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Joined 11-26-11, id: 3466503, Profile Updated: 04-15-15
Author has written 4 stories for Pokémon, Percy Jackson and the Olympians, Rise of the Guardians, and Miraculous: Tales of Ladybug & Cat Noir.

Arc's writing tips

1. Don't get the time confused.

Don't write things as though they are happening right at the moment then write "said" like it's in past tense. This is a common mistake but it discourages readers and makes the story seem bad even if the plot is well thought out.

2. Avoid OCs unless this is the main character

I know. Everyone just wants to put one in. To make a virtual you/us/them and give them an important role in the whole story even if the summary says otherwise. Or to put in the character they invented and just make it the cool mysterious character that every canon character in interested in. OCs are not wrong but if you want to make a story with main characters from the series then they put the characters in and make the whole world revolve around them then it discourages readers from reviewing. But OCs are good ways to fill out spaces and blanks so it's not wrong. Just don't put too many. It gets some people lost or confused. Remember the focus in the story, it's a very bad idea to introduce an OC in the middle of the story and switch the focus to them. It makes the reader's go "What? What's happening? What happened to [Insert Canon Character]!!!"Also a good way to introduce an OC is by using an Arc. It's also a good way to slip in other OC's.

3. Avoid Writing the same part of the story over and over again just using different PoVs

This gets annoying and lets readers lose interest. It's kinda like when a teacher gives you a super hard test where you have to correct the grammar but keeps using the same sentence different ways up to the point it starts to get really hard.

4. Have fun

'Nuff said people. Writing is a great way to express your emotion and feelings. It's a good way to pass time too. Let your imagination soar! Just don't let it get away! Make a short list of all the stuff you think up so you can evaluate it later if you think you need to.

5. Describe it

Don't be vague about the situation up to the point that it seems like a rough draft. Be imaginative, insert even small details like the mood of the characters, the time of the day, anything that the character might see, and emotion. Describe it as you see it.

6. Use an "Arc"

An arc is like a story within a story. An arc is used to fill in the gaps in a story with a smaller problem that causes a new string of event's the all add up to the main characters learning something that affects the whole plot or it can introduce something or someone new... or kill someone off. These are added so the story does not seem to rush it's plot and the characters don't just know random things "Just Because". In short, use them.

7. Don't Rush it

The biggest and most common problem for authors is that they want to finish a chapter fast and everything happens way too fast as well. Fanfiction authors need to remember that we set our deadlines and we have no limit. Its best not to do it all in one go and take time to think things through.

8. Summary Simplicity

The summary is often a big problem for beginners and the note 'I suck at summaries' is attatched. If you really can't think of a good summary an effective way to make one would be to use some of the most interesting dialouge's in your chapter and posting them in your summary with short, vauge, but interesting sentences.

More tips coming soon!


Have you ever looked back at your younger self and thought, 'I was such an idiot...' Yeah... I always get that now a days and was very. VERY impulsive as a kid so at anyone who is here because I sent you a weird review that seems either overly eager or offensive or just weird in general, I apollogise. If I sent you a review before 2013 please just ignore it if it's strange. If it's still strange and it's from 2014 and above I was in a weird mood. Once again, sorry! :P


PJO FANS: MUST have this on their profile!

NORMAL PEOPLE: Rely on their local weatherman for the weather forecast

PJO FANS: Will tell Zeus to make it rain

NORMAL PEOPLE: Say OMG!

PJO FANS: Say OH MY GODS!

NORMAL PEOPLE: Go to a psychiatrist to tell their feelings

PJO FANS: Won't go to one because they will take away their awesome demigod powers

NORMAL PEOPLE: Say shut up or i'll tell on you!

PJO FANS: Say shut up or my godly parent will vaporize you!

NORMAL PEOPLE: Think that PJO fans are stupid

PJO FANS: Know that normal people are stupid

NORMAL PEOPLE: When being chased yell HELP ME SOMEBODY!

PJO FANS: When being chased use their demigod powers

NORMAL PEOPLE: Get nervous/scared during thunderstorms

PJO FANS: Yell at Zeus to calm down

NORMAL PEOPLE: Would choose somewhere sunny to go for vacation

PJO FANS: Would try and find Camp Half Blood

NORMAL PEOPLE: Don't have this on their profile


Favorite shippings:

Percabeth

Solangelo

Fax(Fang Max)

Sadie Anubis( is there a name for that?)

Yamato and Hiro/Hibiki/Hero

ObliviaShipping

Alph x Lucia

Asuna x Kirito

Jason x Brick XD

Soriku

Hiro and Tadashi (No not incest! in a bromance way. Definition of shipping, people!)

And comedy shippings. Percy licking a pole during winter and getting his tongue stuck and a bunch of people having to pull him free! I just like imagining it when I fell in a gloomy mood. It looks hilarious in anime style. There are a couple more but I can't remember them right now.

