Author has written 1 story for Naruto.
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Let me begin by telling you a little bit more about myself. I am in college at the moment majoring in nursing. If you don't know what that means I will tell you. It means that I have absolutely no life Monday through Friday. The weekends are the little slices of heaven that I get to forget about my woes, usually over a stiff drink if I can afford the gin. To sum myself up I'm a pretty basic guy. Video games, martial arts, reading, and writing are my passions. I also am proficient in procrastinating, day dreaming, and spacing out. I was fortunate enough to stumble upon this website about 4 years ago and needless to say it has consumed all of my free time. So I decided to create this account. Now I'm sure the next question you are asking is something like, "Just Retribution, what will you be writing about?" Well avid readers I will tell you.
About a year ago a particular anime cartoon series caught my attention. What was this anime? Naruto. I immediately became sucked in and in no time I had burned through all the episodes released so far as well as the manga series. However the thing that bothered me the most was the love story development. "Ah ha!" all you P.I.'s say out there, piecing it all together. "So he's going to be writing his version of Naruto and how he believes the love plot should develop." To this I must confess that you are correct. "But the true question is, Just Retribution, who do you believe Naruto should be with." Drum roll please! HINATA OF COURSE!!! If you disagree, there's the door because I cannot see him getting with Sakura. Sure he is infatuated with her but I don't think it goes beyond anything but a crush. She is weak. "NO! No she isn't! She has monster strength!" you retort. I say nay, she is weak in the sense that she lacks courage and spirit. When Naruto was trapped by Pain who came to his rescue? Monster strength-ed Sakura or timid, shy, underestimated Hinata. Hinata has the strength to fight her those she cares about. I have in fact gotten into many arguments with my roomate as to who he will be with in the end. My confidence lies with the Hyuuga girl. I digress...
Now that you know where I stand on things with Naruto and what I will be writing about I want to explain why I am writing. After reading multiple Naruhina stories I found two reoccurring problems.
1: After the first half hour of reading Naruto has gone from completely oblivious of Hinata to ripping her clothes off and them going at it like two drunken monkeys. I'm sorry but that is lust not love. Don't get me wrong, crazy things can go down between the sheets when you are in love but for god sake its going to take longer than one chapter!
2: I have read a total of five Naruhina stories as of right now. Sadly, I have only finished one story, the rest are incomplete. Here I am reading very intently to realize that the next chapter is not there and that the author hasn't updated in years. *breaks down in tears here*
Therefore I have this promise that I would like to extend to you, the readers. I promise to put my time into writing my story, and I SWEAR to finish it. And I never go back on my words ;)