Just Retribution
hide bio
PM . Follow . Favorite
Joined 01-29-12, id: 3675840, Profile Updated: 08-26-15
Author has written 1 story for Naruto.

Hey, if you're reading this thank you for taking an interest in my writing.

Follow @JustRetribution if you'd like to ask questions about ONW or other stories I'm working on, OR "motivate" me to update.

Let me begin by telling you a little bit more about myself. I am in college at the moment majoring in nursing. If you don't know what that means I will tell you. It means that I have absolutely no life Monday through Friday. The weekends are the little slices of heaven that I get to forget about my woes, usually over a stiff drink if I can afford the gin. To sum myself up I'm a pretty basic guy. Video games, martial arts, reading, and writing are my passions. I also am proficient in procrastinating, day dreaming, and spacing out. I was fortunate enough to stumble upon this website about 4 years ago and needless to say it has consumed all of my free time. So I decided to create this account. Now I'm sure the next question you are asking is something like, "Just Retribution, what will you be writing about?" Well avid readers I will tell you.

About a year ago a particular anime cartoon series caught my attention. What was this anime? Naruto. I immediately became sucked in and in no time I had burned through all the episodes released so far as well as the manga series. However the thing that bothered me the most was the love story development. "Ah ha!" all you P.I.'s say out there, piecing it all together. "So he's going to be writing his version of Naruto and how he believes the love plot should develop." To this I must confess that you are correct. "But the true question is, Just Retribution, who do you believe Naruto should be with." Drum roll please! HINATA OF COURSE!!! If you disagree, there's the door because I cannot see him getting with Sakura. Sure he is infatuated with her but I don't think it goes beyond anything but a crush. She is weak. "NO! No she isn't! She has monster strength!" you retort. I say nay, she is weak in the sense that she lacks courage and spirit. When Naruto was trapped by Pain who came to his rescue? Monster strength-ed Sakura or timid, shy, underestimated Hinata. Hinata has the strength to fight her those she cares about. I have in fact gotten into many arguments with my roomate as to who he will be with in the end. My confidence lies with the Hyuuga girl. I digress...

Now that you know where I stand on things with Naruto and what I will be writing about I want to explain why I am writing. After reading multiple Naruhina stories I found two reoccurring problems.

1: After the first half hour of reading Naruto has gone from completely oblivious of Hinata to ripping her clothes off and them going at it like two drunken monkeys. I'm sorry but that is lust not love. Don't get me wrong, crazy things can go down between the sheets when you are in love but for god sake its going to take longer than one chapter!

2: I have read a total of five Naruhina stories as of right now. Sadly, I have only finished one story, the rest are incomplete. Here I am reading very intently to realize that the next chapter is not there and that the author hasn't updated in years. *breaks down in tears here*

Therefore I have this promise that I would like to extend to you, the readers. I promise to put my time into writing my story, and I SWEAR to finish it. And I never go back on my words ;)

Sort: Category . Published . Updated . Title . Words . Chapters . Reviews . Status .

