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Joined 11-21-11, id: 3451163, Profile Updated: 11-05-13
Author has written 6 stories for Walking Dead, Bloodlines Series, Richelle Mead, X-Men, Harry Potter, Twilight, Thor, and Avengers.


Accepting Flames and Commentaries


Flaming at Twila

Flaming at My Immortal

Flaming at FaCe ThE StRaNgE

Flaming at The gratest pokemon master

Flaming at What Doesn't Make Love

Flaming at A Thieves Love

Flaming at Becoming Female

Flaming at Where No Troll Has Gone Before

So, hey! Welcome to my FanFiction profile! While I'm talking to you, I need to tell you that I'm happy to do a commentary on almost any type of story - but they will, from now on, be moved to Quotev . . . So just PM me, and yeah. ;D

Name: Zharza Dot

Laptop name: Navida

Co-writers: MikiMoke






A bit of fact (list in dot point):

  • I work closely with MikiMoke and Ginnevra Weasley97
  • My fanfiction Fates Unknown is the most popular fanfiction I've written.
  • I started writing flames around the middle of 2013
  • When I got frustrated whilst writing flames, I used to hammer at my keyboard (not with an actual hammer . . . I would never do that to Shlowla or Navida . . .). Because of this, my space bar came flying off and it takes a short while to actually find it and put it back on again. And don't think this is a lie - at one stage it went flying across the room and took me forever to find it . . . :/
  • The space bar on Shlowla no longer works properly having been severely injured during Flaming at My Immortal, which put an end to my hammering at my keyboard. However, Navida's space bar works perfectly.
  • I don't remember how I came up with the name "Zharza"
  • Zharza is pronounced "sha-za"
  • I am an "Ultimate" Star Trekker. So much so that I know everything there is to know about the Vulcans, and I speak a bit of Vulcan Golic. Insults to Star Trek will result in my wrath . . . No, seriously, I'll go bat-shit crazy at you.
  • Shlowla is on her last legs, and thus, is rarely used (as of August 2013)
  • Navida is my newest laptop.
  • I now wear glasses. :D
  • People apparently flip their shit if I don't update Fates Unknown. I had one person threaten that he'd crawl through Navida's screen and strangle me to death if I didn't update immediately. I'm also not joking. >:/


    This is a warning to all those writing commentary to or reading My Immortal. Today, on the 28th of May, 2013, my poor space bar, who shall be named "Spacey", was injured during a writer-meltdown after reading the legitimate chapter 39 of My Immortal, directed at the ridiculous assumption that a person from the future may not be killed by a bullet from the past.

    Spacey is in a critical but stabilized condition, and is doing his best serving his keyboard, but it is unlikely that he will recover without professional help of which, in his current location and financial situation, is not an option.

    It is warned to all that My Immortal is dangerous. For Spacey's sake, please take care.


