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I read a lot of fanfics Xander Centered and found very few likeable.
She says: "The night is dark and full of terrors!"@
Dragon age challenge.
Then there is time line, main character always and i mean Always come in time. All the events that happened in the game happens or start to happen only when Main character comes, and this is a lot more frustrating. I mean how hard to write scene where Main character come to late and takes what he could get, or deal with the consequences of his late arrival. Or came too early a deal with problems a lot easier, and gain a lot more then should have. So here it is:
-First: Main character is Aedan Cousland, he must be smart, ambitious, cunning and ruthless.
-Second: Aedan Cousland do not become grey warden. In cannon his becoming grey warden is ridiculous, he could run on his own he didn't need help of Duncan to this. So Aedan Cousland NO Grey Warden. Survival of his family depends on Authors will
-Third: He should lead rebellion against Loghain, and win him as fast as possible, use his smart, ambitious, cunning and ruthless thinking and methods to win.
-Fourth: No Grey Warden as main character of the Game. Aedan Cousland must himself or thru his followers, gather an army needed to fight the blight.
-Fifth: Like i sad earlier, Aedan must not keep up everywhere, some places he must be late some earlier.
-Six: Aedan should became a King.
-Seven: As I said before thinking outside the box he could attract Orlesian Grey Wardens to kill the Archdemon.
-And final pleas do not stop after Archdemon is dead soon will be released the third part of the game.
A song of ice and fire challenge.
Pairings that i Hate the Most
A Song Of Ice and Fire
Traumatized fourteen years teenage girl, that was raised by thought that she will be married against her will, on some Lord or another, girl that wanted to be free, play with sword and ride on horse. And obsessed with a Prophecies grown married man that above all want a daughter because in some old book was written some stupid Prophecy, and he is a prince to boot, with a Lot of responsibilities. The guy is obsessed pedophile, he seduced and kidnaped inexperienced little girl, to get her pregnant with his babe.Fourteen years old girl for god's sake, no wonder that she died, she was to young for kid birth. This is not some romantic novel where prince on a white horse saves girl from terrible fate. This is obsessed madman-pedophile using psychologically weak state of a girl that do not want to marry, to seduce her and kidnape her, to fulfill some old book prophecy.
What in the Hell are romantic in that??? And there so many fic with this shity pairing, that is just ridiculous!!!
About A song of Ice and Fire fanfiction:
I love some of the "Song of ice and fire" fanfics. There are really nice jewels there, that are definitely worth to read.
For exemple, if you read fanfics with Robb Stark as main character, in most cases you will see, Stupid, Ignorant, Evil and all sort of bad Lannisters. They so much out of character that it is not even funny, it rises questions, who is this Character who wears Tywin Lannister face? Or any other Lannister faces? Or some time who is this Robb Stark that suddenly smarter, more skilled and completely genius over all others? Other Starks are also suddenly do not have any flaws that was before, but now they became Role model to all.
Most writers that writes about "Song of ice and fire" cant do it without showing their dislike for characters that cloud their judgment. They cant do justice to All characters that George R. R. Martin, spend YEARS creating. But reading nonsense, that most writers of this fandom writes, i want to call "warhammer 40k holy inquisition" and order for Exterminatus!
After reading so many nonsense, i can understand why George R. R. Martin hate fanfics about his books, Authors cant be unbiased and do justice to all charcters, without showing his(hers) dislike for character.
Do not get me wrong, like I mentioned in beginning there are stories that are really good, and definitely worth to read.
The stories that are usually bad, with few exceptions:
Stories that contains any sort of Bashing characters are just not worth to read, this is prime example where Author dislike for a Character spoils the story. I am reading fanfiction over six years and most stories with bashing is suck. Almost all good Authors that i readed is avoiding Bashing of any kind.
Most of Harem stories now this is different from Bashing because this is actually interesting line of plot that can go with many different routes, lots of fun with relationship in group and lots of philological stuff that goes in line with multiply relationships, but simple is, most people just cant write this Thread properly, and while a general plot may be good in this stories, the side relationship part with Harem, well lets just say it is not looking good in most cases.
I just could not not mention it. If you interested in SI fics. This one of the best out there, and you should definitely read it: