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Joined 09-03-11, id: 3221824, Profile Updated: 09-19-12
Author has written 4 stories for Dragon Ball Z, Magic Thief, and Bleach.

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My pen name is Duh or Common Sense because I find some aurthors don't have any. Who is gonna read something that's the same as the tv series, if I want that I will just watch it. Others are boring, no detail, nothing special about it at all. Lasty I wrote these stories because I don't agree with the plotline, not if you don't like the story. Flames are fine but give me a reason WHY it's so awful, and no coutine this story because I will finsh all my storys (that's my goal anyway).

IF YOU DON'T LIKE MY STORY THEN JUST DON'T READ THEM (COMMON SENSE FOR ALL THE FLAMERS OUT THERE). I will try to to do stuff like this,

Gohan/ trained and not a nervous wreak and goes on a field trip. notes why whould a class of highschoolers go to the planet vegeta when top scientist don't?, or they go to his house out of the blue? BECAUSE the writer controls all if I say it happens it happens, and when does the word impossible affect this story! (hint there are ways to bring back the dead, people that have enought power to destory the universe, and timetravel is possble) It never does.

Broly/Bulla if you go on youtube and tipe in Dragonball AF chapter 18 or 19, you will see that Bulla isn't scared of Brolly at all. No I don't care if you think Dragonball AF is real or not I just got inspearded to try a Brolly/Bulla thing notes there really should be more storys like this (Brolly/OC), if it's so hard to write then I want to see how hard it is,and unlike gt there are no goten/bulla at all i can't see with t/p I can.

Goku/ reasons why he's a freak of nature (facts from DB plotline) notes kai's planet was 10 times Earth's gravity so he should have been at Radiz's level when he came back, Nappa has already fought in 10 times earth's gravity and Goku didn't use Kio-Ken to beat him, he toyed with him (my first example to prove my point, try to prove me wrong) and yes there are more examples, don't say he's an alien because Nappa is one too and still thinks he's a freak of nature. Don't know if I should make this just a part of the one where the sayians come back, but there both part of the same plotlline.

Bardock/ see his son furture(all of it up to the end of DBGT) notes this fits the story below and the one above, I'm thinking of combining those two. Poor Goku trying to not revel how stong he is when his dad saw him and can read minds. (the ones above and below go with this story) Aready typed this one and about to publish.

Goku/ the sayains coming back to the living world and Goku get's to deal with them when he's already bonded with Seron the Eternal Dragon (trying to not let Nappa know the wish on the dragon that can grant anything is 5 yards from him.) or let them know he's the most powerful in this demison (or the above). Should I combine this one and let you find out the reasons Goku is a freak of narture along with the Sayians or if you want to do that just don't read the story above?

Gohan/M. trunks where the world finds out about cell/dragonballs/timetravel notes the world never finds out he's a phony what would happen if it did? No it's not a gh/mt, it is a gh/v and they will have tails, but videl only knows he's sayaman, at the world troument, TRUNKS SHOWS UP IN APE MODE, check out this story.

Vegito the makers once oringally thought to keep him fused what would happen for the rest of DBZ and DBGT if Vegito stayed fused?

This is just an idea so if you think you could do it better PM me with a sample chapter

I try to do stuff no one else did the first one I wanted to try a classic one. If you have any advice (I mean any) I would love to get it, any comment about how the plotline or how I should do it is greatly appecated. I need help with titles so give me some ideas, please! I'm not doing the gohan ones yet and will wait before I try the Brolly one, but the Bardock one is typed, and I will do the other two in that plotline, when i have more expernice, right now i'm doing the MT/GH one.

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If you think that being unique is better than being cool then put this on your profile.

If you are against real fur on clothing then put this on your profile.

If you approve of gay-marrigaes put this on your profile and add your name to the list. Gaara's-pandachan101, IXLoveXMyXFishy,dunorcommonsense.

(I have nothing aginst gays, but I am straight.)

92 percent of american teens would die if Abecrombe and Fitch told them it wasn't cool to breath. If your one of the 8 percent that would be laughing your asses off as you watch the others copy this to your profile

If you think that those god-or-saken kids should just give that Trix rabbit some Trix then copy this onto your profile.

If you think that i'm making you think too much then copy this onto your profile.

If you think that if girls should rule the world and it would be a better place then copy this onto your profile.

If you think that Sasuke from Naruto completly has to have the nick-name 'Chicken Butt Hair Dude' , copy this to your profile while laughing your ass off.If you think that this is too troublesome to read, copy this too profile.

If you are too lazy to copy this to your profile, copy this to your profile.

If you've ever copied and pasted something onto your profile, copy and paste this onto your profile.

