Author has written 25 stories for Pokémon, Naruto, Digimon, Dragon Ball Z, Power Rangers, Fairy Tail, Beyblade, High School DxD/ハイスクールD×D, Final Fantasy XIII, Harry Potter, Campione!/カンピオーネ!, Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance/精霊使いの剣舞, Fate/stay night, One Piece, and Yu-Gi-Oh! Arc-V.
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Current Story Progress
Champion Of The Orre Region - Chapter 3 - Word count: 1318
A Master By Any Other Name - Chapter 2 - Word count: 1273
Working Hoenn With Skill - Chapter 3 - Word count: 827
Evolving Skills - A story that branches out during Ash's battle with Richie during the Indigo Plateau Conference. Instead of going with Charizard, Ash goes for a desperate gamble and puts his hopes upon his skill as a trainer and his ever loyal Pidgeotto instead of raw power. After managing to overcome Zippo, Pidgeotto who was already exhausted due to the machinations of Team Rocket is outright dead on his/her feet. Things are looking bad, especially up against Sparky. But Pidgeotto pulls through, showing his/her loyalty to Ash once again and evolves just to bring Ash victory. It's a whole new ball game now, just how far can Ash go?
Working The Academy with Skill - Alternate Universe - Set in a world where new rules have been set upon new trainers. Academies have been created all over the world for the express purpose of training Pokemon trainers in their chosen profession. A three year course beginning when they are 12 years of age. Pokemon Academy is the highest rated, and only inter-regional academy, only the best of the best can gain entrance. Enter Ash Ketchum age 12, seeking to rise from the shadow of his famous father, Giovanni. With his partner by his side, a rare colored and unruly Charmeleon he seeks to carve his name into history.
Mine - One Shot/Companion piece to 'Champion Of The Orre Region' - A one shot based around a few feelings Ash uncovers upon seeing Serena wearing his clothes during the episode he falls ill with that fever.
Team Manwhore - One Shot/Companion piece to Champion Of The Orre Region - Despite Ash's urging against it, Serena was curious. So, she indulged in her status as a trainer, a legal adult. Serena turns out to be a bit of an odd drunk and Ash himself finds himself at the end of a few accusations that he never saw coming.
Fanfiction Pet Peeves!
1 - Grammar and Spelling. If you don't even have the ability to accomplish this decently, then you shouldn't be posting stories at all until you do. I don't care if English isn't your first language or you've just started writing. We've got enough shit on this site, so don't go throwing your own stuff into the pile until you can atleast accomplish this much.
2 - When you ask for another Writer's opinion on your stories. Don't get mad if they tell you that your stories have problems or give you their own opinions on how you can make the stories better. I can't count how many people have gotten mad at me after giving them my honest opinion when they asked for it in the first place. Come on people, I make no attempts to hide the fact that I'm an asshole.
3 - Plot. Big outlandish plots do not mean a better story for all. In fact, if a story base line is overly complicated and outlandish, then you should probably not waste your time on it. Basic is always better - that's my motto. Start off with a basic plot, maybe a small change in circumstances or something. For instance, having Ash Ketchum leave the Viridian Pokemon Center before Team Rocket or Misty ever shows up. Start off with a basic plot and a basic outline of what you want to occur, and then build on that plot as you go on. Starting off with Naruto the son of Madara and grandson of Hashirama or some such bullshit and a massive demon invasion in-coming just ain't gonna fly. So as I said, stick to the basics and you'll never go wrong.
4 - Finishing Dialogue properly. I'll use an example here again. Quite a few people very rarely if ever finish their dialogue properly and leaves us hanging with - "Hello, my name is John" - That may not be a big deal for some of you. But for me? It's a story killer when the mistake is constantly made. So here we go, I'll give you another two examples of how to do it properly - "Hello, my name is John," - This method should be used if you plan to continue dialogue in the same paragraph. But if you are not, then you should just stick with - "Hello, my name is John." - Yah get meh?
