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Author has written 5 stories for Jak and Daxter.
Age: Old enough to write on this site
Hair: Red (never dyed it)
Eyes: Green (changes tone with my mood)
Weight: That's for me to know.
Writing Experience: Ever since I could walk
Status as an Author: Beginner
Pros with Writing: Lifetime experience, adventure, action, horror, mystery, grammar, sentence structure, ability to catch the reader's attention, show emotion, improvised comedy, and character development.
Cons with Writing: Major Writer's Block, procrastination, romance, mute characters, spelling, different languages, loss of interest, forgetfulness, lack of confidence, acting out characters that aren't mine, and I make chapters too long.
(Please try to bear with the cons!!!)
Motto: Without imagination there is no creation.
25 Things You Need to Know About Me
Note: These are just some story ideas that I'm gonna get around to after Friend's Darkest Hour. I typed some bits and pieces that'll I'll add to the story that I'll type later on.
Regular stories: Jak & Daxter
Exempt: My Time in Hell
Chapter: First Day
Part: First Whipping Session
They carried me out of The Hole after being in there for hours that I couldn't keep track of because I was too busy choking on my fear of confined spaces. I was dragged into another room that was dark, unventilated, and smelled more foul than the sewers. The guards stripped me of all of my prison garments down to my unmentionables. They chained my hands to the ceiling for obvious reasons and chained my feet to the ground so I won't kick. I was scared out of what ever wits I have left and very confused as to what is happening here. Also, on top of that, I was wondering what they were going to do to me because I was stripped naked and my hands and feet are chained which leaves me open to any sort of abuse they may inflict upon me. My answer came when something stepped out of the shadows that both intimidated and confused me.
I saw a Caucasian man who was extremely buff wearing a black mask that looked like a bag with eye holes in it, black leather pants, and black boots that are quite large with metal soles. He was carrying a long whip that you'd typically see a lion tamer holding. There was something off about the whip because it was glinting as if it was soaked in something that was purple. I could tell by the movement of the mask that he was grinning at me evilly. This made me feel very uneasy and it's not because he is a guy.
I looked at his whip that he was cracking on the floor which made a noise akin to lightning and looked at my entirely bare body many times with increasing speed. Just as I started putting two and two together, the man slowly walked behind me with his lashing whip laughing quietly as he was doing so. He cracked the whip on the ground one final time before he swung it above his head and cracked it as hard as he could which made contact with my left shoulder-blade.
The pain I felt from that whip was so bad that I couldn't think straight. It felt like I was stabbed by a serrated knife that was soaked in the most corrosive substance imaginable. I let out a scream that was so loud that the punisher had to cover his ears. He whipped me again which cut off my screaming, but the pain got substantially worse with every lash that was carved into my fragile skin. He whipped me with the Eco soaked whip at least another four times before my wounds started to bleed badly. My blood felt hot against what ever skin that was not damaged. But, he didn't let up on the whipping. It's as if he relished the sight of my blood seeping out of my wounds. He kept whipping me to the point that I started to cry and beg him to stop, but he just laughed at my pitiful attempt to make the pain go away.
He whipped at my poor arms which started gushing my blood at the first two whips and it started raining blood onto my hair which covered the subtle yellow-green at my roots and made my red hair even more red than usual. My arms were covered in lashed wounds that are an angry red and looked purple around it. To say it hurt worse than hell itself would be the understatement of the century.
He whipped at my long legs which caused them to bleed at the first whip and my blood was seeping from my deep wounds to the floor which obviously filled the man with glee because he whipped me harder and faster to the point that I just about passed out from the pain of it all. He whipped my chest, my breasts, my rear, my head, my feet, everywhere to the point that I was covered from head to toe in my own blood. I passed out from the pain of it and losing all of that blood. Everything went black with me thinking to myself, "I am Nobody..."