If you've ever asked a really stupid, obvious question, copy and paste this onto your profile.

If you have ever gotten so completely sidetracked in a conversation that you don't remember why you were talking in the first place, copy this into your profile.

Admitting you are weird means you are normal. Saying that you are normal is odd. If you admit that you are weird and like it, copy this onto your profile.

If you love rain, copy and paste this into your profile.

If you don't watch Laguna Beach, The O.C. or The Hills, never have, never will, and are proud of it, copy and paste this into your profile.

If you hate those irritating mosquitos giving you mosquito bites copy this in your profile.

If there are times when you wanna annoy people just for the heck of it, copy this into your profile.Crazy is when you stare at a pencil and laugh when someone asks you just what you find so interesting about the eraser. Crazy is when you have an hour long sob-fest, then start singing and dancing when your favorite song plays. Crazy is when you do or say a totally random thing, like "do you ever wonder where the eraser bits go?" or start having a thumbwar with yourself.

If you have ever stared at a computer screen for hours and hours reading stories that people who have no lives whats so ever and have enough obsession with something to write a story about it and you are one of those people, copy and paste this into your profile and add your name to the list: Shifter-youkai, AkatsukiFan, WhiteWinged Alchemist, Yasu Uchiha (my obsession with Sasuke Uchiha will be FOREVER!! XDD), ramenlover4 (I dislike Sasuke...), Gaara's_Pandachan101 (Gaara (drools)), IXLoveXMyXFishy(Gaara? Where?(drools too)), Shadow of Your Life (OMG! PANDA!!)Duhorcommonsense,

Weird is good, strange is bad, and odd is when you don't know what to call someone. Weird is the same as different which is the same as unique, so weird is good. If you are weird and proud of it copy and paste this into your profile.

98 percent of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you are one of the two percent who haven't, copy and paste this into your profile.

If you have a very wide range of interests, copy and paste this into your profile.

I like cheese. I have seen purple cows. If two gooses are geese, then why aren't two moose meese, or when two foots are feet, why aren't two footballs feetball? Milk tastes good. People call me crazy, but I'm just random! If you're random and proud of it, copy and paste this in your profile!

Ninety-five percent of teenagers are concerned about being popular. If you are one of the five percent who aren’t, copy this, put it in your profile, and add your name to the list: Queen S of Randomness 016, Queen B of Randomness 016, AnimieKittyCaffe, The Gypsy Pirate Queen, That Bloody Demon, The Astrology Nerd, Shadow929, Crazy Billie Joe Loving Freak, Yavie Aelienal, Hyperactively Bored, Spymaster E, Shanny-Boo, Gem W, Brown-eyed angelofmusic, piratesswriter/fairy to be, Bara-Minomoto, Em Quagmire, Buffy The Mary-Sue Slayer, Random Little Writer, SamanthaFantasyFan, The-Good-Die-Alone, Daughter of a Renegade, Littlewhisker, Snowdancer56, MoonAquaAngel, Emerald Griffon, element-girl5, IXLoveXMyXFishy, Shadow of Your Life, Darkness Angel-Ai,Duhorcommonsense,

Recent studies show that 92 percent of teenagers have moved on to rap. If you're part of the 8 percent that hasn't, put this in your profile.

If you know (a) video game character(s) or video game weapon(s) that need(s) to exist, copy and paste this into your profile.

If you have a wild imagination and it seems that no one appreciates it or doesnt have an imagination for squat, copy and paste this to your profile.

If you hate homework,copy and paste this into your profile.

If you like chocolate, copy and paste this in your profile.

If you like smiley faces, then copy this into your profile:D

If you hate those obnoxious preppy people PLEASE copy this in your profile

A true friend is someone who will try to answer the "eraser bits" question and have a long conversation about it. A friend is someone who wont say anything when you cry for no reason, but will start sobbing to, just help you cry. If you have a true friend, copy and paste this in your profile

If you've ever wondered what you are like in another dimension, copy and paste this in your profile.

There's nothing wrong with arguing with yourself. It's when you argue with yourself and LOSE when it's weird. If you agree, copy this and put it in your profile.

If you've ever busted a move/ burst into song, copy and paste this into your profile.

If you ever got a high score and jumped in the air and screamed yes, copy and paste this in your profile.

If you ever threatened a computer or video game console, copy and paste this in your profile.

99 percent of teenagers are concerned about relationships. If you are part of the 1 percent that isn't copy this into your profile.

