Author has written 22 stories for Toaru Majutsu no Index/とある魔術の禁書目録, Manhwa/Korean Comics/만화, Fate/stay night, Naruto, Harry Potter, Ultimate Marvel, RWBY, Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha, Sword Art Online/ソードアート・オンライン, Worm, Tiger & Bunny/タイガー＆バニー, Dungeon ni Deai o Motomeru no wa Machigatte Iru Darou ka, Pokémon, Log Horizon/ログ・ホライズン, BioShock, Psyren, My Hero Academia/僕のヒーローアカデミア, and Bloodborne.
I love getting constructive reviews since it improves my writing skills, and I normally respond to reviews if you make a valid suggestion or point out something wrong, but a few have been a pain in the rear and unconstructively bashing me. I usually just have the email alerts for Naruto Wind Monk Banishment just sent to my trash-can now as a result.
Now, unlike most fanfics, I go through great lengths to justify things and make sure my content is readable, vivid, and understandable, even though I like the fighting portions most of the time and hate politics. I like happy conclusions, but I prefer reasonable ways to get there. I'm not so arrogant that I think that my fingers have typed out a masterpiece that surpasses the original and everyone else. That's insane.
Golden rule of all stories applies to my fanfics: Don't like it, don't read it. You can whine about it, but note they are your own opinions and if you can do better, go for it.
This isn't canon. It's fanon. Sometimes the destination is a given, but the path taken is an unknown.
Perfect Summoning for Naruto:
Nguruvilu - It is a river-dwelling creature and looks much like a strange fox, with a long body, similar to a snake, and a long tail with fingernails that it uses like a claw; but it's a water-being. Nguruvilus live in and are the cause of dangerous whirlpools which kill people who try to cross rivers. The creatures make the water shallow on either ford, to encourage people to try to cross it making it seem safe.
Seriously, whirlpools & fox features all in one. How had no one thought of that yet?
Issues with Wind Monk Banishment:
1/22: On indefinite hiatus until I get more free time.
Issues with Advent of the Spiraling Ninja:
1/22: On indefinite hiatus until I get more free time.
Harry Potter Notes
Things I Dislike:
SNEAK - Hermione, who is normally rational, permanently disfigures another student with a jinx...and she gets away with it.
She puts a jinx of her own devising on a teenage girl that leaves her with pimples all over that develop into scars. Even the Weasley Twins don't do anything permanent to the people they prank, so that's saying something. On top of that her jinx on the paper was utterly pointless besides identifying who sold them out, when there were a number of other ways to do it. The question is, why didn't she take other preventative measures rather than something that does nothing to help after the fact, like not putting Dumbledore's Army on the paper given they know the Ministry is paranoid? Moreover, you would think that with her buck teeth issues early on in the series she would know better about disfiguring someone.
Let's be honest here, if she weren't the author's avatar she would have been expelled.
Umbridge and the Centaurs - Let's be blunt here, we know what happened in that forest with Umbridge and the Centaurs. Mythology and her reaction afterwards pretty much paint an ugly picture. For all the evil that Umbridge was and deserving of Azkaban or Death, the fact that Hermione purposely led and subjugated another woman to that intentionally is simply unforgivable.
Again, she should be expelled from Hogwarts and be brought up on criminal charges at least.
Oblivating Parents - Hermione oblivates her parents and has them move to Australia. This is supposed to be seen as a noble thing for her, sacrificing her relationship with her parents to keep them safe...until you remember they had an entire damn life outside of her and she just made it all vanish. She uprooted them from their home and used magic on them to make them forget an entire life in place of a fake one without their permission.
What she did here wasn't noble, because she denied them the choice to choose. Moving is a big deal, especially to another country, and there are a ton of complications and factors to be taken in. Their jobs, their friends, a year of their lives was taken from them. If something, even as random as a mugging, happened and one of them got hurt or killed that would be on her too since she put them there.
Quite frankly its for reasons exactly like the the Magical World had to stay hidden, because this was not even done by a professional, but a young woman who thought she knew what was best for two people capable of equal thoughts and didn't take their own feelings into account. Let's not forget there were plenty of other options if she had the decency to tell someone before she did this, magical or otherwise. At least the Dursley's kept their memories and they weren't nice people.
In all honesty her parents should've and would've been in the right to fear her and cut her out of their lives the moment they got their memories back.
