Poll: What kind of development do you want to see in Geo? If it's romance then his development will be diminutive at best. Vote Now!
Author has written 2 stories for Mega Man.
I will mainly be writing Megaman fanfics because the show has interested me in the past.
Stories that I have currently finished
Bonds - This story is very bad compared to my newest one.
Stories that I am currently working on
Society of Lies - 3 years in the making! My pride and joy! The first 10 chapters or so are mediocre but doable, but I think my story is decent.
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! (2015)
Remember to be kind and clear in your reviews
If you have a problem with one of my chapters, feel free to bring up the issue
Make sure that an issue you have with my story is politely stated
I welcome constructive criticism.
I kept this for nostalgic reasons.
I have been sick, busy, and overall inundated with work for the last month. I apologize for the large delay in chapters, but unfortunately that pause will have to continue for a couple more weeks. I do have a chapter, but it is very inchoate, and will likely not be ready for posting. Once again, I apologize.
Unfortunately, due to some time constraints with work and other obligations, it will be a while before I post another chapter. I'll be explicit and say at least another month. I have half to 3/4 of a chapter written, but I am not very happy with it. When I decide to sit down and do a rewrite, you will hear from me.
May be a little tough to get new chapters out, but I will do my best. The story is moving in a good direction, and I'm both happy and proud of its progress. Once again, thanks to all the readers who provide motivation for me keep writing. Although its true I write on a whim, having people to read my work always stimulates my ideas.
Thank you for reading.
I have decided to make a list of the stories that catch my eye and hold my interest. I recommend my readers to try and read these stories, for I believe they are high quality and well done.
Unfortunately, in the Megaman fandom, I have only found two stories that really deserve praise.
Note - he is a generic term; I do not know if an author is actually a he.
1. Ryuusei by iguessso12
This story is very impressive. It was started around half a year before I started mine, and I see a lot of similar characteristics between the two. The writer is skilled in manipulating Geo's personality, and his character development is reasonable, and I happen to particularly like the whole 'uncaring' attitude. Our two stories are similar in that regard, but they differ in the way that Ryuusei tends to focus more on Geo's technological side. It is interesting for someone who is disillusioned with the normal super happy Geo.
There are little to no spelling errors (in Chapter 11 the author misspells Daigo a few times but nothing big). The names are also the Japanese ones, which is a minor but noticeable change. The author develops the plot well; he implements third person omniscient, so all the characters are developed, instead of mostly one. The amount of detail is reasonably sufficient; in some areas there is too little, in some there is too much.
I have no comment on battle scenes; I usually focus more on interaction and character development than fighting.
Of course, I do not give compliments lightly, and I do feel there is more to improve with the story. In this case, I feel that the author needs to work on character transitions. Of course I say this while I struggle with transitions myself, as I have taken 20 chapters to develop my character. But in various areas in Ryuusei, the transition between characters' emotions feels very quick and forced. I have not reread it, so I don't have an extremely fresh memory of it, but I recall that I was particularly irked with the introduction of Sonia, or Misora. The transition seemed forced, and I had myself wondering why he was so compliant. I think the author recognizes that part as well, as Geo explicitly states that he does not know why. This may be a plot device, but regardless, I feel the change was brought about a bit too strongly. In the part when they become friends, I also feel that it was somewhat forced. Of course these are just my feelings.
The other characterizations are pretty on-point, especially Geo. His banter with Mega can be very amusing. However I do feel that Sonia, the supposed heroine of the anime, is lacking character development. I am no 'shipping' fan, but I do realize that such a large character should have a bit more development, equaling the other characters. This may be intended, so Sonia can be a mysterious character; the author does tie her in to some chapters. The story is still young, so things will change.
Overall, I would rate this story a 7/10. It's good! Much better than the usual Starforce fanfictions. The author has declared that he is inundated with work, but I would urge my readers to read this story, and leave a review to help him improve his writing.
2. Ryuusei no Redux - Tribe!
I have little time to write a summary, so I will edit this later. Know that this story is very good as well but has not been updated in a while. The story is somewhat similar to mine, but based in the second season of the anime.