Crossovers: Jak & Daxter/Bioshock
(Working Title; PMing any better titles would be appreciated)
Chapter: Worse than Haven City
Part: Jak's "Final" Recording
Jak was chased all over the Atlantic Express by at least thirty Thuggish Splicers that are screaming at him to stop. He didn't stop and kept running for dear life. Normally, he never ran from a fight like this. But, he's low on Eco, out of ammo, out of options, and out of luck it seems. So, he's running from them rather than being stupid and facing them with his bare hands. Daxter was hanging onto his shoulder with his eyes closed yelling into Jak ears to try to get him to run faster. But, it just made his ears ring in protest. Jak was thinking to himself that if that ottsel shouts at him any louder that he's gonna have ottsel stew for supper tonight.
Down the hall of Ryan Amusements at the start of the ride, he saw a door that might offer him some protection. He ran into the door, closed it at the push of the button, and jammed the door with a wrench. Just as he jammed the door, the Splicers crashed into the door which forced Jak on his back and caused the door to give a little which was much to Daxter's terror and Jak's annoyance.
"Can nothing stop those things?!" Daxter shouted with his tail twitching like crazy.
"Apparently not." Jak muttered as the Splicers crashed into the door again which made it give even more. The impact caused the wall around the door to crack and some debris to land on Daxter and knock him out.
Jak thought that this may be his last moments alive and decided to let whoever might try to look for him know. He got out another Audio Diary from his pack and press the record button.
"This is Jak again, Diary number twenty-two." he spoke into it, "I've been stuck in this hell-hole for nearly a month now and I think I've finally found a city that's even worse than Haven! The Splicer's chased me down the Atlantic Express and into Ryan Amusements. I'm holed in what looks like a maintenance room with Daxter who got knocked out by debris. At least he won't get to see me get ripped apart by those... things. This may be my last recording and if Torn, Ben, Jinx, or anyone I know finds this I'll let you know that I regret nothing from coming down here because I'm fighting for my friend's life. A fight that I knew in my heart that I was gonna lose, but at least I gave it my best shot..."
His seemingly last words were interrupted by the Splicers crashing into the door again which made it dent at the edges and the wrench to fall off the emergency handles. He saw the Splicers' seriously deformed hands and faces screaming for ADAM. The ceiling caved in further from the force of their impact which made a small hole in the floor above him which caused what looked like a syringe filled with ADAM to fall in the room. Jak noticed it and remembered the shocked look on Tenenbaum's face when she introduced that stuff into his blood. It could've been a good thing or a bad thing because she wouldn't tell Jak what happened to the blood when the ADAM got into it. Jak pushed those thoughts back and continued recording his last message though.
"The crash was those damn Splicers ramming the door." he continued, "The ceiling caved in on me from that. I'm alright, but I saw a syringe fall from the hole in the ceiling. It might've been on the floor in the room above me. It's filled with ADAM which may either save my life or end it."
He paused for a moment because he heard a loud creak of the door giving. He looked at the door to see that the Splicers were starting to break down the door to get Jak and possibly tear him apart to find out if he has any ADAM on him. He shook himself to snap out of seeing his life flash before his eyes and continued trying to record his message.
"Well, given the situation I'm in, it sounds like a win-win deal here. If this is my last recording, at least that saved me from possibly being banished by the City Council for simply being able to turn into a monster!"
He turned off the recording, placed it safely in a desk, and closed the drawer. He looked at the unconscious Daxter and decided to move him to a safer place which happened to be a locker. Just as the Splicers were breaking down the last of the door Jak hesitantly grabbed the syringe, held it shakingly over his left wrist, looked away with his eyes squeezed shut, and quickly injected it into his wrist which caused him to cry in agony from the ADAM burning through his veins.
His heart started racing as he started getting a sudden fever that made him sweat profusely and it was nearly as bad as the pain. He was seeing double and his vision started hazing. He had a horrid headache that felt as though someone was using a chainsaw against his skull. Every bone in his body started killing him, even the four in his ears. He was stumbling blindly as his legs started to give, knocking over nearly everything in his path, and eventually he collapsed altogether. He was twitching and screaming silently in pain on the floor. Just as he felt that he couldn't take anymore of this his hazy vision suddenly went black, all of the loud noises stopped, and all he could feel was the familiar pains of him changing from man to monster...
25 Signs That You Play Jak & Daxter WAY Too Much
The Stupidest Questions I've Ever Been Asked Relating to Games, Comics, TV shows, and Movies
Key: Question Answer
What's the difference Jean Grey and Professor X? Their gender, age, and experience with their powers.