Outfoxed by hazeleyes180 reviews
After a life-changing event, Naruto meets Kurama early and they become partners...even good friends. With a better outlook on life, he meets many who want to join him and help achieve their dreams and goals together. Among those friends are many beautiful women who have realized just how important he is to them. Smart/Strong Naruto. FemKyu. Implanted Sharingan. NarutoxHarem
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 27 - Words: 517,549 - Reviews: 3087 - Favs: 7,280 - Follows: 7,667 - Updated: 8/5 - Published: 6/12/2012 - [Naruto U., Hinata H., Anko M., Ino Y.]
A Different Scroll by Enei Emmu reviews
A timeline branches wildly away from its proper alignment. Many things change, and yet others stay exactly the same. A thousand years into the divergence, ten-year-old Hinata befriends Naruto. Complete.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 96 - Words: 671,045 - Reviews: 1954 - Favs: 2,077 - Follows: 2,062 - Updated: 8/5 - Published: 8/15/2013 - [Naruto U., Hinata H.] [Gaara, Tenten] - Complete
Sealed Legacy by Psycho G reviews
After discovering a long lost ancient forbidden master sealing technique created by a deceased clan leader and seal master of the Uzumaki clan, Jiraiya studies and tampers with it only for it to lead to unexpected results. NaruHina, One-sided SasuHina.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 41 - Words: 467,222 - Reviews: 3716 - Favs: 4,566 - Follows: 4,786 - Updated: 8/3 - Published: 9/1/2011 - Naruto U., Hinata H.
Generation Lost by paty-san5 reviews
After 3 years training abroad, Naruto now has what it takes to face whatever destiny has in store for him. With Akatsuki and Kyuubi coming after him, and Sasuke becoming an active criminal, Naruto'll have to deal the dangerous lifestyle fit for a ninja. Can his maturity level cope with the stress, while he also tries to unravel the mysteries of the opposite sex?
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 12 - Words: 153,547 - Reviews: 162 - Favs: 288 - Follows: 422 - Updated: 5/15 - Published: 5/25/2013 - Naruto U., Hinata H.
My Precious People by Serious Sam reviews
Many years have passed since the end of the Fourth Shinobi War. Now twenty-six, Naruto has returned to Konoha to help someone precious to him. He finds some unexpected changes, among them the son of Hinata whom no one knows who the father is, and a new danger looms on the horizon. Rated M for language and lemons. Adopted and rewritten with permission from Nube De Cristal.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 34 - Words: 456,360 - Reviews: 2221 - Favs: 1,637 - Follows: 1,892 - Updated: 4/17 - Published: 6/9/2013 - Naruto U., Hinata H.
Legacy of Uzushiogakure by Marquis Black reviews
The 2nd Shinobi World War left Uzu destroyed out of fear. Its inhabitants were left slaughtered or scattered. However, what if the members of Uzushio's famed Uzumaki weren't as scattered as people thought? What would it mean for one Uzumaki Naruto?
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 28 - Words: 248,132 - Reviews: 2078 - Favs: 4,862 - Follows: 5,251 - Updated: 4/12 - Published: 1/16/2012 - Naruto U.
Twist of Fate by KonohasBlackReaper reviews
When Naruto is ten, an incident makes him run away from the leaf village. Read how it changes certain things in his life when he runs into certain mist missing nins. But fate has a way of righting itself as Naruto lives a life among new friends while working his magic and changing lives, working for the day when he fulfills his dream. Believably stronger Naruto. NO YAOI
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 19 - Words: 147,043 - Reviews: 1091 - Favs: 1,802 - Follows: 1,923 - Updated: 3/5 - Published: 10/19/2012 - Naruto U., Zabuza M., Haku
Atlas by Kagaseo reviews
"My name is Naruto Uzumaki. I don't have chakra. I can't walk on walls, I can't breath fire, and I certainly can't make a clone of myself. Who cares? I'm awesome anyway." Can Naruto be a good ninja in a world where everyone BUT him has superpowers? Yes. Yes he can.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 20 - Words: 180,715 - Reviews: 1020 - Favs: 1,886 - Follows: 1,822 - Updated: 9/17/2015 - Published: 10/24/2012 - Naruto U.
Drifting by AlphaDelta1001 reviews
Naruto is many things; troublesome, wild, unpredictable, adventurous, untamable, unique. But there's a benefit to being wild and unpredictable; no one has the faintest idea what you're going to do next. NarutoHarem
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 50 - Words: 1,093,850 - Reviews: 5614 - Favs: 6,553 - Follows: 5,881 - Updated: 7/1/2015 - Published: 12/25/2012 - Naruto U.
