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![]() Author has written 6 stories for Naruto, Akame ga Kiru/アカメが斬る, High School DxD/ハイスクールD×D, and Overwatch. Looking for an experienced Beta. What I need is spelling and Grammar. That's it. I don't need help with plot and events. MUST be willing to work with stories with lemons and harems. PM me for more information. Update-found one "Hearts, you say? You Humans are always so quick to speak of such things. As though you carry your hearts in the very palms of your hands. But this eye of mine perceives all. There is nothing that it overlooks. If this eye cannot see a thing, then it does not exist. That is the assumption under which I have always fought. What is this "heart"? If I tear open that chest of yours, will I see it there? If I smash open that skull of yours, will I see it there?" -Ulquiorra Cifer Anime/Mangas I like- Beelzebub, Naruto, Inuyasha, Green Worldz, Witch Hunter, Dragon BallZ, Magi, Magi-Adventures of Sinbad, Akame ga Kill, Hellsing If you know what Green Worldz is then you get a cookie. PlantZombies. Plus it has plant zombies too Things I dislike- characters who have no use other than being there for drama or because the author wants to make them relevant (Sakura), NaruSaku fans that are still in an frenzy over the ending, racists, Yaoi(I don't hate gay people, I have a few gay friends but I don't like reading about two men well you know.), trolls/flamers, and lastly one thing that always gets me annoyed is when people write stories without the basic format for western writing or rather the people who don't make separate paragraphs or forget/don't know that you have to change paragraphs when the speaker changes and just don't try to correct their mistakes in grammar and spelling. THINGS I HATE--FANBOYS AND FANGIRLS. These are the incarnation of evil at times. Try leaving a negative review on a Pewdiepie video and see what happens. Thing I like- the animes/mangas I listed, nearly all forms of music, people who like to argue with me about their opinion (as long as they have a firm base of information.), people who do the right thing even if it makes them look bad. And lastly big boobs. I'm not a pervert...I'M A SUPER PERVERT! But really I have a like for larger boobs over small ones but they can be good too (One of my more memorable relationships was with a girl who flat as a board), and secrets. I like keeping lots of secrets but can't help but want to tear into the things people hide from me. And Yugioh. I love playing Yugioh. Tips for upcoming writers 1)Don't let flames get to you unless you purposely insulted a large group of people 2)Write what you want. This is suppose to be whatever you're pretty little brain can thing off. 3)This only applies if you're aiming for a high review count. Keep things original but at the same time don't go crazy. A mass crossover almost never goes far in terms of reviews (in Naruto sections) 4) don't be a dirt-bag. If you go around flaming people then write you're own then people will insult you especially if you're story is in short terms horrible 5)Make sure that you have a proper correcting software or a beta reader to help you out. Grammar and language mistakes can only be ignored to a certain point Answering general questions Will of Fire-Momoshiki- Why did I bring him in? Because Naruto and Sasuke need at least on villain. Lets not pretend to think that they have any real challenges in Akame ga Kill. They are borderline gods in that world and the story was getting pretty boring to write since there was always that part of me that was telling me that Naruto or Sasuke could have ended everything in just one day. Momoshiki is one of the few Naruto characters able to use Time Space ninjutsu who can be a threat to them. It was that or 1) bring back a dead villain which is basically limited to Kaguya and Madara since Obito is now good. Even then Madara wouldn't have the Shinju and would be far weaker. Yeah that would have settled well. 2)Bring in someone from another series. That makes even less sense. 3)Make your own character. No. Those never end up well for me. As for the biju dama Momoshiki used it in the movie. Naruto DOESN'T have the full 9 tailed beast. He only has the fractions given to him by Obito. The rest of the tailed beast chakra was in his world and taken by Momoshiki. And yes I know he shouldn't have arrived for another 20 years but it shall be explained...hopefully These are Flamer that should be looked out for and blocked Id:1299719 Id: 5479501 Id:4481084 If you're going to write an Naruto fanfiction then block these three write now. They are nothing but trouble. Use their Ids to block since they some times change their name. I can personally say that God-ShadowEx100 is messed up in the head and if you've read his ONLY story you will see me, don't read it it's just a horrible rape scene of Hinata Hyuuga and it's horrible written Well now that we got that out of the way I wish you all a good day! |