Love Potions - These are date-rape drugs in a nutshell. The fact they can last up to 24 hours for the weaker ones alone makes them horrible, because all it would take is someone getting slipped one and then dragged into a broom closet for a lot more than snogging. I could think of several other and worse ways to use them and it would not be remotely funny. Not only is it intentional poisoning, but Voldemort coming from such a pairing alone shows why the Twins ought to be treated as drug dealers given they even help disguise them getting into the school.
Fate Stay Night Notes
Summoning (Kariya's Legacy): I received a decent question in a review on why I chose Lu Bu instead of Karna or Sigmund or Medusa.
The reason I chose Lu Bu was because he met several qualifications:
SAO Log Horizon Crossover (Back in the Game)
Summary: Due to the events of Sword Art Online Incident and Alfheim Kidnappings, all NerveGear and AmuSphere devices were banned from public use and RECT closed its doors. With their loss, Kirito moved back to playing the long-running Elder Tales series, as a former member of the Debauchery Tea Party. He logs in with a few of his friends just as the latest expansion pack is launched and they end up inside of Elder Tales.
The story mostly focuses on the SAO survivors and their efforts to survive in the new world they found themselves in.
I had a burst of inspiration while marathoning Log Horizon and wanted to give some weight to the story, but I need help developing it.
Here's the forum for it. Come give your input towards it: https://www.fanfiction.net/forum/SAO-and-Log-Horizon-Crossover-Idea-Forum/179869/
Challenge #1 - Fate Stay Night
Kariya Matou’s Legacy Challenge
We all know that Canon Shinji is someone who we’d all like to see murdered in most cases, but what about when he was younger? A chance meeting with Kariya Matou before the 4th Holy Grail War ends up with Shinji deciding to protect Sakura and fight for her in his deceased uncle’s stead…but in order to do that, he must become a magus, and accept all the pain and burdens that come with it.
1.) Shinji cannot be verbally, physically, or sexually abusive towards Sakura.
2.) Shinji has to have a rivalry with Rin Tohsaka due to the fact that from his perspective she didn’t do anything to ease Sakura’s burdens or acknowledge her after their father and mother died. How it escalates or resolves itself is up to the writer.
3.) Shinji becomes a magus through a transplant of magic circuits from his father thanks to his mother having a Sorcery Trait ‘Inheritor’ and passing it on to him. As a side effect his body is weakened to the point that strenuous physical activity becomes difficult for him. After that he studies with his mother's surviving relatives and trains with them for at least a year.
4.) Shinji doesn’t use the Matou mysteries, meaning no Crest Worms.
5.) Shinji and Sakura have a Shared Mastership similar to the Archibald team in Fate Zero, with him holding the command seals.
1.) The Seven Servants are up to the writers.
2.) Team-Ups are up to the writers, if any.
3.) Pairings are up to the writer.
Challenge #2 - Magical Diary
Mary Sue Snake Challenge
Okay, so I got distracted by a dating game (don't judge me) and had an idea looking at the collection of Magical Diary fanfics on this website and noticing that there was a lack of Damien related ones that covered his endings. So for my idea, following the events of the Damien Path, Mary Sue refused to make the Solemn Oath and was transferred to Snake Hall for her second year over once the new year began. Now distant from her old friends because of her choice to stay with Damien, she finds herself in the same role that he once held to a freshman who reminded her of herself.
1.) Mary Sue is on non-speaking terms (not outright hostility) with her old Roommates because they still haven't forgiven her for choosing Damien, although whether it lasts or not is dependent on the writer.
2.) Mary Sue should have mastery in one set of magic (White, Black, Red, Green, or Blue) and had succeeded as Treasurer last year.
3.) Whenever someone asks what her relationship with Damien is she refuses to comment on the subject, although she may occasionally reference something without being overly descriptive.
4.) Others show some concern about the freshman she helps along due to the fact they believe she's under Damien's thrall or repeating the same thing he did.
1.) Mary Sue can be renamed.
2.) Pairings are up to the writer to determine whether she remained with Damien in the aftermath or not.
Challenge #3 - Log Horizon in Eorzea
Log Horizon x Final Fantasy XIV Challenge
A thought occurred one day while I was doing research for my SAO x LH Fanfic and I was researching Scholar abilities. Shiroe's face immediately popped up in my mind and I felt that this had the potential to be something great. So, why not issue it as a challenge? The premise is simple, place Log Horizon Characters into the world of FFXIV and have them deal with the overwhelming threat of the Primals on top of the calamity brought about by Bahamut's release that changed the face of the world.
