especially the newest stuff cuz I don't care to read it anymore, but it would basically be my version of what should happen, not that it will.
5) Children of War - Naruto -
No summary for this as of yet. I plan this to be a series of one-shots based upon characters from the Naruto universe. I think it's rather obvious based upon the title, but each one-shot will revolve around one character's experience in war, usually in a non-cannon setting. This is something that I'd like to do every now and again, both as practice for my stories and as something to get me out of a creative funk.
6) - Naruto - In a world where the truth is known to none but a few, it is power that rules.
Working on a summary right now. This would be a much darker look at the Naruto world, as I like to think most of my works are. It's meant to be a story of Naruto's search for truth in a world of lies.
7) Title Unknown MassEffect/Killzone
Turns out those grey aliens who were reportedly abducting humans were real. When these people come back to discover that Humanity has discovered Mass Effect technology, they launch an invasion. Humanity is unable to stop the menace and falls before it. In the heat of the battle, some ships manage to escape, fleeing into FTL. The ships, damaged, soon have to stop in an unexplored solar system. The only planet that they can land on is a desolate toxic land. Vowing revenge, the humans begin to adapt and rebuild, naming their planet Helghan.
This is the crossover I've been wanting to do, but I'm unsure if I'll ever actually write this as it's a rather large undertaking. so if there is anyone interested in this story they can pm me and we'll talk about it.
1) I was asked by Fan Fiction's Nightmare to issue this challenge as I simply do not have any time to write it myself nor do I feel properly equipped to write this particular story.
Naruto becomes a rapist due to a lack of feeling loved by his family. Naruto gets his revenge on both his mother and sister in front of Minato. Naruto also gets some other rather famous kunoichi; Kurotsuchi, Samui, Karui, Yugito, and Temari. This gets the attention of the Third Tsuchikage, Fouth Raikage and Fourth Kazekage. Those Kages ask who his parents are. Naruto reveals his parents to be Kushina Namikaze, formerly Uzumaki, and Minato Namikaze. He goes on to explain how they used him as a scapecoat for his twin sister as the Kyuubi's container. He goes on to ask them to make war against the Namikaze family, explaining that his hatred for them is why he's been ruining both the Namikaze and Uzumaki name. In exchange, he offers the Raikage all of the Uzumaki techinques, the Tsuchikage all of the Namikaze techinques, and Suna gets his twin sister as their slave.
This story would be using my story 'The Twins' as the basis. To that end I give whoever wishes to take this challenge the go ahead to use my entire story should they so wish. You can use either parts of it or the whole thing, just be sure to give me a shout out. Also, don't forget to notify both myself and Fan Fiction's Nightmare that you're taking it up.
2) An older story idea I had in which Naruto's family kinda favours his sibling who is the actual jinchuriki. It annoys him a little bit but they are still a loving family until one day! Dun dun dun! They choose the other sibling over Naruto, using him as a sacrifice to protect his sibling. Naruto learns of this and vows revenge. This takes place well after they are children, probably around Shippuden time-line.
How he is sacrificed is up the author. Maybe their both on a mission together with some others and Naruto is left behind. Or perhaps it's like the Hyuuga incident where Naruto is given as a stand-in for his sibling. Really anyway you want.
I'm never going to get around to writing this so I'll throw it out here for anyone to pick up. I do enjoy the amusing avenger plot every now and again, but it always starts out with the same neglected 5 year-old mini Itachi. I'd like to see one where Naruto wasn't a god-like stoic wonderboy, but simply a strong shinobi who didn't despise his parents and everyone else growing up.
I'm not really going to give any specifics on the challenge apart from the basic plot as I don't want to shackle writers with a million stipulations. I do ask that you don't give him a million women, as I've never particularly liked harem stories. You can if you want, it's just something I'd rather not see. Also try your best to keep bashing to a minimum. Other than that, have at er.
If you do want to pick this up, just pm me so I can leave a link to your story or something like that on my profile. Also, I wouldn't be adverse to discussing more in depth ideas for this story.
Responses to anon reviewers of The Twins. Any reviews received after the writing of chapter 8 will be placed here until chapter 9 has been released. The responses are in order of newest to oldest.
Guest chapter 8 . Jun 10
not even DBZ wannabes are that shitty
It's an enjoyable enough story, I feel it's just lost all notion of being about ninjas in favour of going for the DBZ style random powerups after each fight. Nonetheless, I still do have issues with the recent chapters; too much revealed in too short a time.
thor94 chapter 8 . Jun 9
Thank you for the suggestion, I will keep it in mind although I don't think I'll make him a jinchuriki.
Guest chapter 8 . Jun 9
It been a while since I read your story. it good so far. So when will he meet his family? Will he forgive them or not? Hope you keep writing more.
Glad you like it. Naruto should be getting know his family better pretty soon, though exactly how that'll be happening is still a secret for now. Since I'd originally started writing this, I haven't had plans for forgiveness and still don't. Finally, I will be writing more so keep an eye out.
Guest chapter 8 . Jun 9
Great chapter, update soon.
Thank you for the kind words, I always appreciate them.
Responses to anon reviewers for The Folly of Man
Guest 8/25/13 . chapter 1
Perhaps one of my biggest problems is being able to write longer chapters. It's something I'm working on without much success. Nonetheless, thank you for the review and compliment.
I would like to thank all of you for reviewing my stories, it's encouraging and I very much appreciate it.
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