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    Cry the Faceless by GeorgiaTheSteven reviews
    Mya finds meets a man she has wanted to meet for ages, almost without knowing it. But will Cry open up to the first fan of his to have seen his face? Cryaotic/OC
    Web Shows - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 29 - Words: 17,160 - Reviews: 175 - Favs: 97 - Follows: 121 - Updated: 4/20 - Published: 2/8/2013 - ChaoticMonki
    Brave New World by ForzaDelDestino reviews
    After the events at Skyfall, life was different for Agent 007. M was gone—no, there was a new M. There was a new Headquarters. He had a new flat in which he was still unpacking boxes of belongings. And then there was the matter of that new, young Q…a lanky, bespectacled boy with a mop of dark hair, who was in serious need of an attitude adjustment. Alternating POV slash, slow build
    James Bond - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 17 - Words: 72,813 - Reviews: 139 - Favs: 135 - Follows: 224 - Updated: 4/16 - Published: 3/12/2013 - James Bond/007, Q 3 - Complete
    Resolve by kjc1123 reviews
    Missing moments from "The Bourne Legacy" as well as picking up from where the end left off. Please read and review!
    Bourne series - Rated: M - English - Suspense/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 27,004 - Reviews: 30 - Favs: 27 - Follows: 61 - Updated: 10/7/2013 - Published: 8/5/2013 - Aaron C./Kenneth K., Marta S.
    The Bourne Cross by EuphoriaLily reviews
    The battle in Manila has been won. But the battle for their lives, and their hearts, has only just begun. What if an old acquaintance joins the couple? Will the handsome Outcome Agent and the beautiful Doctor finally be free? Will the old acquaintance finally be rid of his past? Rated UPDATE: From chapter 5 it is rated T with occasional M! Just warning you! CURRENTLY ON HIATUS
    Bourne series - Rated: M - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 9 - Words: 40,996 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 27 - Follows: 40 - Updated: 9/16/2013 - Published: 10/19/2012 - Aaron C./Kenneth K., Marta S.
    The Walking Dead by andy.isepik reviews
    This is mainly a novelization of TellTale's The Walking Dead. I'm writing this as I watch (again!) Pewdiepie's LP of the game. Rated T for swears and violence.
    Walking Dead - Rated: T - English - Horror/Suspense - Chapters: 45 - Words: 118,309 - Reviews: 93 - Favs: 48 - Follows: 31 - Updated: 8/19/2013 - Published: 11/26/2012
    Scotty Made the Enterprise In Minecraft by Tflover323 reviews
    Scotty was bored for three days. No one found him until those days were over. He was in Minecraft. Building. The whole time.
    Crossover - Star Trek: 2009 & Minecraft - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 518 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/5/2013 - Complete
    The End Of Magic by Ginnevra.Weasley97
    The wizardry world is in danger of losing all magic for ever it's of to Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny to find out what or who is doing this and put a stop to it before the whole wizardry world is lost for ever.
    Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 910 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 6/1/2013 - Harry P., Ron W., Hermione G., Ginny W.
    A Weekend Away From The Madness by tara-k90 reviews
    After an overwhelming week, Sydney decides that all she needs to relax is her boyfriend, Adrian. Mostly Sydrian fluff and cuteness. Will be a three-shot, and is post-TIS.
    Bloodlines Series, Richelle Mead - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,976 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 36 - Follows: 56 - Updated: 4/11/2013 - Published: 4/7/2013 - Adrian I., Sydney S.
    There's Never Been So Much At Stake by Emono reviews
    Steve has to deal with a heart-crushed Tony and the Avengers Initiative. How can he fix things when Bruce catches all his lover's attention? Meanwhile, Peter finds out the hard way that with great power comes great pain. Can Deadpool help? Avengers Rewrite. Stony, Hulkeye, Spideypool Smut, angst, h/c, love, action, slash. Third part of the EVER FALLEN 'Verse. Full summary inside
    Avengers - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 17 - Words: 89,455 - Reviews: 430 - Favs: 441 - Follows: 457 - Updated: 3/16/2013 - Published: 9/2/2012 - Captain America/Steve R., Iron Man/Tony S., Hawkeye/Clint B., Hulk/Bruce B. - Complete
    The Fiery Heart by ThisIsAStateOfGrace reviews
    Takes place directly after The Indigo Spell, ends DO NOT READ UNLESS YOU'VE ALREADY READ TIS. T for mild language/violence. Read and review. Hope you like!
    Bloodlines Series, Richelle Mead - Rated: T - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,248 - Reviews: 65 - Favs: 31 - Follows: 78 - Updated: 2/15/2013 - Published: 2/14/2013 - Sydney S., Adrian I.
    Heart vs Brain by BrittJK reviews
    Morgan has a theory: Once the intersect messes with your brain, it messes with how your heart and brain communicate. Will they ever communicate again? A love story where both parties are already in love - only one's mind can't realize it yet. Post Finale.
    Chuck - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 6 - Words: 30,865 - Reviews: 125 - Favs: 83 - Follows: 91 - Updated: 12/28/2012 - Published: 1/27/2012 - Sarah W., Chuck B. - Complete
    Ever Fallen in Love With Someone? by Emono reviews
    Once Steve thought Howard Stark was the "living end". Now he's been thrown into a future where the only person he can trust completely is Howard's son, Tony. Tony's everything his father wasn't, maybe everything Steve needs. SLASH, Daddy issues, unresolved feelings, past Steve/Howard, Nat/Pep, rewrite Ironman 2 w/ Steve, pre-Avengers. Slow bloom love story, lemon. Ever Fallen Ver
    Avengers - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 23 - Words: 143,991 - Reviews: 661 - Favs: 811 - Follows: 582 - Updated: 9/2/2012 - Published: 6/9/2012 - Captain America/Steve R., Iron Man/Tony S. - Complete
    When Jerry Met Ebony by I Heart Thomas Brown reviews
    ... and every other bad OC in fanfictiondom. Tell me your favourite trollfic or badfic star, and see them meet Tara Gilesbie's Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way, and Thomas Brown's Jerry of Christ. Includes OCs from "jo bel" and "imma wiserd".
