Author has written 2 stories for Twilight.
Stop changing POVs without telling the reader. If I have to read half a chapter just to figure out who is talking, then go back to actually enjoy the content, you've missed the point. Unless you're writing a mystery in which the identity of the narrator is part of the secret, TELL US WHO IS TALKING.
1. I don't like dogs. They stick their noses in places that I can only show you on a doll--is it any wonder men consider them a best friend?
2. I've been told I have the most diverse playlist people have ever seen. I enjoy nearly every genre of music, and the 160GB iPod classic is not big enough to hold every album I own. My current obsessions include Helen Jane Long, Porcupine Tree, Halestorm, and Alison Krauss with Robert Plant.
3. Chick flicks give me hives. I judge the quality of a movie by the size of the explosions and the amount of ass-kicking. Nicholas Sparks = NO; Jason Statham = YES.
4. While I enjoy a good Twilight fic--more so than I do canon, in fact--Edward Cullen will never be as yummy as William the Bloody. It's just not possible.
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