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Time Clan 1 by YaoiFan22 reviews
Chrono is actually a Mage from a Clan long forgotten on Cray. He knows how to Cardfight and for some reason has a deck of his Time Clan/Chrono Clan. Despite knowing how to Cardfight he hasn't tried on Earth and his Adoptive Aunt doesn't let him for reasons even she doesn't know. Read and you'll find out why. Prequel in the long series of this story.
Cardfight!! Vanguard/CARDFIGHT!! ヴァンガード - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 14 - Words: 42,671 - Reviews: 40 - Favs: 64 - Follows: 51 - Updated: 1/23/2018 - Published: 8/28/2016 - Chrono S., Shion K., Tokoha A.
Our Fight by FoundingRaiderChrona reviews
The two of us had made a promise that when he was old enough, he'd come and live with us on Cray. Somehow he ended up forgetting that promise. At least now he and the others can finally be together again. And they can finally protect him. (Updates every Saturday after every new episode of 'NEXT' (Around 9:00PM or so) unless mentioned otherwise.)
Cardfight!! Vanguard/CARDFIGHT!! ヴァンガード - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 31 - Words: 61,116 - Reviews: 130 - Favs: 81 - Follows: 74 - Updated: 1/13/2018 - Published: 4/4/2016 - Chrono S., Tokoha A., Kiba S.
Sincerely, Scattered Shards by You Light The Sky reviews
Tsuna's the foolish type to give a bit of his heart to anyone he meets. No one ever wanted his ugly heart shards until he met his Guardians. No one ever treasured his heart shards until them either. Hints of All27 and R27. Magical Realism. Will be 5 Chapters.
Katekyo Hitman Reborn! - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 3 - Words: 48,116 - Reviews: 475 - Favs: 2,303 - Follows: 2,260 - Updated: 3/26/2017 - Published: 4/21/2015 - [Tsuna/Tsunayoshi S., Reborn] Vongola 10th Generation
The Life of a Spirit by Nyx Starlight reviews
If Jack was created by Mother Nature and MiM, that would mean, he's their son, and if that's the case, then what would that mean for Pitch and the Guardians?.. More importantly, what would that mean for the rest of the Spirits who just found out about an Immortal child who wields immense power, parents are some the most powerful spirits..and more importantly, is up for grabs!
Rise of the Guardians - Rated: T - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 37 - Words: 56,121 - Reviews: 275 - Favs: 342 - Follows: 241 - Updated: 2/28/2017 - Published: 4/11/2015 - Jack Frost, Man in the Moon - Complete
Rewind by SpiritAlchemist reviews
The streets were free of debris and litter, smaller shops were tidy and spruced up with flowers and fresh coats of paint. The roads were smooth and seemed to be freshly paved, and for the first time in many years, he felt like he was back home. It was all a lie and he despised every second he was here.
Eddsworld - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,325 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 9 - Published: 9/30/2016
Ice Prince by FeastofDeath reviews
Yes, the guardians have heard of him. With hair as white as snow, skin as pale as the moon, eyes as blue as the sky: he was the legendary 'Ice Prince' put to sleep by Old Man Winter 300 years ago. And now Man in the Moon wants the guardians to simply go and wake him up? Wait… why?
Rise of the Guardians - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Family - Chapters: 6 - Words: 14,843 - Reviews: 337 - Favs: 981 - Follows: 1,085 - Updated: 1/9/2016 - Published: 2/7/2013 - Jack Frost
Other by Sakura Hyuga reviews
After a mission gone horribly wrong, Allen wakes up in an alternate universe where the Exorcists and the Noahs are close allies. However, instead of being his sixteen-year old self, he is now . . . a twelve-year old child whose adoptive father is Marian Cross? And wait . . . What's this about Kanda being his grouchy, over-protective older brother? Hold on a second, what? !
D.Gray-Man - Rated: T - English - Family/Humor - Chapters: 6 - Words: 20,512 - Reviews: 242 - Favs: 551 - Follows: 636 - Updated: 12/23/2015 - Published: 10/15/2014 - Allen Walker, Cross Marian, Kanda Yuu, Lavi
How to Get a Baymax by Seito reviews
It was well known that Tony Stark had no impulse control. So he wasn't quite sure why Pepper was so surprised that he returned from San Fransokyo with two genius brothers and their personal healthcare robot. Part of the How to Survive Being an SI Employee Universe.
Crossover - Avengers & Big Hero 6 - Rated: T - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,027 - Reviews: 44 - Favs: 535 - Follows: 498 - Published: 10/18/2015 - Iron Man/Tony S., Hiro Hamada, Tadashi Hamada, Baymax
Devil Survivor 2: Summoning Without App by Tsukiyozaki reviews
Hibiki never had the 'Nicaea' application, Daichi and Nitta were separated from him, and in the end, he decided to help Ronaldo fight the demons in Nagoya. Wait a minute, how will he fight? Let's survive!