If you are so crazy that you say something like "The ninja penguin warriors came into my freezer while I was looking for my socks, and told me that the purple leprachauns from Venus were planning on stealing my toothpicks and planting them in antarctica to end world hunger. then a giant octopus came and dyed my hair and said that if i wanted chocolate I should play hopscotch with Santa at my family reunion but I had already made plans to go skydiving at Pizza Hut with Willy Wonka so I had to say 'Sorry mate but my banana has turned into a blue fleece blanket and I have to walk my dog's biscuit'" just to break the ice while talking to someone new copy this into your profile, if you said this by telling it to your friend copy this into your profile.

If you agree that I have way too many of these, copy and paste this in your profile.

If your profile is long, copy and paste this on it to make it even longer.

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This is Bunny. Copy and paste Bunny into your signature to help him gain world domination. (this is from shifter youki )

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じしf,)ノ

Yaaaay kitty!

This is Kitty. Copy and paste Kitty into your
signature to help him gain world domination. (this is also from shifter youki) U ROCK!

If you have ever had a mad laughing fit for absolutely no reason, copy and paste this into your profile.

If you have ever said something that has nothing to do with the current conversation, copy and paste this into your profile.

If you've ever wondered what you are like in another dimension, copy and paste this in your profile.

If you all ready have or can't but want to spread the word, copy this onto your profile.

If you talk to yourself, copy and paste this into your profile.

If your profile is longer than the chapters of most of your stories copy and paste this to yor profile

98 percent of the Teenage population drinks or has been around alchohol.
Copy this into your profile if you like bagels.

Boys say that in everything they do, they can kick a girl's butt so bad that they cry. If you're a girl who kicks the boys' butts so bad they cry like girls, copy this into your profile and add your name. Moonstar of FireClan, Flamestar, Samishi Destiny, Silverstar's Shadow, Nintendo4ever, Darkangel24700, mandrakefunnyjuice, Dragon of Twilight, Shadow of Your Life, Darkness Angel-Ai, Duhorcommensense,

If you're against animal cruelty (horse slaughter, bear baiting, dolphin hunting, chimp slavery etc.) then copy this into your profile!

If you ever forgotten what you were talking about in a conversation copy and paste this into your profile.

If you've ever burst out laughing in a quiet room, post this in your profile.

.s_s _If you're a girl and you've ever
_s?_s_s _beaten a guy in an arm wrestle,
_.s_ .s_ s _copy the Flaming Heart of
_s_.s_ . _Youthfulness into your profile!
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If you have never watched Heroes, 24, The O.C., Grey's Anatomy, or any of that stuff, and are sickened by those who do, please copy & paste this into your profile.

If you know our society is moving in the wrong direction, copy and paste this into your profile.

If you enjoy things that ask you to copy and paste them into your profile, copy and paste this into your profile.

If you are a Nintendo fan to your very core, copy and paste this into your profile.

If you've read this ENTIRE profile and wasted about ten minutes reading what took me hours to put together, copy and paste this into your profile.

SUPPORT THE BUNNY!

"REMEMBER WHEN"

REMEMBER WHEN ..
getting HiGH meant swinging at a playground?
the worst thing you could get from a boy was c0otiEs?
when )m 0 m( was your hero
and 'D a D' was the boy you were gonna marry?
when your W0RST ENEMiES were your siblings
and rAcE iSsuEs were about who ran fastest?
when - WAR- was a card game
and life was simple and care free?
remember when all you wanted to do
WAS GROW UP?

Put This In Your Profile If You're Still 5 Inside...No Matter How Old You Are Now

--///\\--Please
--///-\\\--Put This
--On Your
--Profile If
--You Know
--\\\-///--Someone
--\\///--Who has
--///\--Diabetes
--///\\\--Like my friend

SUPPORT THE BUNNY!

"REMEMBER WHEN"

REMEMBER WHEN ..
getting HiGH meant swinging at a playground?
the worst thing you could get from a boy was c0otiEs?
when )m 0 m( was your hero
and 'D a D' was the boy you were gonna marry?
when your W0RST ENEMiES were your siblings
and rAcE iSsuEs were about who ran fastest?
when - WAR- was a card game
and life was simple and care free?
remember when all you wanted to do
WAS GROW UP?

Put This In Your Profile If You're Still 5 Inside...No Matter How Old You Are Now

--///\\--Please
--///-\\\--Put This
--On Your
--Profile If
--You Know
--\\\-///--Someone
--\\///--Who has
--///\--Diabetes
--///\\\--Like my friend

SUPPORT THE BUNNY!

"REMEMBER WHEN"

REMEMBER WHEN ..
getting HiGH meant swinging at a playground?
the worst thing you could get from a boy was c0otiEs?
when )m 0 m( was your hero
and 'D a D' was the boy you were gonna marry?
when your W0RST ENEMiES were your siblings
and rAcE iSsuEs were about who ran fastest?
when - WAR- was a card game
and life was simple and care free?
remember when all you wanted to do
WAS GROW UP?