    Crossover - Harry Potter & Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Parody - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,033 - Reviews: 50 - Favs: 24 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 4/25/2012 - Published: 2/23/2012 - Draco M., Percy J. - Complete
    All Good Things by nerdielady reviews
    A Continuation of the Story of reboot Spock and Nyota; sequel to 'Have We Been Here Before'. Changes occur on the Enterprise as it enters its next five year mission. How will the crew adapt?
    Star Trek: 2009 - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 65 - Words: 99,032 - Reviews: 422 - Favs: 46 - Follows: 57 - Updated: 7/13/2011 - Published: 8/5/2010 - Spock, N. Uhura
    Have We Been Here Before? by nerdielady reviews
    The third five-year mission of the Enterprise. Sequel to "Let's Go Thataway". Focusing on Spock and Nyota, but including all the major characters from the movie.
    Star Trek: 2009 - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi/Romance - Chapters: 100 - Words: 125,511 - Reviews: 700 - Favs: 57 - Follows: 30 - Updated: 8/4/2010 - Published: 4/26/2010 - Spock, N. Uhura - Complete
    I Felt Hope: An Alice & Jasper Story by IntoTheTwilightRPG reviews
    The story of Alice and Jasper's first meeting all the way up until finding the Cullens. Rated MATURE for a reason. :
    Twilight - Rated: M - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 17 - Words: 228,531 - Reviews: 41 - Favs: 90 - Follows: 27 - Updated: 6/22/2010 - Published: 5/2/2010 - Alice, Jasper - Complete
    Catsitting by nerdielady reviews
    Cadet Spock finds himself committed to caring for a kitten for a week.
    Star Trek: 2009 - Rated: K - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,778 - Reviews: 41 - Favs: 63 - Follows: 5 - Published: 11/7/2009 - Spock, C. Pike - Complete
    Pon Farr Phase Two by nerdielady reviews
    Can a human catch Pon Farr from a Vulcan?
    Star Trek: 2009 - Rated: M - English - Romance/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 790 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 46 - Follows: 4 - Published: 9/8/2009 - Spock, N. Uhura - Complete
    Indigo Prophecy A Novel by Sorceress Cassandra180 reviews
    They say that the world is filled with choices, each with unlimited possibilites. But the hardest choice to make is living with one that was made for you. This I know, it was one that made me a murderer...
    Misc. Games - Rated: M - English - Mystery/Supernatural - Chapters: 5 - Words: 24,685 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 3/8/2008 - Published: 3/9/2006
    Marvel vs DC by franciscangypsy reviews
    Title makes it pretty obvious. Marvel characters fight DC characters. Finally heroes realize that the others are heroes and that they need to work together. blah, blah, blah. Is better than it sounds...
    Crossover - DC Superheroes & Marvel - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 5 - Words: 5,079 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 14 - Follows: 16 - Published: 12/24/2006
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    For the Love of Tricks reviews
    SPOILERS FOR THOR: THE DARK WORLD. Saraya is a woman of many talents. Somehow, she is able to see through all of Loki's forms. To keep himself hidden from the Asgardians, Loki demands that Saraya stay with him, but he can't help but become drawn to this dreamer . . . REVIEWS WELCOME, NETAGIVE OR POSITIVE.
    Thor - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,222 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 22 - Updated: 11/25/2013 - Published: 11/2/2013 - [Loki, OC]
    You've Gotta be Kidding reviews
    DISCONTINUED/UP FOR ADOPTION: From my experiences with my previous commentaries here on FanFiction, I'd thought I'd have a little fun. What happens when Adrian finds out about Twilight? What happens when Adrian tries to write an MA rated fanfiction about Twilight? Uh-oh; knock knock on the door from Eliminator and Critics United . . .
    Bloodlines Series, Richelle Mead - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 2,737 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 11/5/2013 - Published: 6/7/2013 - [Adrian I., Sydney S.]
    Fates Unknown reviews
    When Lee jumps off the sign and into the street, Christa and Omid were asked to find him again. Problem is, they don't know if Lee changed or not. It might just be a race to find Clementine. But what is Christa not telling Omid? SPOILERS FOR EPISODE FIVE. Rated T for swearing. Will be up-rated for future scenes.
    Walking Dead - Rated: T - English - Family - Chapters: 10 - Words: 12,532 - Reviews: 30 - Favs: 21 - Follows: 23 - Updated: 10/15/2013 - Published: 11/25/2012
    Stuck in My Immortal reviews
    Zharza Dot was just minding her own business, when Shlowla sucked her up into the fanfiction she'd had a glimpse at previously. She is forced to tag along in the "adventures" of Ebony Way and her friends until she can work out how to get back home. WARNING: Frequent swearing, My Immortal, based off of a Troll fic.
    Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Drama/Parody - Chapters: 8 - Words: 4,703 - Reviews: 1 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 9/4/2013 - Published: 6/24/2013 - Harry P., Draco M., OC
    Hidden in the Wardrobe reviews
    Having a relaxing three days with Alice, away from the family, turns into a slight disaster for Jasper when she finds his stash of clothing, of which he'd been hiding from her . . . (short one-shot)
    Twilight - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 881 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 1 - Published: 8/24/2013 - [Alice, Jasper] - Complete
    United - Summary reviews
    The summary of a story I *might* start to write. So, I need your opinion! Yay or nay? Nick Fury finally recruits Spider-man when faced with a new threat of Myla, a supposed mutant with the ability to absorb others powers/abilities. Having already drawn the attention of the X-Men earlier, Fury decides that a team-up may be needed.
    Crossover - X-Men & Avengers - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,395 - Reviews: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 6/17/2013 - Iron Man/Anthony S., Spiderman/Peter P., Captain America/Steve R., Daredevil/Matthew M.