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Author has written 3 stories for Pokémon, Hetalia - Axis Powers, Lone Ranger, and Osmosis Jones.
1/26/14: I'm taking a brief hiatus from fanfiction.net, I've run out of steam and need some time to recharge. I will still answer messages.
3/4/14: Six more days and I get my internet back as well as my laptop. Thank you for your messages, I really appreciate them. My fanfics however will be updated accordingly:
First will be chapter 3 of 'Cross my Heart', then maybe Celestial Enigmas and My Little Peshka.
It all depends on my mood, finals is not a good time to work on fanfiction as I get really upset, and if I do try to update now, I'll end up with something like the VERY first version of Celestial Enigmas. I'm usually at my WORST during post finals and fanfics will resume possibly the day after. I have a lot of stuff to do like get my dream team on Pokemon Y. But do not fret, the fanfics WILL be updated :) Thank you guys once again so much for your patience and messages.
3/5/14: I am incredibly upset after what happened today, fanfic updates will resume after March 12th or so.
3/11/14: HELLO FUCK FUCK FACES! DID YOU REALLY THINK I WAS GONE!? WELL GUESS WHAT?! I'M BACK BITCHES, AND I'M ANGRIER THAN EVER BECAUSE MY INTENRET KEEPS FUCKING UP AND I NEED MY INTERNET IF I DONT' HAVE MY INTENRET I OG TUFKCING NUTS! SO BE REPARED AND WATCH YOUR FUCKING MOUTHS IN THE REVIEWS! UPDATES WILL RESUME SHORTLY!
3/12/14: As always.. I always get what I want! _. My internet is back, and Celestial Enigmas will be updated within two days. I thank you for your patience.
:.: PLEASE READ THIS BEFORE READING CELESTIAL ENIGMAS:.*
I bet by now everyone is wondering why I wrote this fanfic. Well I can assure you the reasons aren't what you thought they would be. The reason I am writing this is because I'm tired of everyone getting things wrong about this fanfic. Consider this a "manual" of sorts.
This will also contain Krystal's current up to date bio.
To get things started, I would like to say that
A) No, I am not a troll.
B) No, I am not an "attention whore" either.
Now that we've gotten that out of the way let's begin! This "essay" will have the following sections:
I) Concept, Creation and Inspiration
IV) "Mary Sue"
V) Other Characters
1) Concept, Creation, and Inspiration
I grew up with Pokemon.
I still remember where and how old I was when I first laid eyes on Pokemon, the first Pokemon I saw was Suicune. Being born late had a few disadvantages, but I didn't miss out on Pokemania. It was one of the happiest moments in my pathetic life, it was also a special time when the world was a much happier place, for me that is. My first Pokemon game was Sapphire Version. I was instantly hooked on the new region. The new starters, the pretty effects, I was smitten. Pokemon was my personal drug and it would give me a high that no other drug possibly ever could. And when I became Champion. I felt like I finally belonged. Pokemon made me feel wanted, I didn't feel so alone anymore.
However, I was too late to join the party. Pokemania had died out around '03 or so, and wasn't so popular anymore. But did I care? Nope. I loved Pokemon. I loved the way it made me feel whenever I opened up my Gameboy Advanced SP, pushed the cartridge in and the Gameboy words flashed in a vertical sweeping motion. Game Freak's logo showing up on the title screen. I was on cloud fucking nine. Between me and the screen, I didn't have to hide. Nothing could come between me and my Pokemon. In a cold, cruel, relentless world where friends and dreams are few, Pokemon became my place to hide and confide into. After playing Pokemon Emerald I was surprised to see how many changes there were from the first game. Time spans forward...
Way back in first grade, my then - friend and I would like to pretend we were Pokemon Trainers and shit, of course we couldn't do that once we were older. So we decided to write out our fantasies in what would be called today an "RP". As most people, I hated Ash, the series' protagonist. It was my main reason for not liking the anime anymore. So I decided that in the RP that we would be the main trainers. We would already have our Pokemon and go around capturing Legendaries.It was pretty simple. I then got FR and LG. When I finally caught Suicune for real! I felt complete. The beautiful legendary dog was mine at last! I later on managed to get Crystal, Silver, and Gold as well. Let's go forward in time once more.
In Middle School my life turned upside down, I had no friends, my friend had also left me for quite a stupid reason and I don't wish to get back in contact either. I have much nicer friends now than I did back then. It was around freshman year I discovered the internet, but I didn't know about fanfiction dot net until Senior year. Old memories of my Pokemon Days came flooding back, I wanted to be part of Pokemon once more and only fanfiction could make it possible to re- ignite the spark once again. After reading a few stories on fanfiction dot net. I realized that this was the only place I could be safe and do as I damn pleased. I could make my own little Pokemon "saga" here. And so it began. I never expected my story to be this "popular" but big things come in small packages I suppose. Who knew my life would change so much with just one little 'click'.
Krystal as most of you know is the main antagonist* of Celestial Enigmas. Why antagonist you may wonder? And not protagonist? Well Krystal is against humanity as a whole and pretty evil, where as protagonists aren't like that. From what I've heard that is. She hates the human race a lot, almost up to the point of hating herself. Yes you read that right. Krystal starts off as a human. Her low weight and tiny body are thanks to genetics, extraordinarily high metabolism, and nothing more. Here is a police - style Profile of Krystal. It is updated and you should ignore any other profile.