5 - Characters coming clean. I see this alot, and it bugs me. From Time Travel stories to Dimension Hopping ones. Naruto/Harry/Ash/Gohan etc they always break down - rather easily mind you - and fill everybody in on their pasts. People, their life stories don't need to be revealed to keep a story going. Especially if they are time-travelling guys wanting to hook up with their past loves or something. Pedophile springs to mind, or of course the likes of Naruto. He's a shinobi guys, keeping his past a secret should be Genin level stuff. He shouldn't come clean unless something like lives are at stake and even then reluctantly. You think he wants to fill everybody in on how he was basically abused as a child - mentally atleast and was driven to near death on multiple occasions just to prove himself not a 'demon'. Same goes for Harry, he wouldn't come clean about his abuse at the Dursley's like at all.
6 - Chakra. This was revealed months ago, yet people still do it. It comes from the Shinju people, that means that alternate dimensions - say the Digimon Tamers universe will not have chakra. That means Naruto can't train others to use chakra, because they don't have it.
7 - Naruto Demon hunting mobs. This is one of the most retarded plot points still in play today. No matter what, a bunch of civilians wouldn't dare have the gall to hunt Naruto down and beat him to death. Maybe a drunken villager or two would jump him possibly as he's walking past. But other than that, no. Naruto is a far as Konoha higher-ups know, the last of the Uzumaki the son of the Yondaime and the Jinchuuriki of the Kyuubi. As far a worth goes, guys like Danzo would put thousands of civilians to death instead of risk losing Naruto.
8 - Civilian Council. Konoha and the like are military villages. There is no such thing as a Civilian Council in canon, because the Hokage's word is law. There are advisors of course. In Konoha, Danzo rarely acts as one, the Jonin Commander acts as one, the Anbu commander acts as one and the Sandaime's old teammates act as two. And there are other instances for the other villages appearing in canon. Civilians words don't mean crap - any village with common sense would kill off upstart civilians like that if it meant having a Jinchuuriki with as much potential as Naruto had.
9 - Token OC. An OC can be used for many things. He/She can reveal something basic, but important to the main character. They can have something in their possession that puts a character on their way. And many more instances, but they should not ever have all the answers. They should never be above the likes of a Kage in Naruto or Dumbledore in Harry Potter. In fact, I'm of the opinion an OC should never be a main character in the long run of any story. Especially if they're based on people in real life
10 - Pokemon. GerbilFtw was an okay writer that had a few problems with grammar and spelling. He introduced a few good plots into the Pokemon circulation. But he ruined alot of the fandom of this anime aswell. His first ever story Return Of The Forgotten has got so many story ideas based on it, it isn't even funny. And the sad thing is, I've seen hundreds of them yet not seen a good one. They all have the same general plot aswell. Ash gets betrayed by his friends and sometimes even a few of his Pokemon. His mother usually dies somehow and he disappears for years on end only to return at some super large tournament never seen before as a super badass. His stories were good for a guilty pleasure, but honestly we could have done without them in the long run because he's disappeared from writing fanfiction in the last few years and we're left with the many many pieces of shit his story spurred on. My advice for if you have an idea similar to this? Drop it and burn the remains.
11 - Canon. Now this is a big topic that so many just disregard. Do not ever and I mean ever, begin writing about an anime or book or whatever without being completely up to date in canon knowledge and put thorough research into the main parts needed for your plot. It's true that fanfiction is a way for us to move away from canon - but never forget that canon is the original and while you may edit some facts to suit your story you should never completely change them. Because, in the long run you may just be getting rid of alot of the best parts of canon. Don't for a minute ever think your story is better than canon, because it's not. Canon was what spurred all this fanfiction into existence in the first place. Do justice to canon, don't bag on it like an ungrateful little twit. You can be disappointed with it, but don't bag on it. Because, seriously very few of you even have half the skill needed to follow through on stories like the canon counterparts.