Put This In Your Profile If You're Still 5 Inside...No Matter How Old You Are Now

--///\\--Please
--///-\\\--Put This
--On Your
--Profile If
--You Know
--\\\-///--Someone
--\\///--Who has
--///\--Diabetes
--///\\\--Like my friend

The white man said, "Colored people are not allowed here." The black man turned around and stood up. He then said: "Listen sir...when I was born I was BLACK, When I grew up I was BLACK, When I'm sick I'm BLACK, When I go in the sun I'm BLACK, When I'm cold I'm BLACK, When I die I'll be BLACK. But you sir, When you're born you're PINK, When you grow up you're WHITE, When you're sick, you're GREEN, When you go in the sun you turn RED, When you're cold you turn BLUE, And when you die you turn PURPLE. And you have the nerve to call me colored?" The black man then sat back down and the white man walked away...
Post this on your profile if you hate racism.

If you are aware that so many people nowadays pretend to be someone they're not, copy this on your profile.

Girls Don't realize these things;

I'm sorry
that I bought you roses
to tell you that I like you

I'm sorry
That I was raised with respect
not to sleep with you when you were drunk

I'm sorry
That my body's not ripped enough
to "satisfy" your wants

I'm sorry
that I open your car door,
and pull out your chair like I was raised

I'm sorry
That I'm not cute enough
to be "your guy"

I'm sorry
That I am actually nice;
not a jerk

I'm sorry
I don't have a huge bank account
to buy you expensive things

I'm sorry
I like to spend quality nights at home
cuddling with you, instead of at a club

I'm sorry
I would rather make love to you then just screw you
like some random guy.

I'm sorry
That I am always the one you need to talk to,
but never good enough to date

I'm sorry
That I always held your hair back when you threw up, and didn't get mad at you for puking in my car,
but when we went out you went home with another guy

I'm sorry
That I am there to pick you up at 4am when your new man hit you and dropped you off in the middle of nowhere,
but not good enough to listen to me when I need a friend

I'm sorry
If I start not being there because it hurts being used as a door mat, only to be thrown to the side when the new jerk comes around

I'm sorry
If I don't answer my phone anymore when you call, to listen to you cry for hours, instead of getting a couple hours of sleep before work

I'm sorry
that you can't realize.. I've been the one all along.

I'm sorry
If you read this and know somebody like this
but don't care

But most of all

I'm sorry
For not being sorry anymore

I'm sorry
That you can't accept me for who I am

I'm sorry
I can never do anything right, and nothing that I do is good
enough to make it in your world.

I'm sorry
I caught your boyfriend with another girl and told you about it, I thought that was what friends were for...

I'm sorry
That I told you I loved you and actually meant it.

I'm sorry
That I talked to you for nine hours on Thanksgiving when your boyfriend was threatening you instead of spending time with my family.

I'm Sorry
That I cared

I'm sorry
that I listen to you at night talking about how you wish you could have done something different.

Ladies always complain and gripe to their friends that there is never any good guys out there, and they always end up with assholes who mistreat them. Well ladies, next time you're complaining, maybe look up to see who you're complaining to, maybe that special someone is right there hanging on your every word as usual, screaming in his head "Why won't you give me a chance?"
Because the person you are usually searching for is right by you.

If you're a guy and you agree with this letter, copy and paste into your profile as 'I'm sorry'

If You're one of the FEW girls with enough BALLS to copy and paste this into your profile, and you would never make your guy feel this way, copy and paste into your profile as 'Girls Don't Realize These Things'

Month one

Mommy
I am only 8 inches long
but I have all my organs.
I love the sound of your voice.
Every time I hear it
I wave my arms and legs.
The sound of your heart beat
is my favorite lullaby.

Month Two

Mommy
today I learned how to suck my thumb.
If you could see me
you could definitely tell that I am a baby.
I'm not big enough to survive outside my home though.
It is so nice and warm in here.

Month Three

You know what Mommy
I'm a boy!!
I hope that makes you happy.
I always want you to be happy.
I don't like it when you cry.
You sound so sad.
It makes me sad too
and I cry with you even though
you can't hear me.

Month Four

Mommy
my hair is starting to grow.
It is very short and fine
but I will have a lot of it.
I spend a lot of my time exercising.
I can turn my head and curl my fingers and toes
and stretch my arms and legs.
I am becoming quite good at it too.

Month Five

You went to the doctor today.
Mommy, he lied to you.
He said that I'm not a baby.
I am a baby Mommy, your baby.
I think and feel.
Mommy, what's abortion?