Challenge #4 - Mahouka Rewrite
A True Irregular at Magic High School
I did like the setting of Mahouka, though the techno-babble makes things needlessly complicated, but one of the biggest problems is that the protagonist is OP to the extent that he upsets the entire premise of the show, which was supposed to be an Irregular at Magic High School. My belief is that on a fundamental level this is because the plot covered too many angles and needed Tatsuya to compensate by specializing in everything and giving him the utmost agency. So, why not fix that by revamping it?
The focus primarily remains on the High School discrimination of being a Weed and Bloom, with Tatsuya testing into the Course 2 of his own accord to prove his worth while his sister and her Guardian, Sakurai Minami, attend in Course 1. Navigating the blatant discrimination, he hopes to eventually surpass his sister and prove that the system is not definitive by becoming more involved in the politics of the school. Because of the requirements (see below) Tatsuya will have an easier time relating to his classmates and their struggles, and be able to reciprocate their feelings.
1.) The relationship dynamics between Miyuki and Tatsuya are changed from the nature in canon. His sister remains a prodigy and cares about him, and even though he loves her in a familial way, he still can't escape her shadow despite being older.
2.) The insertion of the Artificial Magic Calculation Area doesn't dampen Tatsuya's emotions. That is the result of a different Mental Interference interwoven into it, meaning the use of his higher-tier powers requires that he sacrifices his emotions when the limiter is lifted.
3.) Regrowth and Decomposition are sealed while the limiter is in place, limiting Tatsuya to Flash Cast, Non-Systematic Magic, his intelligence, and his physical refinement. The Limiter itself is two-tiered, meaning only if Miyuki lifts it can he utilize both those expressions of magic. However, should he be critically injured the limiter releases the first-tier and activates the Restoration to himself before resetting it back into place.
4.) Miyuki's Guardian is Sakurai Minami because Tatsuya doesn't fulfill this role anymore and lives with them in their home, also attending as a Course 1 Student.
Challenge #5 - Danmachi x Bloodborne Crossover
Bell Cranel - Hunter
Bell Cranel dies as Aiz is too slow to reach him as the Minotaur strikes him down. Then suddenly he finds himself in a field of luminescent flowers, where an old workshop lays in waiting and a Doll awaits to be woken from its slumber. He is beckoned to hunt beasts and does so, and once the Doll wakens with the gaining of insight, Bell finds that he can return to the world he left behind at the moment of his death. Unable to die without finish the Dream but unable to be freed from the thoughts of Beasts haunting his dreams and the call of the Hunt, Bell Cranel slowly and surely becomes a Hunter...
1.) No Realis Phase: Leaving aside my personal quandaries, Bell being able to go to the Dream to train up and unravel the points of Bloodborne should be enough to raise his stats without relying on his feelings for someone else. Instead, that skill can be swapped out with the one that keeps him tethered to the Hunter's Dream and allows him to come back to the moment of his death.
2.) Alternating Realities: Yharnam shouldn't be in their world, but rather one of its own. It shouldn't have characters visiting one from another because it makes things messy as you try to incorporate the different worlds together. Bell should be the only one who can visit between them.
3.) Showcase the Changes: If Bell is going through a different story than canon, the changes should be notable. He shouldn't just be a carbon copy of Bell if the Dream never happened. For example, Healing Potions from his world won't work on him after acquiring a taste for blood, but he can't let others drink the blood vials or they'll become a monster.
4.) Soul Color: Since to enter the Hunter's dream one must at least sign a contract to hunt in Flora's stead, it should dye Bell's soul the color of the paleblood moon. Freya may be disappointed that his soul has been colored, but it is a color she hadn't seen before and still peeks her interest somewhat.
(Keep in mind, I'm still active but I'm slow on updates)
5/15/17: A Lily Blossoms in Kanto Chapter 7 [Complete]
5/15/17: Calling Card: Chapter 15 [Complete]
5/19/17: Rabbit of the Moon - Chapter 8 [Complete]
5/5/17: Tiger & Might 6 [Next Month]
4/30/16: Vim & Vigor: Chapter 8 [Complete]
9/30/16: Settling Scores Part 3 [3000 Words]