Now on to her conception/creation/whatnot.
We all know that life isn't perfect and I know I'm not perfect but I strived to be, and obviously that didn't work out now, did it? So then Krystal was created. She is something I have always wanted to be.
Basically everything I'm not in a nutshell. Everyone in IRL constantly picks at me for my flaws. But what if I was Krystal? No one would dare cross me, because Krystal is perfect. She has no flaws, therefore no one can bitch at her. In fact, that would give ME the right to do anything I wanted to because I'm perfect and no one would be able to stop me.
Another thing. I was tired of seeing weak female protagonists everywhere, so I decided to create one that wasn't annoying, cute, ditsy, or stupid. She doesn't take anyone's shit, has sex with SEVERAL men and Pokemon. Also, these guys are super fucking hot. I can't stand seeing a pretty girl with an ugly ass guy. How is it okay for a guy to be ugly and still get the girl, but the same for a girl? It really pisses me off.
Krystal is different from most girls, she's heartless, doesn't care about anyone or anything, except her friends and Pokemon. She's extremely selfish and rebellious and hates religion and humanity. She's also very vengeful and heartless and sees men only as things t have sex with. She's also extremely vengeful and always holds a grudge, even after she's gotten revenge. She also invented the Pokemon Storage System, I can do this because it's fanfiction. Krystal is also quite cruel.
As for her men, she only likes guys if they're hot, thin, tall, sexy, slender, have awesome hair, and non human. Yes, girls can ALSO have high standards, nothing wrong with that at all.
She loves her Pokemon deeply and will even give up her own life if it meant to save her precious Pokemon's lives. Pokemon are her entire life, it's the only thing keeping her sane and alive. Likewise, Pokemon love her back also. They feel safe around her as she gives off a very calming and serene aura.
The plot consists of Krystal and her Pokemon's journey to become Champions. Krystal has to face many adversaries, rivals, both old and new. Anything else would be spoilers
IV) "Mary Sue"
Everyone claims Krystal is a "Mary Sue" I can easily disprove this. I have taken a "Mary Sue Litmus Test" and scored 173 points. I didn't really see the big deal. Now when I first posted the story, everyone called Krystal a "Mary Sue" I didn't know what it was at the time. So I did some reasearch. A popular example is "Bella Swan" from Twilight.
Let me just say that Krystal is NOTHING like Bella Swan. Krystal is not dependent on any man. She is not whiny, and she most certainly IS NOT a damsel in distress! Even though she has a crush on Steven Stone, she DOES NOT depend on him like a fucking leech. She lets him do what he wants. AND I DON'T MAKE ANYONE THAT I LIKE OOC.
And unlike most Mary Sue stories, she WAS NOT put in the fic to SOLELY be someone's love interest. No. Just. No. She is her own person. Therefore, not a "Mary Sue"
I thank you very much for reading this if you did.
V) Other Characters
This fanfiction has three other OCs. They will be explained a bit further in detail below.
OC # 1: Gabriel:
He is based off of a friend that used to be my friend but is no longer my friend for a stupid reason, no he's not my Pokemon friend. That one was a girl I used to know. For the record this is not his real name and he does not resemble him at all.
Now, I feel as though a back story is in order to avoid anymore confusion. He actually used to slightly like me but I didn't know of this until much later on( like three fucking years). I don't know where he is now, nor do I care to know. The Pokemon he has are Pidgeot (his starter), Nidorino, Kirlia, Snubbul, and Tyrogue.
Krystal and Gabriel went to Pokemon Academy together where he was a year ahead of her, but they became friends because she took classes in the higher levels because she was more advanced than the other trainers, but she could not be put a year up as she would be missing crucial information that was given out to the first years. Krystal's brilliance is what attracted Gabriel to her. And he secretly thought that she was the cutest and most prettiest girl in the class. But like most guys that age he was wayyy too shy to tell her.
OC # 2: Rosannah:
Giratina Almighty.. Just where do I begin with this basket case? ONCE AGAIN THIS GIRL IS NOT REAL AT ALL, I PULLED HER NAME OUT OF MY ASS BUT SHE IS ONLY BASED OFF OF A REAL PERSON THAT I HATE VERY, VERY MUCH.
Rosannah is a fat, ugly, and narrow - minded retard that Krystal had the misfortune of meeting. She's a big whore and will sleep with anyone and anything just to get what she wants. This naturally made her very popular with the guys at school, since she was easy as A,B,C. Because they didn't have to go through the strenuous process of courting to get her, she would just screw any living male that moved... And at the same time, bash others for having pre marital sex. Hypocrite, anyone?
Also, she hates Pokemon.
Naturally, she was jealous of Krystal because even though most guys had sex with her, it was Krystal they wanted to be friends with; while they were only 'friends' with Rosannah because she always had her legs open for business! Not that there's anything wrong with that... IT'S JUST THAT SHE WAS FUCKING FIFTEEN YEARS OLD! Rosannah's body looks like a fat pear/eggplant hybrid. It's just disgusting. Why Gabriel chose her to be his girlfriend is the mystery of the millenium.
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