Which one is Jak and which one is Dax? The rodent on the shoulder is Dax and the blonde one is Jak.
Do you play video games? Yes, I'm in video game club aren't I.
What is the main guy's name on Bioshock? Jack Ryan. Try looking at the letter addressed to him at the first of the game and you'll see.
Why were they so mean to Dumbo? Because of his ears!
Have you ever heard of Mickey Mouse? Who hasn't?
Who is Phoenix? Jean Grey's darker persona! Any two-bit X-Men fan would know that!
What is Crash Bandicoot? You've just stated what he is.
Who is Underdog? He's an poetic, heroic, anthropomorphic dog with powers that rival Superman.
Who is Bugs Bunny? Have you been living under a rock for the past 50 years? He's a wise-cracking rabbit that chews on a carrot saying, "What's up doc?"!
Do you write stories? I'm in creative writing aren't I?
Who's Spyro? He's a purple dragon who breaths fire, ice, electricity, and earth.
What is Daxter? A rat? He's not a rat, he's an ottsel.
What kind of creatures are those in Jak? They are a cross between two animals!
What kind of animal is Timon? He's a meerkat!
What kind of bird is Jeremy? He's a crow.
Where's Bambi's mom? She got shot.
When is Independence Day? What is it also known as? The fourth of- Ohh! Yeah.
Have you heard of Sonic the Hedgehog? What person that plays games hasn't at least heard of him?!
Who's Sherlock Holmes? Seriously? He's a very famous detective and one of the most mentioned characters in existence.
What kind of dog is Tramp? They mention it more than once. He's a mutt!
Why is Jak such a jerk in the second game? He's been tortured in prison for two years straight with Dark Eco which is known to warp people's minds.
Have you ever heard of an iPod? Who hasn't?
What's a record player? An earlier MP3 Player.
What kind of animal is Julien? A ring-tailed lemur.
When is DarkJaktober? Take away Dark Jak and add an O and a C to it. October? Bingo!
Who is Scooby Doo? You're kidding me right? He's a German Shepard who has a severe speech impediment and helps Mystery Inc. solve mysteries.
Have you ever heard of Secret of N.I.M.H? Who the hell hasn't?
Do you have any Disney movies? Who doesn't?
Mary-sue Test (This is all based on my friend's, family's and classmate's opinions. Has to be above 10, but below 15. I got this test from TA Maxwell.)
Key: 1-5 negative 6-10 positive
Kaitlin (Darkens) Mar (Common name; parenthesized name is from her previously changing her last name legally to that; current last name is from being Jak's step-daughter due to Haven City Council decision.)
Age: 12 (Too young for Jak. Old enough to be step-daughter)
Hair: Red with faint yellow at the roots, but never noticed. upper back length and wavy. (Slight blonde is common in red heads)
Eyes: Green (Common color among red heads)
Character Traits (The test)
Skill(s): Mental powers- 9 (She never seems to mess up on mental powers and has little to no limits. Intelligence counts in this.)
Poltergeist powers- 5 (Only happens on October and has BJ's limits and personal demons in this form.)
Mudoken powers- 6 (Limited to one person can only cast one bolt at a time.)
Holmes' powers- 7 (Most commonly used, but seems to have control problems that she's still trying to rectify.)
Speed- 5 (Used often, but can't stop when reaches 200 MPH which can lead her into crashing into signs, trees, buildings, and more which can be a bad thing.)
Sporeling- 8 (Used extremely often, God-like, can easily make mistakes with it, can't change into other people until she knows code, has control issues in sleep.)
Fire Channeling- 6 (Used in fights, has aiming issues, control problems, can cause serious fires, has harmed civilians, can become weak if used too often.)
Underdog-like powers- 6 (Used very often in the form of strength. Degraded version, doesn't use them all, felt bad for taking them, not limited to pills.)
Toon power- 5 (Can still be hurt normally and can only do cartoony things out of Toon town for so long before she starts to tire.)
Unbreakable Bones- 6 (Renders her almost unbreakable, but can still be broken by Eco crystals, adamantium, and a planet crashing fall.)