Konoha's Silver Shinobi by Konerok Hadorak reviews
Ichimaru Gin isn't known for his sympathy, nor for his empathy. But when he finds a bloodied boy along the side of the road, he can't help but stop to help. But that one act of compassion will change the Shinobi world forever. Follow them both as he guides Naruto on his way to greatness! Naruto/Hinata, Gin/Ran.
Crossover - Naruto & Bleach - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 17 - Words: 267,366 - Reviews: 664 - Favs: 1,219 - Follows: 1,114 - Updated: 12/17/2014 - Published: 12/2/2010 - [Naruto U., Hinata H.] [G. Ichimaru, R. Matsumoto]
Out of the Dark by JadedRen reviews
Naruto leaves the village in the middle of the night, giving up on being anything other than what the villagers have classified him as. Eight years later Hinata is rescued by the most wanted assassin in every nation. This mysterious man is determined to keep her at arms length while ensuring her safety.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 14 - Words: 60,708 - Reviews: 402 - Favs: 619 - Follows: 782 - Updated: 9/3/2013 - Published: 8/20/2012 - Naruto U., Hinata H.
The Sealed Kunai by Kenchi618 reviews
What if something made Naruto the dead-last that everyone sees him as? What if he really wasn't as weak as he seemed? The true Naruto, unleashed upon the shinobi world! AU Story starts at Invasion of Konoha arc and continues onwards.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 69 - Words: 670,128 - Reviews: 10535 - Favs: 11,545 - Follows: 7,895 - Updated: 8/20/2013 - Published: 6/14/2010 - Naruto U. - Complete
A ninja's life by paty-san5 reviews
Okay Naruto is twelve but he is more mature than the anime, though the story follows its normal path. Naruto will have to make friends and trust them if he wants to survive all the dangers and obstacles that wait for him if he wants to be the greatest Hok
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 33 - Words: 211,529 - Reviews: 419 - Favs: 653 - Follows: 545 - Updated: 3/25/2013 - Published: 4/6/2008 - Naruto U., Hinata H. - Complete
Ghost by Onmysignalunleashwords reviews
"Her face. I remember her face." A boy trained to kill is brought into the light. Grey, different Naruto heavily stealth based and Root trained, but not in the traditional sense. How will he cope with that most dangerous of foes: emotion?
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 63 - Words: 210,265 - Reviews: 1739 - Favs: 1,947 - Follows: 1,327 - Updated: 12/23/2012 - Published: 5/14/2012 - Naruto U. - Complete
Naruto: Demon's Path by Scribe of the Apocalypse reviews
A six-year-old Naruto taps into the Kyuubi to save Hinata from a cloud-nin who is being helped by Mizuki. Events force him to flee the village and he eventually apprentices under 'The Demon of Mist' Zabuza.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 64 - Words: 698,326 - Reviews: 2103 - Favs: 2,847 - Follows: 2,118 - Updated: 12/16/2012 - Published: 11/27/2009 - Naruto U.
Naruto's Rise by DiscipleOfAnime reviews
Naruto rises to become a strong ninja. He must discover the link between himself, Nagato and the first ninja ever Rikudou 'The Sage of Six Paths'. Strictly NaruHina -Not a Harem Anymore!-, Itachi/OC, ShinoFu. Epilogue: Goodbye Naruto's Rise *COMPLETE*
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 70 - Words: 446,630 - Reviews: 962 - Favs: 1,792 - Follows: 932 - Updated: 10/11/2010 - Published: 7/2/2009 - Naruto U., Hinata H. - Complete
A Few Angry Words by lord of the land of fire reviews
A few angry words from Neji lead to a great many changes: “Hiashi-sama,” Naruto bowed once more. “I ask you to make a bargain with me.” To be with the girl he loves he makes a bet. The stakes? Only his future and his dream. Nar X Hin
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 61 - Words: 172,186 - Reviews: 6019 - Favs: 3,987 - Follows: 1,988 - Updated: 5/7/2009 - Published: 5/12/2008 - Naruto U., Hinata H. - Complete
Our Ninja Way reviews
During the battle with Pain, Naruto hears Hinata's confession. Now, with the upcoming war looming he must decide if love will make him stronger, or lead to his downfall. But war isn't the only problem as his home becomes threatened by one of its' oldest clans. New alliances will have to be forged and an old family reunited if the Hidden Leaf is to survive. seal-savy/mature/Naruto
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 55 - Words: 417,095 - Reviews: 1225 - Favs: 1,297 - Follows: 1,513 - Updated: 9/11 - Published: 2/12/2012 - Naruto U., Hinata H.