Month Six

I can hear that doctor again.
I don't like him.
He seems cold and heartless.
Something is intruding my home.
The doctor called it a needle.
Mommy what is it? It burns!
Please make him stop!
I can't get away from it!
Mommy! HELP me!

Month Seven

If you're against abortion, re-post this me Mommy?

This is a true story. A girl died in 1933. A man buried her when she was still alive. The murder chanted, "Toma Sota balcu," as he buried her. Now that you have read this chant, you will meet this little girl. In the middle of the night she will be on your ceiling. She will suffocate you like she was suffocated. If you post this on your profile, she will not bother you. Your kindness will be rewarded.

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..(0.0) (0.o) ('.')Copy the bunny onto your profile to help him achieve world domination. Come join the dark side. (We have cookies!) BOW DOWN TO THE BUNNY!!

If your wondering where I got all this crap/helpful and moving information go to Darkness Andel-Ai's profill

Onto why I have posted this. Many are aware that for whatever infinite wisdom FF holds removed the MA rating back in the 2002, they were lenient on violence and lemons since then but it seems they have started removing all stories with no warning. I post this in hopes that between myself and the many other authors and readers who enjoy a little citrus with the stories will band together to hopefully reinstate the MA rating or stop the purge all together. Post anywhere and everywhere about this travesty going on, force them to listen to us or hopefully compromise and allow us to continue our perverted ways.

Do it for me!

Do it for yourself!

DO IT FOR THE FREEDOM OF WRITING!

Myself, along with many, have been writing and posting on your fine site for years now, some of the better examples of up and coming writers out there are now suddenly finding some of the stories we've come to love at risk of being removed without the chance to even rectify our errors.

For some, that means the permanent loss of a story. There are those out there that are never able to recover a story in its original form, this is something I find to be almost worthy of a legal action, as while we cannot claim ownership of a character, the stories are OURS and simply destroying them is something that is inexcusable. I myself have lost three stories, because the SUMMARIES (not the actual stories) were not rated G… I wasn't even aware summaries could be rated, nor need to be G if the story itself was rated M.

It's quite easy to simply add an MA rating, additional filters or even a simple requirement for a free membership to read the stories presented here, and would cut down on hateful anonymous reviews and posts at the same time, so I have to question as to why such a thing, in all this time, simply wasn't added. On that note, readers, please consider signing this petition: www(dot)ipetitions(dot)com/petition/lemons-for-fanfiction/

If you're worried about falsification of a registration then have an appropriate disclaimer and then there can be no dispute, you took your steps and the PARENTS didn't monitor their children, if that is even your concern. If it is more of a personal view or desire then please at least let people know and give them a chance to remove a story that you and yours find offensive, most people on the site are actually rather cordial when it comes to such requests.

While I cannot say for sure if this letter will even reach those that may be willing to listen, of if it's more akin to a wide spectrum purge in preparation for something bigger, please understand that you are going to be losing a LARGE number of your writers, and thus your income from a lack of readers if there is not some level of action taken to help with this situation.

For those that may agree with this, please feel free to sign on and send this to the support server, maybe we can get some movement on this.

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I don't care if you think dragonball af is real or not, the fact is it was made by fans

who didn't not want to see it end, if you disagree why are you on this site, or on my profile? yes dragonball gt is not as good as dragonball z BUT WHAT IS AS GOOD AS DRAGONBALL Z? NOTHING!

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Ichigo's Hollow reviews
What if Aizen knew how Ichigo defeated Ulquerra? What if he decided to make him a hollow before the seal took affect? What would happen to the living and dead world with ichigo the strongest hollow? Just a teaser tell me if you want story to continue!
Bleach - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,698 - Reviews: 29 - Favs: 28 - Follows: 38 - Updated: 8/8/2012 - Published: 7/5/2012 - Ichigo K., Dark Ichigo
Fair Trial reviews
We all know the trial in book 3 was jinxed to make Conn hang; what if Arhionvar helped Conn out?
Magic Thief - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 7,791 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 7/7/2012 - Published: 3/17/2012 - Conn - Complete
Trunk's Timing reviews
What if Future Trunks shows up in ape form at the WMAT, with videl in the arena? GOHAN/VIDEL later goku/satan bashing
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 6 - Words: 6,360 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 1/9/2012 - Published: 9/22/2011 - Gohan, Videl
Bardock's Curse reviews
What if Bardock saw his son's future up o the end of gt, and found out how powerful his son truely is? Setup.
Dragon Ball Z - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 720 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/5/2011 - Bardock, Goku - Complete