Master Thief moves- 5 (Rarely used, only used when running away, screws up in sneak missions if done alone.)
Sword Skills- 5 (Very rarely used, speed is perfect, and strength seems to have a problem.)
Eco Channeling- 6 (Used very often, overshadowed by Jak, not born with it, has control issues, and has problems with Light Eco.)
Resistance to pain and Dark Eco- 5 (Can feel pain from Eco. Might be badly hurt and not know it. Can still feel overwhelming pain. Dark Eco resistance limited to pool)
Power Absorbing- 5 (Very rarely used, gives degraded versions of powers, can only be done through blood transfusion, useful for adapting to a new world.)
Temper- 5 (Easily frustrated, only gives patience to those who deserve it, and when she loses her temper it can entail very bad things.)
Romance: 5 (Has had secret admirers, not good at doing it, only good at making friends/enemies, she can notice when someone wants her.)
Looks: 5 (Looks like a teen trained for war, has scars from torture that never healed, has a scratch on her right arm from DJ, average for her gender.)
Luck: 9 (She has the magic touch when it comes to gambling, escapes fortress countless times, she survived on the streets, and she survived many Dark Jak attacks.)
Marty-Stu Test (This is a bit redundant at this point, but it'll save me many annoying PMs. Same rules as Mary-sue test. Again, I got this from TA Maxwell.)
Key: 1-5 negative 6-10 positive
Benjamin David Arthur Darkens (The name is based off a character of my dad's which I have permission to use.)
Age: 12 (Being the same age is just coincidence. I don't plan on pairing them.)
Hair: Brownish black. Just passes ears in length and well-groomed. (A very rare hair color in the Jak world.)
Eyes: Cerulean. (It's no coincidence that Ben and Jak have the same eye color and facial features since Mar and his great-great-great grandfather were brothers.)
Character traits (The test)
Skill(s): Intelligence- 7 (Very smart, resourceful, inventive, and able to think outside the box.)
Dark Powers- 5 (Very rarely used if ever. Often used accidentally. Ashamed of these powers. Hard to hide and control. Effective for persuasion if used.)
Patience- 8 (Good luck trying to annoy him! Years of persecution and shame of his powers hardened him to the feelings of impatience.)
Nerves- 9 (His body knows no twitch or nerves. It's difficult, if not impossible, to frighten him. Not even Dark Jak scared him!)
Wrestling- 5 (He's decent at it with people larger than him. But, with animals, he ends up retaining serious wounds due to lack of using powers.)
Animal skills- 7 (He's very good with animals when he likes them and has several animals at home who welcome him with friendly tackling and sloppy kisses.)
Tolerance- 5 (Ben is a no-nonsense type of guy and has little to no tolerance for anything that breaks his sense of organized order and control unless it's a friend.)
Doctor- 8 (One of the best in Haven. When the doctors are at a loss on a patient they come to him.)
Chemistry- 6 (Fiddles with chemicals all the time. Not as good as Kate. Has made costly repairs due to mistakes in the past.)
Emotional Control- 5 (It's decent. Still learning. Still young. Has slipped up before due to temper or emotional crisis. Can bounce back fast, but sometimes not quick enough.)
Observation & inference- 5 (Overshadowed by Kate. Still learning from her. He's no Sherlock Holmes. Has made lucky, educated guesses before.)
Social- 5 (He's very well spoken. But, he's a high functioning sociopath and rarely cares about what others think. Kate's trying to fix that.)
Temper- 5 (He has the Darkens' notorious short temper, but he actually tries to keep it under control despite things constantly annoying him.)
Instinct- 5 (This is common in Ben's family. But, he almost never uses it and doesn't trust it which often lands him in trouble.)
Romance: 3 (He knows little to nothing about romance due to the fact that he's more focused on his works.)
Looks: 6 (He has his father's bodily features coupled with Jak's facial features which is a good combination)
Luck: 6 (He's the youngest sage in history. he owns an observatory. He relies more on skill and hard work than luck though.)
My Lingo On My Author's Notes
Key: "Phrase" Meaning
"Penta-Chapter" A story with five chapters.