Megami Tensei - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 10 - Words: 21,237 - Reviews: 28 - Favs: 37 - Follows: 42 - Updated: 10/16/2015 - Published: 11/28/2013 - Nameless
The Black Goat's Egg by FlyAndDontLookBack reviews
[formerly known as Glassy Sky] Plot line by FF user Helafina. Kuroko falls into deep depression after being abandoned by those he called friends. A person comes along and helps him, giving Kuroko another chance to change back to the way it was, but what happens when the exact people who made him like this appear once more? two-shot. trigger warning. implied cutting and suicide.
Kuroko no Basuke/黒子のバスケ - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 2 - Words: 15,135 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 210 - Follows: 87 - Updated: 9/19/2015 - Published: 8/15/2015 - Kuroko T., Kagami T., Generation of Miracle - Complete
The Kosmos by The Bleached Inu reviews
(Original titled 'What If') There are many stories like this one, but this particular one has more than just one twist… what if Pitch got to Jack before the Guardians? What if the Guardians misread the Man in the Moon's message? And who are "Ice" and "Shadow"? Past's are found and true intents are revealed, but can anyone truly face the truth?
Rise of the Guardians - Rated: T - English - Family/Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 12,743 - Reviews: 100 - Favs: 220 - Follows: 287 - Updated: 5/31/2015 - Published: 1/12/2013 - Jack Frost, Pitch
Touch of Magic by Earth Star reviews
Jack is a street kid who gets by performing his magic tricks he learned from his father. However, he comes to learn that magic is more than smoke and mirrors when he rescues a small fluffy rabbit. Jack soon find himself on the longest and most dangerous road trip of his life.
Rise of the Guardians - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Family - Chapters: 23 - Words: 75,216 - Reviews: 487 - Favs: 529 - Follows: 297 - Updated: 3/6/2015 - Published: 10/10/2014 - Complete
Cat by deactivated8574726193774 reviews
There's a cat that lives at the Sawada's. A ridiculously small kitten with equally as ludicrous large eyes and a fluffy tail, courtesy of being easily frightened. It appears and disappears as it pleases and Reborn can never seem to find it. Once, he wonders why a certain brunet has a bad relationship with dogs. And why does Tsuna know the weather better than the forecasters?
Katekyo Hitman Reborn! - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Supernatural - Chapters: 3 - Words: 21,913 - Reviews: 247 - Favs: 1,614 - Follows: 1,639 - Updated: 3/4/2015 - Published: 1/31/2015 - Reborn, Tsuna/Tsunayoshi S., Vongola 10th Generation
Technological Advancement by Spiritus Rex reviews
Hiro and Tadashi Hamada have been on the run for a long time, never staying too long in one place, never leaving any traces of themselves. Things always got dangerous for them if they stayed somewhere for too long. Until suddenly, something big happens, and then their time on the run is brought to an abrupt end. (Technopath!Hiro)
Big Hero 6 - Rated: T - English - Drama/Family - Chapters: 15 - Words: 34,734 - Reviews: 193 - Favs: 563 - Follows: 361 - Updated: 12/31/2014 - Published: 11/16/2014 - Baymax, Hiro Hamada, Prof. Callaghan, Tadashi Hamada - Complete
The Rebirth of Tsunayoshi Sawada by ShamelessDilettante reviews
When Tsuna dies at a ripe old age, he finds himself waking again, back in middle school, a month before Reborn even arrives. Tsuna, in all the wry humour he has accumulated in his old life, decides that, what the hell, it's his turn to fool around with Vongola this time. One-shot. No pairings.
Katekyo Hitman Reborn! - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,572 - Reviews: 404 - Favs: 6,367 - Follows: 2,158 - Published: 11/7/2014 - Reborn, Tsuna/Tsunayoshi S., Vongola 10th Generation - Complete
Sorcerer, not Sorceress! by exocara reviews
Fairytale-like AU. Sawada Tsunayoshi, sorcerer and son to retired sorceress supreme, Sawada Nana, has been cursed. The curse? Nothing big (but still Very Bad), just that almost everyone will see him as a girl instead of the boy he is. Join him in his quest to break the curse as he meets friends and unwanted suitors along the way. (one-sided) All27, one-shot and drabble series
Katekyo Hitman Reborn! - Rated: T - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,174 - Reviews: 63 - Favs: 429 - Follows: 478 - Updated: 11/5/2014 - Published: 11/3/2014
Family by Fruitloop-chan reviews
Alone in the graveyard, he was visited by the Earl and offered him a chance to see his father again, but the one who killed his father this time around is General Cross himself. Allen's Noah was awaken because of his rage and now, he is stuck on his 10 year old body. The Noah Family accepted him and the Earl adopted lil Allen and made him his son. "Call me Papa" Noah!Allen