12 - Pokemon - Gym Leaders using weaker teams of Pokemon for new trainers. I think it is absolutely retarded. All a trainer needs to do is win 8 of those battles and then they are qualified to enter the end of year league, the winner of which gets to go on and challenge the Elite Four and Champion Master of the region for their spot. Considering it's been said multiple times in the anime, that they are the main protectors of regions and those spots come with a lot of authority and power, it's asinine that they would make it easier on trainers to reach that plateau. If they couldn't beat a Gym Leader, tough fucking titties! Come back after you train some more. This method overall would weaken the structure of the leagues strength. Making it easier for them lowers the standards - in game standards while Lance would have level 60s, the new champions would end up with like level 40's. I just cannot wrap my mind around the utter retardation of this piece of the Pokemon fandom. Lower the credentials needed for a high level government job why don't you?
13 - Brawler Naruto. Fanon has labelled Naruto as an un-skilled, un-trained brute in Taijutsu. Mostly because his Taijutsu isn't as 'elegant' as Sasuke's and because we didn't have a name for Naruto's Taijutsu pre-sage training. Naruto is far from a brawler. You can't call a guy who can match Kakashi, Lee, Neji and Sasuke in close combat a brawler. Hell, you couldn't even call pre-shippuden Naruto a brawler. I for one have never seen a brawler as flexible and agile as him. Anyway, as I said 'Brawler Naruto' is a fanon concept, and an annoyingly wrong one at that.
14 - Stat sheets posted as stories. If you want to post a stat sheet, post it somewhere else. This is a fanfiction website, for fanfiction and these stats sheets have no place here. If you make one, feel free to let people know about it in an Author's Note, and feel free to give them directions to get to it. But Stat sheets themselves don't belong on this site, and are just basically made into cesspits for the rage of fans on this site.
15 - Comparing Naruto and Goku. I won't say I don't get annoyed when people nerf the power of characters to make them fit in crossovers or just because of their own biased opinions, like for instance that guy who posted a story where Rias Gremory could probably take on the Captain Commander of Bleach. But comparing Naruto and Goku is getting annoying now, and it's like comparing Strawberries with Grapes and demanding of others which is better. They are entirely different - for instance, if Naruto ran on the DBZ rules then even as a child he would probably be stronger than Frieza, but they don't so he wasn't. Kishimoto left alot of things open about the Naruto-verse, so we don't know if he could have outsped lightning long before he met his final power-up. We don't know if Goku could get through the Truth Seeking Balls, we don't know a lot of things. But, nowadays Naruto has joined the ranks of those insanely powerful anime characters, so lets everyone meet halfway here and just say with the right chance either could kill the other. And let's be perfectly serious here, it's unlikely that if Naruto and Goku ever met they'd be enemies.
16 - Post-Cell Games Gohan-Angst - Jesus christ do I hate this! It's not even the fact that Gohan has angst that bothers me. It's that I've yet to see one person do it well. He's always whining, going into massively long internal monologues about he's pathetic, unworthy of his power yada yada. Really, just a shit ton of generic, cry-baby bitch wrist cutting whining. It's got to the point, that if I open a story and see Gohan angsting about Goku's death, that I don't even bother with the second chapter after seeing all this shitty angst. Not normal angst, but shitty angst. Seriously, Gohan in canon never had anywhere near close to that kind of pathetic, shameful reactions. It utterly disgusts me.
17 - Heaven's Feel Shirou Losing UBW - I cannot begin to explain how stupid it is that this is thought to be a thing. Just because Shirou decided he'd rather save Sakura instead of killing her to protect the world, does not in anyway shape or form mean he's suddenly normal. His perception, personality, thought process - all of that, are still completely alien to that of a normal human. It isn't just Shirou's ideals that are alien, do keep in mind that Kiritsugu went far further down that path than Shirou did, and he didn't have a Reality Marble. At the end of the day, casing aside his ideals at best would alter just how alien his perception is, possibly changing UBW slightly...not that I expect much, Avalon, his Origin and such have are already pretty much ingrained too deep.
18 - Retarded plot for retarded drama. Oh what's this? Naruto was attacked by a mob and is now blind? Big deal, everybody and their fucking grandmother can transplant eyes in the Naruto-verse. Gohan is crippled, blind, mute and missing his dick? Big deal, there's dragon balls - not exactly a waste of a wish in comparison with some of the shit wished for before.
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