"Revolver Chapter" A story with six chapters.
"Lucky Chapter" A story with seven chapters.
"Octa-Chapter" A story with eight chapters.
"Sudoku Chapter" A story with nine chapters.
"Deca-Chapter" A story with ten chapters.
"Multi-Chapter" A story with more than ten chapters.
"Rush Fic" A story that I worked on and published in less than a day.
"Week Fic" A story that I worked on and finished in a week.
"Month Fic" A story that took me a month to finish.
"Year Fic" A story that took me a year to finish.
"Ancient Fic" A story that took me more than a year to finish.
"Fast Fic" A story that I update very quickly.
"Slow Fic" A story that takes me a long time to update.
"Fresh Fanfic" A story that's only a few months old before being published.
"Old News Story" A story that I had for more than a year before being published.
"Ancient Scripture" A story that's more than five years old before being published.
"Memorial Memorabilia" A story that means a lot to me or brings back nostalgia to me.
"Seasonal Fanfic" A story that is published near or on a national holiday that is based around the holiday.
"Journalistic Fanfic" A story that is involved in a character reading a journal; used for character information and development; saves repetitive explanations.
"Underdog Story" A story that I have my doubts on that it'll be any good or wasn't much good in the past.
"Duo Story" A story with two different plots.
"Trio Story" A story with three different plots.
"Quad Story" A story with four different plots.
"Multi-Story" A story with five or more different plots.
My Hatred of Being Labeled...
(For people that hate stereotypes: If you think people should just shut up and stop, put this on your profile. BOLD the ones you are.)
I'm SKINNY, so I MUST be anorexic.
YOU KNOW YOU'RE AN AUTHOR IF...
You talk to yourself a lot.
You talk to yourself about talking to yourself.
When you talk to yourself you often talk to yourself like you're talking to someone else.
After uttering a profound piece of wisdom like that above, you stare at the cookie in your hand with awe and say, "Wow, this stuff is great for sugar highs...'.
You live off of sugar and caffeine.
You'll check your e-mail every day of the week and then disappear off the face of the earth.
You're e-mails tend to be pages long and incredibly random.
When replying to an e-mail, you'll never actually address the point of it.
You tend to collect pens or pencils off the ground like picking pennies off the ground.
No matter where you are in a room you never have to get up to find a pen/pencil and paper.
The letters on your keyboard are wearing off.
You have to buy new pencils.
Your friends and family think that you have carpal tunnel syndrome.
People think you have A.D.D.
You think it'd be cool to have A.D.D.
You constantly start talking in third person, present or past tense.
You start thinking about making lists like this and start giggling for no "apparent" reason.
Your friends stopped looking at you funny when you laugh for no apparent reason a loooooong time ago.
And FINALLY, the one way to tell if you're a good writer: You failed English 101.
(copy that into you're profile if you fit one or more of the descriptions and bold them.)
Fics That Are In The Making (Underline means that it's on FanFiction, but it's not complete; when fic is dead or done it's on the list for a week before removal.)
Key: (Viable: coming on strong/ Faltering: slow in coming/ Unstable: verging on discontinue/ Dying: Almost gone/ Dead: completely given up)
Imagination Becomes Reality Faltering
Dark Demons Viable
The True Raven Dying
Unexpected Reunion Unstable
Frienemy Reunion Faltering
Lightning & Ruby Viable
Friend's Darkest Hour Faltering
Fics Stuck In Development Hell (When fic is on fire it's on this list for a week before it's moved to Fics That Are In The Making.)
Key: (On Fire: working on first chapter/ Hot: need to get around to it/ Warm: written drafts or notes/ Cold: researching/ Frozen: daydream)
Jak & Daxter: Stranded Warm
Jak in Predatore Cold
History of Predatore Cold
The Secret Origins of Kaitlin Mar Warm
Dark Vampire Manual Warm
Underdog in Haven?! Frozen
An Old Friend... Cold
The Snipers VS The Monster of Haven Hot
Ancestral Meeting Warm
My Time in Hell Hot
Horrid Halloween Warm
Dark Dilemma Hot
The Dark Haul Warm
Dual Disaster Cold
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