D.Gray-Man - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 11 - Words: 15,873 - Reviews: 167 - Favs: 435 - Follows: 489 - Updated: 9/22/2014 - Published: 2/3/2014 - Allen Walker, Millenium Earl, Lenalee Lee, Kanda Yuu
Nox Vita by Candles In The Snow reviews
What if Kairi hadn't turned Sora back from a Heartless into a Somebody? What would have happened? And what if it was Roxas who found Heartless Sora? All these questions and more will be answered, as we watch Sora's life in the Organization with Roxas. Hints of Demyx/Zexion so far, and possibly Axel/Roxas later on, who Sora's going to be with is currently undecided. UA.
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 7 - Words: 8,109 - Reviews: 52 - Favs: 143 - Follows: 136 - Updated: 4/13/2014 - Published: 4/11/2013 - Sora, Roxas
When in Goode by theRighteousMan reviews
Percy Jackson screwed up big during the Battle of Manhattan. Now, he has a science fiction pirate and the Avengers, including their newest recruit, Spiderman, on his tail. / "I'm a normal kid!" "Is that why we're standing fifty feet below the surface of the ocean?" /Part of my 'The Superheroes in Stark tower' universe. COMPLETE
Crossover - Percy Jackson and the Olympians & Avengers - Rated: T - English - Family/Humor - Chapters: 8 - Words: 20,628 - Reviews: 254 - Favs: 1,151 - Follows: 835 - Updated: 2/23/2014 - Published: 12/29/2013 - Percy J., Iron Man/Tony S., Hulk/Bruce B., Nick F. - Complete
Water and Wings by Skiing-girl reviews
Maximum Ride and her flock were freed from the School again. But who was their unlikely savior? And will they be able to save him now? percabeth
Crossover - Maximum Ride & Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Tragedy - Chapters: 13 - Words: 11,744 - Reviews: 62 - Favs: 75 - Follows: 98 - Updated: 11/24/2013 - Published: 3/19/2013 - Max, Percy J.
Underneath The Tiny Wooden Baby by GeorgieGirl999 reviews
North's Russian doll has a hidden side, buried within the tiny wooden baby. This side of North can only be released when his wonder side is damaged, and its hell to pay when Jack is blamed.
Rise of the Guardians - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 13 - Words: 21,771 - Reviews: 505 - Favs: 380 - Follows: 464 - Updated: 3/24/2013 - Published: 12/8/2012 - Jack Frost
Into The Vampire World by TheCuteChibiLover reviews
Len is an average boy with a pure heart. His life was perfectly normal until he finds him self trapped in the vampire world where he meets a beautiful vampire girl named Rin. Will she protect him from the vampires, or is it all an act to get to his blood?
Vocaloid - Rated: T - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 24 - Words: 147,829 - Reviews: 92 - Favs: 83 - Follows: 64 - Updated: 9/1/2012 - Published: 7/25/2010 - Len K., Rin K.
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Sheep in Wolve's Clothing reviews
Just when a new exchange student arrives, a wolf themed hero clad in a hoodie shows up out of nowhere. Marinette takes a liking to both, but Adrien doesn't completely share her opinion. Or in which a Canadian exchange student tries his hand at heroing and at some point getting together LadyNoir. Colab with MugetsuPipeFox
Miraculous: Tales of Ladybug & Cat Noir - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,804 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 12 - Follows: 23 - Published: 12/31/2015 - Marinette D-C./Ladybug, Adrien A./Cat Noir, OC
Uniquely Frost reviews
Just like snowflakes, no two frost patterns are ever exactly alike, and in the same way, no moment spent with Jack frost will be like any other. A series of Oneshots and shorts that range in many genres. Accepting Requests. Current: Khione the PENGUIN-In which the Big Four knock out a snowflake and have to deal with his bird.
Rise of the Guardians - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Family - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,983 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 81 - Follows: 70 - Updated: 8/30/2015 - Published: 4/6/2015 - Bunnymund, Jack Frost, Sandy, Tooth
An Underworld Christmas reviews
All Nico wanted was a holiday. A nice vacation. Of course Hades ruins it all. Now Nico's left in heart break. Can Hades fix this and give Nico his perfect Christmas? Or will he loose his son forever? Up for adoption because you guys seem to like this and im all outta ideas. Sorry. PM me if interested.
Percy Jackson and the Olympians - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 979 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 23 - Follows: 28 - Published: 1/17/2013 - Hades, Nico A.
Love birds reviews
Will be rewritten. This version will be deleted when I finish re writing up to chapter 3. Will be rewritten under the same name.
Pokémon - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 2,419 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 12/24/2012 - Published: 8/24/2012 - Staraptor/Mukuhawk, Ben/Natsuya, Summer/Minami
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